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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shravan:

Woman, I am not taking a stroll down the park.

I am pacing up and down,

Trying to chart where my future lies...

And you appear out of nowhere.

You need my help, I get it.

But that shouldn't be the only reason.

You couldn't just say,

Stay on for ME, Shravan.'?

Of course, why would you?

When all you want is my back out of your selfish life!!!

Suman:

I am stranded beneath the night sky,

Frozen in the moment.

You have your back to me,

And I have nowhere to go.

Your Rebuke and your Refusal...

I take back with me.

No matter how hard I plead,

I guess that's all you have for me.

What more to expect,

From a guy who has long moved on.

This is my longest walk...

...Getting back to my solitude.



This scene was a perfect take, as many of us felt.

The lawn was absolutely the right place...underneath the vast sky in its darkness. Every time Suman tried to stop him, stammering along... he went ahead and she had to run to catch up with him. It was sweet to watch from Shravan's side, since he had not a clue about what had brought her there...he was just showing her plenty of attitude.

But the moment she started reciting the tale, the look of concern crossed his face...

And then, Toh Nanu yeh chata hai ki main ruk jaon. Aur tum kya chahti ho?'

This Shravan has not allowed himself to be emotionally manipulated for ten long years...and even now, is just contemplating on what could be done about his father's displeasure with him. He is not in a mood for games, and expects a straightforward answer...

...But all poor Sumo can gather up is a meek Jo Nanu chahte hai.

...She followed it up with a hopeful Tum Ruk Jaoge na'...which was drowned in the uproar of Shravan's outrage.

For a second, Sumo was stunned with the blunt declination, so she came up with a knee jerk reaction of snubbing the snob in him.

He turned his back towards her and started back...and Suman almost went back to him...she took one or two steps...she seemed ready to beg.

But then she must have reflected on her newly acquired wisdom on this cultivated Oxford Graduate and decided she was wasting her time...

...One of the classic scenes. 👏👏👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ahhh...chicksoup ,
amazing post 👏
👍🏼

the lawn scene indeed is one of the best...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg yes he sooo wanted her to stop him so hard😆
Like freakin grab him by the shoulders, get on a stool-level stop him, and shake it into his head "MAIN CHAHTI HOON KI TUM NA JAO. BECAUSE I WANT YOU TO STAY. FOR ME. KHUSH!?"
🤣

Nice post btw soupy!

-Kriti
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: hanishank

Ahhh...chicksoup ,

amazing post 👏
👍🏼

the lawn scene indeed is one of the best...


Thanx.😳

Indeed, one of the very best...I forgot to mention- but the music too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .SankaDevi.

Omg yes he sooo wanted her to stop him so hard😆

Like freakin grab him by the shoulders, get on a stool-level stop him, and shake it into his head "MAIN CHAHTI HOON KI TUM NA JAO. BECAUSE I WANT YOU TO STAY. FOR ME. KHUSH!?"
🤣

Nice post btw soupy!

-Kriti


😆

Stool Level! 🤣..More like Ladder level, I suppose!😉

Had she actually gone back..held him by his arms, stopped him and shouted at him...I bet that would have worked. 😉 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello there Chick ...
Lovely post ... well written & thot ...

U know in the whole Shravan & Sumo scene for me the thing that stood out was the
WALK - AWAY ..

As he berates her & walks away ... his pace slows ... his whole body is attuned to her ... expecting her to call out & plead her case ... & in that way speak out the words he wanted to hear ...

It was so beautifully articulated by the FB .. where even when she doesnt obviously ask for his help ... he jumps to do her bidding ... this time he wants to HELP ... its after all nanaji .. who is also asking for help ... but this time for the sake of his EGO .. he wants the plead .. he wants the cajole .. he wants to WORDS ...

It was wonderful seeing SUMo as well .. she takes a step towards him .. but then stops & waits for a bit ... still expecting her OLD Shravan .. to come & jump to her aid without her having to utter the cry for help ...

Have read a lot of posts on the forum on Self respect ...but that defines the character SUMO ... its not just self respect ..her self respect is closely linked to her EGO ... which stands tall between the two ... someone who has been FORCED by CIRCUMSTANCES to DEPEND on others for her existence ... does not LIKE TO ASK ... this actually runs common thru both parallel tracks of SUMO .. the mature one & the 16 year old immature one as well ...
the moment u realize this aspect of the writers thot .. the scene stands tall for its brilliance ..

the reason for this TRACK .. is to highlight this aspect ... take a bow down writers of the show ... brilliant

Its rare to see a HINDI TV serial with a female protagonists character so beautifully etched ... totally floored by yesterdays episode ... for the linkage of that scene with the FB .. & how beautifully it highlighted the main leads character sketch ...

U nailed ur post with ur title .. THE WALK ... kudos to u ... that to me said it all .. it encapsulated the whole episode ... extremely deep thot ...

Edited by redwine1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely post.😳

Whenever they have any sort of confrontation my mind just screams "God! He loves her so damn much! But it's all buried deep under layers and layers of hurt."

But this particular scene had the distinction of making my mind scream this the loudest so far.😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab as always and the amazing thing (extra amazing) POV from both of them ...
Jeez I am stunned

Can I be Sumo and beg him to stay and marry me and make babies
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res

Loved the post. You have a way with words.. When can we see some have the pleasure of reading a short os from you?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SahSah

Fab as always and the amazing thing (extra amazing) POV from both of them ...

Jeez I am stunned

Can I be Sumo and beg him to stay and marry me and make babies



Lol! And what would Lambu say?
Edited by poppinss - 9 years ago

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