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Posted: 9 years ago
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Revelation of teenage Romance

Rejection by her in public

Ran he did by never looking back

*****

Return to his roots

Rendering of her apology

Rejected by him as insincere

Ran she did saying " I will move on"


*****

Reunion arranged

Rebuilding the relation

Revenge extracted

Rejected by him in public

Rendered a sarcastic apology by him

Ran she did with a broken heart


*****

Regret for the collateral damage forced him to

Repay her dues

Rejected again by her

Ran he did never picking up her phone


*****

Return of the loan by precious jewels

Reignited the rejection in him

Rubbing the sole tear away

Ran he did to the comfort of his room


*****

Revenge time it is

Rejecting his precious love

Rooted for another

Robbing both of them of all hope

Ran she did back home to cry


*****

And the saga will continue 😕

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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful & brilliant ... simply put but such a lovely connect ...

Ran they both do ... very interesting ... this line defines their love story ... RUN ... or as someone in another thread put ... ESCAPISM ...


Probably the "run" is best described by the tag line of the title track ... MIL JAATE HAIN JO BANE EKDV ... they have to MEET ... & for that they have to stop RUNNING ...
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mineforever thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good post.
Yes they both r still running away instead of confronting each other and communicating..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow brilliant. If they don't stop running then audience will run from this show.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very well written...
so nice :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautifully penned...
You summed up in few lines what they are doing yes running away.all they need is to stop and have a good think and then talk
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Penned down the R saga journey so beautifully. I like the way you have dissected their life events



JJKKL thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: redwine1

beautiful & brilliant ... simply put but such a lovely connect ...


Ran they both do ... very interesting ... this line defines their love story ... RUN ... or as someone in another thread put ... ESCAPISM ...


Probably the "run" is best described by the tag line of the title track ... MIL JAATE HAIN JO BANE EKDV ... they have to MEET ... & for that they have to stop RUNNING ...



Thank you.

Maybe they should start running in opposite directions around the globe. Then they can finally meet 😆😆

Jokes apart I think both lack the courage to talk it out. Or rather ego and pride is preventing them from changing their stance.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mineforever

Good post.
Yes they both r still running away instead of confronting each other and communicating..



It will happen sometime in the future for sure. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha.366

Wow brilliant. If they don't stop running then audience will run from this show.



But then Rekha if they stop running the story also will be stopping - right ?😊

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