UPDATE! || ShraMan 1st Anniversary Mini-Series || Part 2 Pg. 7

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Posted: 9 years ago

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its lovely Kriti...⭐️⭐️

aawww dadhi chubati hai 😳😆 the cuddle ☺️ n yess it's so practical kitna difficult hoga actually 😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: prc_fan1

I AM CLAIMING THE FIRST SPOT TO COMMENT😎
OK now I am off to read😆

Zainab ke saath ab panga bhi tum hi lena 😆

Jk, lowe you too <3 I hope you liked it!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ri21
this is so adorable kriti 😳😳

u brought a smile on my face while i read it .. full of innocense and yes the height issues again lol. how we ll cuddle 😆
really cute, waiting for the next part 😃

Thanks Riyu 😳

Aww I'm glad! 🤗 Haha yeah, I thought it was a very ShraMan thing to say 😆

-Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mannu100
THIS IS FREAKINGGG INCREDIBLEEE..👏
wowww

THANKK YOUUU MANNUU! 🤗😳

-Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Krithi, wow! That was a delightful read. Loved the language as much as the plot. Are u just in your teens? You are really a natural. Looking forward to read more of ur works! Excited for part 2.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Jamina
Wonderfull update!! Waiting for next part

You beautiful penned it Kriti ❤️

Thanks Jamy! ❤️

-Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: --fero--
Adorable
Sooo dreamy

I am dead...

I am feeling so excited after reading this

Haha Fero thanks! 🤗❤️

Ab pata chala what I was thinking when I said the bed looks comfortable 🤣, yaar kya kya soch ke baith gaye the tum sab 🤣 Itni bhi gutter minded nahi hoon main 😆

But thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

-Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: FangirlForever
KRITI !! You can't do this 😵 ...Now no one can stop me from imagining the future ShraMan scenes , The OS was so cute *flicking away happy tears* . Ughh ShraMan as Husband and Wife ..I hope they show it in the show too..
The Height thingy and the Cuddles ☺️..My mom is asking me to stop blushing but I can't 😉..

But It was short 😳 WAITING FOR THE SECOND SHOT !! Jaldi likhna 😆

Kriti I LOVE YOU FOR THIS ❤️

PS- The song is so Awesome ❤️ and soo perfect for the OS

KRITIKA!!! LOLO PUTTAR!! 😆 🤗

Awww haha I know right, kho jao apne ShraMan dreamland main, let that be your anchor that keeps you steady through the next few turbulent and angsty episodes. Jab bhi dil main bura lage, come back here and read this, it'll give you the faith to hold on and keep watching 😆. Ek na ek din toh yeh hoga, don't worry 😆

But AWW *flicking away happy tears* I'm so glad you liked it! Hahaha aw, just tell mummy that tumhe machar kaat ke gaya or something 😆

Haha I will try! Thanks Kritu, I love you too ❤️

PS- Glad you like the song, love it myself too!

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: memario
awww this is so sweet 😳

Hey memario (sorry don't know your name), thanks! ❤️

-Kriti

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: hasinig89
Kriti...🤗
I can't explain how I felt reading this awesome piece...its just beyond words...
I'm so loving it , i literally imagined Shravan & Sumo..now i'm eagerly waiting for the second part...

"You know since you're so tall ,I always wondered how we'd cuddle" 🤣

🤗 🤗 🤗

I can't explain how I felt reading this awesome comment...its just beyond words ❤️😆

Aww but seriously thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it!

-Kriti