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Hi guys! Gia here. I thought I wil try my hand at an OS too. I am ashamed to put this out there because I have read some great stuff on here. I hope you guys like it. It is just a one shot.
I am a very sucky writer. So if you guys end up hating this then let me know, but one request please be kind when you tell me😛
Please comment and leave a like, if it was bearable for you to read.😛


ShraMan OS

Ever get the feeling that something is up, but you just can't figure it out, no matter how hard you try. This is exactly what Suman was feeling.

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Suman was pacing around in her room. An expression of frustration had appeared on her face. Shravan was up to something. She knew it. However, she didn't know what. It was eating her up gradually.
Everyday he would talk hours on the phone. When she would ask about it, he would excuse himself by chalking it up to his lawyer-y business. Suman was so curious that she would follow him to his office. She would don one look or another everyday, just so she could be around him, and figure out what he was up to.

She peeks into his office. He was on his phone again. What is he smiling about? What if he has a girlfriend ? The day I find out who she is, I am going to strangle them both. Hmph.She blew the hair away from her face.
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" Chal sumo, time to be Sherlock. Sorry Sherlock Ji, forgive me. But I have to do this. Don't worry I won't let you down" she winked.

Shravan was leaving for his supposed meeting, at night. Suman gasped. Shravan had a huge bouquet of flowers in his hand. " I am seriously going to kill this witch" she said in a hushed whisper. She quickly started her car, and she trailed him. She couldn't believe it. He was always going on about his mard puran, and how women were not worth the time or energy, but now... Ughh. She hated him
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" Who does he think he is. I don't care. He can marry her if he wants. Actually no not marry, maybe just date her. Anyway who will marry him, he is such a khadoos, and he is so tall that any girl would be intimidated by him" she said to herself, all the while being plagued by apprehension.

Suman was so lost in her thoughts that she didn't see where Shravan had driven to.
"Wait a minute, that doesn't look like an office to me. Shravan consider yourself dead" she muttered. An incredulous look graced her face as she saw him talking to a woman and giving her flowers.

" That's how you want to play then huh. Alright I am in Mr.Shravan Malhotra"

She stomped towards him filled with anger. She took the bouquet from the girl and threw it on the ground. " Oh so, this is your mardangi huh. Ok I get it. You are angry. Fine be angry. I am angry too now. Don't try coming after me because I won't listen" she started to walk away.

" Please stop me, please stop me" she mumbled. " Fine Sumo. I won't come after you. Have a good night" he waved at her as she was walking away.
He knew her too well to believe she would actually leave. So he decided to play his own game.

"You are very beautiful Anjali" he intentionally yelled so that someone would hear him. Suman stopped dead in her tracks. She turned around and looked at him in disbelief. She scuffled towards them. " Oh so she looks beautiful to you" Suman pushed the girl aside, and put her hands on her waist. " Go get your eyes checked, Mr.Qutub Minar because maybe from that height you can't see clearly" she uttered the words in frustration.

" Oh hello, Suman Tiwari, you are no better. Why have you been following me? Go ahead tell me" he cleverly turned the tables.

" Uhh..ummm, I uh.. Because I knew you were up to something, and I had to know" she said quickly in one breath.

" You could have just asked me Sumo" he told her in a firm voice.

" Oh yea right, like you would let me in on your relationship..." she searched for the right word to say. " Your relationship stuff" she completed.

Shravan started laughing. " Am I sensing jealousy from you Sumo?. I think I am. But why would you be jealous" he asked feigning innocence.

Now it was Sumans turn to laugh but nervously. She was about to leave, when Shravan stopped her.

" I know unless I won't tell you, you won't stop ruining Sherlock ji's reputation. At least have some mercy on him." He teased her.

He clapped his hands, and another bouquet was presented, which he gave to Suman. She went into a few seconds of mental shock. Shravan is giving me flowers. Me?

" Wait why are you in a park first off, and secondly why are you giving me this bouquet ? she asked curiously. Has he got a plan or something, that after every few minutes he has to put me through some kind of emotional shock.

Just as she was too busy in thinking, the lights turned on, and she was surrounded by her family and Shravan's all singing Happy Birthday. She face palmed herself. She looked around and saw that the entire park had been lit up with colourful lights, and in the centre was a table with a cake. Family pictures were hung from trees, along with white lanterns which were Sumo's favorite. Right then she knew this was what Shravan was planning.

She saw Shravan sitting by the fountain all by himself.

" Sorry Shravan. I thought you... never mind" she hesitated to say the truth.
" I what? Sumo" he pushed the matter. Suman sat down next to him. She put her head on his shoulder. He leaned his head in and they both sat there for quite a while. " I thought you had a girlfriend, and yes I was jealous" Shravan gave a soft laugh at this

Once the night was over Suman wanted to say thanks to Shravan , however before she could even utter a word, Shravan wished her " Happy Birthday" and placed a kiss on her cheek, and left.

This was the best birthday ever Sumo thought to herself, and a slight smile made its way onto her face.

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All right so there it is. The floor is open for you throw tomatoes and eggs at me. Or if you do end up liking it then all comments and suggestions are also welcome with open arms.

Ciao!

P.S- If you guys have any prompts for an OS, you want me to write about, leave a comment or PM me.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely is the word...😳
beautifully written...no tomatoes no chappals...no eggs...only flowers for you ⭐️

"sorry Sherlockji forgive me" was so much like sumo ...😆


Edited by Radhika03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was so adorable.
Please write more stories on shraman.
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Such a cute one I swear... Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is really sweet would love to see a scene like.this btw shraman after everything gets sorted
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Too good
U shd write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhika03

Lovely is the word...😳

beautifully written...no tomatoes no chappals...no eggs...only flowers for you ⭐️

"sorry Sherlockji forgive me" was so much like sumo ...😆



Aww thank you so much 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aayushi15

This was so adorable.
Please write more stories on shraman.


Thank you Aayushi 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ri21

This is really sweet would love to see a scene like.this btw shraman after everything gets sorted


I know right? I can't wait for them to sort everything out.-
And thank you 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niharika17

Too good

U shd write more


Thank you Niharika😛

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