FF:'UnKNowingly Mine' part 6 (updated page 10) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Cool.Vidya

Debo, I'm tired waiting. When are we getting the next treat?? I mean, next part??

Oh.. So sorry Vidya to keep u waiting.. I know I am a horrible person.. Bad bad one.. Sorry.. 😛 The next one is on its way soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Ye kya?? 😲 Update se pehle hi comment aa gaya?? 😉 😉 ye konsa ajubaa ho gaya?? 😛

Hi everyone.. Thank You for all the lovely comments.. Here's the next part.. A bit boring it is.. But plzz put your valueable feedback

Part 6

Next morning Tejal rose early. She woke and looked towards the open window. The dawn was just cracking in. She removed her sheets and got down the bed. She opened the door and walked in the balcony.

The sun wasn't visible but the beautiful golden yellow color was smeared all over the sky. Tejal was still in the trance of doze and the dreams that disturbed her whole night. She stood in the balcony to watch the dawn coming in and the drape of night going up.

She clutched her shawl around her more tightly. The blurred images of the person in her dreams last night still didn't leave her mind. She wondered why she was unable to forget the moments with Aniket. But she tried to shove away her mindless thoughts and concentrate on the rising sun.

In MM, Aniket got up early too. He looked towards the bedside clock. It was only 5:00 am. But he didn't feel bad. Instead he felt delighted to wake up so early almost at the crack of dawn. He wore his slippers and walked to the terrace. And stood with an amazement on his face. The breaking dawn was so beautiful. The golden baby sun-rays were illuminating the blue sky. Though the sun had not yet risen. He walked to the middle of the terrace and looked up. The popping up images of the subject of his dream last night were unsettling him. He could not figure out why he was unable to throw out those impressions of the small moment with Tejal. To his wonder, he discovered that he was not bothered by it. Instead a composure was slacking inside him. He felt like playing the sitar after so many days.

He immediately went downstairs and started playing the morning "raga" in his sitar. The beautiful tune flowed through the Mazumdar mansion. Sanyukta-Nikhilesh woke up in their room. Binoy Sushila too got up. The beautiful sitar music was providing solace to everybody's hearts.

Tejal came inside the room after the sun rose. She saw that Vaibhavi was still sleeping. She decided not to disturb her and went to the washroom to get freshened up. After coming out, she saw Vaibhavi was still sleeping. She went to her and gently called her to get up. But Vaibhavi told she'll wake up a bit late. Because in home, she doesn't get to sleep so peacefully with her mom pushing her out of bed early morning. Tejal left her to sleep and went to the kitchen.

She made herself a cup of coffee and came to the drawing room. She plugged in the music player and put a music cd of sitar+sarengi mix. The charming melody filled up the room. She felt a sense of calmness and sat in the corner table with her sketchbook and coffee-mug. She started sketching on her drawing sheet.

"Hmm.. I need to work on these designs very soon. And this time, I'll launch these grandly. I need to talk with Vaibhavi", she thought while chewing the back of her pencil.

And started drawing again.

In MM, all were assembled near Aniket's room. Sushila-Binoy, Nikhilesh-Sanyukta Shaswat-Foram, even Baa. Frown lines were evident on Shaswat's sleepy face. But the rest were so captivated with the music that they stood still near the door. Aniket was so engrossed in playing the sitar that he didn't realize his family members standing near the door. All of a sudden he looked up and opened his eyes. He was stunned to see everybody near the door. So he stopped the music. The trance was broken.

"Why did you stop Aniket bhai? Play play. After dragging us out of or bed, you are feeling cheerful na?", Shaswat jumped inside the room.

"Shaswat", Nikhilesh snarled. "Do you have to dig filth out of every single matter? Couldn't you hear how beautiful the music was? All that you prioritized was your sleep".

"Haan Saswat bhai", Sushila chirped in, "Aniket bhai's music was so beautiful that'"

"Bhabhi please", Shaswat stopped Sushila's happy cheer. "Don't start your stupid blabbers early morning. And for your kind information, my name is Shaswat. Okay? S-h-a-s-w-a-t. Not Saswat."

"Haale hale ave Saswat bhai. Shaswat, Saswat, sab ekka ekhi. Abhi chalo, sab jaldi jaldi get ready. Its morning and breakfast will be ready soon", Sushila was back in her original self.

Aniket: "Bhabhi"

Aniket: "I'm sorry bhabhi. Maa, I'm so sorry for waking you all up at these early hours. I really didn't mean to but.."

Shaswat: "You never intend to do anything Aniket bhai. Everything happens by chance. Waah!! Great excuses, "I never meant to". And you know what Aniket bhai,.."

"Shaswat", Sanyukta growled, "there is a limit to everything beta. Aniket apologized for waking you up na? Why are you creating a big fuss even then? Go and sleep now if you still need it. Go"

Shaswat left the room in a bad mood. Sanyukta turned towards Aniket and came near him. She placed her hand on his cheek.

"It was a beautiful music piece Aniket. Don't feel guilty for anything. We were not at all disturbed by it. Infact, we all were enjoying till you stopped", she said lovingly.

"But its pretty late now beta. Get a shower and come down soon. Okay? We'll be waiting for you downstairs", she left the room saying this. Everyone else followed her.

Aniket kept his sitar aside and looked at the clock. He got up and took his towel and walked towards the washroom, but remembered something and stopped. He took out his phone and started searching the table for a card.

Vaibhavi woke up at 8:00 am. She came to the drawing hall yawning and saw Tejal working on the new sketches. She moved closer to the table. Tejal was so engrossed with her sketches that she didn't notice Vaibhavi standing behind her.

Vaibhavi (clearing her throat): "Tejal"

Tejal shuddered and looked behind. "Vaibhavi you?"

Vaibhavi: "Yes"

"Stop scaring me Vaibhs. You scared the hell out of me", Tejal said keeping her palm on her chest.

Vaibhavi (laughing): So my sister is so engaged in work. Hmm.. What are you working upon Tejal? New designs?

Tejal: Yes Vaibhavi. I need to consult these with you. Shall we sit now?

Vaibhavi: "Yeah okay. Wait, lemme just get freshened up. I'll come in 15 minutes. Can you please make me a cup of coffee?"

Tejal: "Yes dude. Right on"

Vaibhavi left the room. Tejal went to the kitchen and started boiling water for coffee. She was stirring coffee powder in water when her phone started ringing. She hurried towards the hall and picked the phone. An unknown number was flashing on the screen. She answered the call.

"Hello", a voice spoke up. Tejal couldn't recognize the voice suddenly.

Tejal: "Hello, who is speaking?"

Voice: "Umm.. Am I speaking to Tejal?"

Tejal (confused): "Yes. But who are you?"

Voice: "Hi Tejal. Aniket here. Umm, we met yesterday. Remember?"

Tejal felt a lump in throat choking her voice. She couldn't reply immediately.

Aniket: "Hello, Tejal. Are you there? You are listening to me, right? Hello!!"

Tejal gulped the hard lump in her throat very hard. She gripped the coffee cup in her hand managed to say, "Yes of course.. why not? Aniket. Hmm. Hi.. How are you?"

Aniket (smiling): "Ah!! Thank God you remember. I was just wondering if you could recognize me or not. So, what's up?"

Tejal: "Ahh!! Nothing special. Was just busy in drawing sketches"

Aniket: "Sketches? You mean, you are a painter?"

Tejal: "Noo. I mean I do draw but only designs. I'm a fashion designer."

Aniket: "Really? Wow! That's so cool. So, you own a boutique?"

They started talking this way. Time seemed to be flying away and they couldn't even realize. Vaibhavi took shower and came to the room after half an hour. She came to the room and found her coffee lying cold on the table. Tejal was nowhere to be seen. Vaibhavi looked in all the rooms and finally found Tejal in the balcony with her cell-phone in one hand. The earphones were plugged in her ears. She was laughing and smiling and curling her hair with fingers. She was pacing from one side to another in the balcony and was speaking like she was lost in her own world.

Vaibahvi wondered with whom Tejal was chatting. She called "Tejal" softly. Tejal did not respond. Vaibhavi increased her voice, "Tejal!".

Tejal stopped her stroll and looked towards Vaibhavi.

"Tejal, I'm done. Shall we sit now? I have to go back home", Vaibhavi asked.

Tejal signed Vaibhavi to go and sit and that she is coming. Vaibhavi went away. Tejal turned her mind towards the phone again and started chatting. Vaibhavi went to the drawing hall, sat at the table and pulled the drawing sheets towards her. She flipped through the newly made sketches and made a few sketches herself. After 30 minutes more, she looked at the clock and wondered if Tejal was still on phone. She went to the balcony again and found Tejal was still talking. This time she was not pacing around but standing inclined over the railings, still curling her hair with fingers.

Vaibhavi called Tejal again. Tejal looked back and realized that she was talking for quite a while. She said, "Aniket, can we talk later? Woh actually I need to work on some designs right now. I think you also need to go to practice?

Aniket looked at the clock and became conscious. It was one hour since they started talking. "Maa would kill me", he thought.

Aniket: "Yeah sure Tejal. You just reminded me that I need to go down too for breakfast."

Tejal (laughing): "Okay. You go. I'll keep the phone then. Bye bye"

Aniket: "Wait Tejal. I wanted to ask you something".

Tejal: "What?"

Aniket: "If you don't mind, can we meet somewhere? I mean, only if you don't have any problem"

Tejal felt like dancing. "Yes. Why not? Where and when", she chirped happily.

Aniket: "After two days. In the xyz park. Evening 4:30. Will it do?"

Tejal: "Yeah sure why not. I'll be there".

Aniket smiled.

Tejal: "So, umm bye then?"

Aniket: "Hmmm? Woh, accha.. Okay bye". He cut the call and went to the shower.

Tejal walked to the drawing room. Vaibhavi was working on the drawings. She saw Tejal coming towards her happily. "Kya baat hai!! Your face is glowing. Lemme guess you were talking with Aniket, right?", she mocked. But Tejal's cheeks were reddened. "Oh My God! You were really talking with Aniket Tejal? I thought I was kidding. Hmm. That's why I thought what was taking you so long!"

Tejal sat in her seat and pulled her drawing papers. Vaibhavi kept looking at her with contemptuous eyes. Tejal looked up from her papers. "What?", she asked furtively.

Vaibahvi: "Nothing.. Umm.. let's get back to work. So, I think these designs you made are awesome. I have also made these few. Check these"

She handed her designs to Tejal. Tejal went through them. "This one is very pretty Vaibhs. I think this will make a beautiful dress", she said pointing to a certain drawing.

Vaibhavi: "You think so? Oh!! Thank you. So let's finalize the absolute designs which we will work upon. We also need to instruct our tailors".

They both sat and finalized 25 new drawings.

Vaibhavi: "Tejal we need raw materials for these. Clothes and other embellishments. When shall we go for shopping?"

Tejal: "I'm free anytime. You wanna go now? We need to buy the best raw materials. Then we need to go to the factory too for starting the work.

Vaibhavi: "We can go to the factory tomorrow. Let's go shopping now. I think the old Ahmedabad market at "Teen Darwaza" would be better for the raw materials. But you have to walk a lot as the place is not suitable to be hovered around in car."

Tejal: "Vaibhavi, you are talking like this is the first time I'm going to the old Ahmedabadi market. Come on.. Let's go".

In MM, after having breakfast, Aniket went to the lawn to stroll. Baa was sitting in the lawn too. She was playing chess with Nikhilesh.

It was three hours since they reached "Teen darwaza". It was a real ham-fisted place with closely packed shops. But the market was divided in different sections. One section was only for clothes and dress materials, while other sections were solely for books or furniture. They kept on sprawling around the whole cloth section of the market and looked for bulk raw materials. Somewhere the price was not proper and somewhere the quality of material. They got tired after roaming for one more hour. Finally they found a wholesale dealer who was pricing the best quotations of the market. They placed an order but told him to deliver the sample clothe first. After getting done with the first round of designed outfits, they would order the second bulk lot. He told he'll deliver the first sample lot to the factory by evening.

Back in the car, Tejal threw herself on the seats. "You drive the car Vaibhavi. My bones are breaking", she said in a huff. It was previously decided that Tejal would drive the car on the way back. But she was not ready to move a finger now. So, Vaibhavi sat in the driver's seat.

"Will you go to factory now?", Vaibahvi asked Tejal.

"No way. If it's necessary, we can go at the evening", Tejal answered.

Vaibhavi: "Then come to my home. You did not meet Maa however"

Tejal: "Okay.. Lets go to meet Faibaa"

Commments and criticisms are most welcome..

Me first yipee

Originally posted by: tani23

Me first yipee

Heyaa ...debo welcome bak

loved d update ...

my fav scenes were

Anijal beautiful No time Bound chat

Vaibhavi tejal girly convo

Susla :hale hale aave

n

Shashwat getting scolding

luvd it ...make dem fall for each other soon

Aww.. Thank u so much dearie.. 😛 specially for pointing out the fav scenes.. They have already started falling for each other.. Didn't u get?? 😕 Oh!! I am so horrible.. can't even describe properly.. 😕
Sorry, I'll make it clear very soon.. 😊

Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

Aww.. Thank u so much dearie.. 😛 specially for pointing out the fav scenes.. They have already started falling for each other.. Didn't u get?? 😕 Oh!! I am so horrible.. can't even describe properly.. 😕
Sorry, I'll make it clear very soon.. 😊

Awesome update... Finally caught up with this I forgot that I have to gifts to add to Vishal's birthday thing I'll pm u later

Awesome parttt!!!!!!!!!!!!
Everything wad just perfect n too its perfect place..
The breaking dawn.. The no time bound chats.. Shashwat getting shoutings n susla my dear was just petfect...
I want to see a desperation betwn anijal...

Hey nice concept. pls.. Update soon n pm me when u update