DoVik/VaNya AT #3 ~Patti-Pattini aur Woh~ - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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😆 oh meri Jagga jasoos 😆
kuch jasoosi ki ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..sairat..

After two days in Hospital ...

She woke up from sleep...calling out "VYOM ...looking around the room ...it was dark ..she again felt cold...Shiv come in front of her...she again asked him, "why did you do this" in anger... why did you want to kill Vyom n me?

Finally Shiv broke his silence ... Whatever he did, is to avenge BEDIS ...they are the reason why he lived alone all his life w/o family parents, I lost my all my happiness, parents coz of Rajan Bedi, and I wanted to inflicted the same pain on Rajan by hurting Vyom as he is Rajan's weakness, how it feels when you loose your family i want him to feel same pain as me...


Shiv continue telling his story... I joined the College where Vyom was studying to get to close to him...who kahete hai na "doston ko kareeb rakhana chahiya par dushman ko apne dil ke aur bhi paas ... I always knew Vyom loves you...iss liye main bhi tumare kareeb anne laga taki tumako vyom se chinn loon... but natak karate karate mai bhi tumase pyaar karane laga ...

Mai zindagi ko jeene laga tha... in fact I was ready to forget my revenge for you...

But luck was not on my side... tum bhi Vyom ko chahane lagi thi... Bas phir kya mera ghussa parban chad gaya...all my life I lost everything to Bedis... Par iss bar nahi... Iss baar Bedis nahi jeetenge... "mai kisiko Humare beech mein ane nahi doonga ...

I tried to convince you that I am your true lover but all my efforts went in vein ...

Then you n Vyom decide to meet your parents... When you both were going to Dev Prayag ...I tried to stop you...in that rush accident took place... U could have saved me but you chose to save Vyom over me and I died on the spot while you went into Coma...

BAS!! Since that day I waited for you to woke up so that I can take my revenge... Vyom ko bhi toh pata chale apne hi pyaar haatho marane ka dard kya hota hai...

Finally you woke up ... I wipe out all your memories...cloud all feelings towards Vyom... phir sab waise hote gaya jaise mai chahata tha...tume use door rahene lagi... I want you to hate him instead you became friend ...I started hurting him so that you can stay away despite all this you decide to marry him... Bas mere sabra ka baandh toot raha chuka tha...

Phir kya I possessed Vyom ... and did all those pathetic acts with you so that you cancel the marriage ... par udhar bhi tumane haar nahi mani aur woh Vyom jeet ta chala gaya...

Tum mujhe mirrors mein quid karene chali thi, mujhse peecha chudane k liye... par ulta Kapali Hills mein maine tume unn yaddon mein zakad liya jo humari thi hi nahi *Evil Laugh*

Aur usake baad kya tha Shiv ka leela chalu ho gayi...udhar Vyom mere vash mein tha aur tum bhi... Vyom ko lagane laga k he killed everyone par sach toh yeh tha maine unn sab ko maara tha ... As I was controlling his mind...

aur aaj mera yeh maqsad poora hua... maine dekha tha woh uske aankhon mein which i always wanted to see...today I won ... Shiv jeet gaya ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kesh123



😆 oh meri Jagga jasoos 😆
kuch jasoosi ki ?


Jaasoosi k badle apni script likh rahi hain! 🤣

Btw, new BTS video is out on Bollywood Live. Nothing special, though. Another FB shoot of SS in college. 😆


Edited by .Lilith. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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😆 oh meri Jagga jasoos 😆
kuch jasoosi ki ?
kya jasoosi karawana chahkhati .hai? as of now i m cooking my khayali pualo... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Lilith.


Jaasoosi k badle apni script likh rahi hain! 🤣

Btw, new BTS video is out on Bollywood Live. Nothing special, though. Another FB shoot of SS in college. 😆


what to do? show is not entertaining me... toh khuda ka hi script likhake khud hi enjoy kar rahi hoon... 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..sairat..


Shiv continue telling his story... I joined the College where Vyom was studying to get to close to him...who kahete hai na "doston ko kareeb rakhana chahiya par dushman ko apne dil ke aur bhi paas ... I always knew Vyom loves you...iss liye main bhi tumare kareeb anne laga taki tumako vyom se chinn loon... but natak karate karate mai bhi tumase pyaar karane laga ...

Mai zindagi ko jeene laga tha... in fact I was ready to forget my revenge for you...

But luck was not on my side... tum bhi Vyom ko chahane lagi thi... Bas phir kya mera ghussa parban chad gaya...all my life I lost everything to Bedis... Par iss bar nahi... Iss baar Bedis nahi jeetenge... "mai kisiko Humare beech mein ane nahi doonga ...

I tried to convince you that I am your true lover but all my efforts went in vein ...

Then you n Vyom decide to meet your parents... When you both were going to Dev Prayag ...I tried to stop you...in that rush accident took place... U could have saved me but you chose to save Vyom over me and I died on the spot while you went into Coma...

BAS!! Since that day I waited for you to woke up so that I can take my revenge... Vyom ko bhi toh pata chale apne hi pyaar haatho marane ka dard kya hota hai...

Finally you woke up ... I wipe out all your memories...cloud all feelings towards Vyom... phir sab waise hote gaya jaise mai chahata tha...tume use door rahene lagi... I want you to hate him instead you became friend ...I started hurting him so that you can stay away despite all this you decide to marry him... Bas mere sabra ka baandh toot raha chuka tha...

Phir kya I possessed Vyom ... and did all those pathetic acts with you so that you cancel the marriage ... par udhar bhi tumane haar nahi mani aur woh Vyom jeet ta chala gaya...

Tum mujhe mirrors mein quid karene chali thi, mujhse peecha chudane k liye... par ulta Kapali Hills mein maine tume unn yaddon mein zakad liya jo humari thi hi nahi *Evil Laugh*

Aur usake baad kya tha Shiv ka leela chalu ho gayi...udhar Vyom mere vash mein tha aur tum bhi... Vyom ko lagane laga k he killed everyone par sach toh yeh tha maine unn sab ko maara tha ... As I was controlling his mind...

aur aaj mera yeh maqsad poora hua... maine dekha tha woh uske aankhon mein which i always wanted to see...today I won ... Shiv jeet gaya ...

Trupti awesome writing I wish cvs stalk this AT and make this happen
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..sairat..

aur aaj mera yeh maqsad poora hua... maine dekha tha woh uske aankhon mein which i always wanted to see...today I won ... Shiv jeet gaya ...

Nahi yeh nahi ho sakata ...Vyom Vyom *Sharany hadbadat mein uthkar bahar aa gayi *

Bedi n Bisht fam was waiting there.. she asked everyone about Vyom , "where is Vyom? How is he??

Her mom came n said holding her hand, he is in coma ...

she went in his room ..seat besides Vyom her heart was breaking looking at Vyom in this condition ... Regretting...cursing Shiv for what he did to them... but more than that she was angry at herself for trusting someone over her Vyom...

Two years have passed....

In the mean while Sharanya n Bedis done all final rites on Shiv's body ... he has departed to his world ..

Reminiscing her moments with Vyom ...farak bas itana tha ke iss baar yaadein sirf Sharanaya ki khudki apni thi na ke kisike dikhayi yeah batai hui nahi .

*SQUEEE* Car stopped at the foot step of Kapali Hill's Mandir ... she was carrying the mataka of fire *just like how Vyom did for her* barefoot ... she complete her mannat ...her phone rings...

She hurriedly comes to hospital bit nervous entered vyom's room...he was siting on the bed smiling at his Mom...She murmur his name Vyom...


PS :guess the ending of the my pulao 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Lilith.


The "t" was added on purpose. 😆 Patti as in bandage, not husband. 😆

So it's like a couple with two bandaged people and a "Woh".

oh got it got it. Vikku n Patti janam janam ka saath.
Really VAnya fans have so much creativity. Good job
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..sairat..

Nahi yeh nahi ho sakata ...Vyom Vyom *Sharany hadbadat mein uthkar bahar aa gayi *

Bedi n Bisht fam was waiting there.. she asked everyone about Vyom , "where is Vyom? How is he??

Her mom came n said holding her hand, he is in coma ...

she went in his room ..seat besides Vyom her heart was breaking looking at Vyom in this condition ... Regretting...cursing Shiv for what he did to them... but more than that she was angry at herself for trusting someone over her Vyom...

Two years have passed....

In the mean while Sharanya n Bedis done all final rites on Shiv's body ... he has departed to his world ..

Reminiscing her moments with Vyom ...farak bas itana tha ke iss baar yaadein sirf Sharanaya ki khudki apni thi na ke kisike dikhayi yeah batai hui nahi .

*SQUEEE* Car stopped at the foot step of Kapali Hill's Mandir ... she was carrying the mataka of fire *just like how Vyom did for her* barefoot ... she complete her mannat ...her phone rings...

She hurriedly comes to hospital bit nervous entered vyom's room...he was siting on the bed smiling at his Mom...She murmur his name Vyom...


PS :guess the ending of the my pulao 😆

your version story is so good. CV pls look here n goes like this. So good.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..sairat..

Nahi yeh nahi ho sakata ...Vyom Vyom *Sharany hadbadat mein uthkar bahar aa gayi *

Bedi n Bisht fam was waiting there.. she asked everyone about Vyom , "where is Vyom? How is he??

Her mom came n said holding her hand, he is in coma ...

she went in his room ..seat besides Vyom her heart was breaking looking at Vyom in this condition ... Regretting...cursing Shiv for what he did to them... but more than that she was angry at herself for trusting someone over her Vyom...

Two years have passed....

In the mean while Sharanya n Bedis done all final rites on Shiv's body ... he has departed to his world ..

Reminiscing her moments with Vyom ...farak bas itana tha ke iss baar yaadein sirf Sharanaya ki khudki apni thi na ke kisike dikhayi yeah batai hui nahi .

*SQUEEE* Car stopped at the foot step of Kapali Hill's Mandir ... she was carrying the mataka of fire *just like how Vyom did for her* barefoot ... she complete her mannat ...her phone rings...

She hurriedly comes to hospital bit nervous entered vyom's room...he was siting on the bed smiling at his Mom...She murmur his name Vyom...


PS :guess the ending of the my pulao 😆


Memory loss k alaawa kuchh bhi chalega. 🤣

I swear, you are a better writer than the whole team of writers put together!

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