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Posted: 7 years ago
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Watched the first part after a long time. It is rather amazing that Shiv is still trapped in this quagmire that is the ghostly plane that is sucking him in, and yet, there he is unable to go away and unable to make himself felt and understood. He is of neither this world or the next. So, where does he belong and where will he belong even if Sharanya were to remember her past. Shiv, for what its worth, is lost to both the realm of real and supernatural.

My love is
a whisper
in the dark
that cuts the silence
in your heart.

And yet,
I lie
under the cold ground
with empty eyes
bereft of tears to cry
and a heavy heart
that carries the
burden of memories.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow mind blowing...so beautifully written
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Joyness

Wow mind blowing...so beautifully written


😊 Thank you for reading and appreciating!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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So Shiv has managed to drag us all into this tale, finally. 😆
Beautiful depiction of Shiv's tortured soul, Beagle. 👏

Seeing Indrani here too, after a long time. Edkv feels!

Hope the pace picks up really soon now.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Unres
Whispers
blows softly through the wind
Voices heard
like stories of long ago
musical notes
breaking the stillness of silence

And yet there was not a sign

Of that presence
past seems sealed off
yet daily it crumbles
memories
brushes my present
and I know not why

Stories reawaken
A Life
Thought long dead
To retell a moment
which continues to live in the present

Beagle you are too good. Loved your poem. This is my ramble😆





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

So Shiv has managed to drag us all into this tale, finally. 😆

Beautiful depiction of Shiv's tortured soul, Beagle. 👏

Seeing Indrani here too, after a long time. Edkv feels!

Hope the pace picks up really soon now.



Heyloo Chick! How have you been? Happy New year😃
EDKV was special😛...this is ...I leave to your imagination😕. Any other shows you are watching?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta

Unres

Whispers
blows softly through the wind
Voices heard
like stories of long ago
musical notes
breaking the stillness of silence

And yet there was not a sign

Of that presence
past seems sealed off
yet daily it crumbles
memories
brushes my present
and I know not why

Stories reawaken
A Life
Thought long dead
To retell a moment
which continues to live in the present

Beagle you are too good. Loved your poem. This is my ramble😆






Thank you for responding with your 'rabmle'. It is lovely. WHat I think is the past is not really the past. The past is still present in the present if that makes sense. Rather, it stares her in the face every day. Until the past is laid to rest and demons buried, the present and future will remain in a timewrap. But, certain characters in the story are trying to rewrite the past and so the actual truth remains hidden. In my view, it is the voice of truth that is struggling to be heard and it is difficult to restrain truth for long -because even when truth is silent it is the loudest among sounds.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup

So Shiv has managed to drag us all into this tale, finally. 😆

Beautiful depiction of Shiv's tortured soul, Beagle. 👏

Seeing Indrani here too, after a long time. Edkv feels!

Hope the pace picks up really soon now.



Hi Chick! Thank you!

Yes, Shiv has but I watch only his scenes because the rest is just poppycock. I have no problem with the other characters but the treatment of this soap and the current characterisations leave a lot to be desired. It is an ugle reminder of the superstitions and taboos that exist in society!

But thats probably why EDKV was so special. It did not have the trappings of a daily soap and none of this ugly nonsense. It was a clean and simple story with humour, until Shravan decided to become a MORON.😆 And its treatment, including the style of the sets and actors' clother, was real. Shravan was such a beautifully flawed character in the start and Sumo too.




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Posted: 7 years ago
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Love it!! You nailed Shiv's situation or should I say booth Shiv's situation.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: indranigupta


Heyloo Chick! How have you been? Happy New year😃
EDKV was special😛...this is ...I leave to your imagination😕. Any other shows you are watching?


Happy New Year! 😳
Shows I watch - rishton ka chakravyuh, which started out really well, dragged in the middle and will pick up soon, hopefully . And yeh undinon ki baat had on Sony, which is a nice watch. Better made than Edt, any day!
EDKV - nothing will come close to it. Idiot Sony!😡😆

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