beagleboy thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Who am I?
I am a gust of wind
trapped in a corked bottle that
is raring to go,
blow
slow
cool breeze
on my beloved's face
but cannot find an outlet.

I am the feeling
supressed
in a lovers heart
that longs to
cry out,
shout out,
words of tender love
but cannot find a voice.

I am the word in tiny print
hidden in a long prose
that craves for attention but
goes unspoken
unheard,
unseen
in an old forgotten leather bound book.

I am the tears in the eyes
of misfortune
that cannot
flow
and
show
its sadness,
its emptiness
-its lonliness.

I am the touch
that wants to be felt
but leaves
without a trace.

I am the bud
of a beautiful flower
that died
before it
could bloom.


This is for the ghost who is oft misunderstood, who stands without a voice and yet with so much feeling. The ghost who is trapped in a space where he should not be - a place from where he cannot move on and yet the world around him cannot wait to do just that.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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That was superb, inexpressible feelings of Shiv and his pain, beautifully expressed through your lines👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is so ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4
Amazing 👏
The title of the post reminds me of Shelley's Ode To The West Wind 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow! Described bhoot s condition so beautifully 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully expressed, loved it ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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@everyone - thank you for appreciating, glad you enjoyed.
@ Soumi - if you are reading this, is that kivanc and Tuba from Cesur ve Guzel in your photo?

@bitch - depends on what you are looking for. Some of us like the Ghost and some like Vyom. So depending on where you are looking to find your ideal story and how the balances tip at any given time, you may or maynot enjoy it. Having said that, I personally find the show very slow and uninspiring, but for the ghost and his mystery. So the show will only work for me if it is different and I just think a couple fighting all odds and a paranormal being is not different and holds little interest in my books. but that is just me. I prefer the posher and more upgraded version of Indian soaps that one finds on turkish TV!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: beagleboy


@ Soumi - if you are reading this, is that kivanc and Tuba from Cesur ve Guzel in your photo?

Yes 😛

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