Mriara Collab FF : Jaan-e-baharan

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

awesome parts guys !

story continues :

Tara goes to the UC, she looks around but nobody was there , so she walked towards Maria , mj was inside sitting on the ground with his back resting on the wall... and in his hand... that moti ( pearl ) ...

T. Dekho na maria, tumhara maalik mujhse naaraz hai...

Mj heard her voice ... he was going to get up and meet her , but he didint get up
Mj. ( in his mind ) pehle mein peeche pad raha tha toh mujhe zara bhi bhav nahi diya, ab astabal mere peeche peeche aa gayi...tara ... agar aaj maine tumhe mere kareeb aane ke liye thoda tadpaya nahi , toh kya kiya ? ( he smiled )

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Story continues:

Issi murkurahut ke saath Mj ne Moti ko dekha

aur kaha Tara Mera Moti to tum ho

Aur soacha ke ajj tadapne ki bari tumhari hai

kul Honey moon pe tumse keh dalo ga ke

"Hathon Mein Hath Le Kar Tera Sath Nibhaana Hai

Tujhko Apni Mohabbat Ka Jazbah Dikhaana Hai
Teri Baahon Mein Aakar Sukoon Mil Jaaye Mujhe
Teri Zulfon Ko Apne Kaandhon Pe Bichaana Hai
Tu Azeez Hai Mujhe Itni Main Keh Nahi Sakta
Tera Deewaana Hoon Main Bas Itna Bataana Hai
Haseen Nazaaron Mein, Ab Mera Mann Lagta Nahi
Tere Chehre Ko Nigaahon Ke Saamne Laana Hai
Main Kahin Baith Jaaun Tanha, Duniya Ki Fikr Mein
Tujhe Apne Paas Bitha Kar, Sabko Bhulaana Hai
Jab Dekhe Tu Mujhko Tau Chehra Khil Jaye Mera
Har Takleef Ko Apne Dil Se Mujhe, Mitaana Hai
Main Dua'a Mein Maangta Hoon, Khuda Se Tujhko
Apna Sab Kuch Kho Kar Bas Tujhe Hi Paana Hai
Khwaabinda Ho Kar Aksar Yeh Sochta Hai
Kya Tujhe Bhi Kuch Iss Tarha Mujhe Sunaana Hai"❤️
kiya pal honge jab yeh sab mein apni Tara se kahsakongaYahi soachte howe MJ muskaradiya😳

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

@samreen

Wah wah !!!!! Kya poem hai ! Lovely part

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Tara enters the place and sees mj sitting there... On tye groubd with his back on the wall ...
T. Mujhse bahut naaraz ho kya ?
The moti falls from his hand and ends up in front of tara ... He looks at her

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Sam Di the poem was mesmerizing 👏
And Mini the Moti part was great 😃

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MJ looked at Tara. The night was a moonlit night. Moon's glowing ray was coming through the window. She was looking absolutely stunning at the shining. But MJ remind himself that he was angry at her. He looked away other side. Tara saw and smiled. She picked up the Moti.

Tara - Toh mera Patidev bohot naraz hai mujhse.
MJ said nothing. Tara sat beside him.
Tara - Abhi toh baat bhi nahi karega lagta hai. Phir se maun brat rakh lia kya aapne..
MJ - Tum yaha kyun aaye ho ? Pahele room se nikal dia aab mere piche piche yaha kya kar rahe ho ...
Tara - Maine kab kaha ki aap room se chali jaao. Main toh bas keh rahi thi ki time bohot kam hai aur packing...
MJ said in wrathful voice without let her finish her words
MJ - Toh jaao jakar packing karo. Yaha kyun tang kar rahe ho..

Tara realized she made him very angry. She didn't want to do that. She looks outside and remembered their night which they spent here at UC. That lighten up her mood. She looked at him who was watching her from the corner of his eyes. She held his arm, MJ withdrew his hand. Tara again held his this time with more pressure that he couldn't go away. Tara lied her head on his shoulder.

Tara - Tumko yaad hai main kaise yaha jabardasti rehne aagayi thi. Tumne toh mujhe nikal hi dia tha. Phir bhi main reh gayi thi na tab. Toh tumhe kaise laga ki main aab chali jaaungi.

Tara smiled. Her smile made the environment more lovely, MJ thought himself. He looked at her who closed her eyes while rested her head at his shoulder. She looked so pretty. He could spend the whole night like this looking at her. Not just this night, he could spend his whole life happily if Tara would beside him...

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Khajju's part was superb,

Just mesmerizing!!!

Well, so the story continues...

" Are patidev kuch toh boliye" Tara said after a moment looking at Mrityunjay, who was still silent.

"Ab narazgi chodiye nah...socho kal hum honeymoon jayenge...mujhe toh yakeen hi nahi ho raha...tum aur mei...itne dino baad...akele honge aur..." Tara was talking continuously without taking any pause, when Mrityunjay placed his finger on her lips,

"Puri raat batein karne ka irada hai kya?" He whispered leaning forward to her.

Tara's heart skipped a bit founding him so close to her, but still she somehow managed to keep herselg normal,

"Agar hum batein nahi karenge toh phir kya karenge...?" She asked him in an innocent tone.

"batau mein..." Mj asked giving her an intense gaze.

She nodded, controlling her giggle.

Tara was totally aware of his intention, she stood up with an instant, and starts running so that Mj couldn't catch her, at last Mj hold her hand and dragged her towards him, she landed on his chest, Mj looked at her smiling face, the beauty of her ethereal sight made him fall for her more and more, he leaned towards her and Tara closed her eyes...

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow Mini, Khadeja and Nira

Awesome Parts👏

Story continues:

Bohot dair tak Mj Tara ko dekhta raha uska chehraAankon mein busane aur dil mein bherne ko kerne luga

Aahista se Mj ne apni madhur awaz mein kuch youn kaha ke

Meri Tara

"Hathon Mein Hath Le Kar Tera Sath Nibhaana Hai

Tujhko Apni Mohabbat Ka Jazbah Dikhaana Hai

Teri Baahon Mein Aakar Sukoon Mil Jaaye Mujhe

Teri Zulfon Ko Apne Kaandhon Pe Bichaana Hai

Tu Azeez Hai Mujhe Itni Main Keh Nahi Sakta

Tera Deewaana Hoon Main Bas Itna Bataana Hai

Haseen Nazaaron Mein, Ab Mera Mann Lagta Nahi

Tere Chehre Ko Nigaahon Ke Saamne Laana Hai

Main har Dua'a Mein Maangta Hoon, Khuda Se Tujhko

Apna Sab Kuch Kho Kar Bas Tujhe Hi Paana Hai"

Tara jese apne mj ki bahon mein aur uski madhur awaz mein hi kho gayi thi

Mj. itni madhosh hogayi ho gher wapis nahin jana kiya

ankhein kholte howe ...Tara thori sharmayi phir sambhal gayi

Tara. han jana hain na tum hi to kuch bol rahe they

Mj. acha kuch bolraha tha jese tumhein samjh hi nahin aya kuch...gussa dikhate howe

Tara. uff o tum bhi na adiyal aur khadoos hi rahoge...ab chalo gher itni raat ko biwi ko aikela bhejhoge...huste howe

Mj. nahin saath chaloonga ...kul ki tayari bhi to kerni hai...

Edited by SamreenJ - 9 years ago

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Mesmerizing poem!!!!

U guys so fast!!!

Story continues...

Every one is waiting for them in hall.here Tara mj getting ready for their trip.Tara mj ko utna khush dekh ke jairaj bhi khush the & said while smiling ...aap dono saath me bahoot achche lagte hain...hamesha muskurate rahiye...

Phir jairaj ne tickets diya or dono car me baith ke chale gayien...

Mj Tara is so happy that they didn't notice someone is following them...

Mj ne ek baar socha ki yeh car kab se hamare peeche hai BT usi waqt Tara ne kuchh kaha or mj ka attention divert ho gay...

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sketie

@sketie

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome parts guys ! loveing the story so much !

Story continues :
t. mj , manie kabhi socha nahi tha, uss reception wali raa ke baad , ki hum dono kabhi ek doosre itna pyaar karenge ki kuch vakt ki doori bhi khalne lage gi... ki ek ko naraaz dekh kar... doosra bhi naraaz rehega...
Mj. socha to maine bhi nahi tha... ki tum meri zindagi mein aogi... aur meri zindagi ko rangon se bhar dogi... jo sketch meine banaya tha... yaad hai... astabal mein... maine usse keval el rang ka banaya tha... tumne uss black sketch wale rose ko pink banadiya...

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Story continues...

Tara ...sach kahoon Maine pakka irada kar liya tha tumhien chhod doongi...tumhara gunah Jo tumne kabhie kiya nai tha jab uska pata chala toh main bahoot daar gai thi...kitni baar bhagne ki koshish ki ...par har baar tum hi mile ...tumse bhagte hue bhi ...tumhi se pyaar kar baithi...

Mj...Tara tumhara ek boond ishq hi mujhe usi andheri zindagi se bahar le aya

...main tumhien bayan nai kar sakta ki main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon...I love u I love u more than my life...

Suddenly kuchh gariyan aa ke samne ruki...jis wajah se mj ne car ROK di...

Edited by kumari27 - 9 years ago