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Khadeja thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Wonderful update Mini ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

The rose scene was so romantic
MJ was so ready to express his feelings 😊

Tara thought all these things were happening in her dream 😛
She couldn't believe MJ was really doing those 😉

Finally Tara opened her eyes and found MJ was really there 😛
Wow!! MJ told he loved her and that was also from a long time

Tara didn't believe
She thought MJ loved Radha 🥱

MJ didn't understand why Tara was trying to avoid him 😒
But he didn't let Tara to go 😃
And also applied colour on her cheek 😳
Last scene was also sensuous 😳

Great update Mini 👏
Continue your writing 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
You are really damn good with romance dear.😊 😊 😊

Wonderful and romantic update. 😳 😳 😳

Just love the way you showed Tara missing and wanting MJ but being Radha in their lives she is unable to believe that MJ just loves her no one else.😕 😕 😕

He is trying his best to prove her that how much he love her and he wants her to be with him. He confessed but Tara thinks it a dream.😳 😳 😳

He really cares for her that's why he blew the air in her eyes when some color entered in to her eye by mistake. 😳 😳 😳

She should now believe him. Why will he lie to her? 😕 😕 😕

Update soon darls



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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: irfan2

thanks wow suberb great story😃😊 storys wright karti rahna 😃



Thank you very much

Im really happy you lijed the story

Will write stories on mriara coz there one of the best jodis
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: SamreenJ

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">wow what a start Mini👏</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Mj bhi na roses ke bahane</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Dil ki baat kehne ka acha Idea hai</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Humein pasand aya👍🏼</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Tara ko sab dream lugraha hai😕</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Aur Mj ne to ILU bhi bol diya😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">just romantic</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">But tara ko lugta hai Mj Radha se piyar kerta hai😲</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">hmm per Mj ko yeh baat butani pudegi na😲</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Beechara</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Per I liked it when he didn't let her to go😳</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">so intense and romantic</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">he applied color also</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">Wow Mini very romantic update hai</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">keep writing Dear!!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff00ff">👏🤗</font>



Thank you so much samreen

Roses toh hote hi bahut khoobsurat hai and usse dil ka haal bol na romantic lagta hai i think

Mj toh tara ko jane hi jahi dega coz usse dil ki haal bol ke hi rehna hai

Thank you so much dearv

Will try to update this weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Wow Mini
Superb update!!!!

Loved that rose scene
So beautiful and romantic!!

Tara thought everything is her dream!!!
But no doubt that she enjoyed being kissed by him...😉

Tara tried so much but Mj didn't let her go...
So romantic...!!!
Loved the scene...

MJ said I Love You to her...
Wow...
But that old problem...
Tara thinks that he is in love with Radha...!!!! 😕

The update was intense and romantic!!!
And specially the song
JUST PERFECT!!!!! ❤️

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!!!
Continue soon...😃


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: kumari27

Amazing update👏👏

Mj ka red rose or description kamaal ka😳
Tara bhi khoob dream ke bahane enjoy kar rahi😉
Aaj Tara kitna bhi jaane ki koshish kare mj nai jaane dega⭐️

Overall it was romantic update ...
Waiting for next...eagerly😆



thanks lot

tara ko dream lagta hai she doesnt know he loves her real and hes in fool mood od of romance

glad u liked it

thank you so much


will be updating soon
Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Khadeja

<font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#000033">Wonderful update Mini⭐️⭐️⭐️

The rose scene was so romantic
MJ was so ready to express his feelings 😊

Tara thought all these things were happening in her dream 😛
She couldn't believe MJ was really doing those 😉

Finally Tara opened her eyes and found MJ was really there 😛
Wow!! MJ told he loved her and that was also from a long time

Tara didn't believe
She thought MJ loved Radha 🥱

MJ didn't understand why Tara was trying to avoid him 😒
But he didn't let Tara to go 😃
And also applied colour on her cheek 😳
Last scene was also sensuous 😳

Great update Mini 👏
Continue your writing 😊
</font>



thanks a lot khadj

glad u liked the part

mj is so not in the mood to leave rara

today is the day he will tell her his feelings and nake her believe that hes tellibg her tye truth

mj always love her n she loves him so much

thanks a lot

will update soon
Edited by miniapplepie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

You are really damn good with romance dear.😊 😊 😊

Wonderful and romantic update. 😳 😳 😳

Just love the way you showed Tara missing and wanting MJ but being Radha in their lives she is unable to believe that MJ just loves her no one else.😕 😕 😕

He is trying his best to prove her that how much he love her and he wants her to be with him. He confessed but Tara thinks it a dream.😳 😳 😳

He really cares for her that's why he blew the air in her eyes when some color entered in to her eye by mistake. 😳 😳 😳

She should now believe him. Why will he lie to her? 😕 😕 😕

Update soon darls





thanks a lot dear

i like writng on mriara

there sooo cute and romantic tiogether

tara thinks mj loves radha m, but she has no idea mj loves her lot in the fear of losing their friendship she doesnt want to give the first step

evne though now she thinks its her dream

evenn the confession she thinks this is dream

his care is clear when he blows air in her eyes but shes too much sure that hes in love with radha not her thats why she doesnt believe him

will update soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com

Wow Mini
Superb update!!!!

Loved that rose scene
So beautiful and romantic!!

Tara thought everything is her dream!!!
But no doubt that she enjoyed being kissed by him...😉

Tara tried so much but Mj didn't let her go...
So romantic...!!!
Loved the scene...

MJ said I Love You to her...
Wow...
But that old problem...
Tara thinks that he is in love with Radha...!!!! 😕

The update was intense and romantic!!!
And specially the song
JUST PERFECT!!!!! ❤️

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly!!!
Continue soon...😃




thanks a lot nira

tara will defo enjoy as she is more than in love with him ,

mj wont let her go today , tara can try as hard as she wants but he wont let her go

for her it was a drema as she thoght he was in love with radha , not her

but mj wont let her goawaywith her misunderstanding


i love this song , very romantic

thanks alot

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
hi guys thanks a lot for tye support you gave to the story hope you like this part and please leave your feedback and likes
ps. if you have the opportunity please listen to the song ang laga de while reading this


Part 3

Ang laga de re
Mohey rang laga de re
Main to teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re


His lips being almost on her eye... Was sending electric vibes like sensation in her body ... His hot breath breath on her eyes was making her go weak on herknees ... Consequently her hsnds held his forearmm... He knew what his closeness did to her ... Ending it.. He placed his lips in her eyes kissing her softly ... for tara ... This was a beautiful dream ... A beautiful dream thst she didnt want it to end anytime soon... she slowly opened her eyes ...and saw him still there...

Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Raat banjar si hai
Kaale khanjar si hai
Tere seene ki lau
Mere andar bhi hai


Ta. Mrityunjay... Tum mere sath yehkaunsa mazak karrahe ho ?
Mj couldnt believe what he just heard ... A joke ? He has opened his heart out in front ofher ... And she thinks he is joking ...
Mj.toh... Aj mein tumhe sabit kar dungaki mein koi mazak nahi kar raha ...

Tu hawa de isey
Toh mera tann jale
Jala de re sang jala de re
Mohey ang laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re


He liftedher in his arms after saying so ... Tara was lostin his eyes ... She placed her hanfs on the nape of his neck ... And he took her to their room ... When they enteres taras eyes fell on the bed ... those rose petals... He looked at mj ... Lovingly ...
Mj walkeed in and placed her on their bed...then. ...he clsed the door...which made tara know about his intentions...



Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Raas hai raat mein
Teri har baat mein
Bol main kya karun
Aise haalaat mein
Hoon main teri malang
Tu hi mera nasha
Chadha de re bhang chadha de re
Prem ki bhang chadha de re

Mrityunjay walked back to where she was resting ... He sat on the bed ... Rrightnext to him she was lying. ... Looking at him ... without breaking tye eyelock... He leaned forward ... looking at her lips ...trembling lips... She closed her eyes as she couldnt bare his intense gaze ... He continued to lean ... But he changed direction and kissed her right cheek... Making her cluth the bedsheet ...

Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Mj looked at her recent action... He could see what his closeness did to hrr... He moved to the ither sude and kissed her left cheek... Then ... He kissed her forehead ... Her heartbeat was raising with every passing minute . ... He could feel that...He moved down to kiss her lips... She opened Her eyes To look at him... he looked at her ... Inroher eyes ... And almost whispering
Mj. Ab ... Kya yeh Tumhe mazak lagta hai ?
T. Par... Tum toh radha se pyar kartethe ... ?
Mj. raadha se ? Tara ... Tara Radha meri dost hai ... Keval dost ...
T. Par woh...
Mj. tara... Woh meri bachpan ki dosthai... Bas...
After hearing those words ... taras eyes filledeith tears and she hugged him... Tightly... Mj also hugged her back... Comforting her ... After a while... He broke thr hug ...and in few moments he was besides her ... facing her..
Mj. Tum sach mein yeh soch rahithi ...
T.haan... Woh... Mujhe lagta tha ki tumse mujhse pyaar nahi ..
Mj stopped her by plscing is finger on her lips ... Tara then remembered tht today is holi... So she picked somecolour from her cheek and touched his cheek ..
T. Happy holi mtityunjay
Mj. Happy holi my love
And kissed on her cheek ...twice once softly and theother passionately... she looked up exposing her side of the neckand ... He looked at her recent action ... Snd in response.. He Moved his kisses from her cheek to the side of her neck... his kisses wrre making her blush heavily ... She moaned his name ... And whispered " i loce you mrityunjay " He embracdd hr ... Passionately ... Tara hugged him back... Carrssing his bare back... and soon... They both slept in each others arms ...

Ram ratan dhan
Lagan magan man
Tan mora chandan re...

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