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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Aik baar phirse kuch likha hai

meri Ebians ke liye

Umeed kerti hoon Pasand ayega

Meri Ankh Main Jhalak Teri
Meri Saans Main Mehak Teri
Mere Gumaan Main Weham Tera
Meri Neend Main Khuwab Tere
Mere Dill Main Dharkan Teri
Mere Jism Main Roh Teri
Mere Sog Main Rog Tera
Mere Dar Main Khauf Tera
Meri Tanhai Main Baten Teri
Mere Hathon Main Lams Tera
Mere Khayal Main Jeet Teri
Mere Ishq Main Bazi Teri

***Lo Suno Zindagi Ki Dastaan Meri
Main Tera Aur Meri Muhabbat Bhi Teri***

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Edited by SamreenJ - 10 years ago

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

WOW...WOW...WOW...👏 👏 👏

I don't have words Di to express the beauty and serenity of these lines!!!

"Lo Suno Zindagi Ki Dastaan Meri
Main Tera Aur Meri Muhabbat Bhi Teri" Ye do line toh Uff..kya kehna...❤️

All I can say that ye itna khubsoorat hai ki dil bhar jata hai...barbar...aap jab bhi likhti ho!!

ek ek lines mei itna feelings hota hai...kya kahu!!!!

Tareef bhi kaam padh jata hai apke liye toh...

bas aap yun hi likhte rahiye... 😊

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

WOW !!! Sam Di beautiful poem... 😊
Perfect for Mriara...😛

"Lo Suno Zindagi Ki Dastaan Meri
Main Tera Aur Meri Muhabbat Bhi Teri"
I love these line very much

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com
WOW...WOW...WOW...👏 👏 👏
I don't have words Di to express the beauty and serenity of these lines!!!
"Lo Suno Zindagi Ki Dastaan Meri
Main Tera Aur Meri Muhabbat Bhi Teri" Ye do line toh Uff..kya kehna...❤️
All I can say that ye itna khubsoorat hai ki dil bhar jata hai...barbar...aap jab bhi likhti ho!!
ek ek lines mei itna feelings hota hai...kya kahu!!!!
Tareef bhi kaam padh jata hai apke liye toh...
bas aap yun hi likhte rahiye... 😊

Thanks Nira

Tumhari mohobbat aur encouragement hai ke mein likh rahi hoon

pasand kerne ka shukriya

Love you Dear

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sohag
WOW !!! Sam Di beautiful poem... 😊
Perfect for Mriara...😛

"Lo Suno Zindagi Ki Dastaan Meri
Main Tera Aur Meri Muhabbat Bhi Teri"
I love these line very much

mujhe bhi yeh do line bohot pasand hain

jese mj ne tara ko kahe hoon

Lets feel the intensity of MJ 😉

Thanks Khadija

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

The poem is perfect for MriAra!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The last two lines are my favourite!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

They express the intensity of MJ's love for his Tara!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The poem is lovely Sam!!!!😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

Beautiful lines 👍🏼

Each line have depth BT last two lines is killer.❤️

Thanks for sharing these wonderful lines😛

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

Superb and awesome lines dear. 👏 👏 👏

I am not that good in poetry.. 😛 😛 😛

But can feel the depth in your lyrical lines..

I just have one word beautiful and suits to our MriAra perfectly. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Keep on writing more and never forget to share it with us. 😊 😊 😊

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Awesome!!!!👏

The poem is perfect for MriAra!!!!😊

The last two lines are my favourite!!!!❤️

They express the intensity of MJ's love for his Tara!!!☺️☺️☺️

The poem is lovely Sam!!!!👏

Thanks Shaina for liking.
Your comments are valuable and gives me encouraging power.
I also love last two lines.