*'Tu Jaane Na!!!'* ViCha FF updtd pg.44 prt 16 on 26th September - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful Update Vartika Di ⭐️

Wow it was so sweet Viraf planned to surprise Chhavi 😛
He called everyone but as expected Saba will not come 😳
Yea Pracheen kaha se aaya..
You know I guessed it was Pracheen when you write everyone surprised..
Viraf is unhappy that was obvious, I am also unhappy 😔
Sodhiji knew what Viraf hiding..
Chhavi guessed it was Viraf who planned all this 😳
Viraf and Chhavi's relation is really very sweet ❤️❤️❤️
Uff!!! this Pracheen disturbed them
He proposed her and how dare he kissed her without permission 😡😡😡
Viraf also saw 😲
He was hurt very much
Chhavi was angry and that should be...
She should slap him..😡
He just ruin her birthday
Actually I am guessing who was secretly see and called whom..
I will not ask, waiting to reveal in next parts 😊

For that stupid Pracheen Vicha relation is no more sweet 😒
Ok, now Viraf trying to resolves the matters that is important 😊
It's good Freddy reminds them other people are also around 😆
Now who has come ??? 😕

This whole part was bit sad that how their relation got bitter 😔
Your writing too much good that I was angry after reading the Pracheen part 😆

Update soon as we live Vicha through your FF 😃


Edited by Khadeja - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It is a wonderful update , your writing skill is just mind-blowing.
The flashback scenes started very well.
Viraf's surprise for Chhavi was so cute!!
But that guy Pracheen ruined everything. 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢
He not only came there , he proposed her and KISSED her.
HOW DARE HE!!!!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡
I just hate this man...🤬 🤬 🤬 🤬
Such a cheap person.
Viraf was hurt... 😔 😔 😔 😔
& that was obvious!!!!
He ruined the party as well as ViCha's brewing relationship 😳 😳 😳 😳

Now coming to the present, I loved how you portrayed ViCha's understanding.
Freddy and Vahbiz were happy seeing them happy. 😳 😳 😳 😳
And ViCha was so engrossed in each other that forgot about the surroundings.😆 😆 😆 😆

I loved when Viraf was staring at her and his dialogue "Toh pata chal jane de"
But seriously Freddy said something logical
Viraf has to wait till Chhavi herself realize her feelings.

Is history repeating itself?😕 😕 😕 😕
Someone has come and I'm not getting a good vibe about it.
Whoever has come it seems like now this party will be ruined soon.

We are the ViCha deprived since 1 year. 😳 😳 😳 😳
And it is only your FF through which we live ViCha , we dream ViCha and this FF literally giving me hope that they will be together in the future. 😃 😃 😃 😃

So update soon
I'm dying to read the next part!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Viraf's surprise for Chhavi was so cute!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

He had called everyone for this!!!!🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

Thank u. He wanted to make her smile.😊 😊 😊

But as expected Saba did not come and I am glad it didn't matter to Viraf!!!!

Kaun chahta hi tha ki vo yahan aaye? 😛 😛 😛

Yeh Pracheen yahan kaha se aa gaya??😕 😕 😕 😕

Obviously Viraf was unhappy about it and even I am unhappy!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

No one wanted him here as well but soon you will come to know how he came here? 😉 😉 😉

Sodhiji guessed Viraf's feelings even though he tried to hide them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Laakh chupa lo kitna chupa paaoge? 😉 😉 😉

Chhavi rightly guessed it was Viraf who had planned all this!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

The scene where he wishes her and she teases him was really very sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

I loved it when Chhavi applied the cake on Viraf'a face and their Tom and Jerry chase and him applying cake on her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

She has seen him last time as well than she could guess it. 😳 😳 😳


But that Pracheen disturbed them and then ruined everything!!!!🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

He proposed to her and how dare he kiss her without her permission??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He is so cheap and I just hate him!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

He is really cheap and despo. 😡 😡 😡 Ye Pracheen bhi na kabab me haddi ban gaya. 😡 😡 😡

Viraf saw this and obviously he was very hurt!!!!

Hoga hi par kya kare? 😭 😭 😭

Chhavi was angry aur hona bhi chahiye!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

She should have slapped Pracheen!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Yes she should have but she couldn't understand how should she respond.😕 😕 😕

This Pracheen ruined her birthday as well as Viraf and Chhavi's brewing relationship!!!!

These guys think if a girl is friendly with you then she loves you and can't seem to get it that no means no!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

This is common men's mentality how take it for granted. 😡 😡 😡

Two women are conspiring against ViCha and one of them is after Viraf!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

You guessed it right 😛 😛 😛

Ab Chhavi ne apna gussa viraf pe nikal diya and behaved coldly with him when he tried to warn her about Pracheen!!!

Chhavi ko uske saath aise behave nahi karna chahiye tha aur isse toh Viraf usse aur door ho gaya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Aur kya ab us ko ye lagne laga ki kahin Viraf hi us k behavior ko bhi galat sense me na lene lage jab ki us ko samajhna chahiye vo Viraf hai Prcheen nhi.


I loved it when Viraf applied the cream on Chhavi's face and they are so engrossed in each other that they forgot about everyone else!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Freddy and Vahbiz are happy seeing them happy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Any gud friend will be 😊 😊 😊

Accha huya Freddy controlled their PDA and teased Chhavi which hopefully made it all seem natural!!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉

Viraf is fine with everyone finding out but good that Freddy drilled some sense into him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
It is much needed kyounki if you are in love you start becoming blind all of a sudden. 😆 😆 😆

Viraf has to wait until Chhavi herself realizes her feelings!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yes he should not rush this time.


Ab kaun aaya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕I am having a very bad feeling about this!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Let's see 😛 😛 😛

It seems like the party would be ruined soon!!!!
Wait and you will come to know. 😉 😉 😉

This part is very good!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
thank u once again 😊 😊 😊




thank u so much for such lovely comment Shai
🤗🤗 🤗
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey really fine update. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

You cleared all the doubts from where their relationship started to get sour.

How dare that bloody cheap man dare to kiss her? 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Don't these people get when a girl say no it means a clear no.😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 If any girl is comfortable with you it doesn't mean she loves u. 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. 👏 👏 👏

Who is this Pracheen guy who wants to take the advantage of her? 😕 😕 😕 Who were these girls who were doing this planing? 😡 😡 😡

Viraf was shocked he never expected that.😲 😲 😲 Ye kya ho gaya? 😲 😲 😲

Continue soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago



Vartika Di 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update dear.👏 I just loved the whole pendant scene and after that the cake cutting scene with Chhavi's favorite flavored cake was just cherry on the top. Finally one more thing is revealed in to this update that from where the misunderstandings started. It was all happened on her birthday where Pracheen visited her giving her so called surprise which later turned in to a shock.😔 How dare he did this thing? 😲 Why do these so called take things very lightly when it comes to a girl.😡 I want to kill such b*****d.😡 But poor Viraf not only he got hurt by the scenario but also all Chhavi's anger bursted on to him without his any fault.😭 But thank god they are happy now but who was that person came here making everyone unhappy. 😕
Continue soon dear.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry for late comments as I was extremely busy with my exams😔

Wah Viraf planned a surprise party and invite everyone👍🏼
Really sweet and romantic
Uff yeh saba ke Tantrums😡
acha howa nahi ayi😊
Haye mein samjhi Viraf hoga per yeh to 😲
Sach mein electric shock tha😈
How dare he to do that Kameena pan🤬Angry
sodhiji kitne sweet hain ❤️
tussi kuch kerte q nahin ji❓
Chaavi bhi na idher udher ludakti rehti hai😕
But what happened to Uncle PAngry
Proposal and kiss🤬🤬🤬
I wish Viraf ne aik ghoonsa maar diya hota🤣🤣
Mera to heart burn hogaya🥺
Thank god chhavi ne sunadi usko👏
per sara surprise ruined ker diya isne🤪
yeh chup chup ke kon dekh raha tha❓
jo bhi hai usski to mein 🤬
again mera blood boil hogayaAngry
Uff chaavi ne kitna hurt kiya Viraf ko
feel bad for him he needs a sweet hug🤗🤗
Shuker yeh flashback khutam howa😒
Now at present who sab resolve kerrahe hain that is good and most important👍🏼
yeh phir se kon aya
Mujhe SABA ke ane ki badboo arahi hai🤪
kiya phir se sab ger ber hogi
Please continue
It was a good update👏
thora thora tension 🥺
thora thora relief tha
iss update mein
Thanks Vartika
👍🏼🤗🤗👍🏼
And once again sorry ke thora dair hogayi
humka maafi dedena 🤪😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am happy that finally I am not late this time as you have not updated it till now.😉 Nice and revealing update.👏 I knew that there must be some big reason behind all this which happened between them.🤔 How can Pracheen do it? 😲 Viraf is really cute how he arranged everything for her birthday. She still doesn't guess that Viraf has started liking her.😕 All their scenes were cute except the last one where they had a little argument.😔 Chhavi is in anger and I think now it's better to leave her for sometime so at least she can relax.😳 I would have loved if she have slapped Pracheen.😛 But back to present time if they are happy together than we too are.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja

Wonderful Update Vartika Di ⭐️
thanks darling 🤗

Wow it was so sweet Viraf planned to surprise Chhavi 😛
He made it special for Chhavi.😉 😉 😉

He called everyone but as expected Saba will not come 😳
Us ko aana bhi nahi chahiye. 😛 😛 😛

Yea Pracheen kaha se aaya..
You know I guessed it was Pracheen when you write everyone surprised..
Yup I know we have a strong intuition of any thing bad which happens around ViCha.😉 😉 😉

Viraf is unhappy that was obvious, I am also unhappy 😔
Sodhiji knew what Viraf hiding..
Sodhi jee always knew about it.😉 😉 😉

Chhavi guessed it was Viraf who planned all this 😳
Viraf and Chhavi's relation is really very sweet ❤️❤️❤️
She knew how much important they are for each other than they guess it very easily. 😳 😳 😳

Uff!!! this Pracheen disturbed them
Kabab me badi buri waali haddi. 😡 😡 😡

He proposed her and how dare he kissed her without permission 😡😡😡
Viraf also saw 😲
He was hurt very much
Chhavi was angry and that should be...
She should slap him..😡
He just ruin her birthday
He is just a bloody b*****d who just make a relation enjoy and quit.😈 The relation with benefits and about Viraf he loved Chhavi how could he see someone kissing her?

Actually I am guessing who was secretly see and called whom..
I will not ask, waiting to reveal in next parts 😊
Yes you will get all the answers very soon, I know all of you are really smart.😉 😉 😉

For that stupid Pracheen Vicha relation is no more sweet 😒
Ok, now Viraf trying to resolves the matters that is important 😊
He is trying his best as a true friend but Chhavi is still angry and she just needs sometime to come out from that.

It's good Freddy reminds them other people are also around 😆
Now who has come ??? 😕
I think now u got the answer. Freddy knows what he does and he always keep it in his control so Viraf kabhi bhi over emotional ho k koi blunder na kar de. 😛 😛 😛

This whole part was bit sad that how their relation got bitter 😔
It's bad really.

Your writing too much good that I was angry after reading the Pracheen part 😆
Actually any one will be as he is Uncle P na so he always need someone in his trap. 😡 😡 😡

Update soon as we live Vicha through your FF 😃
Yes dear sure as it's my dream as well.😊 😊 😊



thanks a lot dear for such lovely comment. 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 9 years ago

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