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Posted: 11 years ago
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A short piece of work on friendship... So bear with me...

Part 1...

"This is so bore..."..

"yes everything is bore for you.. I do not understsnd why you come with me wen you do not enjoy here."

"do I have a choice?"

"ofcourse you have ... don't follow me from next time..."

She made a swollen face like balloon... my god I so love her expression ...

Myself Mritunjay and the person sitting beside who got hell annoyed with me is my bestie.. my Tara... well we r just 16 years old chuddy buddies... We r inseperable.. say it for living at the same apartment... going to same school... Same class... same tuition... And now coming to this deserted backyard of the old railway station...

Well this place was discovered by tara wen she first time fought with me... she ssya dis is the place of peace for her...and after we patched up.. she brings me along too... Yes and she says I follow her... girls I tell u...

Every Saturday after maths tuition we come here to sit in silence... I hate silence but I m afraid to let her come here alone...

We sit here for half an hour and every second of that time she stares in the unknown.. at nowhere particular...but der is a cute little smile on her face everytime... well to get that smile I can sit here for countless hours...

"tara"

"hummm"

"we r 16.. right..."

"you r trying to count how many bday's you celebrated?"

"no.. actually I do not have a girlfriend.."

"what... Mrityunjay you r not a boy friend material"

"what...why..?"

"coz u r not handsome.."

"cool I thought atleast u will be fare with me.."

"I m fare with u"

"if you get a chance will you ever kiss me..?"

"mrityunjay I m sure now you r out of your mind.."

"tara pls... answer .."

"no way I m going to kiss you... u r not my type... and anyways I like Vicky...given a chance I will kiss him.."

"yukkk... that spoilt brat... You will kiss him and me..."

"he is the rockstar..."

"he is the firlt ... every other girl of our school wants to be with him... and some of other school girls too... God only knows whats so special he has"

"come on mrityunjay... You boys can never see each other successful with girls..."

"that's not true..."

"then why r u eating my head..."

"k.. fine you don't like me... given a chance u will never kiss me... I m a nerd... I m..."

"mrityunjay.. pls stop.."

"no... I mean I m going,,, I cannot sit here for a sec more.."

Saying that I started walking towards the main road... I came near the clearing and till then my anger was somehow subsided...

I thought of going back.. but why should I she insulted me so much... k.. now dude let go of your ego..

I started walking back... I came at the place where we were sitting... she was not there... Oh no... she was alone here... How can I be so fool..

I was sweating thinking wat might have happened to her... I ran here and there to see if she was anywhere around... shouted her name at the top of my lungs...

My heart pumped blood now at a faster rate... all wrong thoughts were coming to my mind... what if she is being kidnapped... what will kidnappers do with her... God no.. pls keep her save...

A lone tear escaped my eye and they were followed by many others... it was all my fault...why I had to be so grumpy at times..

Ofcourse I m her friend why will she kiss me... I m still thinking about the kiss... True to my heart I knew thw answer was no from her side even I did not wanted it.. I just wanted to know what she being a girl thinks about me as a boy...

No... I did a big mistake I left her here... ... I should be punished for dis... no... she has to be alright... wen aunty will ask where is tara .. what I m going to answer... oh god I m so screwed...

I sat der for another few mins before realizing that I have lost my dearest friend...

With small and slow steps I proceeded for home... as I came near the building... My legs were giving way...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2-

The watchman asked if I was k... now who will explain him wat crime I have commited...

"Mrityunjay baba the lift is not working..."

He shouted from behind.. and just nodded my head in reply...

I got to the stairs.. and each step was iron heavy for me... now I was standing in front of tara'appt...

I wished I had that guts to face aunty and her what I did today... no I will tell mom first,,,, she will talk to aunty...

I ran at full speed to my home.. and was panting hard till I reached there...mom opened the door... and even here I feli my mouth being stitched ...

I threw my bag at the sofa and locked my self in my room... my tear gland had enough now and hence der was no pouring...

I wanted to shut ... I wanted to cry... I wanted to punish myself...

Isaw few papers on my study table.. I picked them up and at one go I tore them into many pieces...

"mritunjay wat r u doing?"

I tried to concentrate... M I hearing right... I turned towards the sound...

She was standing there with a concerned plus rage face...

Am I hallucinating?...

She came near me and jerked me by my shoulder... "u jerk I m asking u... say something..."

No der was no way I was hallucinating...

As the realization came to me that she was indeed actually present der... I took her in a bone crushing hug...

"mrityunjay r u fine...?"

"yes..."

After few mins wen I broke the hug.. she said..

"u were crying... u r not fine... mrityunjay what happened... tell me..."

"nothing...why did u leave me there alone..."

"Wait wait.. I left u or u walked away leaving me... "

"I went back but were not der... U know how much I got scared .. all types of wrong thoughts were coming to my mind..."

"excuse me .. no one is going to kidnap me.."

"yes that's true who will be interested in kidnapping a girl having legs ..size of thin candles and hands of incense stick..."

"what... Go to hell... I was so worried for u wen I came back home and asked the watchman kaka about u and he said u hvent returned yet... U know how much I was worried wen I came to your house.. aunty opened the door...and I had nothing to say... Wen she asked me where wer u I had to bulff that u will be late coz u r with your someother friends... I was praying my heart out to god so that he sends u safe home and darn u do not care,,,"

I looked at her surprised...

"I do care. Wen I went back and saw the empty bench ..i did care... wen I cried to my eyes swollen I did care... wen I was about to enter your house but had no guts to do that.. I did care... wen I was about to break down here I did care.. wen I thought I lost my dearest friend I did care... wen I saw u again alright I did care..."

Same as her I also said those words in one go...

"I m sorry..."

"no tara it was my fault... I shouldn't have left u der.. btw how u got back.."

"from the other side of the station.. the roads der r lighted..."

"ya and here I was worried ..."

"I was worried too.."

"k.. lets not get back der..."

"I m sorry for that... I mean I never saw u as... you r my best friend mrityunjay...u really want to kiss me?"

I looked at her innocent face,...

"no... you r not my type..."

For that I got a playful hit on my stomach and a laughter never to end...

"we r best friends..."

"forever..."

"It is one of the blessings of old friends that you can afford to be stupid with them"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was super gr8 baani! very nice! 👏👏⭐️
Edited by ...Oyshee... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...bani

such a beautiful OS

i really enjoy this teenage love story 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sorry being so late 😳

Beautiful ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

Friendship 😃


Their care n love for each other ⭐️ 👏

lovely 👏

hope to find a friend forever 😊
Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...Oyshee...

it was super gr8 baani! very nice! 👏👏⭐️


Thank you oeeshe. ..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: faizari

Wow...bani


such a beautiful OS

i really enjoy this teenage love story 🤗


Thank you faiza...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you. ..
😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archi21

Sorry being so late 😳

Beautiful ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

Friendship 😃


Their care n love for each other ⭐️ 👏

lovely 👏

hope to find a friend forever 😊


Thanks archu. ...


Same here. ...😳

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