JOURNEY OF THE PEARL--- MRIARA FF chapter 4 and 5 updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

It's beautiful...please continue...btw,may i call u sun?

Sure...lovely name by the way😳😳

Thank you all for the encouragement...it really means a lot to me...👏👏

Chapter 2

The message was cryptic...almost cold and impersonal. " Kishanji ka mandir, Kal subah Saat baje. "

Thara turned the paper over...nothing more! Just a single line! No clue on whom she was to meet or what to do once she reaches there! She read and re-read the message a few times, growing more and more irritated with every reading. She couldn't fathom her feelings just then...was it frustration or disappointment? Angry at herself, she got up from the floor and walked over to the window and looked out...hoping to get a glimpse of the unknown messenger. There was no sign of any one!

"Well, that was to be expected...wasn't it"...she reminded herself...it was now more risky. RP had put his minions on guard around the mansion ever since he had come to know about the clause in the will. She..Thara... had become his most prized possession and he was hell bent on protecting her life for the next six months. After that...he had told her himself..."Apne haathon se bali chadaoongi theri...ussi mandir mein... jahan se hamari jaan-pehchan shuru hui thi...Thab thak thumhari hatirdaari hogi...jaise bali ke bakre ko pala jatha hai"...

"Kya bahana banayegi thu Thara Bachhu ? Socho..jaldi.se..." Thara said while pacing the length of the room...Why did the leader choose tomorrow's date to set the meeting anyway... Was it a religiously important day? She checked the calendar...no...it was not. Crestfallen, she turned away but caught herself. "Arre..kal tho Nandini ki saalgira hai... wah..bahana tho milgaya mandir jaane ka...aur saath mein uske theek hone ki dua bhi mang loongi bhagwaan se. Akhir behan jo hoon."

Pleased with the solution she found, Thara picked up the red paper again and looked at the handwritten message. Baba had told her strictly... "burn all the messages immediately after memorising them and not to let them reach the hands of the enemy". But somehow she was not able to do that...There was something oddly comforting about those messages...those beautifully formed characters...as if an artist had drawn them. She could not make out why the writing seemed so familiar...or why the messages always seemed so short... "jaise likhne waala kuch aur bhi kehna chahta ho...magar kehne se khud ko rok raha ho" ...or was she hoping to hear more??? Alarmed and confused at the direction her thoughts were taking, Thara shook her head to clear it and hid the message in a box on top of the cupboard along with the earlier messages.

"Tomorrow...she thought...tomorrow I will burn them...surely!".

The day dawned...and Thara was at the temple right on time... RP's minions were keeping watch near the entrance. She was waiting for her turn to do the aarthi...all the while keeping an eye out for her contact...who will it be...baba? or the leader himself?...no... not him..."seedhe dekhke baat nahin karthe...yehan kyon ayenge "...Suddenly there was a commotion near the entrance...Panditji left the aarti midway and ran to the entrance to welcome a group of sadhus making their way into the temple. Other devotees also started thronging the group hoping to get a darshan of the sadhus...Thara moved aside...not wanting to be crushed in the melee...and found herself being pulled behind one of the large pillars near the corner...

The hands holding her were gentle, yet firm...he was standing close behind her and she was facing the pillar. His breath was fanning her hair. Thara started to turn...but the pressure on her arms increased slightly holding her in place...Thara would wonder later how she knew it was him...and that she was safe...but at that particular moment, she chose to stand there docile, taking in the muttered instructions regarding the next step in their grand plan.

The crowd moved away with the sadhus...Thara felt her being released and turned to face the leader of the masked gang...but he had vanished as if magically...

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pls tell me if u like it darlings...

You write really well! Chapter 2 is fab 😃

Lovely update 👏

mj is expert in writing beautiful letters 😛
her tomorrow on which she will burn those letters will not come so early 😉

Mandir ⭐️

Sun...dear...it is fabulous...i was wondering...were our brains being buddies in their factory days...they seems to be think alike !
...holding tara from behind...this concept was coming to my mind for quite a long time...but mandir!ah ...tht was your twist...according to my concept ...this holding from behind scene wud be a semi-awkward but bit romantic(one-sided though) moment between them in darkness of jungle...

Originally posted by: BlueJasmine

Sun...dear...it is fabulous...i was wondering...were our brains being buddies in their factory days...they seems to be think alike !
...holding tara from behind...this concept was coming to my mind for quite a long time...but mandir!ah ...tht was your twist...according to my concept ...this holding from behind scene wud be a semi-awkward but bit romantic(one-sided though) moment between them in darkness of jungle...

darling..thats a super duper romantic idea...in jungle...lets make the night moonlit...in isolation...hayeee😳😳😳...tell me...why to make it onesided??????😉😉😉

Awesome awesome awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Beautiful ... eagerly waiting for the next part 😳😳😳😳😳😳

Originally posted by: sunishy

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darling..thats a super duper romantic idea...in jungle...lets make the night moonlit...in isolation...hayeee😳😳😳...tell me...why to make it onesided??????😉😉😉

😆 one sided cause tara is still unaware tht it is her Mj...she will feel something...but will think it is her body which is forcing her to think tht she knows this touch...then a guilt will develop and she will try to fight with herself...but in vain...
Sorry ji,iss night ko moonlit nehi bana sakte...mj pakda jayega na pher 😉...mujhe toh iss hide and seek mein bada maza araha hain...

Omg... pls pls jaldi update karna.. mujhe to jaise nind hi nai aayegi ab..aage kya hoga yeh soch soch kar...