MriAra os...SOULMATES...?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The day has aroused. .. birds chirping and the noise of busy traffic. ..

But the room was quite. ...


Are u listening to me...


THere came no answer but I knew he was listening. ..


'See, today's morning is so special. . 10 years before we got married on this very day and came to be life partners...


We were buddies from college and then got into same company.. worked as colleagues. ..

2 Years omg...it took two years for you to realise that u love me... well I knew from the beginning. ..

Those small talks. .fights over nothing. .feeling alright in each others company and most imp helping oit with work. .

We r so perfect. ..


Then finally got married and it was a blunder in itself. .

U wore turquoise kurta on the wedding. .. now does that and the rituals.. not one went before leaving me frustrated. .


But I loved wen u came on the wedding night and said..

"U should rest we r in no hurry. . And of course I do not want to spoil our honeymoon. .. u r going to get pleasant surprises.."


Well I did get surprises...


Happily married life and success in professional front...

3 Years...'

"Ahem ahem..."

I looked around. ...

Yug was standing onthe door." Were u talking to him..?"

I nodded in yes...

I folded the letter and placed it in the drawer were other 6 rested...

7 years ago he died from thyroid cancer. ...a horrible death..


it was a ritual for me to remember him every day. . Write to him on our every anniversary. ..

"Mom wen can I read them?"

"Wen u will get as mature as your dad.."

"Happy Anniversary mom.."

He flashed a self made card towards me..

I huged him tightly and said...

"Yug..thank you beta.."

I looked at the portrait of him with a garland of flower on the opposite wall..

Silently my heart said... I LOVE YOU...




...o...k... I know I always bug every one for writing happy write ups...and me myself written this...
well I m surprised too..

Yeh sab mere off mode ka kamal hai so pls jhel lena...

Love u guys and missing every one badly...

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Archi21 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jaani ⭐️
tum ne likha 😃

OS is very good 👏
its sad but good 👏

title is perfect 👏
when i started reading i thought ki sayad they had fight so not talking

u summarized their 10yrs journey in such a small OS so well 👏

loved their journey 🤗

When yug came i thought she might be talking to herself n my smile got more big 😃 that she is imagining mj
but the very next line brought tears in my eyes

its everlasting love 😃
well written 👏
🤗
Edited by Archi21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow dear 🤗

really beautiful OS 👏

you made me cry 😭

last scene ...really emotional 🥺




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb dear...
This was soo good...👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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M glad u started writing fiction again Baniii😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Had tears !!!! Such an emotional and captivating os. ..
Many many thanks for the heartwarming write up...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow bani very emotional os..had tears in my eyes. .
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very emotional but very nicely written👍🏼 Good to see the forum being active on weekend with FF's
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bani...you've almost killed me...i'm still staring at the line where u mentioned tht he is dead...and feeling like someone is squeezzing my heart continuously...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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bohot badiya baani! very very very good!👏❤️

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