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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly thanks to shaina who send me links of this os.

U r too good writer archu..kya idea hai dill ko dill se milaya won bhi diary me through.


Wah Tara ka new place pe ana safal ho gay.
8 th standar ka pyar shayad hi hai Jo kisi ko na hua ho ...
Phir Tara mj kaise dooor rah sakte the aise khyal se.

Yahan Tara pareshan ho rahi thi ki woh mj se alaga ho jayegi BT aisa na hua yahan toh meethi me intro hi karwa diya...

Wah plans ban rahe hain mj ke pass rahne..
Tara bhi ek dum alag hai ladkiyan khud ki sawarti hai or yeh study pe focus kar rahi hai...

Pyar me kya study pe focus kiya ki khud mj ne class me welcome kiya...

Yeh radha kabhi peechha nai chhodne wali ..
Aa gai beeche phir se...


Singing class me kisi ka dill kaise lage ..
Inki nazar toh killer smile pe hai...

Batao sab ko yakeen dila diya ko won mj ki gf hai...

Itne salon baad reunion kya irada pakka kar rakha hai khuda be milane ka...

Yahan Tara dress ko leke pareshan wahan mj...

Dono ek hi jaise kasmkas se guzar rahe ki woh Hume milenge ki nai...

Lo ji ho gai party me entry or kya mj ne door open kiya wow...

Phir radha ..

Haye dill ki baat kahne ki itni bekarari ki game plan kiya aadi me sath millke..

Tara ne gana gaya won bhi apni feelings hi zaheer kar di...

Ab mj kaise peeche rahta won bhi shuru ho gaya...

Finally propose kar diya...

Wow kya end kiya hai os ka ...


Superb...











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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Awesome OS dear!!!!!

Lovely story and just loved the way MJ confessed and always had feelings for her!!!!!!

Both loved each other but this Radha I hate it tried her best to create mus between them just because of her wrong assumption!!!!!

Finally they had each other in their lives!!!!!!


Thanks dear 😃😃😃

Yeah, he always had feeling 😃😃😃 but u know MJ he needs time to understand that 😆

Radha-the disturbing element 😡

yes, finally they had each other 😃

Thanks for loving it 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

You wonderfully portrayed the age of innocence through Tara's diary!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
Hehehe😆😳 thank you

Her crush on Mrityunjay and her adoring him in classes is soo cute and innocent!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Dil too bachha hai ji😳

You can really open your heart to your diary and I loved the way you described her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Diary silently listens everything and never questions you back 😃

It seemed to have a positive effect on her as she started to concentrate on her studies and music just to get noticed by him!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Yes, love improved her 😃

She is so happy just to talk to him every week and overjoyed when he welcomed her to class!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, she is 😃. Anybody will be happy if the one you love welcomes you😃

Teenage years ka crush and now she gets to adore him in school as well as during Maths tuition!!!!
Yes, can you imagine her level of happiness😃😃

Yeh Radha beech mein aa gayi and Tara is heartbroken to know she is Mrityunjay's girlfriend!!!!🥺 🥺 🥺 🥺
Radha is always there to create some confusion😡

The song is very nice and is apt for Tara's broken heart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thank you😊

Great that Tara secured good marks because of her crush on him!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏
Yes,😆 benefit of love 😉

Still her heart stops on seeing him and he still looks as dashing as ever!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
He never left her heart 😳

There is going to be a reunion party where they would meet for sure!!!!🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
Ya...ya...party . Reunion parties are meant to meet the one you love 😃

Mrityunjay is reminded of Tara after so many years by looking at a star!!!!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Hehehe... Naam hi aisa😉

He thinks she was different and he was lost in her melodious voice in their music class!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
He is intelligent and sensible 😊

Tara ke voice ne toh Mrityunjay ke dil pe vaar kar diya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Methi chhuri 😉

This Radha is so irritating and just as I had thought was behind the rumour that Mrityunjay was her boyfriend!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
She is irritating 😡 and MJ is not a fool to fall for her😊

Good that he confronted her aur kitna drama karti hai!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
She required that confrontation 😊

Seems like Mrityunjay does talk about Tara and that is why Radha is so pissed off at her name!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Hahaha... It's obvious for MJ to talk about Tara 😉

Yahan toh dono taraf aag barabar lagi huyi hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Years of wait had increased the flames of love. 😊

Finally Mrityunjay's heart made him realize that he loves Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏
Ya...😆 his mind is not intelligent in matter of hearts😉

The song is very nice and perfect for Mrityunjay's new found feeling of love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Ya😳 it is

Now Mrityunjay is feeling what Tara feels and is worried and nervous if Tara also has the same feelings!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, He is feeling same as what Tara feels and his nervousness is obvious😆

He is worried about failing in the exam of love!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔
Itne exam mein dar nahi laga, but pyar ke exam mein fail hone ka dar hai😛

Tara is so excited about the reunion party and meeting everyone!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Kyu naa hoo MJ mil Sakta hai😊

Her heart still yearns for Mrityunjay and the desire to see him again is strong in her!!!!❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
He was always in her heart and thought😃

She is having a hard time deciding what to wear for the party!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉
Hahaha ...akhir MJ se Milne ke chances hain😉

Even now all she thinks about is adoring him from a corner!!!!
Hahaha...purani aadat hai😆😳

Mrityunjay just can't wait to meet Tara and now his whole life depends on her reply!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
He had to wait, no other option😉😆

Yeh waqt bhi bahut zaalim hai jo guzarta hi nahi hai!!!!
Hahaha 😆😆😆

Both think of the same idea of making the other sing and really as it is they have deep connection to music!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, deep connection😃😃😃

The song is very nice and just perfect for Mrityunjay and his situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks 😃

Wow diaries have special power and can talk to other diaries!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Hehehe... I thought everyone knew that😛😳

It is interesting to see what they say about Mrityunjay and Tara and even they are waiting for tomorrow!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, we should know there POV too 😆

It would have been really great if diaries could talk!!!!
Yes, I wished that to be real 😊

The song is very nice and describes the wait very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks😳

Tara thinks who is coming there to see her, well someone is dying to see her!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Her diary never told her that someone is coming😉

When you are in love the whole world appears beautiful and that seems to be the case with Mrityunjay!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, love makes world beautiful😃

Yeh Radha phir aa gayi but good that Mrityunjay went to the parking lot irritated!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
She is pain😡😡

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks😳

It is just like it was in the music video!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes!!! I imagined that while writing😳

Both are going through the same feelings that they would meet or not!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔
Ya 😔

Finally Mrityunjay saw Tara and is mesmerized by her beauty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Ya.ya.ya...dedar hua😃

The dupatta scene totally reminded me of the song "Yaad Piya Ki Aane Lagi" by Falguni Pathak!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
You got it😳

Tara is so happy to see him and that he remembers her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Dil garden ...garden ho gaya 😃

The authority he feels he has on her as he refers to as "my Tara" in his mind is adorable!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
She was always his it's just that he realized it today😊

Tara is adoring him and his body up close now and remembers Biology class!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naughty Tara!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Hehehe 😳😳

Yeh Radha phir aa gayi and Mrityunjay actually let her take him away!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
He didn't let her take him it was like in front of Tara he didn't realized what is happening as he was lost in Tara😊

Tara ki favourite Kala ma'am kya padhati thi drama??😛 😛 😛 😛
Hahaha😆

Both are busy sneaking glances at each other and Mrityunjay is thinking how to tell her about his feelings!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
He need to tell her before it's too late😊

He is so eager to confess his feelings that he planned the game with Adi!!!!👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
It's his last chance to tell her how he feels😊

They are now playing Truth and Dare and both managed to sit opposite each other!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊
Last opportunity, neither of them wants to miss this😊

Mrityunjay loves her voice so much that he wants to hear her sing before confessing his feelings as he doesn't know what will happen after that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, he doesn't know what will happen after that but before that he wants to listen his voice..😃

Radha is really irritating and rude and no wonder Mrityunjay was pissed off!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡
She need to be handled😡

The song is very nice and is apt for Tara's feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, all these years of waiting were poured into it 😊

Mrityunjay is very smart and sweet and actually understood her feelings from her song!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
He is smart just took some time to understand 😊

Good for Meethi that she asked him to say the name of the girl who he loves thus giving him a chance to express his feelings!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
She is 😃 otherwise god knows how long he would have taken to say girl's name 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for Mrityunjay and his love Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes, it is😃

Mrityunjay was looking so intensely at Tara while singing this and it was soo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
It was😳

Even Tara could feel that and she was overjoyed when he took her name!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
She was 😃

But Tara why did you walk away when it was obvious he was singing for you??😕 😕 😕 😕
She was so overwhelmed that she didn't understood what to do😊

The proposal was just beautiful with Mrityunjay going down on his knees and singing for her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks 😳

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Thanks😃

Tara's ten years of wait finally gave her Mrityunjay her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Finally her wait was over😃

Finally both of them confessed their love for each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Yea..😳 although it took 10 years but it was worth😃

Radha ki shakal dekhne layak thi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Yes😆

It was so romantic when Tara and Mrityunjay were sitting on his car and watching the sky!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes it was😃😳

So now their calls to each other would start!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊
It should start😃

What a beautiful ending to the story!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😳

Or should I say the perfect beginning of Mrityunjay and Tara's love story??😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Whatever you like 😃

You portrayed the simple yet extraordinary journey of Mrityunjay and Tara beautifully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks😳

Finally they are together and have each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Yes 😃

It was fantastic and a very sweet story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Thanks



Thanks Shai for loving it so much that you wrote such a long comment 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Archi!!! yaar you are superb just amazing writer ❤️

this OS is awesome so beautifull & lovely 👏

you know what pehle maine socha ki ek part padh leti hoon but after reading 1st part main khud ko resist hi nahi kar payi & i finished all parts just in go. I just loved it 😳 ⭐️
the speciality or beauty of this os is its simplicity & its truly said that 'true beauty lies in simplicity' 😃
dear!!! tumne teenage crush se mature love tak ke journey ko beautifully likha hai 👏
tara ka MJ pe crush usse impress karne ke liye study & music focus karna it is the best part of this story i think tara school days se hi MJ ko pyaar karti hai
& MJ bhi usse like karta tha but realization after 8 year hua
koi na its better late then never akhir tara ke sachche pyaar ki jeet jo honi thi!!!
Isliye rab ji ne bhi school reunion parti manage kar di God tussi great ho!!!
Diaries talk was so cute!!!
It would have been really great if diaries could talk!!!!
Tara & MJ both are dying to see each other
after so many years their 1st meeting ( ya kahu ki dupatte ne mila di jodi)
their adoring to each other everything was so beautifull!!!
just loved the way MJ confessed his feelings for Tara!!!
every song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊😊

thanks for pm
love you take care
Edited by npksk8495 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Awesome OS dear!!!!!
Thank U😃

Lovely story and just loved the way MJ confessed and always had feelings for her!!!!!!
yeah, he just needed sometime to realize it😃

Both loved each other but this Radha I hate it tried her best to create mus between them just because of her wrong assumption!!!!!
Radha is always there to create mus😡

Finally they had each other in their lives!!!!!!
yeah, finally😃



Thanks for loving it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

Firstly thanks to shaina who send me links of this os.
Always thankful to her for perusing people to read it👏


U r too good writer archu..kya idea hai dill ko dill se milaya won bhi diary me through.
Thank you ji😳

Wah Tara ka new place pe ana safal ho gay.
8 th standar ka pyar shayad hi hai Jo kisi ko na hua ho ...
Phir Tara mj kaise dooor rah sakte the aise khyal se.
Dil ki baate dil hi jane😉

Yahan Tara pareshan ho rahi thi ki woh mj se alaga ho jayegi BT aisa na hua yahan toh meethi me intro hi karwa diya...
Dost aise hi din kaam aate hain😉

Wah plans ban rahe hain mj ke pass rahne..
Tara bhi ek dum alag hai ladkiyan khud ki sawarti hai or yeh study pe focus kar rahi hai...
Unique hai, only one of her kind 😆

Pyar me kya study pe focus kiya ki khud mj ne class me welcome kiya...
Har ladki ko aisa karna chahiye pyar mein😊

Yeh radha kabhi peechha nai chhodne wali ..
Aa gai beeche phir se...
Har kahani mein villain hota hai 😛

Singing class me kisi ka dill kaise lage ..
Inki nazar toh killer smile pe hai...
Haha ha, Sara kasur smile ka hai 😃

Batao sab ko yakeen dila diya ko won mj ki gf hai...
Radha 😡

Itne salon baad reunion kya irada pakka kar rakha hai khuda be milane ka...
Haan, jise Puri sidat se chaho Puri qaynat bhi tumhe uss se Mila be ki koshish mein lag jati hai😃

Yahan Tara dress ko leke pareshan wahan mj...
Dono taraf ek jaise hi hain halat😊

Dono ek hi jaise kasmkas se guzar rahe ki woh Hume milenge ki nai...
Haan, ek jaisi halat hai dono ki😊

Lo ji ho gai party me entry or kya mj ne door open kiya wow...
Hero ki entry hai😉
Phir radha ..
Aur villain ki bhi😡
Haye dill ki baat kahne ki itni bekarari ki game plan kiya aadi me sath millke..
Ab bin bole raha naa jaye😊

Tara ne gana gaya won bhi apni feelings hi zaheer kar di...
Itne time se jo kehna tha ab kehne ka time mila😊

Ab mj kaise peeche rahta won bhi shuru ho gaya...
Bilkul , koi dil ka haal batane mein peeche nahi rehna chahta😃

Finally propose kar diya...
Finally😃
Wow kya end kiya hai os ka ...


Superb...



Thanks for loving it so much😃😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
i will read n leave comment.
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow this was fantastic, tara fall in love with MJ when they were in school, sometimes it feels like one side love story but u never know other person's feelings.
good writing, enjoyed reading. i see you have other diary as well ill read n comment.
Edited by ronshaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I read Mj's diary, I must say, 10 years it took him to realize he was in love, honestly it is very long time, people marry or leave the country or busy or anything can happen to them
Mj ko 10 sal baad hi ehsas ho gya k usey love ho gya.. We know tara loves him too but even from her side, she doesnt know, usko laga radha girlfriend ha is liye side me chali gyi but aab mulaqat kese hogi i wonder.

very nice, interesting, em glad MJ liked her too. when i read tara' s view it was like impossible because maybe he moved on... akhir 10 sal ke baad milenge.

lets see what happens next.👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
So finally read their diaries.
tara n mj both excited to meet each other, both going to make one another sing.. oh great sounds great, lets see what happens next. 😊😳

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