Dear Diary...(OS) || LAST PART UPDATED PG 9|| - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Worldpeace



Arre pata hai main kitna daar gayi thi.. mujhe laga aap mujhse bohot naraz ho so the first thing I did the morning is to read this...


tum daar gayi meri request se

mein too tumhe yaad dila rahi thi
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read ur diary ss its simply fab...
got ur story link through fraser post ...
really have a good reads..

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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lake-

i read ur diary ss its simply fab...
got ur story link through fraser post ...
really have a good reads..



thanks dear for loving it [ πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hmmm...nice story...tu badi chupi rustam he...bohot achi story he...keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ameekkg

Hmmm...nice story...tu badi chupi rustam he...bohot achi story he...keep it up


Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ

tune puri read kar liπŸ˜›

quite fast πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
You wonderfully portrayed the age of innocence through Tara's diary!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Her crush on Mrityunjay and her adoring him in classes is soo cute and innocent!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

You can really open your heart to your diary and I loved the way you described her feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

It seemed to have a positive effect on her as she started to concentrate on her studies and music just to get noticed by him!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

She is so happy just to talk to him every week and overjoyed when he welcomed her to class!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Teenage years ka crush and now she gets to adore him in school as well as during Maths tuition!!!!

Yeh Radha beech mein aa gayi and Tara is heartbroken to know she is Mrityunjay's girlfriend!!!!πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί πŸ₯Ί

The song is very nice and is apt for Tara's broken heart!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Great that Tara secured good marks because of her crush on him!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Still her heart stops on seeing him and he still looks as dashing as ever!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

There is going to be a reunion party where they would meet for sure!!!!πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³

Mrityunjay is reminded of Tara after so many years by looking at a star!!!!⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

He thinks she was different and he was lost in her melodious voice in their music class!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara ke voice ne toh Mrityunjay ke dil pe vaar kar diya!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

This Radha is so irritating and just as I had thought was behind the rumour that Mrityunjay was her boyfriend!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Good that he confronted her aur kitna drama karti hai!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Seems like Mrityunjay does talk about Tara and that is why Radha is so pissed off at her name!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Yahan toh dono taraf aag barabar lagi huyi hai!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Mrityunjay's heart made him realize that he loves Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The song is very nice and perfect for Mrityunjay's new found feeling of love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Now Mrityunjay is feeling what Tara feels and is worried and nervous if Tara also has the same feelings!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is worried about failing in the exam of love!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Tara is so excited about the reunion party and meeting everyone!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Her heart still yearns for Mrityunjay and the desire to see him again is strong in her!!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

She is having a hard time deciding what to wear for the party!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Even now all she thinks about is adoring him from a corner!!!!

Mrityunjay just can't wait to meet Tara and now his whole life depends on her reply!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeh waqt bhi bahut zaalim hai jo guzarta hi nahi hai!!!!

Both think of the same idea of making the other sing and really as it is they have deep connection to music!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The song is very nice and just perfect for Mrityunjay and his situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Wow diaries have special power and can talk to other diaries!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

It is interesting to see what they say about Mrityunjay and Tara and even they are waiting for tomorrow!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

It would have been really great if diaries could talk!!!!

The song is very nice and describes the wait very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara thinks who is coming there to see her, well someone is dying to see her!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

When you are in love the whole world appears beautiful and that seems to be the case with Mrityunjay!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeh Radha phir aa gayi but good that Mrityunjay went to the parking lot irritated!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is just like it was in the music video!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Both are going through the same feelings that they would meet or not!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”

Finally Mrityunjay saw Tara and is mesmerized by her beauty!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The dupatta scene totally reminded me of the song "Yaad Piya Ki Aane Lagi" by Falguni Pathak!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara is so happy to see him and that he remembers her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The authority he feels he has on her as he refers to as "my Tara" in his mind is adorable!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Tara is adoring him and his body up close now and remembers Biology class!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️Naughty Tara!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh Radha phir aa gayi and Mrityunjay actually let her take him away!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Tara ki favourite Kala ma'am kya padhati thi drama??πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Both are busy sneaking glances at each other and Mrityunjay is thinking how to tell her about his feelings!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is so eager to confess his feelings that he planned the game with Adi!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

They are now playing Truth and Dare and both managed to sit opposite each other!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay loves her voice so much that he wants to hear her sing before confessing his feelings as he doesn't know what will happen after that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Radha is really irritating and rude and no wonder Mrityunjay was pissed off!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

The song is very nice and is apt for Tara's feelings!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay is very smart and sweet and actually understood her feelings from her song!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Good for Meethi that she asked him to say the name of the girl who he loves thus giving him a chance to express his feelings!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

The song is very nice and perfect for Mrityunjay and his love Tara!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Mrityunjay was looking so intensely at Tara while singing this and it was soo romantic!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Even Tara could feel that and she was overjoyed when he took her name!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Tara why did you walk away when it was obvious he was singing for you??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

The proposal was just beautiful with Mrityunjay going down on his knees and singing for her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara's ten years of wait finally gave her Mrityunjay her love!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Finally both of them confessed their love for each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Radha ki shakal dekhne layak thi!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

It was so romantic when Tara and Mrityunjay were sitting on his car and watching the sky!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

So now their calls to each other would start!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

What a beautiful ending to the story!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Or should I say the perfect beginning of Mrityunjay and Tara's love story??😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

You portrayed the simple yet extraordinary journey of Mrityunjay and Tara beautifully!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Finally they are together and have each other!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was fantastic and a very sweet story!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Adding this to my reading list. My first EBI fiction. I'll come back with a much better comment soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Cortana

Adding this to my reading list. My first EBI fiction. I'll come back with a much better comment soon. 😊


Thats great !!!πŸ˜ƒ

I hope this doesn't disappoint U 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome OS dear!!!!!

Lovely story and just loved the way MJ confessed and always had feelings for her!!!!!!

Both loved each other but this Radha I hate it tried her best to create mus between them just because of her wrong assumption!!!!!

Finally they had each other in their lives!!!!!!

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