New SS: The Prodigal Son CS Updated on Pg 1

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Piya1702
Awesommee!!!👏
Continue soonn plzzz!!😳

Thanks Piya 😳 Will try to continue soon as soon as I get a little time off from office coz its hectic right now

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: mastaTmohi
All the writers on this forum know me as I am a biggg fan of write ups.

Absolute delight to read. Please continue soon.

Thanks 😳 Sure. Will try my best to update soon.

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sankalp_prapti

Thankfully hashhh...time pay res karliya..so lookin fwd to read from u on VICHA/MRIARA😛

Whoaooo that was one excellent writ⭐️e... MJ introspecting ...lolz which he barely did on the show😆
LOved the way you put the gist here...👏

@Tara ..u better keep her ALIVE😉 n looking fwd to read some fine words from you..

Keep uo the good work,,,agay jaldi likhney ka try karo madam.

@Thanks for this😃

Thanks for commenting Sia 🤗 Yep we barely got a peek into MJ's mind in the show. So I am doing it here. But the story will not be entirely from MJ's POV. Only parts of it. About the story, its already planned. So happy or sad no changing it now 😉 Happy endings toh of course everyone loves but even a tragic end has its own beauty 😳 But like I said no spoilers for now 😆 Try karoongi yaar. U know na my workload in office is hectic?

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: TasrinS
Interesting...loved it...plz continue soon.

Thanks Tasrin 😳 Will try to update sooner.

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .SmokeySilence.
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that sounds really intense Mandy. as you are writing it must be intense anyways. i like how you wrote Mritunjay's pov. since i donno all the characters im not sure what you have changed from the show so its fine with me anyways. as I will be reading it as a story. i donno the shows main plot. write the 1st chpt soon. 😳

Thanks for commenting Tanzie 🤗 This isn't a spin off from the show, I can assure you that. There is a change in characterization n Tara's family is not like the one in the show. Here Yug is hers and not Radha's brother n also there is no Radha. He isn't an adopted son either like how he is shown to be in the show. Tara isn a bratty girl. She is subtle poignant character here. U might get a glimpse if u have read the CS 😳

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Mandy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.
res!

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here..here..am here!!
My-my mansa!!This was an immencely powerful projection of human emotions at play! Splendid!! 👏 I am enthralled!! 👏
this story has already got me into it!
The pull-- the pain of the protagonist has already taking me into its fold, so much that i cannot wait for you to pen it down further!😃
Please continue---nt whenever u can-but as fast as you can!

and thanks so much for starting this one, for anything u write has depth and always a sheer joy to read!🤗 🤗

Thank u so much Indu 🤗 Ur praises are always overwhelming 😳 There is more to MJ than meets the eye. All I can say is he is the one to watch out here. And if u think u hated Rohit in Guardian then trust me, Rudra is far worse than him 😆 I shall try my best dear U know my working hours? 😵