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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mohit_lover
awsome update
continue soon 'mission biwi manao'
what will happen next ??

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Originally posted by: TasrinS
Superb dear.

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Amazing and awesome post 👏 👏 👏

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that was really good kiret!! loved it!!..a nice easy dose..quite a relief from the heavy tension going on in the show!! update soon :)

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Originally posted by: BloomBelievix
Amazing and awesome post 👏 👏 👏

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Originally posted by: ...Oyshee...
that was really good kiret!! loved it!!..a nice easy dose..quite a relief from the heavy tension going on in the show!! update soon :)

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I really wanted to write something that was fun and not serious because the show is so intense!

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Originally posted by: Archi21
Dear ⭐️

its lovely 👏

MJ on mission manaoo Tara
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Mission Manaoo Taara
Part 2
After today's episode I'm like really in a weird mood so this update turned out to be really weird. I don't really know what I wrote! So go ahead and read at your own risk!
"Mrityunjay, are you sure about this?" Meethi asks as I show her the saree I got Taara. "Why what's wrong with it?" I ask, confused. "Mrityunjay, I don't think Taara bhabhi will like this. Why don't you try that red saree with the silver jewelry?" she says. I pick up the other one and imagine Taara in it. It was perfect, I couldn't imagine her in any the other one at all. "It's perfect Meethi. Thank you so much!" I say, giving her a hug. "Any time. Now hurry up and go plan the rest of the stuff before Taara bhabhi gets even more mad," she says. "Yeah I'm going. Thank you once again," I say, getting up to leave.
I walk out and my phone starts ringing. I look at the screen. It was Taara. Ready for her eruption, I pick up the phone and say, "Hi jaan."
"What is this?" she asks. "What are you talking about jaan?" I ask. "This stupid bouquet of flowers. If you think that's going to make everything okay, well then you are completely wrong," she says, hanging up.
"Aaj toh teri khair nahi Mrityunjay Singh Shekawat," I say, bringing the phone down. Adi had told me to send her a bouquet to try and get her anger in control but here it had clearly had the opposite effect. I sigh. The rest of this plan better work otherwise Taara will never forget that I forgot her birthday. I rush off to make sure that all of the decorations were proper. Tonight was going to be a night that Taara would remember forever.
I lay out the saree and jewelry on the bed, leaving a note for Taara. It said to get ready and come down by six and meet me at seven at a surprise location. Adi was kind enough to help me with this part. He was going to bring Taara to the location. I run out of the room, bumping into Taara. She falls and I catch her, my arms around her waist, her eyes closed. She slowly opens her eyes and looks into mine. I smile and a slight smile appears on her face as well. I guess she remembered that she was still mad at me because her expression changed and she stood up, pushing me away.

"Taara, there's something for you in there. Would you mind going to look at it?" I ask. Her expression changes and she looks confused. She doesn't say anything though and walks into the room. I walk to the guest room and change and leave before she can say anything to me.

I light the candles that are on the ground. Hopefully Taara hadn't thrown any fit and would come here. I had told her to be here by 7, it was 6:50 now. I fix the roses in the vase on the table, waiting for her to come. I hear the sound of the brakes and look up to see a white car. That meant that Adi had brought her here. Now everything just had to go well.

I walk up to the car and open the door, offering her my hand. She accepts and comes out. Before I close the door, I see Adi giving me a thumbs up. I smile at him and close the door.

"Why did you call me here, and that too in this?" Taara asks. I look at her. She was looking even more beautiful than I had thought. "Red is totally your colour," I say. She blushes slightly and I can see that her anger was starting to fade away. I smile at her and she repeats her question, waiting for an answer. "Come," I say, leading her over.

She walks next to me, her small hand a perfect fit in mine. I stop and look at her just to find her looking at me. "Don't look at me. Look over there," I say, pointing to where the candles were.

She turns her head there and gasps at the sight in front of her. She walks towards the candles and bends down. I bend down next to her as well, pushing her hair back, cupping her face gently. She looks at me, her expression confusing me. "What happened Taara?" I ask.

A/N: So that was the second part! Not as good as I wanted it to be but at least it was something! Last part will be up soon! :)

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago