Originally posted by: LeenaRG
Since you say you are sending this to the PH, here goes, here's my feedback for what it's worth.
1)
Radha is alive, so MJ is not guilty. So where is the mystery? The
mystery died when Radha came alive. I don't care about who raped Radha
or how her rapists are punished. She is of least importance to me. I
will not watch the show to see her story unfold.
2) If MJ loved
Radha, it's a mistake to show him fall for Tara so quickly. It also
makes him look like a pedophile opposite this young girl.
If he was
not romantically involved with Radha, the cvs have messed up big time
with those FBs & with the whole family giving so much importance to
MJ's memories of Radha & the UC. egs: Diya aur baati, "usse pata bhi nahi usne kya jalaya hai" etc.
Either ways MJ's characterization has been messed up.
3)
The dilly dallying with names & mythological references. The
audience is neither deaf nor dumb. We know what Mrityunjay & Tara
imply as well as we know what Ram & Sita stand for. We also know the
names of their many avatars & their relationships. We can also
decipher Neel from Meer & can figure out why these changes are
taking place.
4) Most importantly, The story had an eunuch as a parallel lead. Stick to it, no need to dilute it with an unnecessary diversion. No need to add more "parallel leads" & if she isn't, then for the sake of your show make an announcement stating otherwise.
I
admit to being quite a serial addict & can say with confidence that
every show in the last 2 years that has showed a triangle track has
gone down the drain. Such tracks in any form have made TRPs drop &
proven disastrous for the show. I can feel it happening for EBI already.
There is still time to tweak the story & keep it different from the
rest, as was promised.