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If the heart is a prism, it will reflect all feelings in myriad kaleidoscopic colours, right? But imagine the heart breaks, the prism breaks, but then don't the colours become multi-fold and reflect off so many glass smithereens, aren't the colours concentrated in one prism spread out into so many multitudes of colours in multiple small prisms. Well? How about that! Disperse!

In a strange world this is within the realm of possibilities that a thing that is broken has more power than a wholesome thing. Talk about, the breaking up of the atom.

There was a prince and a princess in the storybook. All had their story to tell. It was roses, thorns, and pelt. Now there was a witch from hell. She had the gall of a garrulous hellcat. She put everyone on an evil spell. Now the prince had to find that magic which will break all spells. So the prince went in search of a gift, a precious magical gift for the princess. He crossed lands, highlands, mountains, rivers, seas, space, air, planets, and searched the whole universe. He fought and slayed monsters, tamed demonic forces, trashed devils. What would be the best gift for my pretty princess, which would bring her back to life, which can put back the smile on my princess's face? He sought the help of great monks, prophets, seers...but then ended up not finding it. He was tired, lost, brown with dust. He returned a defeated man.

The princess meanwhile had lost all hope that the prince would return. She was on a hunger fast unto death. No one could make her understand the futility of hoping for something that is out-of-bounds to normal human beings. But then, who said, the princess was normal. She had a reservoir of strength. She was undefeated and untiring in her belief that the prince would return to her. Her victory lie in his return.

...and the prince did.

The smile on her lip and the glint in her eye on seeing him made the prince realize that what he was searching for was within his reach always, and that he failed to realize it when it was right before his eyes.

The story book shook up
the pictures tumbled out right in to the palm of the hand...
colours inked out like rivers...
and words walked on, on their song...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOZlAgZBGHM[/YOUTUBE]


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Depiction⭐️
TFS rama👏👏
Edited by Sonal_MriAra - 11 years ago
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Reopened after discussion with the TM

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Dear EBI DT - most of the members in the EBI DT are well versant with the language and conversant with my style of writing. There is nothing new in this, it is an ABSTRACT writing style that is similar to many storytelling aspects and members here are intelligent and more creative than me for this humble attempt of mine.

The note you asked me to put in that the allusions to the following:

The Prince: Mrityunjay
The Princess: Tara
The Witch: Kalavathi/Rudra Pratap

are very much understood as implied by most of the readers and members here.

Thank you for reopening my thread - Rgds - R
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonal_MriAra

Awesome Depiction⭐️

TFS rama👏👏



Sonal: Tu hai toh sab kuch hai :) really glad that you liked it and did not think this post is "trash"

PS: I am discontinuing writing here and have asked the mods to close my account - all of you can hit me on ekboondishq.wordpress.com anytime - lots of love and best wishes to all of you - R
Edited by thrower - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: thrower



Sonal: Tu hai toh sab kuch hai :) really glad that you liked it and did not think this post is "trash"

PS: I am discontinuing writing here and have asked the mods to close my account - all of you can hit me on ekboondishq.wordpress.com anytime - lots of love and best wishes to all of you - R

hey Rama, pls dont do that

i always feel..."writing is always ur inner thoughts which is visualized only by u n express them through words "

everyone's writing is not same...i do get that..
after all ur writings are always symbolic to Mritunjay n tara...all of the articles shared by u have always hidden meaning i'd always felt👏

closing d account is not d solution, instead u could have amended ur writing to keep it a simple manner..

anyways, it is your decision after all... i will miss ur writings n articles...👏

wishing u all d best ...always🤗
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Nice written up dear 👏
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That was brilliant ...
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Take a bow dear ... for me you are up there with a select bunch of awesome writers in IF ... Plz continue to write ... 👍🏼

PS: We haven't met ... I'm Usha ... 😊
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Originally posted by: rusha4003

That was brilliant ...

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Take a bow dear ... for me you are up there with a select bunch of awesome writers in IF ... Plz continue to write ... 👍🏼

PS: We haven't met ... I'm Usha ... 😊



Wow! wow! Thanks a ton Usha! I am so-so glad to see you. I lost my old ID, so created a new one :) - I used to be in the Sultan's Harem as practicecalm - u know me as Rita

I am so grateful to u for these kind words that really worked as morale boosters. Thank you so very much!

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