'Family Life greatest blessing' Epi 16th December My Version

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"Family Life greatest blessing"

-EBI 16th December 2013

Taara stood watching Aradhana go angrily, while tears poured out of her eyes as she helplessly watched her vanish out of the halveli. She was torn between her mother and her husband whom she knew was innocent, then how could she leave him when she knos he is not the culprit, he didn't committed those crime that he is being punished for nor could she go with her nor she could stop her knowing she won't even listen to a single words of her, after all this. The moment Aradhana figure were out of Taara sight she turns and runs upto her room crying, while Jairaj and vasu stood calling for her to stop but she paid no heed to their calling. She was hurt, very hurt, knowing that her mother left from her in-law house angrily was not much hurting as much it was her lying to her mother was hurting her. She knew the day her mother will find out this bitter truth of her damad she will react like this but she would broke all of her rishta with her, was least expected. She didn't even gave her a single chance to explain her anything, tell her that her damad was not the criminal, whatever she found was all false, Her husband was not the real culprit, he was not what he and the outer world is trying to portray him. He was "ram" just as she had thought of him before she knew all this. Still she didn't give her no chance to speak up for her husband and tell her the truth. "ek mauka tu diya hota mujhe apni baat samjhane ka, bas bina kuch bole bina kuch samjhe sare rishte tod diya tune maa, aisa kristhe thodi toot te hai, bas kah diya aur risthe toot gaye, main nahi maanti" Taara cried as she traced her fingers on Aradhana picture. "ek baar tu meri baat sun li hoti, tu tujhe bhi pata chal jata ke tera damad sach main nirdosh hai, wo gunhegar nahi hai, tu apni Tara ko itna hi samajh pai hai, tujhe pata hai na Tara ek gunhegar ka saath kabhi nahi degi aur agar Tara ne apne pati ka saath diya hai tu sach jaane ke baad hi, phir bhi tu ye baat nahi samjh pai ke teri Taara Jhot ka saath kabhi nahi degi aur begunha ko saza kabhi nahi hone degi tu phir main apne pati ka saath beech safar main kaise chor deti jab tak asal gunhegar ko saza nahi dilwa de" before she could continue she gets interrupted by Vasu as she came and hugged her saying "Bhabhi, are u ok"

Taara- Vasu Maa mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti hai, wo mujh se sare rishte kaise tod sakti hai

Vasu- I am sure she just said all this in flow of her anger, nothing else.

"Taara bahu Vasu is saying right, wo bas gusse main ye sab kah diya hoga, aur kuch nahi" Jairaj spoke as he came and sat beside Taara.

"Gusse Maa wo sab kaise kah sakti hai ke wo" Taara says crying as she remembers her saying "khabar dar jo tune mujhe Maa kaha tu...jiske aab sirf do bache hai Nandu aur Bunty, samajh le aaj se tera mera rishta hamesha ke liye khatam ho gaya, aaj se na tu meri beti hai aur na main teri Maa, mar gai teri maa" Just as those words left Taara closes her eyes and fresh tears rolled down her eyes and she starts to cry again. Jairaj looks at her feeling sorry for her, he knew somewhere he was cause of all this, but then when he was going to tell everything to her Taara had stopped him. He was just about to go and console her when his eyes fell on Nirmala, who stood at the door step of the room. He looked at her and then thought only a mother could console a child wounded heart, and knew only mother can understand a child pain. without thinking further he walks up to her and says "Nirmala kya aap hamari liye ek kaam karengi" sensing the politeness in his voice, she knew he needed her, and she just nods and a smile touched his lips and he spoke saying "Nirmala kya aap aaj ke liye apne sare jijhak tod ke sirf aur sirf ek Maa ban kar Taara bahu ke paas chale jiye, only a mother can understand a mother turmoil and only they can console their child with their few words, aur aaj wohi do bol aap taara bahu ke de de, she needs her mother, aur aaj jo huwa uske baad tu Taaa is really hurt"

Nirmala- But jairaj hum kya kar sakte hai main kya- how ca-

Jairaj- bas do meethe bol ki zarurat hai unhe abhi Nirmala plz aap un ke paas jaiye aur unhe sambhaliye.

Nirmala- but hum kaise

Jairaj- plz Nirmala plz mere liye

Nirmala- theek hai, hum unhe deakhte hai" saying that she goes to Taara and sits next to her, at first she was hesitating to even say anything but the seeing Jairaj pleading face ahs slowly places her hand on her shoulder and says "U don't cry, Jairaj said na ur mother was just angry and tat is why she said all that" hearing Nirmala voice Taara instantly sits up and hugs her breaking down in her arms. Nirmal gets startled with her sudden movement but then slowly hugs her back and creases her back and says "wo bas gussa thi, as time will go on she will be ok aur wo tumhe maff bhi kar dengi"

Vasu and Jairaj stood watching the beautiful sight of Nirmala and Taara, after so many days months and years they probably be seeing this sight and nature of Nirmala. Mother just a caring mother, who was getting worried for her child, seeing tears in her eyes. Taara just sat hugging her coz somewhere she was finding the same warmth she used to get from her mother, and getting the same warmth mother-in-law was making her greedy for her warmth and she sat hugging Nirmala.

After a while, everyone started leaving from Taara room as she was lil fine and had stopped crying, they all left leaving her giving her some space of her own, but as soon they all left she silently starts to cry again, missing her mother. A lil later Mrityunjay comes in their room only to see her still crying. He instantly walks out of the room and hids behind their room, as he saw her turning facing the door. He didn't wanted to face her, at least not now, when he was the sole reason for her pain and tears. He silently cried feeling her pain but then decided to go in and send her back to her mother house, even if that means to hurt himself. He knew they have no future together and he didn't wanted to ruin her life for his just few moments happiness.

He walks in the room and sit next to her but as soon as Taara sees him she turns her face away from him angrily confusing him for her sudden anger. "Taara tu" Mrityunjay spoke trying to ask her for her sudden anger but then was instantly cut off by her as she said "aap...aap tu mujh se baat hi mat kijiye"
Mj- kyun

Taara- gussa hoon main

MJ- gussa acha, but why

Taara- but why, ur asking me why, khud wajhe bante ho aur poch rahe ho why

MJ- main, maine kya kiya

Taara- jab maa mujhe le ja rahi thi tu aap ne mujhe roka kyun nahi aur mere bolne pe bhi aap ne mujhe nahi roka ulta u removed my hand from ur hand and siad "maa ji sahi kah rahi hai baba, tara aur mere rishte ka koi bawish nahi hai, ise ghar wapus jane dijye"

MJ- oh tu u wanted me to stop u like hero does.

Taara- main kisi hero ko nahi jaatni all I know is How could u say that.

"Tu tum kya chathi thi main ye kah tha, "Tusi ja rahe hai, tusi na jao mujhe chod ke" MJ mimic like a baby making funny faces making Taara tu burst into laugh seeing his face and Mrityunjay sat still staring at Taara she laugh but tears still made its way out and his hand instantly went up to wipe her tears but that bought back the words of her mother and she hugs him crying saying "Maa ne gussa main kaha tha na wo sab, Mrityunjay plz boliye na Maa ne jo kaha wo sach nahi tha na, unhone mujh se ristha nahi toda na"

MJ-Shhh Maa ji bas gussa main thi Taara she was just angry aur kyun na ho galti bhi tu hamari thi, unse jhot bola dhoka diya, tumhe use kiya baba ne meri khushi ke liye jo ke hai hi nahi" hearing the last sentense Taara breaks the hugs and looks at him angirly and says "sach, sach kya hai Mrityunjay wo main aur aap dono jante hai, aur sach yeahi hai ke aap begunha hai, aap ne wo ginhona gunha kiya hi nahi hai"

"aaj aap kah rahi hai kal yeahi baat sari duniya kahe gi aur aap ki maa bhi" Jairaj spoke coming in their room.

"but Baba aaj main ne maa ko bauth gheri chut di hai baba, ke rishta hi khatam kar liya unhone Taara ke saath, she will never forgive me Baba she will never forgive me" Taara said.

Jairaj- wo aap ko bauth jald maaf karengi Taara aur aap se baat bhi karengi, aap apne aap ko jitna pyar karti hai na wo aap se use bhi kahi zidya pyar karti hai"

Taara- agar aisa hota tu Maa mujh se muh mor kar nahi jaati baba

"Maa tu hoti hi hai aise" Mrityunjay spoke as he stood and went to stand near the window and spoke "unke gusse main bhi pyar hota hai" hearing that Jairaj went and stands next him placing his hand on his shoulder and said "bilkul sahi kaha aap ne, maa ka saubhaw hi aisa hota hai, kuch bhi kahti hai au rphir apne bache par gussa bhi ho jati hai"

"par wo khud ko apne bacho se kabhi alag nahi karsakti" Mrityunjay said and Taara just sat their staring at his face, his hidden pain behind those words his carving for mother love, the love of mother he had always wanted. Jairaj looked at Mrityunjay and felt sorry for him but then he diverted the topic and said "Thank you Tara bahu, aap ne jistarha Mrityunjay ka saath diya hamein garv hai aap par, patni agar zid pe jaye aur apne pati ka saath dene ka faisla karle tu uske pati ka koi kuch nahi kar sakta aur mujhe pura wishwas hai ke Mrityunjay bhi aap ka pura saath dega aur dua karenge ke aap dono ki jodi hamesha salamat rakhe"

MJ- par baba Maa ji aaj meri wajha se ise naraz hokar chali gai

Jairaj-beta hum jante hai aap ko tara bahu ke liye bura lag raha hai, agar samdhan ji ka naziriye sahi hai tu Taara bahu bhi glalat nahi hai hai, unhone ne na sirf patni hone ka blake is ghar ke bahu hone ka bhi farz nibhiya hai, aap ke saath rah kar aap ke saath chalne ka faisla kiya hameisha ke liya

MJ-kya faidya uska baba kuch badalne wala tu nahi hai" Mrityunjay says and leaves from their angrily and frustrated, as no one was thinking from his point of view, no one was seeing they have no future, he has to die one day, sooner or later then why to ruin an innocent life, just for few moment happiness and just for Baba false hope, coz he will never say the truth, the truth will only stay with him and will go only with him after he dies.

As Taara watched him go she knew it will be really hard for her to make him confess the truth but she knew she will have to do everything in her hand to make him confess, if that means to break any and all relation with anyone she will be happy to break them.

-PS: So here is my version of 16th December, I so much had wanted Mrityunjay to go after Taara as soon she had ran to her room, but didn't...

Hope u all like my version of this epi

Do leave ur comment & review

-Mariam

Edited by CrazzyBusy - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like your version.

I too wanted them to have Mrityunjay go after Tara and console her. I waited and waited and it didn't happen.
I love the moment between Nirmala and Tara too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Yuks-

I like your version.

I too wanted them to have Mrityunjay go after Tara and console her. I waited and waited and it didn't happen.
I love the moment between Nirmala and Tara too.





Thank u for liking my version
I so so so much had wanted MJ to go after but no one did, not even Vasu...
Glad u like Nirmala and Tara moments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent post Mariam.👏👏👏
beautifully explained...loved it...⭐️⭐️
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Hey dear when I start to read this I thought this is also a same analysis on the epiosde but when slowly slowly I read further then I come to know that this is totally different as if I am watching this front of me ...love it love to read ur type version

Tara is really hurt because her main supporting pillar her mother left her alone to fight against the world as well as with her husband for truth and the truth is mj is innocent he did made any crime for what till now he had punished

Jayraj and vasu concern for tara is so cute and the way jayraj maje nimmo to console tara...is like wow zhock for me...nimmo till now I only imagined as vamp or a sauteli mother type women but her this new avtar is like awww love it...

First nimmo was so much hesitate to speak with tara but when tara hug her she is like meri beti ko meri jarurat hai...her few words make can amke such impact on thers that they can forget abt the world and only believe what she says is only truth...love it

And our hero mj...filmy line bhi marta hai...haye...

He want to make tara to leave this house to leave him alone but nop she is still him like a strong barrier wo keeping him safe fron outer world...and he think that taras this decision is going to be hurt her in future becuse he believe there is no future for him and tara


But our tara wo bhi kisi se kam nahi wo agar than le ki wo mj ka saath degi to usse koi nahi rok sakata...khud uska husband bhi nahi...and I know bahot jald mj ke jindagi ka sach hum sab ke samane hoga...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonalp

Excellent post Mariam.👏👏👏

beautifully explained...loved it...⭐️⭐️




Thank you for liking the post dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Hey dear when I start to read this I thought this is also a same analysis on the epiosde but when slowly slowly I read further then I come to know that this is totally different as if I am watching this front of me ...love it love to read ur type version

Tara is really hurt because her main supporting pillar her mother left her alone to fight against the world as well as with her husband for truth and the truth is mj is innocent he did made any crime for what till now he had punished

Jayraj and vasu concern for tara is so cute and the way jayraj maje nimmo to console tara...is like wow zhock for me...nimmo till now I only imagined as vamp or a sauteli mother type women but her this new avtar is like awww love it...

First nimmo was so much hesitate to speak with tara but when tara hug her she is like meri beti ko meri jarurat hai...her few words make can amke such impact on thers that they can forget abt the world and only believe what she says is only truth...love it

And our hero mj...filmy line bhi marta hai...haye...

He want to make tara to leave this house to leave him alone but nop she is still him like a strong barrier wo keeping him safe fron outer world...and he think that taras this decision is going to be hurt her in future becuse he believe there is no future for him and tara


But our tara wo bhi kisi se kam nahi wo agar than le ki wo mj ka saath degi to usse koi nahi rok sakata...khud uska husband bhi nahi...and I know bahot jald mj ke jindagi ka sach hum sab ke samane hoga...




Awww I am glad u didn't stopped reading it dear or else I would have missed this long comment on my this version...
I had purposely wrote that Part of Nimmo and Taara, After seeing her concern for MJ in the previous epi I knew she was not bad nor she hated MJ, its just that she is behaving mean and showing she hates MJ all coz of that RP, argh ye tu aurat se bhi zidya khatnak nikla, aag main ghee ka kaam kar raha hai
jahan Nimmo soft hoti nahi MJ ki taraf he just comes and fills her brain with all nonsense.

Nd Tara no she is not less then anyone, wo ek hi kaafi hai sab se ladene ke liye...aur MJ tu pahle hi uske saamne har chuka hai, aab tu uski chalni bhi nahi hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I 100% agree with u that nimmo purposely showing front ofRP that she hates mj and tara but somewhere even me also feel that she want both of them to suffer so that they will leave the UC and come to shekhawat mension nad live like king without any difficulties
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

I 100% agree with u that nimmo purposely showing front ofRP that she hates mj and tara but somewhere even me also feel that she want both of them to suffer so that they will leave the UC and come to shekhawat mension nad live like king without any difficulties



Very true dear, I think she will do something that they don't have to stay in tat tota phota UC and can come to the mansion and stay their peacefully...
but on the other hand I just hope that she doesn't do anything really hurting to MriAra in flow with RP...
She shd understand now that RP is just using her...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nimmo ke dil mein mj ke liye ma ka pyar jaag gaya hai and tara usaki biwi hone se thoda reham usape pe bhi aa gaya hai...


Nimmo kuch na kuch jarur karegi lekin wo indirectly mj ke liye achha hi karegi...

As we know that nimmo knows the bitter truth of mj's life and also dont want that it will come out by any how

So no worry for me

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