SaRa FF, never ever leave me alone.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi... ok I promised to write a serious ff.. so here I am... but I am not writing on NeSam or Ardhika and not even ArEil... It's SaRa this time. This plot I thought is very much psychologically twisted... I twisted the story so there is no connection with the real story...

... Only the character and attitude of the characters are same...

And guess what it's the first time there is no Neil in my story. Apart from Neil all are here... that means.. Mainly SaRa and little ArDhika and SamRrj.

Genre- psychological, tragedy, friendship, dark.

Situation- Sam and Radhika are childhood best friends.. They can't leave without each other. People call them soul sister.

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A 10 year old Radhika Mishra stood alone on road clutching her backpack. She was numb to the core... she could not feel herself. Her ears were buzzing... she was only seeing red... blood red.

Siren echoed in air and she smacked out of her numbness...she could make out some words people were discussing in the chaotic condition...

Ah.. Poor girl'

Oh my good so much blood... she is just a child.. God save her'

Be careful... She has hurt her leg badly... don't move her... yes carefully put her on stretcher'

Clear out every one'

Need to call their parents'

Radhika saw they were strapping her to the stretcher and taking her somewhere...her feet involuntarily moved she could hear people telling her not to go in front but she can't stop herself.

She reached in front of the stretcher and looked into her best friend's soulless eyes...

Sam her best friend tried to raised her hand... Radhika also moved her hand to grab it...

Why did you leave me alone chasni... told you to not to... told you to stop... why left me alone!!' Sam's word echoed in Radhika's ear... she could never reached her hand... Just before she felt like she can grab her hand the paramedics took Sam in ambulance... And her hand met only emptiness.

I am sorry Sam... I will never ever leave you alone again'

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Tanu,...Nice Ff yaar,..When I opened the forum,I was glad to see a SaRa FF,...Thank you so much girl for starting SaRa FF,..
This is my POV,...Please dont take it personal,...I want Neil too yaar,...His character is the definition for Friendship yaar,...And The character which I admire the most after Radz was Neil,...you know,I love ardhika so much but still I wanna share what makes me to start watching this serial other than ardhika was my expectation on SaRa friendship,...And A new FF from Shravan Fan without Neil is a big disappointment for me yaar,..Even If you ignore Arjun,I'm ok with it,...Cox I think this FF is only based on Friendship of SaRa,...Neil's little touch will definitely glow the SaRa friendship much more intensely,...I dunno what you planned,..So,I'm stopping here,..

Seriously I was pissed off when Cvs showed Sam slapping Radz cox till that epi I had some hope that sam will never misunderstand Radz,...

I wanna share some of my perspective and expectation before watching this series,...I started watching MMz cox of ardhika but before lonovla track,I watched all the 60 epi in Hotstar in three days,...The thing which attracts me other than ardhika was SaRa friendship,RaNeil Friendship,Nesam Friendship wala love,...Just a month before that track,I attended my best pal's marriage,...Sam and Radz sharing Dairymilk na,..that scene made me rem some good moments btw me and my buddy,...We used to share KitKat whenever we had some fight,...She used to scold me a lot,..But,If I remained silent,she will be upset,...Even on her marriage day,(early morning 4.00 AM),..She talked with me ignoring the ppl surrounding her including her hubby,...She got some scoldings from her Father in law too,..It made me upset more,...And I dinn attend her marriage ceremony till end,..I excused myself with my dad for her good,...So I felt I was connected with MMz more personally that's why I'm still in ardhika and MMz hangover,...

though there were little samarj intimate scenes at start,It doesnt go with me,..I like Neil and Sam only,..They are more than friends like lovers,...Really felt bad for Neil then,...But some intuition during that time says me that Nesam might be lead pair,...So,I thought this serial wont show any Misunderstanding btw buddies,...I expect Radz to make sam understand her love for Neil and Sam to make Radz to realize her love for Arjun,..It happened at last,...But not as I wished,...At the same time,I thanked god that they dinn show 2 girls loving same guy type story,...

But all my hopes were broken by cvs,..they showed a big MU btw buddies,...Its ok,...Past is past,..Nothing can be changed now,...This Renu na,..started blabbering again,...dont take it seriously yaar,...

The thing I liked most is your Idea of starting an FF for SaRa friendship,...I hope you will give some nice friendship moments btw the buddies,..If possible reconsider my request of adding Neil in this story,...Shravanfan's FF without Neil is not nice yaar,...

Take care ,...ATB,...
Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi Renu.. this review just made my day ... specially 'shravanfan's story without neil is not fair'... yes renu i know its not fair.. even i am missing neil here.
... well manmaryan is not manmaryan without neil for me.. my every thinking end with neil... i realizes i cannot think beyond neil... which is not fair also..
...i love writing and for mmz fandom neil is the central character of my every ff.. which probably limited me as a writer... i believe in good stories.. what's the profit if i don't explore my writing. ... i wanna think more freely without any obsession with some special character...so i challenged myself to write a ff without my favorite character.. i wanna explore my thinking ability.. its just a challenge . next time again neil will be hero of my story.

and sara is too adorable to not write... i mean.. there is Ardhika, Nesam, Samraj, Raneil even ArEil so why not SaRa... they deserve more and more ff.
... but the only twist is the SaRa of my ff will not be adorable..it will be kinda creepy.. as i said before it will be more psychological.
Edited by shravanfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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@shravanfan, nice start...
wat i liked z u left ur fav character behind to explore ur writing skills..dats truly good...i appreciate u for dat...

for me dym - neil z not dat great...but still i do like exploring different genres while reading...its already feels some broken friendship type...

i already came to know, u r good at writing...so i am just gng to wait to read...

continue...


@renu...some times i felt radhika n neil's friendship z more good than neil n sam...dnt throw eggs on me...let me complete...nesam r good as friends...but we can clearly see dats more than friendship from d start...dats wat i felt from d start...n then radhika n neil didnt get much time in d show, but who stood for her z neil indirectly n directly most of d times...n eventhough nesam r chuddy buddy there z this unknown communication gap btwn them...dats d very reason for her problems...but neil was there to support her than solve her problems...sam needed his support than talking abt her problems...but u know vthout much exchange of words he do understand radhika...if there z some more time, definitely radhika could hav made sam see d love neil had for sam...dats d way radhika needed to show her friendship vth neil, vthout he asking for anything...dats wat i wanted...anyways...DYM came n gone...



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