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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi friends!!

Here is Episode 12

Hope like it!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi my dear friends!!

Here is our Episode 13

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi my dear friends!!

I really miss your lovely replies these days..

I think everyone is very busy..hope so...
and here is Episode 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi my lovely friends!!

I really miss your lovely replies these days and

I think everyone is really busy with their stuff..so

I dont wanna disturb u...If You want me to post those episodes

here ..sure I will do that in next epi!! Waiting fa ur replies!!

Anyway!! Here is our next epi

Episode 14

Edited by Hateera - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manmarziyan !! With more crazy things!!

Promo 1
Hi friends!!
This is Hateera.Initially I saw many of my friends writing many stories.I too remained to be a silent reader.But by the days going..I am excited!! Because my mind gave me a crazy thought ...yep!! Writing a ff!!.
I know its sad for you..but we surely will have a great fun !! With my story.

Here is my stories promotion!!

Scene 1:
In this scene we can see a tall ...No No...less taller boy(than our Arjun) .He is sitting in an exam hall waiting for someon.Soon he starts rotating his pens..almost playing with his things which he got with him.He sees his watch little worried!! As its already half an hour passed.He gets worried and says " Where did this mad gone?? Its already late now!!".Suddenly his eyes gets damn shocked!! to believe his eyes...(Lets go back to him and see what he saw..)Oh my God!! What happened to her?? Sam is really running fast with great tension in her face!! Yeah I can say his name now!! If Sam is coming there ...who could be waiting in the exam hall
Ofcourse Neil gets shocked instead of happy because he saw her coming in a bridal attire He cried in his heart saying "Not again!!".He dont know what to do..and her new plan totally confused him!! He says "She must be crazy!!! A new Drama again!!


Hi friends!!! Here I m posting those epi here itself!! Hope

U bear with me...as its taking some time to post 14 episodes!! First

I will post my previous episodes and will continue

Posting like this

hope u like it !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Promo 2

Manmarziyan !! With more crazy things!! Promo
Hi friends..its soo nice of you...all love my thought...so I too give you sweet shocks!!

Promo:

Here we can see a girl filling soil in a pot and planting a lovely Rose plant.She kisses the plant smilingly and here it's our Radhika's smile.She then pours water and feels water drops fall on her face.She thinks "Drizzling!!!" and closes her eyes facing the sky expanding her hands like hugging those drizzling drops!!.Soon her hands moved fast and she opens her eyes as she felt no more drizzling.She gets mocked as she saw A tall man standing over the first floor and drying his clothes!!

She again feels the drops and sees him flipping the clothes.She then realises its no drizzling its just the water from the drops felt over her.She gets damn embarressed and thinks to check whether he noticed.She stares him and found no reaction and takes a long breath in contentment!!.She goes kissing the plant again.While he turns and from his face peeped a little smile which he saw the whole incident.Soon it turned out into a large smile saying "Crazy!!".

Hope you found who is he!??
Do you love my idea my friends??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Episode 1:

Our episode starts with Neil sitting in exam hall in a great shock.He thinks " God !! Please stop her from doing some drama...Don't know what will happen this time!!!".While Sam is seen damn horrified. She enters the exam hall asking excuse to the invigilator. He strictly says " No !!!".Neil sees and cries in his heart "That's enough for her to create a drama here!!".Sam starts crying and wipes her tears while the invigilator gets tensed and asks her to control herself.She starts saying that she was escaped from her forced marriage and tells more and more things.Now he get caught and starts consoling her.

Neil sees her with his eyes widened and says " Drama Queen!!! I swear you lied him!!!'.The examiner allows her to write exam and gives her water saying " Don't worry child!!! Just focus now...".She nods her head worried as yes' and starts writing. Neil still stares her curiously. She then turns slightly seeing if the invigilator is seeing her or not.She sees Neil and soon her sad eyes turns bright and winks at once.Neil gives her a really an angry look.She with her great smile and shows her thumb as "Done!!!".Neil gets worried and thinks " Just because of her drama I lose the bet!!!!!".

Hi friends... I m loving this a lot...hope you took liked it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Manmarziyan !! With more crazy things!!

Episode 2

Hi my friends!!!! Really u can't believe me...I am going crazy to post an update... Hope you enjoy it...

Our episode starts with Sam sees Neil and winks.Soon they start writing the exam.Neil finished fast and sees Sam writing very eagerly.He wonders how could she write till now.And starts scribbling (Writing fast) in his paper also.Sam now turns and sees Neil writing gets tensed and thinks "Still writing!! Really I can believe this...If gets passed!!?? Oh my god!! Mom will kill me".Both seeing each other and starts scribbling.. (The funniest part is yet there).Neil sees his papers finished and Wonders. He thinks " God !! Why this Sammy is writing still... I have no idea what to write ...But she writing nonstop!!! How she read yesterday??".He gets anxious and thinks "Neil!! Already you lost the bet ...

Its OK its not a complete lose...as she cheated by creating sympathy!! Now..you should not lose this!!".He gets additional paper and thinks pointing the pen over the paper.He cried "God!! This is the worst for ever!! " and starts writing.While finishing the paper he realised something.Suddenly turns the question paper hurriedly .He gets shocked and cries " Damn!!! Is this statistics exam!!???(Oh my god!!!) ".He starts cursing" This day can't be worst than this".He gets really feared now seeing Sam getting additional sheet.He bites his nails and thinks "What to do now?? If she gets passed..then I have give my iPod to her!!".(Really!! Thetly are bet maniacs!!! Everything has a bet...)

He gets worried.While she sees him tensed and thinks " why this Neil is tensed as of he missed a single mark for hundred??".Both wwrite their exam fast in fear of losing their bets...Finally both gets happy hearing professors voice " Time is up!!!".Neil gives and big smile and hands over the paper.While Sam thinks " He smiling!! God!! Now no iPod for me...!!". She too gives her paper and comes out.He goes to her to talk but Sam turns quick and gives a hard punch in his stomach!!! (God!! This girl is really crazy!!!) .He screams in Pain" Damn girl!!! What is that for!??".(Let them be fight... And we will come to Rads here)

Radhika in her room arranging the books thinks" He didn't see me right??" and bites her lower lip in eembarrassment. She then goes down to her mom and asks " Ma...need any help??".While she says " No need my gudiya!! I almost finished...you go and rest"(Wow!! How sweet...but here in our home there would be a cold war for this!! Ha ha ha..) Rads goes to her room and starts writing something... She thinks keeping her pen on her lips and smiles ...Manmarziyan...song plays in background(We can imagine this from her promo video of our original series).While Arjun's
room straight top to her.

Arjun comes near the window and talks to someone.She gets tensed and runs towards her room window because she can hear clearly from her window. She hears him laughing and thinks " I am sure ...he saw me..".He will laughing controls his laugh and says "Dii...you won't believe...how happy I am here!!".Rads gets angry and says " Why won't you happy...mocking me!!".She hears her mom saying her to get dried clothes from outside.She then goes out and sees him hesitantly taking the clothes.He sees her seeing him pretends to make fun of someone.She hears him mocking her and gets angry. She pulls the clothes hard and gives him an angry look.He laughs loud and gives her a mocking smile and goes in.Rads gets damn anger!!She throws the clothes and stands react keeping her hands on her hips.She then goes out and runs upstairs. She sees him locking his door and stops.He sees her and smiles saying" Oh !! You??".He looks around doubtly and says "Am I locking your home??? Why you are giving me that look!!??"...

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Hope you like it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys !!

Episode 3

Our episode starts with Arjun ignores her and goes out.She gets angry thinking"He ignored me!!?? How dare he!!" .she then follows him calling him as " Hey !! Stop!!".He just stops with smile but unseen in his face may be he smiled in his heart...He lifts his left eyebrow and waits for her to reach there...He suddenly turns to her and and says " Its Arjun !! OK ??? Not ..." He stopped himself saying after and goes.She stops hearing his words and thinks " What??? Who asked his name!!??".Soon he flies out in his car before she reaches him.While she thinks " This man is really did wrong by ignoring me!! Wait and watch!! WhatvI will do!".She challenges in her mind and goes into her room and starts writing something. She starts thinking some plans to teach him a lesson.She doesnt realised that she just thought of him for the whole day with the excuse of planing a revenge.After planning something she eagerly waits for him to arrive.While he thinks of her and says " You...made me to talk with you just like that!! I m not going to give u a chance to make me go mad!!". and smiles irkingly.He reminiscences seeing her first time in a railway station crying and talking to someone over phone.He gets admired so much in his first sight (I m too bored of reading in series.just in MOST not all series only the girls gets their love feeling over boys first...I am not going to change everything down to earth!!! Just changed some little thoughts).She crys over phone saying " Ma...She so stupid to take this decision... I can't believe..how can someone do like this...Its really a rubbish to take revenge on others just for they betrayed us...I even tried her to realise her mistake...but she is not hearing any...And Its wrong to disturb others life after getting breakup na?? If its true love we will always think of their happiness!! Its really disgusting... How can she take revenge on the one whowlm she loved by her heart!!".She slowly wipes her tears and patiently nods her head as her mom said something overphone.(I too can only overhear her words and can't hear her mom's words...).She then gulps hard and about to cry but controls herself.. Its clear by her actions as she is only waiting for her mom to hang off the phone then immediately she would cry badly.He sees her in this condition for at his first sight and feels a really sharp pain in his heart... He wonders " I never felt this pain ever...why her tears hurting me this much...And her innocent thoughts.. What...leaving the loved one for their happiness!! Just thinking herself a Queen of sacrifice!! Really..".She then hangs the call and looks around her while controlling her tears and goes from there.He sees her face and realises " Damn she is really going to die by crying!!".She runs from there and stands in a corner as nobody could see her.She cries badly saying " How can you just do this Aisha...u know very well how u loved him...and I too know...then how can u do these ...u just made him exposed in front of his family about his breakup with u just because of some nasty reasons...and you gone forever from this world!! Leaving a simple note !!What?? You can't move on..in your life??? You are really mad aaisha!!! Mad!!".She the wipes her tears and says " And you left your childhood friend... Just for a reason that u can't move on??...If u just wait for one day...This time I would be with u...But you ..?? Just left me!!...".While Arjun after seeing her running from there controls himself to act normal..but asusual his legs dragged him to her.He hears everything.Though he felt sad for her worry and her friend's loss his inner heart reminds him " God!! I thought she was crying for her love breakup!!! But God you saved me!!".He then thinks to go and console her.He stops hearing her voice saying " Love!! All these is because of that...It just got my best friend away from me!!!".She then takes some heavy breathes and makes herself not looking too sad...as her dad will come to pick her from the station. She wipes her face again and again andwashes her face .Still she controls herself and calls her dad and says " Dad!! I reached..." in a happy voice and once she ends the call and cries bitterly.He wonders " Why she did that!!?? And acted happy to his dad?? Why is her behavior puzzles and really confusing me??".He hides while she crossed him and comes out thinking after she left.His mind says " No Arjun!! You should go now!! Enough of your concerns for a strange girl !!".But heart cried to his mind " Damn!! Leave him...let him go and find her!!".We know very well what will always win over other...yeah!! Always heart wins!!! So here too!!!

He drags his suitcase fast following her way and stops seeing her with a strict faced gentleman.His facial reactions really exposed his strict mind...but the smile over his face expressed his ultimate love and affection for his daughter...He crosses them and turns to see.He sees two reactions in her face...She is damn ready to share everything and cry over hiys shoulder and also a black reaction to hide everything from his his knowledge. She cries badly and says " Sorry papa!! I didn't do the exam well..!!" and hugs him.Soon she cries out all her pain that she is unable to share anything with him!!.Arjun' s heart strucks in a deep question..." Why she is hiding her pain..before her Dad!!?? And he...didn't realised her real pain..?? Why I can see all her thoughts..how ??".He again gives her a pathetic look and goes into a taxi with his luggage. Here we are cutting the fb and opens in present!!!!. He says " I thought its just coincidence... But when I saw you again in your home and realised that you are my childhood friend!! I don't know from where the words came from but it ended with a single word!! Radhika..!!".

Hi friends... I am just trying to create something really confusing!! But hope I tried to achieve it!! If I continued today's epi more...sure we would have lost our Manmarziyan!! With more crazy things!! And we would be floating in another Manmarziyan... SobI should stop myself from taking this ff to another level of serious love...sacrifices... An all...So let's enjoy with our crazy Manmarziyan!! If think its OK to continue I really welcome ur ideas...and Mostly heroes in my ff's would somewhat similar characters...as Its my personal preference.. Hope u enjoyed this serious part ...
And sorry for skipping our nesam part...sure it would be fun in next epi!!
Finally how is today's ff??
Hope our Crazy Manmarziyan too has its serious parts!!
I m really eager to hear from you!!

Love you all!!!
Edited by Hateera - 9 years ago
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Episode 4:

Our chapter starts with Sam giving a hard punch in Neil's tummy!!.Neil screams in pain "Damn!! Girl whats that for??".Sam smirks and says "For cheating!!".Neil stands stunned and holds her neck saying "You are dead today little insect!! Am I cheating!!?? You are the one!!".Sam gets shocked and tries to free herself.She screams "What I did!!??".He starts saying in warning tone "Dont !! Utter a word!! Only I will speak..".Sam looks him deeply and burst into great laughter!!.He yells "Am I looking Funny!!??".She screams loud and nods her head vigorously!!.He realises ofcourse he looked little serious but Sam got laughter as she knew about his so called anger.He them leaves her and says "Ok...And you!! A complete clown standing before me!!".Sam looks at herself and says in hesitation biting her lips " Ofcourse I look funny!! And you just lost in our bet !!".Neil interrupts her "No!! You cheated by creating a drama there!! I wont accept it!!".Sam sees him with a pity puppy look.He gets irritated and says"No..not now!! I cant compromise this time!! Wait!! Where you got this dress??".Sam remembers something and stands shocked "Oh My God!!!".While Neil cries saying "Again you created chaos!!! Is this???"Sam closes her eyesin fear says" A delivery stock from your Mom's botique!!...

They told me to deliver it!! But..".Neil asks now in warning tone "You wore it as an excuse to get into the exam hall!!".Sam already stares at him closing her mouth by both hands.Neil says "God!! This little ...will kill me..!!No Your Mom Sam!!! She definitely will kill me!!".Neil's phone rings and he sees Pyali calling.He shows his mobile to sam and gives her an angry look.Sam looks it worriedly.Neil sees her and says "Go!! Get a juice !!".Sam looms him totally confused and asks"Wbat??".He again says "First change this stupid thing and get me a juice!!".Sam got his idea the he needs to be alone while getting curses from her mom!!.She looks him worriedly and goes from there.Neil looks at sam gone and attends the call and closes his eyes tight.He received most blaw blaw blaw things which didnt gave chance to talk!! And it finally ended with"Meet me in 20 minutes!!".He relaxes.But again few words came immediately "And With her !!".He sees the call ended and wipes the sweat over his face.He says "I never gonna forgive her for this!! Always making some mess around me!!".

Sam came running and stands back saying "I did this to attend the exam yaar!! I really got nervous!! So...".Neil interruptes"So you planned to finish me today!!".Sam looks down giving him juice.While he notices her breathing heavy because she came running says "Drink it!!".Sam's face immediately smiles and she asks"Really?? Aww! You are soo sweet!!".Neil gets irritated and snatches the juice from her hand and gulps it in one go!!.Neil gives the empty bottle and walks saying "Throw it!!".Sam gets angry and shouts "You are crazy Neil!!".Neil mocks her saying "Not crazier like you!!".She follows him asking "What to do now??".Neil casually says "Do you have that??".Sam smiles and takes a cotton roll.Neil says"Hmm..as usual!!".Both reach the office.Neil looks at her.She gives him some cotton.Both close their ears with it and enters keeping their face worried!!.(Seems its usual for them!! )

Our scene shifts to Rads in her home sitting near a rose plant.She while hearing songs via earphone talks with the plant.She says "This guy is really rude na?? He just ignored me this morning!! And I remember...he was really cute in childhood!! You know what ?? We used to plant more ...He too likes gardening!! But...he really changed now!! And I dont want to talk with him now!! ".She hears some footsteps and removes her earphones.She looks around her and does not find anyone.She then again continues still seeing the gate waiting for him.She says "I shouldnt have gone to him!! He is not that Arjun who was really fun loving ...and ..I always thought to meet him one day...Today!! I met him but!! .."She hears phone ringing and sees not her phone.She then sees Arjuns car already parked and gets shocked.She then hears him crossing her talking.She gets embarressed and thinks "Radika!! You are really!!! Again!! ".She follows him to know he heard her before or not.He ends the call and turns.He sees her hiding and pretends talking in phone "Yeah!! Really its funny right!! I too thought ..It would be boring here..but I got An amazing entertainment !!".Radika gets worried as she understands he is talking about her.She goes disappointed...While Arjun hides and smiles watching her.

Hi friends!!
Hope you not hate it!!!
Really waiting to know your replies..

Do you like it!!??

Credit to: Hateera
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