Ardhika FF (w/ NeSam)- Missing Pieces -Updated Act 11, Pg 32, 18/11

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#191

awesome update !!! and please take care of your health !!

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#192

hey esprit, hope u vl b better soon...n take care of ur health...

nice update...really liked it...

arjun's thought abt his heart known d love long time ago n his mind accepting dialog was too good...

arjun's sorry, n radhika's dialog of "i love u for all ur faults n all ur good"... dats totally too good...such a noce dialog...

d moring interaction was good...

thanks yaar, u made neil some active person here, instead of just giving suspicious looks...

i liked d family interaction... they already leaving...

i was expecting some more arjun-dadaji-radhika scenes...bt its good...

i thought saral-arjun face off vl b there...bt u dealt him nicely...

so, looking forward to next update...

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Thanks everyone for all the likes and lovely comments.

Hmmm... I think I should stop with this story here as it will end on a good note. Maybe if time persists, I can do an epilogue or something ... The Nandini issue is a bit of moot point so if i was to tackle that, it'll take me some time and a few chapters more. Once i feel better, I can see if i want to create a Part 2 to this Missing Pieces or continue with this story.

Actually the Arjun apology just seemed to fit in that scene ... as i mentioned i went with the flow... and i didn't want him to say something cheesy like ILY again when he has already said and done so much. In the previous dori scene, she apologized to him so i figured this time he will softly say sorry to her even if it isn't required.

I didn't want to re-introduce SAral... because for one thing, Saral would know better than to show up in front of Ardhika again ... also, i think there would be some friction between his family and Radhika because of everything. No body knew his rape-attempt on Radz other than Arjun so it's in his best interest to stay away from them... and if anything they probably think she broke up with Saral because she fell in love with her boss. Anyway, so i highlighted that in that short conversation.

I didn't want to get into too much detail of family conversation ... the way i tried to write it all out was to show that Arjun is more like their son than "son in law"... so in a lot of the conversation there was a bit of informality and light moments... a contrast to the "bade damad-ji" of the family.

Thanks again.

Edited by esprit_00 - 9 years ago

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rosel

@rosel

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Esprit...take care of ur health..
i loved it...i love how u r adding small minute details...the family bondin was the best...and ridhima's child part was perfect...m happy that you included that part...
neil suspecting something about saral...too good...
arjun-radz convo was sweet...

I liked the end part most...wer arjun says about cd and radz reply that she wants to talk...

I loved everythng...

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Huma

@Huma-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#195

i wish i wish all this was a part of actual show sigh
as usual beautiful update morning scene was a treat <3

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Aradiv

@Aradiv

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#196

Hope you feeling better today, get well soon!! :-)

That was so so beautiful! As I completed reading, there is a feeling of content n happiness that I can't put down in words. You write so well that I felt it would have been nice to see this Arjun when the show actually ended. Though I like what they showed after 2 years, I felt the very next day after the proposal would have added more charm n you did jus that. You made me so happy!! Love ya!!

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mmzmahi

@mmzmahi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Awesome..Arjun and Radhika waking up in each others arms.. And please continue writing once you start feeling better!

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lovv

@lovv

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#198

hey esprit, i got a small doubt...

y ur title as, Arjun & Radhika...

wen they actually confessed their love, n totally happy vth d things..now wen they become one soul ...y not ARdhika...?

i am not bothered abt their physical intimacy level n all...at heart they are one from a long time ...nw they said it out loud...

so ur title has some other importance? i am not getting how much ever i think...can u plz explain...if u hav time...n wen u r feeling better...

// i asked this doubt on AT, i think u havnt seen...so wanted to knw...

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esprit_00

@esprit_00

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: lovv
hey esprit, i got a small doubt...

y ur title as, Arjun & Radhika...

wen they actually confessed their love, n totally happy vth d things..now wen they become one soul ...y not ARdhika...?

i am not bothered abt their physical intimacy level n all...at heart they are one from a long time ...nw they said it out loud...

so ur title has some other importance? i am not getting how much ever i think...can u plz explain...if u hav time...n wen u r feeling better...

// i asked this doubt on AT, i think u havnt seen...so wanted to knw...

hmm... no idea... i meant it as Arjun & Radhika (together) ... so it can be Ardhika ... but for a title i prefer having full names ... quite frankly i didn't really put too much thought into the title, lol.