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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi guys!!😃 im new to this forum but old to IF and DYM... im an ardhikian!!😳
i just wrote this poem hope so that you all like it!😃


Kashmakash se judi dil ki raahein

Na hai pata jana kahaan

Dastak de raha ek naye manzil ko

Kya sahi kya galat kise hai pata

Khuli zindagi ki ek ruhaani sa panna

Anjana sa ek humsafar mila

Rookhi si zindagi ko roshan kiya

Bhatakte dil ko dariya mila.

Badal gayi meri zindagi

Tere hawaale ho gayi main

Khona hai teri baahon mein

Ab nahi lagda mera jiya tere bin

Kora sa dil hai mera

Bhar do ise apne ishq ki syaahi se

Mukkammal kar do is adhoori si kahaani ko

Tujhpe hi meri shuruaat tuhi mera anth...

Piya... O' mere jiya...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi I'm Karishma. Welcome. It would be nice if you could provide an English translation for your poem as a few of us are not familiar with hindi. I would love to read it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brokengirl

Hi I'm Karishma. Welcome. It would be nice if you could provide an English translation for your poem as a few of us are not familiar with hindi. I would love to read it.

ya sure!!! here is the english translation!!😃😃
the path of my heart is confused
never know where to go
it is showing me a new journey
what is ryt whats wrong who knows

there opened a very delicate page of life
an unknown companion i met
he made this droopy life filled with light
this lost heart got its stream/way

my life has changed
i have surrendered myself to you
i wanna lose myself in your warmth/hug
my heart doesnt yearn for anything without you

my heart is like a blank paper
fill it with the ink of your love
make this incomplete story complete
my life starts at you and ends with you
love O' my love
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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to give an intro about myself im a tamilian by birth!😃 live in tamil nadu!!!😉 any tamilian friends here??😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shrividhya

to give an intro about myself im a tamilian by birth!😃 live in tamil nadu!!!😉 any tamilian friends here??😛

hai me also belong to tamilnadu.nice too see u in DYM forum
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithi12

hai me also belong to tamilnadu.nice too see u in DYM forum

thank you for your warm welcome!!😊

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