Broken pieces- @rdhikA story (part 3 22 august 2015 updtd pg-3)

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hey guys I have a new story in mind do suggest if I should continue or not
part-1
the past 3 months have made arjun and radhika understand each other and yes, trust each other but fate has it's own plans. one fine morning radhika woke up to found arjun missing. she got up and as soon as she entered hall, she saw nandini dressed in function dress with jewellery around her neck and then she heard nandu say " com'on Sam this is your new house" and then she saw Sam put her legs in aalta and step inside with sindoor in her maang and arjun by her side in sherwani .Radhika couldn't believe her eyes, she looked at arjun but he wasn't looking into her eyes directly
. " oh, a very happy greeting to my eldest step from the new and the legal wife of arjun mehra" said Sam sarcastically to radhika as arjun felt something empty within his life as he saw radhika's blank face. He knew he had broken her and he wanted her to say that she also loves him and he will leave everything for her. Radh slowly stepped towards arjun staring in his eyes and then spoke "how can you do this, sir"
" radhika, WO main..."
"you should have told me sir..at least I would have decorated yours and Sam's room" beamed radhika arjun could not believe his ears that his wife has no problem in sharing him with some one else. Was this true? But Neil who stood in the corner easily noticed that his chashni was lieing. what often appear s isn't the truth always Arjun angrily left the hall as Sam was taken by nandu to her new room. finally a tear drop escaped radhika's eyes which she wiped quickly and wore a mask of happiness as she made way to the room which once belonged to her and him. Radhika was about to enter the room when suddenly two suit cases were thrown out leaving radhika baffled. " this is our room so kick your ass out of this room" said Sam clinging to arjun's arms who clenched his fingers tight willing to slap Sam. "thanks sam you saved my time that would have been wasted " said rads smiling and left with her suitcases. Arjun came out of the bathroom with his upper torso naked but when he remembered that Sam and not rads is here, he started wearing his tee when suddenly someone caught his arm and said " arjun" Arjun could not believe his eyes rads was standing before him in a beautiful wedding attire " you look good like this"said she and blushed a brighter shade of red making him smile naughtily. she started leaving as arjun held her from back and kissed her neck

" you know arjun"
" hmm"
" I knew you always loved me and not that radhika" finished Sam as arjun suddenly backed off realising what he was doing and left the room wearing his tee. As he passed through hall he saw radhika sitting on sofa. He looked at her with a plea but got angry when she smiled at him and said "I am so happy for you and Sam,sir". He left from there as rads thought " I must keep awake arjun sir won't do anything to Sam but nandini di is insane" She went to kitchen, picked a water bottle and glass and came back to hall. she drank a glass of water and felt like drinking another and after another glass her whole world was swirling as she could already see 4 bottles before her. "yo Neil" said radhika as Neil was leaving after bringing some stuffs for Sam " chashni what are you doing?" asked Neil as he sat beside her " kaise ho blue plue" giggled radhika
" hainn" asked Neil as he smelled radhika's mouth and shouted 'chashni you are drinking vodka"
" its not vodka neele, its gum bhulane ka totka" said rads not knowing what she was speaking. she kept her head on Neil's shoulder as she continued " I am happy for them Neil" a tear trickled down her eyes falling on Neil's hand who raised her head and asked " you are lying, what is it" " ahh, it sweat drop as you are very hot" again giggled radhika
arjun wanted to kill Neil but he left for his room
" chashnii" asked Neil strictly " you know Neil. I should be happy but I am feeling like I have lost the reason to live" " chashni what.." " Sam loves sir sir loves her even though I m her first wife, my status is that of a wh**e...right" Neil couldn't say a word as he hugged rads and soon both fell into the deep abyss of their shattered and broken dreams. next morning arjun opened his eyes and seeing a figure before his eyes smiled and said " mitthi chhuri is always ready haan" " that's such a sweet name, arjun" arjun quickly woke up as he realised that last night has changed his life. Sam gave him tea and left the room. he took a sip of tea and found it sweet, sweetness that didn't belong to her meant nothing to him.He spitted the tea and threw the cup. he then saw the broken pieces and saw rads picking them up causing a piece to pierce her hand.He quickly went there and started picking the pieces up saying " I will do it radhika" he looked up and found that she wasn't here. A piece pierced his hand and as he removed it, he winced in pain "arjun" shouted rads as she started sucking onto his hand at the bleeding part and then slowly blew at that part. All the while arjun stared at her wishing that it wasn't just another mirage of his broken dreams.It was not. Their eyes met and arjun's broken heart started to heal seeing that concern in her eyes. " you are so irresponsible arjun you should have called me na, it is hurting so mu.." trailed radhika as she was pushed back making her hand pierce a piece as arjun and rads looked at Sam who shouted " stay away from my arjun, you b***h". arjun wanted to shout at Sam but rads clenched his hand and nodded him a no. she got up and left. It was then when arjun looked at his hand and found it stained with blood. "she spoiled the floor" gritted Sam as arjun saw blood drops all the way from their room passing through hall and going into her room. So how was it?? should I continue or scrap it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like it. Do continue 🤗
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First part was soo interesting,didn't want it to end..
I say continue please..
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thanx for the likes and comments next updt coming soon
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😉hey guys here is part 2

Broken pieces

Part-2

But before arjun could notice the trail of blood completely sam shut the door so as to prevent arjun from going after radhika.

Neil came to meet radhika 10 minutes later only to find red stains adorning the floor tiles going into the room which now belonged to radhika. He hurried into her room and found the trail ending at bath door. He could hear the sound of shower running and water coming out of the bath door. He started banging on bath door shouting "chashni" "chashni".

10 minutes later

"arjun...sam...where are you?" "come out of your room, can't you cut the crap for night" shouted neil.

Arjun and sam came out and arjun's eyes widened as he saw radhika lying in neil's arms with her wrists bleeding.

"what...what happened to radhika" stuttered arjun as he caressed radhika's face.

"wait...I will bring your car keys" panicked sam as she forgot all her envy and rushed to their bedroom.

For the last 5 minutes sam had been checking all the wardrobes when arjun came shouting "what the hell are you doing"

"arjun, I couldn't find the keys" said sam

"you won't find a thing afterall your love rival is finally gonna die" said arjun sarcastically as he frantically searched for the car keys and left.

As soon as they reached the hospital, on seeing the bleeding wrist doctor said "it is a suicide case, you should file an FIR first"

"your first priority is patient's life" shouted neil

"sorry sir but it is a police ca.." stammered doctor as arjun cut doc's wrist with the fruit knife

"oh..oh..my god its bleeding" panicked doctor

"but first you will have to file an FIR on me" said arjun

Sam and neil were shocked at this madness of arjun. The doctor understood that unless and until he started treating the girl he won't be allowed to get himself treated.

3 hours later :

Radhika opened her eyes and sat straight but before she could realize where was she, she found herself being crushed under death tightening grip of those familiar arms as she could hear sobs and feel her tunic getting wet.

"arjun what are you..."

"are you mad radhika? You nearly killed me" finished arjun as he madly kissed radhika on her forehead and cheeks not caring for the two audiences who stood silently, neil standing with the truth in his eyes and sam with hatred.

"So what exactly happened" asked neil breaking the tension in the room.

"a piece of cup pierced my hand when I lost my balance while picking the broken pieces" radhika continued as arjun remembered how sam had pushed radhika and looked at sam angrily who lowered her gaze in answer.

"then I went to wash my hand and look for the first aid but I could'nt find it so may be I ended up fainting in the bath"

After coming back to home arjun had a serious scuffle with sam

"you knew that her hand was bleeding seriously but you turned blind eye to this...omg samaira khanna if you had been in her place na, she would have turned the whole world upside down to save you" shouted arjun as he left the room.

Neil was feeding porridge to radhika who was making baby faces. Samaira entered with swollen red eyes.

"what happened sam" asked a very much concerned radhika

"when I saw you faint in neil's arms I prayed to god to make you well but now ,I wish you should have died at that very moment only"

"sam" said radhika in teary eyes

"stop your crocodile tears and if you have a little bit of respect you should go and die than rather live life of a w***e"

Slap!! Slap!!

Sam held her cheeks as she saw neil standing in front of her with blood shot eyes.

"I can't believe this... How can I fall for a lowly being like you" continued neil "you know what she is not a w***e, you are...yeah you are"

1 week later :

Arjun knew that radhika loves her job so he recommended her to his friend and radhika started working there. It was radhika's first day and she has come home late at night due to plenty of work. As soon as she came home she fell onto the couch in the hall and fell asleep. Arjun who had been standing in the balcony waiting for his wife passed through the hall and saw her sleeping like a mess. He smiled and thought "must had a tiresome day but I should make her eat unless she won't get a sound sleep". Arjun went to kitchen and came back with rice and rajma in the plate in his hands, sat on the center table and started waking her up.

"radhika khana kha lo"

"arjun let me sleep" muttered radhika with sleepy eyes

"no, sleep won't come empty stomach"

"arjunnn.." pouted radhika

" com'on now wake up".

Radhika sat up with messed hair as arjun started feeding her with his hands and she continued her Ramayana of the whole day. He smiled at his childish wife and wished that this mirage should never disappear. Suddenly radhika stopped his hand as she took the spoon from his hand and said " sir, aapne bhi to nhi khaya".

Arjun could feel tears in his eyes as radhika fed him.

"now its your turn,sir" said radhika as she opened her mouth in "aaa".

Arjun smiled and both fed each other. After the dinner radhika was going to slump back on the couch but arjun caught hold of her and said "change into your night dress"

"sir pleeaasseee, let me sleep" requested radhika with a baby face

"no you should change"

"sir iss masum chehre par thoda toh taras khaiye"

Arjun giggled and then lifted radhika in his arms saying "well you don't want to change?"

Radhika nodded.

"no problem, I will change"

Radhika was left open mouthed as she suddenly got down from arjun's arms and rushed to the bedroom saying "I will do it"

"don't close the door" ordered arjun

"why?"

"so that I should peak in" said arjun with a serious face as radhika made a false angry face and hit him playfully on chest.

"so that I won't be locked outside whilst you will fall asleep without informing me"

10 minutes later

"are you done" shouted arjun.

No response

Finally he stepped in closing his eyes not willing to see something that would make him insane. And there was her sleeping beauty lying all messed up on bed with her office wear thrown on the floor.

Radhika remembered those happy times as she fell asleep on the couch after a hectic day at work.

so how was it? do comment what you liked


Edited by nish_vir - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*unres*
Awesome, Loved it..
Sam deserves the slap from Neil.. Loved him.. And Arjun baba need to kick Sam out soon before his real wife go away from him.🤢.
Update soon...
Edited by love_never_dies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it ❤️
I wont say anything about Sam because i hate her.So it is better to ignore her 😡
Loved Neil and radhika moments ❤️
Loved Arjun and Radhu moments ❤️
Loved hospital scene 😊
Loved how neil slapped sam and scolded her 👏 🤣
Amazing writing 👍🏼
plz update next part soon
PM me your next updates 😊
Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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can't believe that sam such a B****
love that sam and arjun care for radihka
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os. Loved the convo between neil and sam. Loved the way you wrote about how arjun felt for radhika. Beautifully writte. Update fast. Eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so lovely upt
i hate sam
ardhika is so cute
cont soon

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