ArDhika FF : Dosti Yariyaan manmarjiyaan

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi freiends

I have started a new FF on ArDhika

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Ch 1 pg 1
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1

Saral ... darwaza kholiye...

Hadd ho gayi ... aap kyu devdas banne mei tule hue hai.

Arey ye koi baat hui bhala .. Ladki ne bhav nahi diya kisis aur ke saath gayi toh aap devdas ban gaye... arey wo nandini ke peeche Devdas kyu ban rahe hai.. U will get someone better than her...

Go away Radz .. Leave us alone..

Us... Who is der with you.. Another devdas?

Neil told me that kal se aap log 2 bottle gatak chuke... aur aaj toh Friday hai aur Neil 2 bottle le ke bahar khada hai

Neil fek dono bottles bahar koi nahi piyega yahan isse.

Neil saale kamine.. Dagabaaz.. Kyu leke aaya tu isse ghar.. Bhool gaya hamari deal .. No girls allowed in this flat.. Saale tu ruk... hum dono mil ke batate hai tujhe..

Kon chilla raha hai bahar... sar fatt raha hai mera... neil daaru laya kya.. Ruk darwaza kholta hu dono bottle de...

Wait... Darwaza mat kholiye.. Bhai ..

Radhika glared at neil. Neil was scared now. Around 10 min back radhika had called him up and asked him if he was at home. Neil had just finished buying 2 more bottles . He said that he will reach home in 5 min. then suddenly radhika had disconnected the call.

Neil knew that last 2 days have been difficult for Radhika in office. As it is there was a pile of work. Moreover since Saral had decided to go into Devdas mode , his work was also handled by Radhika. That girl was trying her best to save Saral's ass while he was busy drinking.

Neil and Radhika were batch mates and Saral was 2 years senior in their Engg College. But since both Saral and Radhika were from the same place and literally neighbors, they were closer in fact best pals. After graduation both Neil and Radhika were placed in the same company as Saral. He was their team lead now but was more closely working with radhika.

Kyu na kholu darwaza.. Tere baap ka ghar hai...

I mean are you both... ummm. Presentable..

Before he can finish his sentence.. His very half naked friend who was only in his very short boxers has already opened the room's door.

Kya hangama macha rakha hai.. De daru aur ja.. Bhookh lagi hai kuch leke aa...Oh Shit... who r u ... Shit Saral dekh saala Neil ladki leke aaya hai ghar..

And Arjun Mehra banged the door shut on radhika's face. This was the first time Radhika was seeing a nearly naked man in front of her and damn that guy had physique. She knew that Neil and Saral had a third room mate who also worked in their office.He was in HR department. But she had never met him.

Control Radhika, you are here on a mission . Mission to save your friend from being a Devdas in company of another Devdas. And God that stench.That horrible stench shooed up any carnal desires left in her brain and even their room looked horrible. She noticed all types of male garments thrown on floor in their room before the door was banged shut on her face. In the meantime Neil was resolutely avoiding both Arjun and radhika's glare.

Radhika banged the door again.

Saral sir kholiye... u know what. I am sitting right in front of this door until u open. As it is I don't have anything else to do in my life . So why not sit here and stare at this door. And you think u can outrun me, then let me warn u Mr. Saral I have your mothers number on my speed dial . If you don't come out in 1 min I am going to call her.

Neil counter start kar..

Chod na radhika... Monday ko sab office aayenge.. Let me drop u to ur PG... bahut barish ho rahi hai baad mei problem hogi.

ENOUGH. I have even your Moms number on speed dial. Shall I call her too?

No... I mean .. 59, 58 , 57 ...

Edited by maaneet_michi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start Maaneet😊
I have a request . Please do not use light colours for text . It will be hard for the readers.⭐️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome start Maaneet😊

I have a request . Please do not use light colours for text . It will be hard for the readers.⭐️


thnx a lot.. will keep ur feedback in mind for future updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow funny 🤣and amazing i couldnt stop laughing while reading this🤣
please continue it michi
Plz PM me your next update on DYM


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Wow funny 🤣and amazing i couldnt stop laughing while reading this🤣
please continue it michi
Plz PM me your next update on DYM



Thnx for the response..

Will surely PM u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: maaneet_michi


Thnx for the response..

Will surely PM u



When you are going to update next part?

your readers are waiting ...
Edited by Asheley - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! I loved this part!! The concept and did u just apir up saral and nandu 😆
Oops someone just popped out with literally no clothes in front of rads! 😳
It was awesome!!
Continue soon!!

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