Neil SS : And then came you.. [Ch 1 - Page 2 - 16/7/15]

Posted: 10 years ago
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PROLOGUE

I thought that my chance for true love had sailed.
It seemed that a life of mediocrity prevailed.
I just went though the motions, I would only just get by.
At night I'd go to bed alone with tear drops in my eye.

And then came you.
You turned my life around.
And then came you.
You made a smile out of my frown.
And then came you...

Staring at nothing in particular he kept on switching on and then off, the lamp shade. On, then off and then on again.

Lost. A four letter word taunted him. He had lost the most important person in his life. His best friend and love, Samaira, his Sam. He lost her smile, her laugh, her everything, to a man who didn't even loved her.

Its been one year since it all happened.

She had looked so happy after she got her Arjun back. But unknown to her, Arjun wasn't hers. At that time Arjun was only after his revenge. It had pained him everytime he saw Sam and Arjun together. Though Sam was happy but he could see and feel that everything was not right about Arjun.

And in his worry about Sam and doubt about Arjun, he had ignored his other best friend who too was behaving differently, ever since that Lonavala trip ended.

Radhika was behaving very oddly. The way she and Arjun used to look at each other, it was something else, something that he had felt. Something like love. A love full of pain.

It all came crashing when Arjun confessed about his revenge plan and the reason behind it. He had said that he could not continue with it and break Sam's heart because he was in love with Radhika, who showed him the right path.

Though Radhika, like him had seen the sincerity in Arjun's words and accepted his apology but Sam didn't. She refused to forgive the man who shattered her heart. And to avoid it all she ran away again.

Sam left everything and went to London and is now settled there only. He had learnt from Samrat Uncle that she found someone there, who loved her as much as she loved him. Abhigyan Rai. And a month before Sam and Abhigyan got married.

Everybody was happy. Arjun married Radhika and Sam was extremely happy with her husband, her true love.

The only person who was left alone, was him. Neil Malhotra. The guy who only loved and distributed happiness but instead he got a heart break and sadness and loneliness.

Neil stood up, took his car keys and walked out. He needed fresh air. So he drove towards Lovers point. He laughed sadly at the irony of the situation.

The chill of the air welcomed him. Neil took slow strides towards the edge of the cliff. Lovers point. He sighed and sat down, with his feet's left dangling down.

A soft purr like voice brought him out of his thoughts. He looked around and tried to concentrate on the sound and again he heard a soft meow kind of sound.

After searching for a minute or two, he spotted two brightly shinning eyes at the edge if the branch if the tree, which was dangerously bent downwards.

Those eyes belonged to a white colored cat who was hurt. Neil tried to save that cat. He forwarded his hand towards the cat, who looked at him strangely.

Soon he was able to save the hurt cat but he lost his balance and was about to fell down the cliff but thank god, he clutched tightly onto a strong branch if the tree.

"Why the hell this always happens with me!!" Neil roared in utter frustration, as he tried to get back on the safe ground.

"Hey bhgwaan!! I don't want to die like this!! Why bad things happen to me only?? First Sam left and got married to someone else and now this!!" he yelled.

Neil tried again and again but all his tries went in vain. The hurt cat whom he had saved was also making weird sounds. Neil prayed to God for some help and as if God was just waiting for his prayer, Neil saw a hand in front of him.

He looked up and saw a concerned looking girl who had this weird kind of expression on her face and was saying something. But he couldn't decipher what exactly she was saying.

"Ghoorna band karo! Take my hand, leave this branch and try to come up here." said the girl.

Neil shrieked, "Are you mad? If I'll leave this branch I will fall down and most probably die!!"

"Eehhh..you won't!! Trust me! I won't let anything happen to you!"

"Listen woman, you are not SRK of Main Hoon Na! How will you help me!"

"God!! I am not acting, okay!! Just try and apply some common sense! When I'll be holding your hand and pulling you to me then how the hell will you slip away! Quit behaving like a chicken and come hold my hand."

"Fine, but if something happened to me na, I swear my ghost won't leave you anytime soon."

"This is no time to joke. Here.." she forwarded her hand a little more towards Neil, who clutched her hand as tightly as he could. It took them few minutes and lots if physical efforts and Neil was rescued.

But just when Neil was about to stand, still holding that girl's hand, both of them lost their balance and fell on the ground. That girl lying on the ground and Neil over her.

Both of the stared at each other for a minute but it was disturbed by the girl herself, who said, "Ahaan..Am I that gorgeous that you are staring at me while you should thank me for saving your life?"

Neil fumbled and moved away and replied, "What!!?? No!!"

The girl gasped and said, "What what? Am I not pretty?"

Neil stood there, looking at the girl with the most weirdest expressions he could muster.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX


Prologue at Page One

Chapter One at Page Two
Edited by dmegha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome!!!!! But the only thing is you started earlier😭😆😆 and I posted the second chapter. Did you read that?😊
Edited by swaralika - 10 years ago
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaralika

Awesome!!!!! But the only thing is you started earlier😭😆😆 and I posted the second chapter. Did you read that?😊


Glad that you liked the prologue🤗
And na, I haven't read it yet. My lappy was under Dad's arrest😆
Got it just now, posted the SS and now gonna read all my fav. stories plus write an update of my ff's😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow cool megha. at least in ff my neil will be happy.
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravanfan

wow cool megha. at least in ff my neil will be happy.


He will be!😉
Just writing the first chapter!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm glad that Neil is getting his own story and a chance to be happy, even if it's just in your story. Looking forward to reading more!
Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -.serendipity.-

I'm glad that Neil is getting his own story and a chance to be happy, even if it's just in your story. Looking forward to reading more!


Yup😳
He'll be happy in this story😳
Just updating now, thanks for commenting!
Posted: 10 years ago
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Glad that you liked it😃
Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter One - Start Of Something New

The girl gasped and said, "What what? Am I not pretty?"

Neil stood there, looking at the girl with the most weirdest expressions he could muster.

"Don't give me those weird looks. I am pretty and totally a to be "stared at" material! By the way I am Priyanshi and you are?"

Neil was still looking at the girl, Priyanshi who was responding his weird looks by one of her own.

"Hey-ya" Priyanshi drawled as she waved her hand in front of Neil's face.

That brought Neil out of his thoughts. "Kya?" he asked.

"Ae lo! You didn't heard me? I said that I am Priyanshi, tumhaara naam kya hai?"

"Oh.."

"Your name is "Oh"???!! What a unique name!" Priyanshi chirped, interrupting Neil.

"No!!" Neil immediately added. "It's Neil."

Priyanshi grinned as she asked, "Woh chaar bondon waala?"

"Wh..what??" Neil choked out.

Priyanshi slapped his arm lightly and replied "Just like that add..arre woh waali..chaar bondon wala ujala?! That blue liquid they use after washing clothes especially on the white ones..!"

Neil was amused and irritated as well. He was about to give her an equally smart reply but just than his cell phone rang.

It was Radhika aka his Chashni, calling him.

Smiling softly he answered the call and moved a little away from Priyanshi.

"Neil..." he moved his phone a little away from his ear as Radhika shrieked loudly.

"Yaar Chashni..chillao mat! Mujhe sunai deta hai dhang se!"

"Ho kaha tum? Prerna aunty called me and she sounded so worried, where are you exactly? Couldn't you just tell Prerna aunty that you were going somewhere!" Radhika blabbed, concerned about Neil.

"O meri Chashni!..." Neil was interrupted by Arjun's voice. Neil shook his head and chuckled as he heard Arjun say, "She's mine!"

"Arjun!!!" Radhika said in a strict sounding voice. "Aap bhi na! Incorrigible!"

Then followed the sound of Radhika moaning. Shit!! Time to end the call.

Neil fumbled with his words, "Chashni I am all fine. Just going back home. And I am ending the call as I don't want to bleach wash my ears. Bye!"

With a slight shake of his head, Neil turned back, smiling slightly. Somewhere in his heart he was hoping that Priyanshi would still be there but she wasn't. Neither she was there nor there was the cat he had saved.

He looked around but found no one, did he imagined all this? Was this Priyanshi a part of his imagination? With a careless shrug, Neil waved that topic off his mind and went away.

That night as he laid on the bed, his mind was occupied by some amusing thoughts instead of the mundane and sad ones.

Next Morning

Neil keenly watched the every move his Mom made. She hadn't said a word to him since last night, after he returned back home. Sigh. She was still mad at him for what he had done.

"Mommmaaa..."

No response

"Maatae..."

Still no response. His mother just came and placed a plate of pancakes in front of him.

"Matashree..." Neil called her again but only received a jar of maple syrup.

"Maaa...baat karo na! I said sorry na! I won't do it again..pakka!" Neil said as he held his mother's hand.

Still he got no answer. His mom just started venting out her anger and frustration on her share of pancakes.

Neil sighed, "Poor pancakes!!"

This earned him a hard glare from his mother, who stopped murdering the poor pancake and pointed a fork at him. "I am not talking to you!"

"Mom..."

"Meri Maaa!!"

"Meri pyaari mumma!!"

A sob escaped her lips and Neil engulfed her in a hug

"You know how much worried I was! Aage se kabhi aisa kiya na..." Neil rubbed her back lightly.

"Sorry Mom. Actually andhera bohot ho Gaya thha na toh bas ghutan hone lagi thhi. That's why I went out for some air."

Neil's mom broke the hug and cupped his face in her hands, "Neil...son..trust me, one day you will get a girl who will love you unconditionally and will lighten up the dark room of your heart."

Neil didn't replied but just nodded. Long ago he has lost the faith of light being eating the darkness of his life. After all he had lost his one and only love, his Sam to someone else.

Few Kilometers Away

She adjusted the CFL bulb. Her lower lip between her teeth, being chewed on mercilessly, there she stood on the chair fixing the bulb.

She was wearing knee length shorts, loose t-shirt, her hair tied in a loose bun, "Ho Gaya!!" Priyanshi yelled out happily, satisfied with her work as the bulb she was trying to adjust in the lamp, got fixed and now was working.

"Dekha Casper! I fixed it by myself! I rock, don't I?!"

"Wuff!" came a little appreciative bark from Casper, Priyanshi's Chihuahua.

Priyanshi took the little Casper in her arms and went towards her kitchen.

"Juno, Bunny, Browny, Capone!! Come here guys...its breakfast time!"

And just 10 seconds later, voices of tapping of numerous feet's came.

There is front of Priyanshi, now stood her other 4 pets, one still in her arms. Juno, Capone and Casper were her dogs, while Bunny and Browny were her cats. She placed their breakfast bowl in front of them, then went to check on "Blue", the cat she and Mr. Ujala (Neil) had rescued last night.

"Hey sweetheart..you feeling okay?"

A weak meow answered her question. Priyanshi softly caressed Blue's hurt leg.

"Come lets feed you." Priyanshi smiled and started talking to Blue as she walked back towards the kitchen, with Blue in her arms.

"You know Mr. Blue, I named you after that guy who saved you. You remember Mr. Ujala?"

"Meoooww.."

"Cute guy! And a good one too. He risked his life to save yours. Sweet."

"Meeooww.."

"The next time we meet him, we will thank him properly."

Back at Neil's place

"Hiccup..hicc..up..hiccu.p...hic.." Neil hiccuped loudly.

He poured down a glass of water and drank it but still his hiccups weren't ending. He tried other methods too stop the hiccups but he continued hiccuping.

"Hhmm...koi toh hai Jo is waqt badi siddat se tumhe yaad kar raha hai! Tabhi yeh hichkiyan band nahi ho rahi gain!" laughed his mother as Neil dranks another glass of water.

Priyanshi's place

"Hope we will meet soon Mr. Ujala" chirped Priyanshi.

--------To be continued--------

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