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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zurshahkhan

Wow

i am speechless
its awesome
continue soon

Thank you so much! Will try to update tmr.
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Happy days are gonna come!
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4.
Pineapple with a Treacle
"Boinggg!"

"Boinggg!"

"Stop it, please." An irritated and tired female voice spoke from behind.

"Boing! Boing! Boing!!" A girl in her early twenties turned around with the same age good looking guy with a cute expression.

"Boing! Boing! Boing!" she again jumped away from her with the guy.

"Samaira Khanna and Neil Malhotra, freeze!" the voice said. And there they stood, the best of buddies Sam and Neil - Samandar Singh and Idiot.

The girl smiled looking at both her best friends. Mad, she thought.

"Chashni, I am tired. Please say over. PLEASEEE!" Neil gritted though his teeth.

"Only on one condition. You both are going to do what I say. No one will do Boing this and Boing that. Okay?"

"Hmm..Hmm." Both said in their freeze position.

"And, we will go directly to home. It is already night. No more roaming around. You both are already drunk.Okay?"

"Hmm...hmm."

"Fine then. Over!"

"Idiot! Ruuun!" Sam screamed as soon as they were free. And there she went, Chashni, running behind them.

After covering few yards, she found both of them in front of an ice cream shop having some argument with the vendor.

"Idiot, I want orange. "Sam cried.

"No. You will have apple." Neil ordered.

"Neil, stop it." Their Chashni said with a panting voice. "Bhaiya!" she continued giving him the money, "One orange and one apple please."

***

Arjun was fixing the tyre of his car when he saw two people shouting and running like mad. Ignoring them, he had turned his head to continue his work when he heard another shout and turned his head once again to find a young lady running behind them. Although he couldn't see her completely, he deduced that she was about the same age as the other two people. When he saw that she was gone, Arjun again started working upon it.

Ten minutes were over but Arjun couldn't do anything. He was not able to fix a god damn tyre! Frustrated, he called up his driver and started to move ahead while waiting for him to answer the call. It was then when he again saw that lady and the two mad people, this time more clearly, on the ice cream shop fidgeting over something. He looked at the girl whom he saw the last. Wearing a white coloured kurta with blue slacks, she had carried out herself very good, he thought. Neither formal, nor informal. His trance was broken when he saw those pair of eyes staring at him. They looked scared...and confused.

"Hey, Chashni! See, ain't I an apple? Soft from outside, soft from inside." Neil broke her gaze.

"Hmm" she replied with a soft smile.

"And she is an orange! Rough from outside, but soft from inside" he continued only to get a glare from Sam, who too was licking her orange bar.

"And you! You are our CHASHINI JI!!!" Neil screamed with his hands open up in air.

"Our treacle." Sam completed.

Let's go!" Chashini said with a smile. She turned around, only to find that the guy whim she was staring at, was gone. Brushing off the thought, they moved towards her car, parked just a little away from the stall. But a soon as they reached the car, Chashini again saw that same guy, leaning over another car next to her, and looking at his watch after every two seconds. She tilted her head a little to find that one of the tyre was down with some equipment lying beside. "Any problem?" she asked him with concern with Sam and Neil standing behind licking their stcks.

"No. It's fine." Arjun replied. He just couldn't look away from her. She was just so different. Different from her friend who was in a tank top and shorts. She was just so different from everybody else. His eyes were fixed at hers, studying them with concern and precision. Arjun could mark the kohl line beneath them. Other than that, he thought, nothing more was there on her face.

"But, your tyre..." Chashni broke his daydreaming. "Uhh...I've called my driver. He will come." Arjun spoke blankly.

"But sir..."

"Don't you get it?" he increased his voice a little.

"Stop shouting. You are in problem and I'm providing you an option. Come, I'll drop you." She spoke quite offended by his behaviour.

"I am a stranger.

"Hi, I am Radhika Mishra." Chashni spoke waiting for his answer.

"Arjun Mehra."

"See, we are friends now. So come."

"No." and he stormed out of that place not wanting any unwanted feel inside his heart that occurred just now.

"Radhika Mishra..." he mumbled.

"Pineapple!" Radhika laughed with her friends comparing that guy with the fruit.

"Pineapple with a treacle." Neil said while Radhika glared at him.

Silently, the trio drove off to their house.

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Okay, so I've updated chapter 4. I know this is quite boring, so I'm extremely sorry for that. And here as you can see, I've started from a point where Arjun meets Radhika for the first time. The story will now continue from here.

Edited by swaralika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 4 updated! Do comment and tell me how is it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved neil-sam-radhika bonding
waiting to see how the story unfolds
loved the upt
it was not boring
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all!Plz sis do not,I repeat DO NOT CALL SUCH AN AWESOME WORK BORING!!!😡😡😡I found it very intersting.Every chapter does not hv 2 scream ArDhika details.But it was beautifully presented by you.And The Pineapple and Treacle was da perfect pairing too!How do u come up wid such awesum chapter names!😆🤗
I grow old just thinking up da name of a story and OS's too.. 🥺
Okay so it was very intersting.I lykd dt meeting..Waitn for more..EAGERLY..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

First of all!Plz sis do not,I repeat DO NOT CALL SUCH AN AWESOME WORK BORING!!!😡😡😡I found it very intersting.Every chapter does not hv 2 scream ArDhika details.But it was beautifully presented by you.And The Pineapple and Treacle was da perfect pairing too!How do u come up wid such awesum chapter names!😆🤗
I grow old just thinking up da name of a story and OS's too.. 🥺
Okay so it was very intersting.I lykd dt meeting..Waitn for more..EAGERLY..

Thanks a lot Di! It's just that I type the whole chapter and then pick out the most suitable word from it to make the title. But sometimes it is just so exhausting!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: swaralika

Thanks a lot Di! It's just that I type the whole chapter and then pick out the most suitable word from it to make the title. But sometimes it is just so exhausting!!



I know!😆Da hardest part is coming up wid da ryt title!Esp since I first write da title dn da story..So always hv to think and think,and think..🥱😆
But I loved all of urs!🤗Dey rnt corny like mine!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ



I know!😆Da hardest part is coming up wid da ryt title!Esp since I first write da title dn da story..So always hv to think and think,and think..🥱😆
But I loved all of urs!🤗Dey rnt corny like mine!😆

No!!! Your titles are very good. They are just as beautiful as your story. So please!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys, please comment. I would really appreciate it if you can take some time to like and comment about it. Please

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