|| -- Dead: A Radhika and Arjun OS -- ||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello All,
I am new to this forum. Anyways, I saw a small scene of Arjun and Radhika (the car scene) couple of days back while changing the channel. I was hooked. So, I saw most of the episodes to familiarize myself withe story and also to check out all their scenes.

I am extremely choosy about what I watch and often I leave the serial midway because I got bored with the tracks. I hate chewing gum serials... So far I loved this serial. Hopefully we get to watch some exciting story line.

So, here is an OS. This is set after six months, on the verge of Radhika's return to her home town. Will not say more.. enjoy...

Do leave comments and let me know what you think.

Love
MD

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It was six months of joys and tears. The journey which began on the day of that shoot in Rishikesh took me to Mumbai. What a city it was! Full of dreams, hopes and opportunities. And when I arrived, the city just shuddered to accommodate my dreams and hopes too. I just took tiny drop of opportunity from it and the city never complained. The mellow music of the Rishikesh lovingly created by Ganga met the roaring thunder of the Arabian sea, creating a new rhythm. I started singing to its music and dancing to its beats.


Now there is no more singing and no more dance. The music is dead and So am I.

It was six months of friendships and fights. They were the best friends I could hope for, Neil and Sam. What a pair they were! Called me Chashni'. We fought with each other, fought for each other. I did everything I could to protect them, keep harm away from them. Sam always called Neil, an idiot. But she was the biggest of them all. Never saw the love Neil had for her nor she had for him. I did succeed in bringing them together.


Now they are together and I am left alone. The friendship is lost and So am I.


It was six months of love and hate. I hated him from the bottom of my heart and I loved him from the deepest of my soul. I lived the whole life in these months and he was the center of it. Arjun. I tried to pry him away from his fortress of darkness. I lost my light on the way. I was ready to face the world, my family for him. But he was not ready to face his fear. In the end I lost my battle with his demons. To him they were more important than me. I betrayed my fiance, my family for him. And the betrayer got betrayed. What an irony! What a lesson!


Now I have lost my soul and nothing left in me. My heart is shattered and So am I.


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bila_a thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
hi welcome, im gonna res and come back, bit busy right now. hope you enjoy here and see you in the ardhika DT :)
Posted: 10 years ago
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You are an amazing writer! Hats off to you!
I loved the OS, is this it all or r u gonna continue this?
Please!! Please!! Continue this soon, or else I'll die waiting😳
That was a wonderful and amazing piece of work, loved Radhika's pov and the way you described it all is incredible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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fab one shot! that was a very simple & beautiful os!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bila_a

hi welcome, im gonna res and come back, bit busy right now. hope you enjoy here and see you in the ardhika DT :)


Looking forward to your post...😃

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! Nice start. Please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmegha

You are an amazing writer! Hats off to you!

I loved the OS, is this it all or r u gonna continue this?
Please!! Please!! Continue this soon, or else I'll die waiting😳
That was a wonderful and amazing piece of work, loved Radhika's pov and the way you described it all is incredible.


Thanks Megha...😳

Unfortunately this is it...
But I will write different stories...may be with some funny moments... 😃

This was little dark. But all I could think was Radhika will be affected by Arjun's darkness. There is no way around it.

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Huma-

fab one shot! that was a very simple & beautiful os!


Thanks Huma.😊

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Wow! Nice start. Please continue.


Thanks Dear.

But this is it.. I was just imagining what will happen to Radhika after six months.

But I will write more stories. 😊

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow, this is amazingly written. .. *claps* Plz write more..

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