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Posted: 10 years ago
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2 am.. Arjun is in his bed..He is trying hard to sleep but he can't .. "Didn't I come here to take my revenge? then how can I get distracted? Why can't I get her off my mind? " He remembered her beautiful eyes, full of anger still so beautiful! Always challenging him in her own beautiful way.. He remembered how she caught his hands today and how her soft hairs brushed her face ..He can still feel her.. He closed his eyes ..All he could see was her face .. "What's happening with me? " Arjun asked himself ..For the first time in his life someone felt so important to him..more important than all his motives,ambition even More important than his revenge..Deep iinside he knew he was falling hard for this girl-"Radhika"

This is my first post in this forum .. I know it's not even an OS.. Still wanted to write something on Ardhika..I love this two :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved the prologue...do continue soon.
You write really nicely.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love to read... 😳
May be this was incomplete for u but for me it was the best !
I would love to read ur stories...
Please feel free to share ur thoughts,stories ..[>:D>]
I loved ur write up 👏
Pls continue it dear as i wanna know wht gonna happen next 😃

& btw Welcome to the forum dear 🤗
I'm Soni 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plzz write ahead some more would love to read it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SmileySoniKudi

I love to read... 😳
May be this was incomplete for u but for me it was the best !
I would love to read ur stories...
Please feel free to share ur thoughts,stories ..[>:D>]
I loved ur write up 👏
Pls continue it dear as i wanna know wht gonna happen next 😃

& btw Welcome to the forum dear 🤗
I'm Soni 😃


awww..thank u so much dear.. I'm samiha :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That's really good 4 a short story, plz continue 2 write more dear, looking forward. 😉
Edited by rishani77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful,this can happen in show as well ,keep writing I wanna more😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: doubletrouble77


awww..thank u so much dear.. I'm samiha :)


Hello samiha 🤗
Nice to meet u 😃
Waiting for the update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice
do continue
it seems interesting
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome 2 the forum dear, that was a really nice 1, I like how u described Arjun"s feelings. Do write more plz. 😉

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