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Posted: 17 years ago
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ummmmmmmmmmmmwah i love it Attitude03 u saved the day i didnt want this story of love and companionship between Anu and Chathaniya ending up this way. 😭

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Anu is sitting on her bed quietly thinking of Chetaniya. Suddenly, she hears a noise coming from the window. She gets scared thinking its a burgular, so she picks up a perfume bottle from her dresser and tiptoes to the window . She stands beside the window so that whoever is outside the window will not be able to see her . She slowly pushes the cutains aside .. slowly .. very slowly .. her heartbeat growing faster with every second . When the last of the curtain is aside, she springs to the window and is about to hit whoever is there with the perfume bottle, when she freezes. She drops the bottle, her eyes go wide as the camera zooms in on Anu's shocked face . Her legs turn to jello, her mouth feels like its stuffed with cotton, and she feels like theres about a thousand butterflies fluttering in her stomach . She suddenly becomes inarticulate .. she just cant believe that right in front of her own two eyes stands ... !!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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as she stood ther with her big shocked eyes, not believing that the person standing in front of her wuz VED!!!!!!!!.............
With 4 shocked eyes both of them stared at each other wondering wht to say. Atlast sumone breaks the moment of silence. Who else could it be rather than MAYA!!!!!...
She comes inside with big stomping feet and big wide eyes and a mad face, she grabs anu frm her hair and forces her to go and mop the whole house and make food for the whole house. Wht can Anu do other than saying yes for her father's sake.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonikudi1

Hmmm...Vardah, I'm confused about Ved over there 😆 😕



lol didnt noe wht i wuz doing myself😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Daksh again tried to get closer to Anu and her past but didnt have much success. he leaves Anu and her sadness alone and leaves. Anu recollects the times and memories of Chaithaniya saving her everytime sumthing or sumone would hurt,or torchure her. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oye Neeru!......Tusse bade clever-shever niklay yaar! 😆 😛 ..Thanks for the twist ..You really really saved the story! 👏 👏 ..coz someone above me had written that & I had to continue with the marriage 😭 ...Gr8 going!!! 👏 👏 👏 ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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maya cums downstairs again....n yells at her... the kitchen is such a mess wat ru doing sittin in ur room 😡 then she grabs her ear n drags her to the kitchen then she tlks to her in low voice tht if the kitchen is not clean in half an hour ur gunna be punished really bad (like if she hasnt been punished since chetaniya's death 😭 ) then vikram cums in he sees Anu in the kitchen n Maya's hand on her face. then he says Maya wats goin on then Maya quickly moves her hand from ANu's ear to her cheeks n says Vikram luk at her shes already feeling unwell n im tellin her to go n rest but she says no n then Vikram is like Anu sweetie u shud rest. n then Anu nods n leaves but Maya is pissed n badri Kaka thinks tht he cant wait til the day wen Maya is punished for her evilness by Vikram
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Dipti and Verdah for loving my twist. I just couldn't see Anu and Chet separating again. We are not the cruel writers. Don't you agree with me guys? 😉 😉 OK my story ahead is:

Anu is crying in her room lying down on the bed. Vikram comes and put his hand on her forehead. Anu hugs Vikram and both of'em burst into tears. 😭 Badri kaka comes to the room and he says with heavy heart," Vikram babu, Anu was waiting for this day to come in her life since she is born. Chet's death has brought you two closer. She has suffered a lot since she is born...." Anu interrupts," Badri kaka nahin, kuchh nahin kehna, abb bass mujhe kisi se koi shikayat nahin hai. Mujhe mere papa mil gaye. Mujhe koi bhi takleef yaad nahin." Badri kaka still insists and continues," Anu ko iski maa ka pyar nahin mila babu ji. Main aaj chup nahin rahunga. Jab bhi aap bahar jate hain, bibi ji nani aur Ridima iss abhagan par itna julm dhati hain ki main to kya bhagwan bhi rota hoga." Vikram is stunned and says," Aaj ke baad agar Anu ko kisi ne haath bhi lagaya to main uske haath tor doonga". He kisses Anu's forhead and says," Beta tum chupchap kyon yeh sab sehti rahi. Aaj ke baad tum hamesha mere saath rahogi. Aaj ke baad main tumhen ek pal ke liye bhi apni aankhon se ojhal nahin hone doonga." 😭


Edited by attitude03 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww attitude03 i luv ur story damn its 2 gud 👏 made me cry (almost 😆 )

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