'Jeevan Saathi Saath Mein Rahena' ch 20 page 93 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliAnand

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Beautiful update Sanju😛
love dis FF very much 😃
pls continue asap 😊
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Thanks anju 😉
Will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update Sanju

Antara was nervous thinking that Raghu ne kya socha hoga uske diary padkar.. Naughty Raghu chup chup ke dekrahe the apni Antara ko

Pari u r a sweetheart darling. Tumhare bahaane Raghu aur Antara kuch der keliye saath rahenge. Nahi to Raghu office main aur Antara ghar ke kaam main ulje rehte the

Loved the kitchen romance
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

<font color="#009966"><font size="3">Beautiful update Sanju

Antara was nervous thinking that Raghu ne kya socha hoga uske diary padkar.. Naughty Raghu chup chup ke dekrahe the apni Antara ko

Pari u r a sweetheart darling. Tumhare bahaane Raghu aur Antara kuch der keliye saath rahenge. Nahi to Raghu office main aur Antara ghar ke kaam main ulje rehte the

Loved the kitchen romance
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Thanks nethra! 😉
Pari is a sweetheart ❤️
I love her too
In the upcoming chapters she'll play a major role
Stay tuned 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
How come I didn't see this update
OHG sanji u forgot to edit the topic name
Okay getting to the update
The starting was so cute
Princess in her princes arms dreamy
Raghu bhai throw drool Karina u will run out of drool
Ignore the spelling tablet again!
Raghu was watching her dry her hair was so cute
He has fallen justneeds to realize
Pari is cute
Park time yipee
Antara is a shy queen
Shying everywhere after he read her dairy
Raghu was really happy after reading the dairy
Hauee this story is too cute
Can I just give you a big hug for writing this story?? Of course I can hehe
She just fell into his arms uff that was amazing
As usual she cluchted his color
Raghu got worried awww cute hubby
Antara wanted to ask mom whether she can go to the park really?? Lol she is really nervous in front of everyone
Mom said yes as
Raghu will take her out now yipee
Waiting for their honeymoon and confession I can just imagine how it will be
Raghu wants so many things ahem ahem like what? But for now he only wants green tea
Don't worry raghu u will get everything
Drive was awkward silence hmm
Pari and raghu get on so well
Kcute
Breaking news
Raghunath naik and Pari machinder all over the park savdhaan everyone lol
Antara kaul just sitting quietly with a smile plastered on her face watching them

I know I will make a good reporter lol
I loved the update soon much
Love you as well
Pls cont asap and please update tsph
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

How come I didn't see this update

OHG sanji u forgot to edit the topic name
Okay getting to the update
The starting was so cute
Princess in her princes arms dreamy
Raghu bhai throw drool Karina u will run out of drool
Ignore the spelling tablet again!
Raghu was watching her dry her hair was so cute
He has fallen justneeds to realize
Pari is cute
Park time yipee
Antara is a shy queen
Shying everywhere after he read her dairy
Raghu was really happy after reading the dairy
Hauee this story is too cute
Can I just give you a big hug for writing this story?? Of course I can hehe
She just fell into his arms uff that was amazing
As usual she cluchted his color
Raghu got worried awww cute hubby
Antara wanted to ask mom whether she can go to the park really?? Lol she is really nervous in front of everyone
Momw said yes as
Raghu will take her out now yipee
Waiting for their honeymoon and confession I can just imagine how it will be
Raghu wants so many things ahem ahem like what? But for now he only wants green tea
Don't worry raghu u will get everything
Drive was awkward silence hmm
Pari and raghu get on so well
Kcute
Breaking news
Raghunath naik and Pari machinder all over the park savdhaan everyone lol
Antara kaul just sitting quietly with a smile plastered on her face watching them

I know I will make a good reporter lol
I loved the update soon much
Love you as well
Pls cont asap and please update tsph


Wow yaar! ⭐️
Long long comment 😃
I loved it!
Thanks sweeti...love you too...will continue soon. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
plzzz update sanju i am waiting. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
"Jeevan saathi saath me Rahena"
Chapter 6 continued...

"Anta dii aap bhi aao na! Pari screamed. Antara smiled and noded in no. " Aao na Antara! Raghu called. Antara again noded in no. Sun was setting and it was slowly getting dark. Pari came running and grabbed Antara's hand."Chalo na di hum hide and seek kheltay hai. She pulled her towards Raghu. "Pari...mujhey hide and seek khelna nai aatah bacchey. Antara said. " its simple di...chachu will bind fol you. Pari said happily. "Blind fold ,bacchey. Raghu corrected her." Han wahi chachu...di ko sab patah hai. Rantara smiled at her. Raghu took out a hanky and blind folded Antara. Pari jumped and clapped. "Aapko hum dono ko dhoondna hoga Anta dii! Pari sang excitedly. " Chalo...we'll be here you have to find us. Raghu said while moving away from her. Antara started to look for them. Pari hid behind Raghu and giggled. "We are here anta di! Pari screamed from behind Raghu. Raghu Smiled and stood there quietly as antara neared them. Raghu wanted her to touch him so he stood there." Chachu bhaago...Pari said while running to hide behind a tree. Antara was reaching Raghu when she tripped on a piece of wood and was about to tumble down when Raghu caught her hand as his other hand went around her waist. Still unbalanced... They both went down together... Antara hit the ground first then Raghu landed on her petite frame...crushing her down. Antara screamed as they rolled down the slope. Pari giggled and said."how lomantic!! She then got busy with other kids that were there. Rantara finally stopped rolling. "Tum theek ho na? Raghu asked. Antara was breathing heavily and was panicking because Raghu was on top of her and crushing her down. " jee...aap ye rumaal kholye na. Antara said. Raghu was watching her from very close...Antara tried to get up and in the process her lips brushed his. Raghu's eyes widened. Antara embarrassed and all red laid down again and tried to remove the hanky. She left the hanky when Raghu's hand grabbed her both wrist and pinned it on both sides. Antara trembled badly and gulped her saliva. "Please...mujhey kuch dikhayee nai deraha...aap rumaal hataiye na! Antara twisted under his hard frame. Raghu was totally lost in her...he couldn't take his eyes off of her. " aap Chup kiyu ho? "Mujhey ghabrahat horahi hai...rumaal kholo na! Antara was burning with embarrassment. Raghu smiled when Antara said. " you are heavy please utho na! Raghu rolled away reluctantly .Both sat up as Raghu removed his hanky from her eyes. "Tu theek hai na? Asked Raghu as Antara fixed her Saree. Antara who was more red and shy just noded. Raghu was again drowning in her mesmerizing beauty and couldn't take his eyes off of her beautiful flushed face. Antara felt his piercing gaze on her as her beat rose again. " humey Chalna chahiye ...Pari akeli hai. Antara tried to distract him. He blinked and shook his head to come to his senses. He got up and forwarded his hand towards her to help her up. Shyly antara took his hand as Raghu pulled her up. He never let her hand go. Keeping her small hand in his they came up to the playground. Pari came running to them when she saw them coming. "Anta dii! Chachu!!! Raghu picked her up. " bacchey humey Chalna chahiye..its getting late. Raghu said while pulling her cheeks. "Aap dono ka lomance Hogayaa? Pari asked and giggled. Raghu looked at Antara who quickly lowered her gaze. " naughty girl! Raghu tickled her as they headed towards the car. It was dark when they reached the restaurant. A booth was reserved for them."aap dono saath me baytho chachu...Pari akeli baythey gi. Pari said while jumping up on the seat. "Ji meri maa. Raghu said while Pari just giggled. Rantara sat together. They placed their order and listened to Pari the chatter box. " chachu I'm talking to you! App humesha dii ko kiyu gooltey rahetay ho? Pari asked. Raghu quickly looked away...sorry! He said. Antara blushed even more. "Di is peety na chachu? Asked naughty Pari. Raghu looked at blushing Antara and said. " very pretty... Dekhta hun toh bas dekhtey hi rah jaata hun. Raghu said. Antara sucked her breath when Raghu grabbed her hand under the table. Antara tried to break free but Raghu's grip was way too powerful. He squeezed her hand tightly as Antara hissed. "Kiya huwa di? Are you ok? Pari asked. " kuch nai Pari..I'm ok. Antara said. Their food was served . Raghu pulled her hand from under the table and kissed the back of her palm. Shiver ran through her entire body. Pari clapped and giggled. "My chachu and di are in luv!! Pari screamed. Antara choked on her food as Raghu almost spilled the water that he was drinking! " Pari ...aap apna pasta finish Karo na. Antara said. Pari noded and started eating. "Patah nai machmach aur ruksana issko kaysey sambhaltey hongay. Raghu said to Antara. Antara smiled. " she's a bundle of joy. Replied Antara. "Di you love Pari na? Pari asked antara. " Han..I love you...Antara said. "Toh aap meri talaf se chachu ko kuch khilao na! Pari requested. Raghu smiled and gave her high five. " Chalo Chalo khilao mujhey... Soch Kiya rahi hai! Raghu said to Antara. Shy antara took a piece and fed him. Raghu happily ate from her hand."yay! Pari luvs you too di!!! Screamed Pari. "Now its your turn chachu! Pari said. " alright! Raghu excitedly fed her..touching her lips with his fingers. Taking a bite from his hands Antara looked down. Giggling and laughing at pari's funny words...rantara finished their dinner. "Pari is tired and wants to sleep. Pari said to Raghu. " theek hai we'll drop you off ok? Raghu said while putting her on the back seat. Soon Rantara were outside pari's house. Hugging them tight and bidding good byes...Pari went inside the house. Rantara waved to ruksana who was standing by the door. Rantara got in the car and drove away. Raghu drove to a beach. "Ye hum kaha aagay? Antara asked as Raghu parked by the beach. " Chalo dikhata hun. Raghu said while coming the other side and opening the door for her. Antara came out of the car and was amazed at the view under the moonlight. There was a guy selling ice cream . Raghu grabbed Antara's hand and pulled her to the trolley. "Sunye...mujhey ice cream nai khaana I'm too full! Antara said. But Raghu bought it anyways." Chal Aajah...we'll go for a walk. Raghu said. "Ye lo. Raghu said as he gave her the ice cream. " aap nai khaaogay? She asked when she saw only one ice cream. "I'll share with you. He replied. They walked around the beach sharing the ice cream. Shy and embarrassed Antara' had no choice but to eat his jutha. Ice cream spread on Antara's chin. Raghu smiled which didn't go unnoticed by Antara. " aap Hus kiyu rahey hai? Asked shy antara. "Woh ice cream..terey chin par. Raghu said. Antara wiped it but the stubborn ice cream was still there. Raghu cupped her cheek suddenly startling Antara! Scared Antara just stared in his deep dark eyes as it sparkled in the moonlight. Antara's hands came up and held his arms. Raghu lowered his mouth and licked the ice cream from her chin. Sucking her breath with widened eyes Antara ran from there as her body trembled with gooseflesh and butterflies filled belly! " Antara! Raghu called behind her as she hid behind a tree with heavy breath. "Antara he's your husband... Kiyu bhaagti raheti hai humesha unsey door? Her inner voice questioned her. " kiyu ki mujhey sharm aati hai unsey... Aur may ghabraney lagti hun. Antara said in her heart. Suddenly two strong arms tossed her around and she collided with Raghu's hard frame. Her hands rested on his chest as Raghu's hands rested on her hips. Panic stricken Antara just gulped and stared in his eyes. "Woh mayney sab para Joh tumney uss diary me likha thaa...now I know ki uss raat humarey beech Kiya huwa thaa. Raghu said as he tucked her hair behind her ears. Red like plum tomato...Antara lowered her gaze. Raghu kissed her forehead. Antara turned within his arms and rested her forehead on the tree...she just needed to hide her blushed face. Raghu smiled and slide his arms around her waist and rested it on her belly. Electric shocks shot through her. Raghu pulled her on him as her back hit his chest. Raghu gently squeezed her belly..a whimper escaped her lips as her knees went weak on her. " hum... Humey ghar Chalna chahiye.Antara was looking for a way out. She clutched her Saree on both sides as Raghu rested his chin on her shoulder. "Kiyu? Tumey mera saath pasand nai? He asked. " nai aysi baath nai hai. Antara somehow managed to say. "Mom said ki humey honeymoon par jaana chahiye. Raghu whispered on her shoulder. Antara felt her heart will stop beating at any minute. "hum toh apney rishtey ko wakt de rahe hai...hum honeymoon par kayse jaa saktey hai? Antara said. " hum ghoomney toh jaa saktey na?"aur may mom ka kisi baath kabhi bhi taalta nai. Replied Raghu. "Jee. Antara tried to focus but his hot scorching breath was steaming her neck and cheek...tantalizing her. " antara,tu iss tarah mujhsey sharmay gi aur ghabray gi toh hum apney ristey ko kaysey aagay bara payengay? "Rishtey ko aagay baraney ke liye ek dusrey ko jaanna zaruri hai..aur jab bhi may tumarey kareeb aatah hun tu bhaag jaati hai...iss tarah toh humarey rishtey ka kuch nai hosakta. Raghu said while releasing her and turning away and looking up at the moon he ruffled his hair. Antara turned around also. " aap mujhsey naraaz ho? She asked worriedly. Raghu shook his head in no. "May...may koshish karungi I promise. Antara said. Raghu walked to a nearby bench and sat on it. " oh God he seems to be hurt...abh may Kiya karu? Antara thought. She quietly went and sat beside him. Her eyes caught something shiny in his hand." Aapkey haanth me Kiya hai? She asked. Raghu opened his palm. "Ye to meri payal hai Joh Aapney mujhey gift Kiya thaa. Antara was shocked to see her payal in his hands! " Han ..I wanted to put it around your ankle lekin tum toh mujhsey door bhaag rahi ho. Raghu said sadly. "May nai bhagungi...aap pahena dijiye na. Antara said softly. Raghu looked at her beautiful face...Antara smiled. Raghu also smiled and went down on his knee. He gently put her feet on his thigh and lifted her Saree up a little bit just over her ankle and tied the payal. His fingers on her skin was sending shivers in her system. She squeezed her eyes shut when Raghu kissed her ankle. Nervous excitement ran in her belly. Raghu did same thing to her other feet...kissing her ankle he got up and sat beside her..." Thank you!"its beautiful! Antara said as her eyes filled up. Raghu gently pulled her on him as Antara rested her head on his chest ..Both had a smile rooted on their faces as they looked up at the smiling moon. This was the beginning of something beautiful in their life.

Guys comment please. Its 12 midnight in Edmonton Canada and I'm awake to update this. Finally second part is updated. Enjoy... Love to all...mwaah..I'm going to sleep now!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here I come running
Park seemes so fun
Pari is really cute
I love her
Hide and seek time
Actually blindfold time
Poor antara stuck
Raghu wanted her to touch him awww cute
Pari ran away lol
And there
Antara like always tripped over and raghu as always caught her and as usual both went down the slope
This was my favorite part lol
Raghu loves staring at antu lol
He wouldn't remove the hganky
Pined her both hands down uff romantic
Heavy raghu lol not a good comment from antu
Hand in hand we walk up the hill
Park knew lomance would surely happen so she kept herself busy lol
Dinner was amazing
Pari wants a seat to herself so rantara have to sit together Hayes
Raghu grabbed her hganbd again
Omg he kissed it
Pari is getting nbaughty seeing her chachu romaning with his wife
Luv hogaya lol Pari seems to know a lot
M and rukku must have a hard time as we'll
Antu the blushing plkum queen
Always blushing lol
Feed each other
Raghu was well excited for that
I'm surprised her diusnt bite her hand lolzz
Bye Pari
Beach walk is so romantic
Sharing one ice cream awww
Raghu...licked...it...of..her...chin
Omggg that was hawtt
Antu ran away again behind a tree
But raghu finds his princess anywhere
The shy convo between them was awkward
Honeymoon time and m dancing like crazy
Chalk ghoom aao and confess as well
Then we can have a proper honeymoon Hayes can't wait
Anklets and kiss off romantic
Starting of something new that was touchy
Pls cont asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome dear...park scene...so romantic...
raghu so naughty...ek chance nahi chodta...
icecreme scene how can forget...too perfect...
their conversation really very sweet...gud wrk dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww pari chooo sweet ...cute baby ..very smart and fast also..he he..i love her ...each and every movment really very touchly...awesome update dear..

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