P 3 on pg 7 Tere Ishq mein huyi Awaari ...SS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok,
My first SS is here and I can't believe that I have come up with something like this.. I am not the type of person to believe in tragedy but this SS is... full of that feeling.. Its gonna be depressing so warning you all in advance...
PROLOGUE :(ANTARA'S POINT OF VIEW)
Haaye andar hi andar se tooti main, tere Ishq main huyi awaari Main - Antara...

Om Shanti Om ka ek dialogue hain.. "Agar sab kuch theek na ho , toh picture abhi baaki hain mere dost...".. Yeh sab sirf films mein hi accha lagta hain ... Real life mein happy endings never happen.. I mean it !!! Abh ek hi sahaara hain mera, Karan... Aaj tak usse chupa ke rakha hua hain ki uske zindagi mein uske paas sirf uski maa hain.. I take out our photo, the only one which I have and weep my heart out.. "You promised me , then why?" I thought to myself... I dont get a chance to express myself as I dont want Karan to watch me ... He's gone to school now giving me a chance to burst out.. But then I suddenly hear his voice and suddenly wipe my tears.. "Mumma , main aa gaya"said my five year old Karan at the doorstep.. "Shona beta, aa gaya??"I said running out of my room.. "Haan Maa... Maa aapse ek baat poochon.. Hamaari school ki teacher apne maathe pe ek laal tika lagaati hain..Roz laal tika lagaati hain..Aapko patah hain kyun?"said Karan. I knew he was talking about Sindoor... But I couldn't tell him what it was... Otherwise , his childish curiosity will lead him to ask me why his mom doesn't wear it.. "Beta , woh bhagwaan ka tikka hain"I said trying to control my tears... Par yeh aansoon meri strength hain.. It gives me the strength to take revenge from those BAS***DS !!! The demons who snatched my.. my...JAAN from me !!


Ok, I know you might be pretty shocked at this.. Shoot in your comments...
-Prerna
INDEX:
PART 1 - PAGE 3,
PART 2 - PAGE 5


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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first
Preru its so lovely
jaldi start karo
bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i loved the name and the prologue
i am sure this will be a heart breaking SS
bokul thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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does this mean raghu is dead?
i feel so
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RANTARAlovelife

me first
Preru its so lovely
jaldi start karo

Thank you Yashvi ..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations!!! on ur first SS preru...🤗
loved the title too..😳
woww! yaar prologue is full of emotion n feeling of revenge
continue soon dear...
😃
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratzz for new ss
this is really interesting
waiting to read more
cont soon
ankusanu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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one more sad stry.. 😭...
Koi na...bring it on..
anyways grt work...
loved d prologue..
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congo...
starting is very promising ...
since u r writing it i knw agae ki story bhi amazing hogi
So continue soon...

Harshita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

Congo...
starting is very promising ...
since u r writing it i knw agae ki story bhi amazing hogi
So continue soon...

Harshita

Thank you Harshita , really sweet of u :D

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