Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge bhala (DISCONTINUED) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
Tujhe bhi meri story pasand nahi aaya na tabhi tho tune jat se haa kardiya maine jab story discontinue karne ke baare mein sochi tho😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago


Chapter 3

Both shared an eyelock. Dono ek doosre ke aankhon mein khudko dekh rahe the. Nobody was ready to break the trance.

Sound of some animal brought them out of it.

Raghu: Ab utengi yaa mein godh mein utaake lejaavoo

Antara: Haa ha very funny. Uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mein khud utoongi. Antara tried to stand but she could not. Antara's dress & Raghu's chain atak gaye the.

Raghu: Ab kya huwa?

Antara: Dikhaayi nahi de raha hai aapka chain mujhse I mean mere dress se atak gaya hai. She tries to detach but could not succeed.

Raghu was having difficulty as Antara's face was very close to his face. He could not move also. He smiled seeing Antara struggling with chain.

Raghu held her hands. Antara looked at him. Warm tingles ran down their spine. Rehne deejiye. Raghu apne gale se chain utaarke Antara ke gale mein daal detha hai. Jab utarjaaye tho de deejiye mujhe. Ab hume chalna chaahiye. Sab doond rahe honge humhe.

Antara got up. She tried to stand up but fell down holding her leg. Raghu meri pair mein moch aahi hai. Bahut dard ho raha hai. I can't stand or walk.

Raghu ko uski aasoon bardaasht nahi huwa. He helped her to get up by holding her waist from back & put her hands on his shoulder & started walking. Aaraam se chaliye nahi tho dard aur badjaayega.


Dono tent tak pahunch gaye.

Abhi : Arre yaar kaha the tum dono. Hum sab pareshaan ho rahe the.

Raghu: Ye madam gadde mein ghir gayi thi aur inki pair mein moch bhi aagayi thi tho yaha pahuchne mein dher hogayi

Abhi notices Raghu's chain in Antara's neck.

Abhi(in mind) Raghu ki chain Antara ke ghale mein. Ye ho kya raha hai.

Raghu to Antara: Aap yaha tent mein aaraam keejiya mein abhi aathahoon. He came with medicine in his hand.

Raghu: Ye medicine bahut effective hai jald hi aapka dard chala jaayega. He sits down taking her feet on his lap.

Antara: Arre ye tum kyaa kar rahe ho. Mere pair ko kyu choo rahe ho. Aise nahi choothe

Raghu: Aap galat dialogue bol rahi hai. Ye dialogue ek patni apne pati se kehti hai. Na mein aapka pati hoon aur naa aap meri patni. Kyu sahi kaha na maine?

Antara was shocked. (in mind - Ye ladka bhi naa) smiles. Haa sahi kaha tumne

Raghu felt good seeing her smiling. Ab aaraam se so jaahiye. Mein baad mein khaana lekar aajaavonga. Teek hai

Antara: Ok

After some time Antara went outside the tent as her feet was ok now.

Raghu: Arre aap kyu baahar aayi. Maine mana kiya tha naa

Antara: I'm ok Raghu. Ye leejiye aapka chain. Ab khaana kaaye bahut zor ki bhook lagi hai

Raghu (smiles ) and said Ok chaliye

Antara: Aap hasthe huwe bahut cute lagtha hai. Mann kartha hai ki... Raghu turns to her side

Raghu: Kya kartha hai aapka mann

Antara: Kuch nahi. Chalo.

Raghu sleeping his tent. Ye chain pehenneka mann nahi kar raha hai. Antara ke ghale mein kitna fit lag raha tha. Aisa laga ki unke liye hi ye banaya gaya hai.

Abhi : Ye dono ab pehle ki tarah nahi ladthe. I mean dono ko ek doosre ka saath accha lagtha. Dono ek doosre ko dekhkar muskuraathe hai, ek doosre ki parwah karthe hai, ek doosre ka khayaal rakthe hai. Laghta hai un dono ko dost banaane ka mera mission kaamyaab hogaya hai. Thank you God.




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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update di..😃
Raghu is so caring...😳
abhi will do something more to bring them close...waiting fr his action😉
thanks for updating...😃
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow netu di
tune mare baat man le tnx..i love u
pura cmnt reed kar ke de te hu..
give me few mineats
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayee..
raghu antra frinde ban gye..hamare yade ne raghu ko pata hi liya..
tnx to gadde ka jis me antu padi..wow raghu tu kitna cute hai
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Amazing update loved ittt

Thanks hinu😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hiii
i really like this cute story of urs
update soon...
do pm me if possible..

harshita
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Posted: 11 years ago
rantara became friend...
this story is so cute😳
loved it a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago
Cute wala update thaa ye. Loved it very much please continue soon. Mwaah.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

hiii

i really like this cute story of urs
update soon...
do pm me if possible..

harshita

Thanks Harshita. Send me buddy request dear. I'll PM you

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