TERI GALLIYAAN-A gangster s lovestory (last chapter @ PAGE 30) - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

190

Views

11.6k

Users

11

Likes

94

Frequent Posters

jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#11


its lovely u like it
ria..
an ya kya lagta hai vo boy kaun hoga..?
jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: AnjaliRantara

Very funny update Yashvi😃
Loved it
Ans fr ur question is Raghu😳



its lovely u like it..
anji
leat see yore thought was true or not..
I updated tomorrow
ankusanu thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
vry nice yashvi...
keep up d gd work
honeybees22 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nice Yashi
Dear pls proofread it and correct the spelling as its harder to read it :)
Pm me next time also thnks :)
jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Nice Yashi

Dear pls proofread it and correct the spelling as its harder to read it :)

Pm me next time also thnks :)



yup...theek hai..
tnx to reeding..
jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#16
soory I m late but I updated today promish
Nethravathi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Nice update. Eagerly waiting for the next update
jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Nice update. Eagerly waiting for the next update



its lovely..sure I pm u..an hai what s yore name..
jaan..rantara.. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#19

chapter 3


antra was wight fo raghu at chat..see was wighting fo her..same beautiful smail was in her face..raghu was came..raghu tum muje se kuch kahena chate the..antra said..ha vo macach ko lagta hai..ki tune apun ko pati ke aur apun ne tare sath gusse main baat ki..vo apun ko tare ko soryy boll na chahiye..aisa machmach ko lagta hai..raghu said..acha aur tume kya lagta hai..antra said..apun ko lagta hai vo theek kah raha tha..raghu said..ha ok..antra said..vo soory..apun ko ab aur kya bolna tha..raghu said..tum kya work kar ke aye ho tume kya boll na hai..?..antra said..vo apun ko na engalish main kuch boll na hai..raghu said..kya..tum engalish ok boll do..antra said..hai girl pleeah apun bole to me ko soory giveing..raghu said..antra was smailing..raghu look angry..apun ne engalish bola feer bhi tu..raghu said..antra hold raghu s hend an kiss on raghu s chiks..raghu feel wow..raghu looked antra..tum ne jo kaha jo kiya vo koi nahi kar sakta kiae ke liye..antra said..antra apun tare liye kuch laya hai..vo sir pe prise..raghu said..antra was smailing..raghu give the box to antra..antra opin the box its chapal..whot..chapal..raghu i kill u..antra said..raghu was jump an gone..antra was blasing..
antra was came at room noor apa was came..anrra kaun aya tha..kiase baat kar rahi the..noor apa said
kuch nahi apa vo raghu tha..antra said..acha to raghu ne bata diya..noor apa said..kya..antra said..apne pyaar ka ijhaar kar diya..noor apa said..kya noor apa kuch bhi..antra said..hum sab jante hai vo tuje se aur tu use kitna pyaar kar te hai to bata do na..noor apa said..noor apa was gone..antra was smailing..
antra s phone was rung..
hello..antra said
agar aap ko apne papa ki muat ka raaz jan na hai to main rode pe aa jao raghu ko le kar..thet man said
kuan boll raha hai..antra said
the phone was cut..hello..antra said..
ab main kya karu..raghu ko ise time paresaan karna theek nahi hai..antra said

at rode
antra was came..koi hai..antra said..suddanly same shoos saound was came.antra was tern..tum..tum ne muje yaha bula ya..antra said
seti say haan..raghu ko yaha bula na ho to tuje to lana hi hoga na..
nahi..antra was run..are pakdo ise..seti said..antra was run on the eode..an seti s man man was run fo kach antra..antra was run fast see was slep an down on sameone..
hai dreem mar dekho its not raghu..see down on satya..hai pleesh help me..help me..antra said..satya hold antra s hend..an say seti ise kyu bolla ya..satya said..antra pus satya..sorry aap jao..satya said
but satya saheb..seti said..bolla na aap jao..i'll drop u..came with me..satya said..nahi muje aap logo ki help ki jarurat nahi hai..antra said
antra was run an gone..satya look antra how beautiful see was..satya say ab tuje use raghu se larne ak larki ki jarurat padi tu janta hai na..main raghu ae nafrat karta hu..use dard dena chta hu..satya said..satya was gone..
rain was start..antra walk at rode..no one ther..raghu was came..on his bike..yedi itni raat ko tare ko gum ne ka man hua kya..raghu said..antra cant see him..see thughts thet seti use her died papa s name..becoae only raghu..why he use her papa s name..antra lya hua..raghu said..antra looked raghu an give a taightly slep to raghu..her pain full eyse was crying..see only hate thet why aeti use her papa s name..raghu was angry an hold antra s hend..kya hua..raghu said..
antra pus raghu an run on the rode..antra ruko..raghu said..raghu was run..antra s dupta was down on the floor but see cant stop see was run an think abut kasmeer an her papa..see waa faint..raghu hold her..antra antra kya hua..raghu said

pricap
ther waa chay wala on rode..raghu an antra dreenk chay hot chay on rode..
thet chay wala satart redio..suddanly redio was stop..antra start sing..raghu see her an smailing..
Nethravathi thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Ye yedi tu english hindi dono ko milaakar update lik rahi hai. Dono languages milkar kabhi kabhi line samajh mein hi nahi aatha. Teek se likhna😊😊😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".