TERI GALLIYAAN-A gangster s lovestory (last chapter @ PAGE 30) - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Nice update Sanju. Raghu jab bola ki mamji ki wajah se vo Antara ke saath aisa kiya tho mujhe sach mein heart attack de diya tha tumne.

Ab jaan mein jaan aayi.

Aur Raghu ka dialogue - Room mein tu jaa mein aagaya tho😉😉😉


netu tu mera name bhull gye..
I m so angry..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RANTARAlovelife


netu tu mera name bhull gye..
I m so angry..

Ho sorry sorry kya hai na mein Sanju ki story pad rahi thi tho uska naam nikal gaya I'm so sorry. Maaf kar de behna😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Ho sorry sorry kya hai na mein Sanju ki story pad rahi thi tho uska naam nikal gaya I'm so sorry. Maaf kar de behna😊


ak sart par tuje mare sath chit chat kar ne padegy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RANTARAlovelife


ak sart par tuje mare sath chit chat kar ne padegy

Uske liye tho hamesha haazir hoon mein😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
@topic maker...
its been ages i visited this forum and updated my story..
i know u liked my story "piya bawari" and i was glad that u liked the concept..
if u're new here then i would like you that copying someone's else work in ur writing is prohibited on india-forums.. esp when you claim it to be urs..

half of the story of ur chapter 8 is copied from very first chapter of my story "piya bawari".. you have copied the whole scene..
dear, its not a tv show that 2 scenes can be completely similar..
even my writing style is clearly visible in that update...

i am requesting u because u're one of my readers..
so remove all copied content from your update and don't lie to ur readers.. i read following posts to ur update.. n u lied to hina that u wrote everything by ur own...
remove that content by today itself.. n pm me.. or i'll hv to inform the moderators..

-Akki
Edited by DeadDevil - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i read all chapeters to ur FF today its really nice intersting...carry on gud...plzzz contiune
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Posted: 11 years ago
soory his for no update..I m so busy so updated at sonday
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Posted: 11 years ago
soory his for no update..I m so busy so updated at tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry fo no update
but relly update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

chapter 10

morning at mumbhai
raghu was busy in prepretion of noor apa s nikah
raghu: are ankal ji aap kyu paresaan ho rahe hai..muje de do
mama ji say beta tum antra se mill na chate ho..
raghu was shoked..
raghu s mind: apun sapna to nahi dekh raha na
jaa vo ready ho rahi hai..mill le use..mama ji said
mama ji was smailing
raghu came at antu a room
an opin the door..but antra was chenging..
raghu no jao..abhi main cheng kar rahi hu..antra said
raghu bahar gya..
he look the door from out side..an start talking
antra waise agar main andar aa bhi jao to kya..tu kya kar le ge..raghu said
raghu kosish kar ke dekh lo..feer dekh na main kya kar sakte hu..antra said
raghu: acha tu muje chelenge kar rahi hai..dekh main aa jao ga feer mat boll na..
aa kar to dekh..tum aa hi nahi sakte..antra said
antra was smailing
antra down hwr kurti from her sholder..suddanly raghu opin the door an came..antra was blaasing..an hold the dupta
raghu tum ..tum sach main andar aa gye..antra said
tare ko kya laga..apun sirf aise hi boll raha tha..raghu said
theek raghu ab tum jao..antra said
ab apun aa gya to aise hi nahi jaega..apun yahi beth jata hai..raghu said
raghu seet at bad..an antra was blassing..
raghu tum yaha kyu beth gye..main chenge kaise karu..pleesh jao...antra said
antra feel uncomfartebal..antra s eyse was down an antra look to floor..raghu was wake up.an came ro near of antra..he first down antra s dupta an up her kurti on her sholder
antra ne apni ankhe band kar de..an raghu ne antra ke doori bandhi..
antra was smailing
ye hai mari yade..mari yade main sarm se jyada gussa hai..jise apun ko pyaar ho gya..raghu said

machmcah: ruksaana tu ise satya ko kyu le kar ayi hai nikah main?
ruksaana: aaj main satya aur raghu se jaan kar rahu ge ke unke bih main jagda kyu hua..vo kyu ak sosre se nafrat kar te hai..

noor apko ye nikah harsad miya se qubool hai..?
noor apa say qubool hai..
antra lookd raghu an say hume bhi qubool hai..
raghu:antra hamari sadi to ho chuki ab nikah bhi kar le..
harsad miya kya apko noor ke sath nikah qubool hai..?
harsad miya say qubool hai
raghu say slowly apun ko bhi yadi..
acha..antra said
haan..ab dekh tare yeda kya kar ta hai..raghu said
hello..bole to sab ko apun kuch kahena chahta hai..
mamaji apun ko apke yadi se pyaar ho gya hai..raghu said
antra was smailing
bole to apun ki jimdgi main kuch nahi tha..kuch bhi nahi..aaj jindgi hai..ye yade hai to sab hai..
tears was came from raghu s eyse..
apun apke yade ka hath aaj apse mangta hai..raghu said
mamaji say antra..
antra was came to near of raghu
jaa..apne yade ki jindgi ko jindgi bana de..mama ji said
antra was smailing..
antra huq raghu..

satya was shoked..
sayad raghu hi vo hai ye antra jante nahi..aur raghu ne to kasmeer main antra ko dekha hi nahi tha..ab dekho raghu main kya kar ta hu..tari jindgi tuje se kaise soor hoti hai..satya said
ruksaana: satya kah rahe ho..
satya:ruksaana kya main bhi tare hath mang lo..
ruksaana:pahele ye bata do ke tum aur raghu ak dosre se nafrat kyu kar te ho..
satya:aaj tuje sach bata hi de ta hu..chal mare sath
at basti
ruksaana: boll satya
satya: main aur raghu kasmeer gye the..waha hamara guide aman..vo kise larke se pyaar karta tha..vo uske bachpan ke frinde the..par use larki ke liye aman sirf acha frined tha..vo larki antra the..par aman ne antra ke papa ko sadi ke liye mana liya..raghu aman ke house pe tha an main aur aman mounten par the..aman kise taririst grupe ke sath juda hua tha..kasmeer main bahot bomb blaast kar chuka tha..par antra ke liye vo sab chod ne ready tha..vo mounten par sab chod ne hi gya tha..vo kisi daya mai ke liye kaam karta tha..raghu ko pata nahi tha..use time antra ke papa ne sab aun liya..aur vo antra se baat karne jaa rahe the aman ne mr kaul ko bahot samjaya but vo nahi mane..aman ne daya mai se baat ke use din antra ka consirt tha..daya mai an aman ne vaha bom feet karva diya..jise aman antra ko bacha le par use ke papa antra se kuch kahe use pahele hi vo bomb blast main mara jaye.aman ke house par antra ka phone aya..raghu ne phone utha..

FLASEBAKE
antra:aman main tumse sadi nahi kar sakte..tum mare bahot ache frinde ho..mare papa tumse mill ne aa rahe hai tum une sadi ke liye mana kar do
raghu:hai giri i m not aman..vo kahi gya hai..
antra:i m sorry..
aman:raghu..
raghu:amam tare liye phone hai
antra kya hua..aman said
antra:aman main tumse sadi nahi kar sakte..
aman cut the phone
kya hua aman..raghu said
satya:ye jise sadi kar ne wala tha use ke papa ko ise taririst grupe ke bare main pata chal gya..
kya taririst..aman satya kya kah raha hai..raghu said
satya:sach kah raha hu
raghu was shoked..aman juth se riate nahi bante..acha hai ab use ke papa use sach bata de ge..raghu said
nahi aisa nahi hoga..aaj use larki ka consirt hai an waha bomb feet kar diya gya hai..ye antra ko bach le ga aur use ke puse kuch bata de use pahele vo..satya said
satya was smailing
satya tu ise ka sath de raha hai..raghu said
tuje kya..satya said
raghu was angry
raghu give a taigtly punch on satya s face..raghu give taigtly slep on satya s face..
raghu an satya was fight that time aman was gone
aaj se tuje se nafrat ka rista..raghu said
main use kuch nahi hone do ga..raghu said
raghu came at consirt
an start find bomb
antra on the floor
antra hold the guitar an start sing
Paapaa Ki Pari HooN Main All: O O Ho Ho Ho

Mere Liye Jo Banaa Hai, Sun Le JahaaN Se
Chhupaa Hai
Paanaa Mujhe Mushkil Hai, PhooloN Jaisaa Meraa
Dil Hai
Aa Kar Dekh Le, Paapaa Ki Pari HooN Main All: (o
O Ho Ho Ho
: Hey, Mummy Ke Dil Mein, Ik Baat Aayee, Jaldi
Se LaDki Ki Kar Do Sagaai
LaDke Ka Pahle Photo Dikhaayaa, Phir Mujhse
Poochhaa, Pasand Aayaa?
Maine Kahaa, Na Re Na, Na Na Na Na
LaDkaa Jo Dekhne Aayegaa Mujhko, Na Main
SharmaaooNgi, Na Palken JhukaaooNgi
Na MuskuraaooNgi, Na Main RijhaaooNgi, Na Main
Usko Chalke DikhaaooNgi
Chaahe Kahe Vo Mujhse Vaah Vaah Vaah Vaah All:
(o O Ho Ho Ho)
: Mere Liye Jo Banaa Hai, Sun Le JahaaN Se
Chhupaa Hai
Paanaa Mujhe Mushkil Hai, PhooloN Jaisaa Meraa
Dil Hai
Aa Kar Dekh Le, Paapaa Ki Pari HooN Main All: (o
O Ho Ho Ho) -2
Chorus: (It's My World! It's My Life!)
Sab Ki SunooNgi Chorus: Ya Dil Ki KarooNgi Chorus: Ya
: Aise Vaise Ko Main Na ChunooNgi, Maine Se
Kab Se Soch Liyaa Hai
ParkhooNgi Usko, Phir HaaN KarooNgi
Varnaa KahooNgi Usse Jaa Jaa Jaa Jaa
Meraa Jo Hogaa Kuchh Aisaa Hogaa, Jo Pyaar
Bankar Dil Mein Rahegaa
Mummy Ko Meri Samjhegaa Mummy, Paapaa Ko
Mere Paapaa Kahegaa
Phir Main KahooNgi Usse HaaN HaaN HaaN HaaN
All: (o O Ho Ho Ho) -2
Mere Liye Jo Banaa Hai, Sun Le JahaaN Se
Chhupaa Hai
Paanaa Mujhe Mushkil Hai, PhooloN Jaisaa Meraa
Dil Hai
Aa Kar Dekh Le, Paapaa Ki Pari HooN Main, Main
Main Main Main Main
antra: Comeon All Girls Here On Stage Please, Papa's
Darling Daughters Join In

antra s eyse find her papa
mr kaul aa rahe the..raghu find bomb..
muje ise kahi door le jana hoga..raghu said
mr kual ke car se takraya..
mr kaul say beta are u fine
raghu: pleesh help me ise bag ko kahi pahochana jaruri hai..muje main rod pe chod do..
mr kual say ok..
antra ko thosi der baad bata do ga..abhi ise ke help karna jaruri hai..
mr kaul have a same colears bag..

at hospital of mr kaul..
beta ak minint main abhi ata hu..mr kaul said
mr kaul hold the one bag an gone..
raghu:muje jaldi kar na hoga..raghu ne dosra bag utha liya..
an suddanly big bom blast at hospital of mr kaul
raghu was bend down..
nahi vo bom wala bag le kar gye..i m sorry..raghu said
all was loss in one waight smoke..
tears was came from raghu s eyse..
no..no..raghu said


satya:aman raghu bom le kar chala gya..
aman: tu nahi jata vo bom mr kaul ke hi hospital main blaat hua..raghu..wow..

at antra s house
antra:mamaa aap aur papa kyu nahi aye conairt main
antra see the news..
antra down on the floor..
see was loss her life..

FLASEBAKE OVER

ruksaana:raghu miya ki koi galti nahi hai..une nahi pata ke antra ke papa vo bag le kar gye..jise main bom tha..
satya looks antra
antra tum..satya said
tears was become from antra s eyse..
antra was shoked..
Edited by RANTARAlovelife - 11 years ago

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