(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#951

That was beautiful. Raghu Antara ko chod hi nahi raha hai. Usse dar hai ki usse phir se dard shuru na hojaaye. Raghu ka letter aur gift. It was too cute. Raghu ki style tho deewane hai hum. Antara decided to tell her feelings to Raghu. Ab aur intezaar nahi hota next update ke liye

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#952

lovely update ifz..😳
dono yehi soch rhae hain ki pehle kaun confess karega..hehe😆
raghu is so caring ..just love him..😳
finally she decided to confess..hurreyy!!!
thanks fr updating!

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priyanka

@ankusanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#953

awww so cute wala uodate...
both r waiting fr d other to confess..
yede kahi k 😆...
LOVED D UPDATE..dat gift ws also soo cute 😳...
waiting fr nxt chapter...

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Andrea D'Souza (Andy)

@RaNtara4vr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#954

okay here goes mine...😃...finally...

Epi 63:

the convo between RaNtara after d party...in balcony of d boathouse n den in d room...👍🏼...❤️...😳...d indirect confessions...❤️...nd d pendent gift...awesome...👍🏼...👏...😳...

Epi 64:

Haaye...dey slept speaking 2 each othr...😳......

Raghu saying Antu is his pari...😳......

aww...d moment dey spent...☺️...❤️...😳...

dey r getting close...😲...😳...par pakka wala confession kab hoga...🤔...

...lukachupi...awwie...deir childishness...😳......❤️...

...wow...darga visit...👍🏼...nicely drawn emotions...😊...

Epi 65:

Aww...RaNtara together......

oh no d Danger...😳...Antu injured badly...😔...😒...😭...RaNtara in pain...😭...😭...😭...so dis incident was for Antu to realise Love...😳...👍🏼...👏...par tension de diya yaar...

Epi 66:

arey pehle aap pehle aap karte kahin gaadi na chut jaaye......Raghu yede tum hi pehle confess kardo...aur Antu k saath-saath hum bhi mundi ko haan mein hila deinge...😊...😃...

Raghus Care towards Antu...😳...😃...😊...

nd d letter...😳...❤️...Tera aur sirf tera...Raghu"...haaayee......n Antu decides 2 confess...😳...👍🏼...👏...

all d parts beatifully written n cutely n perfectly described emotions...👍🏼...u Yedi Writers Rock...👏...🤗...❤️...😳...☺️...

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Purple

@PurpleSunset

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Posted: 11 years ago

#955

It was an outstanding update guys.👏👏👏

I just loved it.😃

please do update soon.😳

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#956

Episode 67

Antara suddenly winced in pain.. "God , main bhi ek number ki yedi hoon.. Uske pyaar mein itni doob gayi ke yeh bhool gayi ki im bedrested.. Im not supposed to step out of this bed and im here dancing. Bhukto Antara bhukto !! Agar Ragho ko pata chal gaya ki tu aise paaglon jaise naach rahi hain na toh woh tujhe nahi chodega"said Antara to herself.. She was frustrated that she couldn't even dance and express herself !! "My back !! Gracious Lord, forgive me for my stupidity and cure my poor back"said Antara... "Par main Kya karu.. Myjhe pyaar ho gaya hain.. haan pyaar.. aur woh bhi uss yede se..Papa aap sach kehte the, pyaar zindagi ko badal deta hain.. Ek injured patient ko nachwata hain (giggles) ..Pyaar jeene ki wajah ban jaata hain..Uss yede ke pyaar mein maine khudko kho kar ek nayi Antara paya hain.."said Antara..She was smiling her heart out... She then saw her phone ringing... She instantly started smiling.. "God please please please , Raghu ka phone hona chahiye...I want to talk to him"Antara prayed.. She took her phone in her hand to find the call coming from an unknown number.. She frowned.. "Kya bhagwaanji, itna bhi nahi kar sakte the?"she said. "Hello...?"she said.. "Jee main Cornel Ranawat ka security guard bol raha hoon.. Woh actually sahab sirf kuch ghante ke liye shrinagar waapas aaye hain.. Unko kuch urgent kaam tha isliye aur kaam khatam hote hii nikal jayengey.. Agar aap unse milna chahte hain toh aap turant aa jayiye"said the guard... "Abhi.. Accha theek hain. Main abhi aati hoon"said Antara hesitantly.. She called Raghu to inform him about their new task but he didn't receive her call. She once again dialed and the cycle went on for 10 times.. "Yeh ladka kyun nahi utha raha hain phone ?? Mujhe toh jaana padega , Cornel Sahab se abhi nahi mili toh gadbad ho jayegi.. I have to talk to him...Things are getting serious now..Par Raghu ke bina..??"she thought.. She then hesitantly got up with her hand on her back and searched for paper... She decided to write a note to him otherwise he would get angry on her for not informing him where shes going.. She wrote the letter..(in hindi)

"Raghu,

Main Cornel Sahab ke paad gayi hoon... Sorry baba !! Mujhe pata tha ki tum nahi chahte the ki main iss ghar se jaoon par Cornel sirf kuch ghante ke liye apne ghar aaye hain.. Tumhe pata hain na ki unse milna mera kitna zaroori hain...?Main aa jaaongi waapas aur agar main nahi aayi toh tum bhi aa jaana... Pareshaan mat hona... Sorry !!"

She hesitantly left the houseboat inspite of the pain in her back.. "Yeda mujhe isske liye chodega nahi.. Meri toh shahmat aayi hain.. Bhawaanji , bacha lena"said Antara..Raghu on the other hand was having some problem with the network..He was totally engrossed in searching for Rehan. "S**le ku**e , Meri Antara ko tune chua .. Ek baar haat lag gaya na tu, udharich maar daloonga"said Raghu.. He was waiting for that opportunity to kill Rehan..

written by Yashvi and Edited by team.

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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.Suchi.

@.Suchi.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#957

oye hoye!!.antu dancing in joy..😆
"mujhe pyar hua pyar allah miyan..."
lo ho gaya kam..😆
wahn raghu rehan ko dhund rha hai..iske baad antu ko 😆dhundega..hehehe..bechara raghu...😆
hope antu meet colonel uncle😊
nice update yashvi..well done team!😃