(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Part 3
sorry for reviewing so late...i will give individual comments fro all updates...😆

very emotional update...
its so difficult for a person to leave a place where they spend whole childhood..😛.lots of sweet memories are there which we can't forgive.😊.antu is in same state..she is shattered by this incident..u penned it so perfectly niki...hats off to u dear...👏
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

part 4
woww!!!..superb...update Ria..😛
woah!!..antu ko gussa aaya....."eyy!!/...panga nhi lene ka"😈🤣
taklu shetty...aur raghu ki entry firse saath saath bt in different style...😎
then shetty ki pitayi.....very nice very nice...and raghu..is too good yr...angry young man...!!!!..❤️
hmm...first meeting was superb!!..bole to ekdum jhakas hai/...
ab aise hi mast tna tan update dene ka😉...fab work ria 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
part 5

yayy!!..first five epis complete!!!!.bravo girls!!!!!!!...lots of hugs for all of u!!...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


now antu came to know little bit about raghu😊...n mm works fro satya n DM bt true friend of RAghu..😛.sattu n DM ko ullu bnanaa kitna easy hai na...dodno maa-bete..hatele hain!!.🤣.

oye hoye!!!!..raghu staring at antu...😳

its good that both antu n ishu joined their studies...😃

urrgghh!!!!!😡ye mendak itni jaldi aagaya......iski to chutney banega raghu...chipko ,cheap...psycho...antu ko impress krne mein laga hai..!!!..raghu to isko press krdega to directly depress ho jayega!!!..😡
sorry preru control hi nhi hua...

it was rocking update dear...i loved that 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

part 6
very nice update ifz...😛
raghu has such a dark past..aww my cutiee raghu😭..tht DM is such a beep beep beep!!!!..lady she will pay for it!!!.😡
Dr.Kaul has some secrets of DM..story is gripping slowly slowly...😛
u people are really mastermind!!!!..mindblowing update ifzu..n editing team good work!!!👏
tfpm
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
EPISODE 6:
Dekha jaye toh kehte hain bhagwaan ka banaya har cheez khoobsurat hota hain. No wonder, the sun shining bright was adding on to the beauty of this morning. Antara was sleeping peacefully letting a little bit of the sunshine fall on her. Getting disturbed in her sleep by the sunlight she innocently turned to the other side.. She then slowly got up .. She was a little confused by her surrounding. She was expecting herself to be in her big room of her Kashmir mansion but here she was , in a small room in a basti. She then remembered that she was no longer in Kashmir, the place she loved . The place she was emotionally and mentally attached to. She then found her guitar there , which was her memory of Kashmir. After all she used to pursue her passion there, singing..! She took her guitar in her hand and started strumming it.
Valoha Baghbano ,Lo Bahar Rukhshaar
Paida Kar...
Falang Gul Gath Karan Bul Bul
Toothe Samaa , Paida Kar...
She sang the chorus to which she got tears in her eyes. She missed her friend Komal and Nargis, the girls who tolerated her pagalpan !!!But she didn't know that someone was noticing her sing and cry.. There was a man , with baby brown eyes noticing this girl. He was none other than Raghu. Raghu , had just come to check on her . But why? He had met her just a few day ago and so much concern. Sure, he was a man full of kindness who never showed it..Andar se naram bahar se sakt. But still, he was a little bit to concerned. Maybe because he understood the fact that this girl is a seedhi-saadhi girl who was new to the city. Maybe ... But now , he saw her cry.. He saw her strumming the guitar and crying. He wanted to just console her but then he realized that he was hiding behind the curtains and she would get pretty freaked out if she saw him like that. So he went to her balcony and immediately jumped down as soon as she went to the bathroom.

At the breakfast table :
Antara was humming that tune stuck in her head.. She heard it from a person playing the mouth -organ. Infact, she loved the tune so much that she added her own Kashmiri lyrics to it and sang it in the morning. She started smiling thinking about the peaceful tune. "Haaye allah !! Yeh ladkiyan bhi na.. Apne dream boy ke baare me sochte sochte akele mein hi muskuraati rehti hain"said Noor appa. "Appa, main kisi ladke ke baare mein nahi soch rahi hoon. Darsal, woh kal maine kisi ko mouth-organ bajaate hue suna. Woh tune mujhe bahut accha lagta hain. Usi ke baare mein soch rahi thi"said Antara. "Hmmm... Abhi tu itni filmi ho gayi hain!! Allah, aap hi bachao isse"said Noor Appa...
At the garage..
Raghu was at the garage turning a screw and repairing a bike.. He was wearing a black vest looking extremely dashing. Rasika came out in a sleeveless sari exposing more skin and covering less. She came in front of Raghu with a smirk. "Kaisi lag rahi hoon main Raghu?"she said .. "Aap yaha kya kar rahi hain?"he asked."Pehle mere sawaal ka jawaab do"she said. "Dekhiye, aap Dayamayi ke chamche ki biwi ho , phir bhi main aapse boori tarah baat nahi kar raha hoon. Aap uss Manohar ki patni ho jo Dayamayi ke liye kaam karta hain.. Nafrat karta hoon main Dayamayi ya unki kisi chamche se.. Aur aapki toh shaadi ho chuki hain, toh aap baar - baar mujhpar kyun line maarti hain"asked Raghu. "Raghu, agar tum chaho toh main Manohar aur Dayamayi ko chodkar tumhaare paas aa sakti hoon. Phir hum bhaagke shaadi kar lenge"said Rasika."Aap paagal ho? Cheee !! Aap please jao yaha se"Raghu said. "Yeh aap aap kya laga rakha hain. Aap toh mujhe kehna chahiye"said Rasika. "Tum yaha se Jao !Issi waqt !"said Raghu angrily to which Rasika immediately went. "Paagal aurat"he said to himself.

A few hours later..
Raghu was waking in the basti with Machmach. His garage was in the basti .. Plus, due to his repairing shop in the basti , Dayamayi gained a lot of profit . Hence, although she hated Raghu, she had no objection in the placement of his garage..
Raghu then saw Antara walking with an elderly man. Wait, was that man... Oh shit it was Dr.Kaul . The person whom he saved in Kashmir. "Yeh aadmi Antara ke saath kya kar raha hain?"Raghu asked Machmach. "Uss Yedi ka baap hain"Machmach replied.
By Yashvi and editing team..
Edited by abhiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
A realy emotional update.. and first part was really beautiful.. raghu had started stalking antara.. so he had developed softer corner for her allready..
Raghu came to know that dr kaul is antu's dad...
antu also started to admire the mouth organ tune..
good going girls..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
hey rabba raghu n rasika convo 🤣 🤣
yeh rasika bh na 😆...
anyways loved d frst part... ❤️
n finally raghu got to knw bout antaras father 😛
hmmm waiting fr stry to unfold..
grt work yedis 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
it was lovely! Amazing! Fantastic!
4 a momnt i thot i ws watching DDEJ! Seriously!!!
Raghu keeping an eye on Antara😉, Antu humming Raghu's tune😃, Raghu-Rasika convo 🤣 n in d end mm telling Raghu dat Antu is dr.Kaul's daughtr.
Saachi mein loved it! :*
Keep up d gud wrk Yashi n d editing team
Love u all ❤️
Edited by niki28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
loved raghu rasika convo
the tune already connected rantara
fantastic update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome update .
Loved it .
Thxs for the PM .

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