(EPISODE 74 on Pg 146)Do Dil Ek Jaan ..ek baar phir - Page 87

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Hey !! Riyu kabhi choti episode nahi de sakti.. Episode maine likhi hain 😆
Glad u liked it !!
-Prerna

yup mithu ji... maine niche likh diya hain this is written by prerna..😆
kyun? main chota update nahin likh sakti kya???😆
preru u there?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Prerna this was fabulous updet yaar...
To ye planning thi raghu ki...kya baat hai...
Maza aa gaya...sab ko jo dikhta hai wo inn dono ko kyu nahi dikhta...ufff hamare rantara...inn k pyaar ko kisi ki nazar na lage...

Sirf ek baar aao hamare dill main Apni..
Mohobbat dekhne...
Fir lautne ka irada hum tum pe chhod denge...!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy prenea
i have no words for this
really beautiful
lol raghu jealous
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wat a superb work Prerna di , Claps !! 👏👏
Awww , Raghu made Antara's b'day so memorable and also planned so lovely plan , how cute 😃😳
And then they put cake on each others face like small children 😆😛
and then Raghu got jealous and wid attitude said " Manish zara side me hanta " and Antara was also uncomfortable wid Manish as Raghu was watching them 😆😉
and wat a passionate dance of Rantara on Tum Hi Ho and romantic too , just loved it and totally got lost in it 😃😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
poreru.,.. delete ur inbox pms.. it's full...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

poreru.,.. delete ur inbox pms.. it's full...


hai riu koi problame hai kya..I help u
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RANTARAlovelife


hai riu koi problame hai kya..I help u

arey aisi koi baat nahin hain.. preru ki inbox full ho gayi hain.. i can't send her pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians


arey aisi koi baat nahin hain.. preru ki inbox full ho gayi hain.. i can't send her pm..


OK
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mind blowing update Guys
surprise party...huh! 😆
beautifully written...I loved it on the whole.👏
do update asap 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Episode 61

The party slowly came to an end...All off Antara's friends came and wished her again while leaving...Komal and Nargis came up to Antara and placed a kiss on her cheeks...

K & N: Happy Birthday Babe..Once Again...We Love You And always Will Do...

Antara: I Love You Too...

She said hugging them... Slowly everyone left...Antara was on cloud nine...She was so happy and cheerful. The cause of her all happiness was only Raghu...She didn't know how to show her gratitude to him and thank him for everything...Not only for His care for her but also coming into her life

Raghu came back into the boat house after walking everyone out the door...He looked around trying to find Antara but of no use...She wasn't there...He walked over to her room and peeped in...

Raghu: Yaha bhi nahi hai?..Kaha giy yeh ladki?..

Raghu searched each corner of the house boat but couldn't find Antara. He got worried..There was one place left to search...The Roof top of the houseboat...

Raghu slowly walked through the door and saw Antara looking at the night sky with a warm smile...Her arms were wrapped around herself slightly hugging her...Raghu slowly walked up to her and stood next to her...

Raghu: Kya kar rahi hai?..

Antara: Main Sitaro Sey baat kar rahiy thiy..

Raghu: Ek baat puchu?..tu asiay ajeeb gareeb harkatay kyu karti rehtiy hai?.. jaisay Sitaro sey baat karnah aur Phool sey baat karnah...Iski kya zarrorat hai jab ek hata kata ameer aadmi hai teray paas?

Antara smiled at him...

Antara: Tum nahi samjo gay...

Raghu: Kyu nahi samju gah?...

Antara: Kyuki mujhey pata hai ki abb main yaha loat kay nahi aao giy..Yeh meray mission kay baad mujhey phir Mumbai lotnah hogah...Waha yeh sitaray aur yeh phool nahi milay gay...Abb puri zindagi inka bina katni hogiy...Inn may hi meri jaan hai...Raghu may shrinagar sey bohat pyaar karti hu...Bhaot pyaar...

Raghu: Aur main tujhsey..Raghu mumbled...

Antara: Kuch kaha tumnay?...

Raghu: Nahi apun kya kahega?...Teri bak bak express rukay giy tabhi main kuch keh pao gah...Ek baat batao tujhey..yeh sirf tera mission nah hai Hamarah hai..Samji..ya.. samjao?..

Antara: Samjao..Antara said folding her arms..giving him her sherni glare...

Raghu: samjao?..Soch leh Miss Kaul...Baad main pich tana mat...he said moving forward

Antara: Kya kar lo gay...Taking steps back...

Their glare continued as Antara's back hit the wall...With Raghu's arms blocking her from either side...

Raghu: Abhi bata tah hu kya kar luh gah...

He lifted his Hands and started tickling her...That's when began World War 3...Raghu tickled Antara while Antara tickled Raghu...Antara punched Raghu's shoulder as they both laughed to their hearts content...

Antara: Raghu...Tumnay bhi kabhi to sitaro sey baat kiy hogi...

Antara could see a sudden sadness in his eyes...Raghu slowly realised her from his cage and walked away and looked at the stars...Antara walked to him and slowly squeezed his shoulder...

Antara: kya huwa Raghu?..Kuch galat keh diya?...Sorry Raghu...

Raghu: Miss Kaul..Aisi koi baat nahi hai..Wo apun bhi Sitaro sey baat karta hotah thah...Apnay ma baap sey..Wo bhi abb sitaray hi hai...Bappa kay paas...

Antara Could understand how he must be feeling..as she was too this close to losing her father...Antara slowly slid her hand into Raghu's as their fingers tangled...

Antara: I'm sorry Raghu...

Raghu: Miss Kaul tu maafi kyu maang rahiy hai?...

He turned to Antara and took her other hand in his grip too...

Raghu: Miss Kaul tujhey pata hai ki Bachpan main..Apun kya kartah thah?..

Antara: Kya???

Raghu: Apun apni bed kay upar paper stars lagtta hotah thah...Aur jab bhi main sota thah..aisah lagtah thah ki meray ma baap meray paas hi thay...

Antara smiled at Raghu's innocence...

Antara: Raghu..Tumney meray liyay kya kya kiya hai...Aur main..Mainay ek cheez bhi tumharay liyay mahi kiy...

Raghu: Miss Kaul kya bakwas kar rahiy hai..Apun nay tujhey pehli bhi bataya hai ki tu Apun ki zindigay kay liya kya mainay raktiy hai...tunay Apun ki zindigay sey saara andara aur Gaam nikala hai..Aur khushiya sey bhaar diya hai...

Antara's heart skipped a beat...Again she felt her heart beat go uneven;

Antara: Raghu..main tumharay liyay kuch kar nah chatiy hu..Kuch bhi...main tumhari ek kawaish pura karna chatiy hu..Ek kawaish batao joo main pura kar sakkun..

Raghu just smiled...

Raghu: Miss Kaul Tujhay yaad hai jab tu apun seu jail main milnay aaye thiy..Tab apun sey tumsey kya pucha thah?...

Antara tried remembering...That's when it hit her...'Tujhsey tera dil mang raha hoon, de payegi?!' She remembered him asking her for her heart...Her eyes widened remembering about the moment. She looked towards his smiling face with amused expreession.


written by ifza

Edited by ifians - 11 years ago

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