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Posted: 10 years ago
waah riu ji banner is awesome... 😊
rantara saath saath... sayad train main hai...😕
par gusse mein...
waiting plz update asap...😊
Edited by Komali14 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: salini143

wu la la, what a banner😳😳

banner me raghu aur antara gusse me lag raye hai😉😉
iska matlab dono me kuch ladayi honi wali hai😲😲
I like raghu in angry young man😳😳
so update soon

thx😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Komali14

waah riu ji banner is awesome... 😊
rantara saath saath... sayad train main hai...😕
par gusse mein...
waiting plz update asap...😊

thx😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 19


Part 1

Antara's POV...

The train was whistling its last alarms before leaving the platform. I was standing near the crowded door as all seats were occupied in that bogy. I was thinking hard about what I saw just a moment ago. Aman Sir!! Was he really him or I missed him with someone else. Nope, I saw him clear cut. It was him!! But his behavior was so weird and that attire! Why a business tycoon like him would prefer to fetch that kind of look?! He almost looked like some Fakir!! I didn't know why but it seemed too odd for me. I knew each and every man had their own choice but somehow I couldn't omit the image of Aman Sir's image from my mind. Should I ask him on the next day that if he was present in the station?!

I was thinking hard looking outside the door. The huge crowd was so suffocating sometimes. But what to say, it was part of mumbai's daily life. The train just started to move when I saw a bag flying inside the door and bumped on the floor. I got startled along the man standing around me. Some of them expressed their irritation through their eyes and low buzzes. My eyes moved towards the door and I saw a girl, mostly of my age, trying to rush inside the train. She was holding the rod near the door and was trying to get inside the train. My eyes widened looking at her state. She was having a bit difficulty so I caught her hand and helped her to get in. "hayee allah!!" she huffed holding the railing. "Hey are you ok?!" I asked her. She looked towards me and let out her cute wide grin assuring that she was ok. Her smile had such a thing which made me smile back to her. "Shukriya!!" she said gratefully. "Woo too sab thik hain.. but tum aise train kyun char rahi thi... god forbid agar kuch accident hoo jata too?!" I asked a bit worriedly. "Mumbai mein nayi hoo kya?!! Warna tumhe pata hota... yahan kee local trains mein log aise hii charte hain!!" she informed still having that lively grin, "Waisey mujhe too laga tha DDLJ kee shahrukh ke tarah koi handsome munda apna hath bara dega. But chalo... next time dekhte hain." she said almost cracking me up. "What?!!" I asked as my eye popped out of my eyes. She giggled hard and I couldn't afford to join her. she looked towards her bag still on the floor. "too aap yahan hain?!" she said holding her waist looking towards her bag as if she was talking to it. Arranging her dupatta and long pyre she lifted the bag from the floor. "Aaj aap ne kisssi kee garden to nahin tore naa?!! Dekhiye... aap kee wajah se humein baahut musibat jhelni parti hain. arey girna bhi hain too saubat aur tehzib se giriye naa..." She said almost scolding the poor bag in her hand. I almost started to laugh looking at her antics. Such a funny girl she appeared to be at first. "Haso mat..." she rolled her eyes comically. "Janab ke tebar dekhe nahin tumne... pata hain pichle mahine kisi uncle ke sar pe jaa kar gira tha... woo too almost upar jate jate rahe gaye... allah kaa sukar hain kii unhone humein murder case se bacha liya... lekin yee nikamma fir bhi buzz nahin ayya... fir kuch hafte pahele hii ek aunty kee kandhe mein jaa kee gira. Aunty koo tha spondylosis... Aur janab koo unka hii kandha mila land karne kee liye... Lekin kamal kii baat yee hain kii aaunty ki spondylosis thik hoo gayi... lekin kya karein, aunty ke sar pee gussa char gaya tha.. wajay thanks kahene kii suna di mujhe... aur bimari khatam hone kee baat too unka josh aur bhi bar gaya tha." She said poorly and I was silently laughing at her side. "Too tum aise train mein charti kyun ho?!! Time pe station nahin aa pati hoo kya?!" I asked her feeling confused a bit. "Abb kya kahein... inn lattaur kee bus walo yaa bus koo pata nahin kya problem hain! Jis din bhi main lattaur se Mumbai central ki bus pakarti hoon... ussi din bus koo yaa bus driver koo problem hoo jati hain... kabhi bus kaa tire puncture hoo jati hain, too kabhi engine garam hoo jati hain... kabhi bich raste driver kaa pet khrap hoo jati hain... wagera wagera... too har waqt beach raste see train pakar nee ke liye station mein aa naa parta hain... station mein atii hoon too kya dikhayi deta hain... joo train har din kam se kam adha ghanta late see chalta hain ussi train koo bhi uss din sahi waqt mein anna hain aur jana bhi hain... too tab aur kya kareein...ddlj ke raj simran kii tarah dauro train ke piche agar kismat se koi raj tumhe train ke andar khinch le... lekin meeri to pura tragic story chal rahi hain.. raj too kya, usska duplicate bhi nahin mila." She said pouting. "Sorry... maine aaj bhi tumhara sapna tor diya." I said smiling a bit. "Arey koi nahin.. kahan naa next time dekh lengey... waisey bhi mujhe pata hain agey bhi mujhe aaise hii daur naa parega..Waisey bhi Mumbai aur lattaur ke sabhi logon koo too abtak pata chal gaya hoga Ruksana begum kee sath lattuar kee bus kii ekdum purani dushmani hain." she said with a bit saddened tone. "Hmm..." I just buzzed. Such a drama queen but still there was such innocence in her attitude which never let you feel annoyed by her antics. She continued to blabber as I silently listened. After some moment when she understood that I was all silent she felt a bit embarrassed. "Sorry, kahin main tumhe apni baton se pareshan too nahin kar rahi hoon?!" she asked apologetically. "Not at all, actually kissi maahan insaan nee kahan hain kii agar koi nonstop bata karein too uske sath aisa koi rahena chahiye joo chuochap uski baat sune... akhir receiver acha naa hoo too transmitter bhi bigar jati hain." I stated simply. "Kya?!!!" She looked at me towards unbelievable eyes and then burst into laughter along with me. "Waisey main jaan sakti hoon woo mahan insaan kaun hain?!!" she asked. "Mere pappa!!" I said smiling gently. She also smiled. "Arey dekho... itni der see baat kar rahi hoon par mine tumhara naam bhi nahin pucha.. main bhi pagal hoon..." she said biting her tongue. "Woo tum..." before she could proceed further, I said, "Antara!!" I answered gently. "Antara... Matalab aisa koi jissey koi door nahin rahe sakti!!... someone from whom no one can get far!!" she said with a huge grin. "Is that so?! Even I didn't know about this meaning." I said curiously. "Bilkul...waisey naam too tumhara bahut hii mitha hain. Kisne rakha?!" she asked all curiously. "meri nani nee rakha tha.. waisey aap kaa naam bhi kafi acha hain ruksana jii.." I said smiling. "Haye allah.."she seemed shocked, "Tuhe mera naam kaise pata?!" she asked. "Tum ne hi to kahan kuch der pahele... ki ruksana begum aur lattaur ke bus ka purani dushani hain!" I said smiling. She looked towards me for a while with bewildered eyes and then we both busted into laughter. As the burst saturated she said, "Hey allah. Mujhe too solely ki bassanti jaisi feeling aa rahi hain." She said in her chirpy voice. "So am I lady amitabh bachan?!" I asked smiling. "Tum to bare funny ho.. kaha raheti hoo?! Zarror iss sahar mein nayi ho." she said. "Hmmm.. tumhee kaise patah?!" I asked with a frown. "Asalmein joo bahut dino se Mumbai me rahete hain unmein iss sahar kaa ek ajib saa chap par jata hain... woo kya kahete hain.. haan, Mumbai chap... Tumpe woo chap abhitak nahin dikh raha hain." She said grinning."Hmmm.. interesting!! Waisey sahi kahan tumne.. bas ek hafte huye hain mujhe Mumbai ayein huye." I confirmed her. As the trains proceed through the track we continued our lively chat. We didn't even remember when the time passed like that. She asked me that where I was going. As I named the place her face glowed, "Arey main bhi too usi station mein utar rahi hoon... Chalo... aaj bus bigarne ke baad, train ke piche daurne ke baad kuch too acha huya. Ek achi dost mil gayi mujhe... Kya kaheti hoo?!" she said stretching her hands to me. "Bilkul.." I smiled joining my hand with her. A bright smile escaped from our lips as the warm rays of evening sun washed upon us. As the train arrived at a station near thane, suddenly we heard a chaos near the door and two boys moved inside our boggy almost pushing an elderly man. "Arey dekhayi nahin deta kya?!" The old man said in irritation. Two odd looking boys grinned nastily to that elderly man and said, "Uncle, dikhayi kaise dega... aap nee chasma kharidke kahan diya..." even their voice seemed so ugly. "Mar gaye.." ruksana said worriedly looking to those two boys. "Kya huya?!!" I asked he curiously. She neared me and said in low voice, "Dekh rah hoo un dono larke koo?! Mumbai sahar ke bahut bare gundey hai shetty, ussi ke bhai hain yee dono... Humesha train mein logo ko parshan karte rahete hain. Aur badkismati se aaj woo log issi train mein chare hain." Ruksana said with worried voice. I saw how they were disturbing an irritating other passengers. When passenger were showing irritation they were just grinning nastily and using abusive words. "What the?!! Koi kuch kahe kyun nahin raha hain in dono koo?!" I said looking towards two boys. "Kaise kuch kahegey log?! Sab darte hain us shetty se... agar koi kuch kahega inn logo koo... shetty nahin chorega inhe." Ruksana informed me. I saw one of the boys standing at ruksana's side. "Oye hoye!! Patakha!!!" The guy whistled looking immoderately towards us. The greedy eyes of those boys hardened my jaw and at that moment I decided to teach those loathsome people a lesson. Rukksana almost cringed at my side. That nasty looking boys grinned looking at her and suddenly was about to fall on ruksana and I saw how he was ting to touch ruksana abusively. And at a popint when the train jerked at a joint the guy got a chance and was almost about to invoke his hand inside her cloth but I dragged ruksana at that instant and the guy hit the rod. "Ouch!!" He groaned and looked towards me with a bit hard eyes as I didn't let her succeed in his plan. "Kya hain?!! Thik se khare nahin hoo paa rahe hain kya?!!" I said loudly looking towards the boy. All passengers face almost snapped towards me as I said those words. The boy seemed amused for a while and then let out that same nasty grin. "Arey madam.. Mumbai ke local train mein kabhi nahin gayi hain kya?! Itna hilta hain... thik se khare kaise rahengey... iss liye ulat gaya..." he said shamelessly. "Antara nahin!!.." Ruksana indicated me to stay quite. I clearly understood the intension of that boy. I saw how many times he was purposely trying to touch ruksana in abusive manner. How his greedy eyes were nastily watching n her top to bottom. But no one was trying to stop him, not even trying to say anything against him. My head boiled up at a point. "Tum idhar aao." I hold ruksana's hand and told her to stand at my other side. "Antara nahin!!" she said denying. "Daro mat... tum bas aa jao.." I almost pushed me at my other side and stood at her place. That goon's loathsome eyes gauzed me and that greedy grin spread on his face. "Dekh kaluya, bakhri khud aa gayi halal hone." He said towards his companion who also laughed along with her. I heard rukana's fearful gasps from my side. I stood silently as I saw he was nearing me in the same manner. My hand balled into feast. A superfast train passed at the side of our local train when his nasty face neared my face. I instantly lifted my hand and slapped directly at his face. The sound seemed reflecting at the boggy when I heard some fearful low gasps from every side. Ruksana hold my hand from other side. I observed how that man was looking towards me with his shocked eyes rubbing his chick where I printed my all fingers. I smirked and said, "sorry.. woo kya hain naa... train mein itni jerking hoo rahi hain kii thik see khare hii nahin hoo paa rahe hain... iss liye galti se mera haat aap ke galo pee land hoo gaya.." as I finished the words I saw his eyes getting hard. As he looked silently for a while towards me, his eyes got dangerously black. He was not in the mode of flirt anymore. "Teri itni himmat!!..." she grabbed my forearm and dragged me forcefully towards him. I continued to look towards his face with silent hard eyes. "Choroo ussey... chorro!!" Ruksana grabbed my other hand and was trying to free myself from that guys hold. But he was too strong. Every passenger's fearful eyes pointed towards us. That man squeezed my wrist painfully and I greeted my teeth to bear the pain. "Pata hain kiss pe hath uthaya tune?! Jaanti hain humlog kaun hain?!" he said in his poisonous tone. "Bilkul jaanti hoon..." I said shutting him up, "Aap unhi lossers mein se ek hoo jinn logon kii wajah see aaj India kii har sahar mein larki oo kaa bahar nikalna mushkil hoo gaya hain.. Train mein, bus mein.. kahin bhi larki dekhi too chance lena shuru... Kya sochtey hoo aap log?! Humesha aisa hii chalta rahega aur humlog kabhi protest nahin karengey?!" my voice was increasing time by time. "Eee mooh bandh kar apna larki.. Hath tor dunga agar agey kuch bhi kahan too!!" he threatened me holding my arm more tightly. "Tor doo... shauk se tor doo, iss kee siwah aur kuch kar bhi kya sakte hoo aap?! Hath toroge, payar toroge, agar uss sey bhi baat nahin bani too sayad train se dhakka maar ke bahar faank dengey... Kyun?!!" I answered back without fearing a bit. "Antara chup karo!!" Ruksana said from my behind. Still she was clutching my arms fearfully. "Nahin ruksana!! Chup nahin rahungi main... Karne doo inhe joo yee chahte hain... Galti inki nahin hain, dekhon inn logon koo joo humare aas pass khare hain.." I moved my eyes towards all the people who were silently watching the drama. "Itne sare log khare hain par kissi nee kuch kahan? Nahin!! Bas sab khare khare tamasha dekh rahe hain. Kyun darte hain sab inse... Sirf iss liye kii inke upar kissi powerful person kaa influence hain!! Log kyun bhool jatein kii hum public hii inn logon koo power dete hain aur hum chahein too unse woo power chin bhi sakte hain!! Par nahin.. sab darte hain!! Akhon kee samne dekhte hain sab kuch par kuch bhi nahin kar pate.." As I said those words, my eyes welded up in tears. Just because of those kinds people DM and other powerful antisocial personalities had that much powers. Their fear, their weakness, these all were used by those greedy criminals. Some of the middle aged man who were standing at our side bend their heads in shamefulness as I looked towards them hard eyes. if they wanted they could defend but they wouldn't, I knew that. Ruksana was dumbfounded by my words. "Eee larki bhasan dena bandh kar.." that kaluya guy came forward and warned me pointing my fingers to me. Still I didn't stop. "Sabse bari hayrani ki baat kya hain jaante hoo aap log?!" I again looked towards the crowd, "Iss train ki boggy mein jitney sare admi hain uss sey bhi jyada aurat hain. Aap logon ke akhon ke samne ek larki koo aise threat kiya jata hain... uss ke sath badtamizi kiya jaata hain... aur aap log bhi inn mardon ke tarah chupchap piche piche dekh rahe hain. Aaj mere sath hoo raha hain, ruksana ke sath hoo raha hain kaal sayad aap ke sath hoga. Itna kuch dekhne kee baad bhi aap log chupchap kaise dekh sakte hain?! Ek larki hoo kar dusri larki pe injustice hote aap chupchap kaise dekh rahe hain?!" I said loudly out of breath. I didn't even know what I was doing but I couldn't control myself. It was my first outburst after my families death, my wounded heart scream against those peoples who killed my family, to those people who supported them, to everyone who was associated with the crime. I knew that I might be in great trouble after that, but I didn't care anymore. "Eee bahut bol loya tune... abb teri zabar zabar koo bandh karna parega..." the man who was holding my wrist tightly said with mad voice, "Bahut sauk hain naa, train se bahar fikwa dena chahti hain... thik hain, abb teri woo mang bhi puri kar dete hain.. yee kaluya pakar issey.." the man ordered and kaluya came forward to grab me. But before he could reach me, the heavyweight military print bag of ruksana landed on his shoulder and he was grounded with painful sound. I was shocked and while both me and my captivator looked towards ruksana. She was holding her waist looking towards kaluya whi seemed in really bad condition. "Khabardar meri saheli koo hath lagya too!!" ruksana said throwing her fiery gaze towards kaluya. "Bhoja mere koo uthal!!" Kaluya groaned. The man who was holding me, left my hand and bend on the floor worriedly. Ruksana quickly hold my hand and asked if I was ok. I just nodded saying yes. "Eee kaluya.. kya huya tujhe?!!" The guy bhoja lifted him up and asked. "Abey garden ghuma dii s**I nee!! Itna bhari bag joo gira diya mere pee too kya hoga?!" Kaluya answered. They both looked angrily towards us and was about to attack but at that moment, suddenly from nowehere, two sandals appeared floating in the air and directly hit on bhoja and kaluya's face. They both were stunned and looked towards the sandals with wide eyes. a middle aged woman came out from the crowd and looked angrily to bhoja and kaluya.

part 2 at below.. please scroll down to read😊


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Part 2

"Arey aunty!!" ruksana's eyes pooped out from her eyehole. "Kya?!!" I threw and questionable gaze towards ruksana. "Arey yee wohi aunty hain.. spondiolysis wali!!" she informed. "really?!" I looked towards aunty who was grabbing her sandals from ground. "Nalayakon.." she said angrily, "Larki koo hath lagata hain?!! Aaj dikhati hoon tujhe... Arey sare aadmi log... churiyan paheno churiya.." she looked towards the men who were standing around. "Saram nahin atti, tumhari beti ke umar kee ek larki kee sath bura suloop kar rahe hain aur tum log aise chup chap dekh rahe hoo?! Par hum chup nahin rahene wale samjhe aap log?!" aunty just finished the words and she moved towards those two who were on the floor fixing their shocked eyes towards auty, as aunty hit in their face with her sandals in hand I saw all other lady passengers of that boggy coming out from crowd holding their sandals in hand and surrounded those two. After some moments we couldn't even see those two and only could hear their painful groan. All the ladies were charging on them with their sandals and even the men came forward to join their hands. those two simple faced a perfect public ki dhulayi and me and ruksana were witnessing the scene from a side with wide eyes. I didn't know that my words would affect like that. As the station came an elderly person came and stopped the mad public and they calmed down. As the crowd got a bit clearer we saw kaluya and bhoja on the floor in really bad condition. Their clothes were tore apart and they were all covered by bruises and wounds. Some of them were bleeding also. Bhoja was weeping his bloods from the corner of lips giving poisonous gaze towards me. I just smirked to him. Some women were still not tired of beating those two. It felt like they were letting out their aggression which were buried deep inside their heart. The elderly lady, whom ruksana called aunty, came forward and hold our hand, "Thik hoo naa tum dono?!!" She asked in concern. We nodded assuring her and she looked towards bhoja and kaluya with disgraceful eyes. "Acha huya, sabak mil gayi aaj in logon koo. Warna pata nahin aur kya kya karta!!" She was still angry. "Aunty jii aap kaa kandha kaisa hain?!" Ruksana asked. Aunty smiled and pinched on ruku's chick lovingly. "Thank you aunty... agar aaj aap samne nahin atein too.." I thanked her. "Mujhe thanks mat kaho... Iss thanks kee hakdaar too tum dono hoo." She smiled looking towards us and we smiled back. After that, so many things happened in quite few times which I didn't even remember fully. First of all some of GRPs (GOVT railway police) appeared and freed bhoja and kaluya from the aggression of public. They took them with him to investigate and even we all had to go with them. Then polices from local police station visited the spot. They asked us about the incident and me, aunty and ruksana described everything. I didn't know from where, some media peoples arrived at the spot to cover the incident. The whole environment of the station was quite tempted up. We again had to explain the whole incident to media as well. After so many hue and cry, at last local police took bhoja and kaluya in their custody due to the pressure of public and media. While police were taking bhoja and kaluya out of the station they bypassed us. Both of them were chained. Bhoja looked directly towards me with reddened hard gaze. He stopped for a while and said, "Do din mein bahar nikal aunga... Tab sara hisaab chukta kar lega tujhse larki... iss maar koo nahin bhoolengey humlog!!... Shetty bhai, nahin chorega tum dono koo..." His threatening cold voice made ruksana gasp in fear. I hold her hand tightly and looked back towards bhoja and kaluya who were going away with force. The cold glance they threw on me gave me clear alert in mind. I understood that they wouldn't leave the matter easily.

Almost two hours went away with that chaos and finally we were able to came out from the station. "Baap re, madam aap too great hoo!!" ruksana got down her hands. "Ruksana!!" I rolled my eyes. "Nahin sach mein, Kya solid chata mara tha uss kee gaal mein." Ruksana said giggling. "Tum bhi kuch kam nahin hoo... Tumhari heavyweight bag ne hii uss kii halat kharab kar di thi!" I said smiling. She smiled but at the next moment a little bit of worry flashed in her eyes. "Par mujhe dar lag raha hain. Meri wajah se musibat mein fass gayi tum. Uss bhoja nee khali dhamki nahin di thi. Agar shetty koo pata chalega too sach mein woo chup nahin baithega. Bahut khatarnaak log hain woo." she said in thoughtfull voice. I smiled holding her hand, "Tum uss kii fikar mat karo! Main nahin darti unn logon se." I said confidently. "Par tumhe kuch hoo gaya too..." still she was worried. "Offo... kahan naa yee sab hum baad mein sochengey. Abhi chalo tum." I somehow managed to calm her down. Even I knew that his threat was not only for show off. But I couldn't see her worry for me. I just hope that she didn't get into any trouble for me. After a long I found a real good friend in ruksana and if something happened to her due to my actions I would never be able to forgive myself. We both moved towards the auto stand. "Kidhar jana hain madam?!" Auto driver asked downing his mitter. "Naik basti!!" we both answered together and looked towards each other with shock. Both of us couldn't believe that what we just said. "Tum..." ruksana was about to ask me something but the auto driver interrupted, "Arey madam chalo bhi... jam laga huya hain road pein." As he said we both came out of trance. "Haan chaliye..." ruksana said and we both moved inside the auto. "Tum naik basti mein ..." Ruksana said in an questioning voice looking towards me. "Haan woo actually main apne mammu aur mummy kee sath raheti hoon." I informed. She asked my mammu's name and I told her. At that moment her eyes widened a bit. "Govind Kahyap. Matlab Rhea ke pappa naa... Antara kaul!!! OMG!!! Kahin tum... RHEA KI ANTARA DII TOO NAHIN HOO NAA?!!!" she said the last word so loudly that both me and driver was blown off. "Arey madam dhire baat karo... abhi accident hoo jata." Auto driver complained. "Oyee tum chup raho.." she almost shut the auto driver and move excitedly towards me, "Pahele batao mujhe tum rhea kii antara dii hoo kii nahin?!!" she asked me again. I was a little startled. " Haan, par tumhe kaise pata?!!" I asked in confusion. She just hugged me more tightly and warmly without giving me another answer. "Arey!!" I smiled and hugged her back. while she left me, her eyes were gleaming in pure joy. "Iss liye mujhe pahele see lag raha tha kii hum dono kee beach zaroor koi connection hain!!" she said chirpily. "Rhea humesha baat karti raheti hain tumhare barein mein. Aur woo apple ki cookies joo tum apne hathon see bana ti thi aur rhea kee hatho bhejti thii, woo too ekdum mashhor hain hum logon mein. Main, raghu aur machmach too intezaar karte rahete the kii kab rhea Kashmir see ayegi woo cookies le kee. Raghu aur machmach se too mile hii hongey na tum. Mere sab sey ache dost hain woo dono. Sach kahe rahi hoon. Rhea jab woo cookies laa tii thi naa humare garage mein panch munite mein saaf hoo jata tha. Adhe see jyada too raghu hii gat leta tha. Pagal tha woo in cookies kee piche. Khud too mitha mooh bhi nahin lagata par pata nahin tumhare banayi huyi cookies ussey kyun itna pasand thi..." as ruksana was continuously blabbering I was listening to her words silently. What should I tell her?! I couldn't even tell her to stop taking that name in front of my ears. She looked so happy and cheerful. I didn't want to fade that happiness. I looked outside through the window and saw that the auto was bypassing a ganesh temple. I just silently asked god that why he always kept joining me with his name?! Why?! "Hey tum sun rahe hoo naa?!!" Ruksana asked me as I was silent for long. Giving a forced smile to her I just nodded. She continued her cheerful talks and I sat there silently drooping my face trying hard to hide my overflowing tears.

Raghu's POV...

I was getting impatient seating at the outside couch of that cabin. Mai was inside in meeting and it was almost half past a day. I was looking everywhere in that place sometimes pacing impatiently around. The well dressed and well behaved people, the quite environment felt so depressing for me. I felt suffocated seating at a place for more than hours and talking to none, without talking to anyone. Sometimes my eyes were moving towards the entrance door or inside the glass window. The seat was still empty where antara was seating some few hours ago. My eyes got stuck with the seat where the scene again flashed in my eyes. Antara was laughing at the joke of that boy who was seating at her side. She was hitting his shoulder casually, pointing fingers to him in fake anger. Her smile was getting wider and wider with each and every passing moment she was with that boy!!

I didn't know why my whole corpse was stiffening as I was remembering that scene. I couldn't forget that and every time it was flashing in my mind, something was pinching really badly inside me. I just couldn't handle that Antara was so casual with that boy. "Mere see too kabhi aise baat nahin karti!!" I didn't know why whispered those words to myself. "Baat karti hain too aise jaise dewali kaa woo sutli bomb hoo, jissey bas agarbatti dikhaya aur fatak se fatt gayi, humesha naak ke upar gussa aur akhon mein ajib saa dard!!" I sighed as I whispered those words. God knows, why I couldn't help myself to think about her. That secretary girl told me that she left and wouldn't come back. Still I was peeping towards the door min by min. At last when I felt like mad, I let out my phone and called machmach. "Haan bhai bol.. Kidhar lafra huya hain?!! AA jaaoon apne admion ko le ke?!!" MM asked me amking me more irritated. "Abey!!.." I said angrily, "Apun kya sirf lafre ke time tujhe phone karta hain aise hii phone nahin kar sakta kya?!" I said. "Ohh acha... to bata kya kahena hain!" he asked me. I scratched my head and said, "Pataa nahin... Chal tuu baat kar!!" I said. "Bhai tu baat karega too fir apun baat karega naa!! APun too har kaam tere baad mein!" MM's confused voice came from the other side of phone. I stroke my head in disappointment. What could I do with this guy?! "Dekh machmach!! Mere koo kuch nahin kahena hain, Apun idhar baithe baithe bore hoo raha hain. Chal mere koo entertain kar!!" I said in irritated voice. "Entertain, dekh bhai, main munni yaa sheela too nahin hoon joo tere koo entertain karoon..." he blabbered again making me more irritated. "Machmach!!.." I said quite harshly. "arey bhai garam kyun hoo raha hain... ruk... ek kaam karta hoon, abhi tujhe khass khabar sonata hoon!!.." he said in a bit stumbled voice. "Abey dhet!!" I whimpered stroking my head again. "Haan bhai too sun... Paele woo weather kaa khabar sun le...Mausam bibhag kaa kahena hain kii aaj kaa weather bilkul saaf rahega.. barish kii koi chance nahin hain... pura din Mumbai kee amchi log karewe dhoop mein jalta rahega... for abb dikha raha hain kii shahrukh khan kii nayi picture joo haal mein release hone wala tha, lekin film kii director nee release rok di hain... kyun ki unke paltu kutte koo bimari lag gayi hain aur unke guru jii nee kahan unka time sahi nahin chal raha hain.. wagera wagera... abhi dikha raha hain ane walein election mein kaun sii party jyafda bhari hain... abhi too red party..." Before he could jumble my head more I just cut the phone digging my head down. I sighed heavily and thought that how I would spend my time. By god's grace, mai came out from the cabin and that secretary girl came with her. "Chal raghunath, chalte hain!!" Mai told me. "Jee mai... aiyee!!" I gestured her. Bidding that girl goodbye, mayi left with me and both came out from the office. As I fetched our jeep, mai got inside and said, "Raghunath... Zara Gupta kee office mein chal. Baat karni hain mujhe uss sey.." Mai said. Nodding, I drove towards Mr Guptaa's house. Mr Guptaa was our family lawyer. Mai gave a visit frequently in his office. At least that place was not boring at all. It took some one hour to reach at Gupta's office. His secretary greeted us inside informing that Mr Gupta was not present, but he would be reaching in some minute. He switched on the tv set present at the office so that we could kill our time. the secretary greeted us and left. The daily news was being telecasted. I again remembered about Machmach's news telecast in telephone and felt irritated again. Mai was listening to the newses with concentration The news reader was reading local news column, while I yanked looking away from screen leaning down on the chair closing my eyes. Within the closed eyelids, the female voice of news reader interrupted in my ear. "...Mumbai sahar kee aam janta yee baat saaf kar rahi hain kii woo ab chup nahin rahene wale hain Balki apne upar hoo rahe galat kaam ke khilaf awaz uthayengey. Bas kuchi ghante pahele Mumbai kee thane ilake kee pass ek railway station mein aaj ekk bahut hii dilchasp kissa dekh nee koo mila. Do gunde, joo kii train mein do massom larki oo koo cher rahe the aam janta kee gusse ka shikar bane..." I slightly opened my eyes as the news got on my attention. The scene had already shifted in the railway station where a reporter was reporting in between hue and cry. I was slightly amazed as it was the nearest railway station of our basti. We often visited at the place. I concentrated on the word of reporter, "... Aap mere piche dekh sakte hain, public ekdum gusse mein hain... police aa chuki hain aur woo log bhoja aur kaluya joo kii mumbai kee bahut hi khatarnaak crimanals ke list mein atein hain... unhe lee jaa rahe hain..." again I was startled with bhoja and kaluya's name. Man, they were shetty's dear little brothers. They got arrested!! That ganja would surely turn mad and let out the remaining hairs from his head. I smiled a little as I saw bhoja and kaluya in police custody and both of them looked mad. I knew that they would come out of the custody just at the end of day or might be next day. Shetty's power and sources were not ignorable. But really looking at bhoja and kaluya in that state made me satisfied and I badly wanted to laugh out. I hid my face to giggle hard. Mai's eyes were fixed to tv screen, even she was a bit shocked to see bhoja and kaluya in that state. "...Aiyee, abhi hum milte hain unn doo larkion see jinho nee bina dare inn dono namchin muzlim o kaa samna kiya..." that reporter's voice float in my ears and still I was having hard time to suppress my laughter. "Madam kya aap humein bata sakte kii actually kya huya tha?!!" the reporter's voice again hit my ear. "Jii, hum log train mein the tab all of a sudden yee do gunned ek station see humare boggy mein uth ayein..." as a femalevoice hit my ear my smile froze instantly and some invisible power almost forced my eyes back to tv screen. "Woo dono har passengers koo pareshan kar rahe the par koi kuch nahin kahe raha tha... mero saheli joo mere pass khari thi ussey woo [areshan kar raha tha, abusive tarike se behave kar raha tha uss ke sath. At that point I decided to teach him a lesson. Bas bahut hoo gaya tha... Hade parr kar di thi unn logon nee..." her confident voice hit my ears as usual and still my eyes were glued to tv screen in trance. Antara!! I couldn't believe my eyes for a second and jerked my head and eyes to see if I was dreaming. But still antara was there in TV screen. So I was confirmed that it was none other but her. As she was talking to reporter, another girl appeared on the screen and I was again left speechless. The other girl was none other than but our very own bakbak machine ruksana!! God!! What was she doing in that chaos. "Main jab bhi train mein safar karti hoon too main dekhti hoon yee dono sab koo pareshan karte rahete hain. Aaaj too inn logon nee had kar di. Woo too meri saheli antara thi jisne jaa kar uss gunde koo ek tamacha mara. Warna kissi kii himmat nahin thi kii unke khilaap kuch bhi bole." Ruksana informed. What?!! Antara slapped those two?!! What had she done?!! Idiot girl!! Shetty would not keave her if he came to know. Cherry on the top was that those stupid media's broadcasted the news everywhere. I knew that shetty would surely come to know that who was behind that state of his two loving brothers. I felt a huge worry inside me as the thought interrupted my mind. so many questions were there which I needed to get answer. How did antara and ruksana ended up together in train. As far I knew that Ruksana was in lattaur for two weeks. Antara arrived at basti during her absence. Anyway, ruku would herself tell us everything, I knew her. But shetty!!...

I need to go to the station. They might be in danger!!

The instant thought appeared in my mind and I automatically stood up from chair. I was almost rushing towards the room's door when a cold voice called me from behind. "Raghunath!!!" Mai's voice resisted my feet and I stopped abruptly. "Kahan jaa raha hain?!!" She asked me. I looked behind curelessly scratching my head. "Mai woo..." I didn't know what to answer. "Baith idhar...abhi jane kaa waqt nahin hain!!" she almost ordered me. I still stood at the same place. I didn't know what unknown force was trying to push me towards the station where ruksana and that crazy girl were. Ruku was my friend so her worry for me was genuine. But also apart from her, that crazy, insentive antara's face was mostly floating in my mind. "Kya huya... baith!!" Mai again told me. with so much reluctant feet I came back on my seat. For the very first time I was feeling bitter to obey mai's order. I never questioned her, but for the very first time I was feeling like to ask het that why I couldn't go anywhere on my wish. Mai's eyes fixed towards the tv screen. With narrow eyes she was gauzing antara. I didn't know why I didn't like the way she was observing antara. However, I concentrated back on screen. The reporter was asking antara something, "Antara jii, hum sab aap kee himmat ki daad dete hain. Par bhoja aur kaluya jaise log, jinke upar shetty jaise khatarnaak logo kaa hath hain... kya aap koo nahin lagta kii iss ghatna kaa kuch bura asar hoo sakta hain? Matlab kii shetty aap koo chot paucha sakta hain!" he asked. Antara stood still for a moment. Her eyes were still confident and didn't shook for a while when she answered. "So what?!! Agar unke piche koi powerful person kaa hath hoo too iska matlab yee too nahin kii humlog dar kee marein chup rahengey. Maine chup rahena nahin sikha hain. Agar humare samne kuch bhi galat hoo too humein uss kee khilap awaz uthanaa chahiye.. chahein galat kaam karne wala kitnabhi powerful kyun naa hoo. I don't care kii woo log shetty or whatever ... kin kee admi hain.. unn logon nee galat kiya aur maine uska jawab diya. Aur agey bhi main aisa hii karti rahungi, chahein mujhe kissi kaa bhi mukabla kyun naa karba pare." She answered without a bit hesitation. With her each and every voice my worry was increasing. Sometimes I was feeling like getting to her side and snatch her away from the fromt of those media people. Damn it!! why didn't she understand that shetty would be listening her every word?!!!

It almost took two to three hours in gupta's house and I was feeling restless all the while. I wanted to come out as soon as possible but mai's talk didn't finished. When at last after everything our jeepo entered inside the basti it was almost evening. Mai went inside the naik sadan and I moved towards the garage to keep the jeep in its place. I heard an auto riksw's horn. Jumping out from the jeep while I was about to move towards the naik sadan, two girly voice interrupted me. "Arey tum pure paise kyun de rahi ho?!!" my known chirpy voice interrupted and I saw an auto standing t the mid of street and I saw antara and ruksana standing near the auto. I stopped at the place. Antara was paying to auto driver and answered her, "Arey koi baat nahin. Tum doo yaa main doon... kya farak parta hain?!!" she said smiling. "Nahin antara... Dekho mere pass abhi chute nahin hain. Lekin baaad mein tumhe adhe paise lene parengey." Ruksana complained. "Acha baba.. woo sab choro tum ab.. baad mein dekhengey... abhi min chalti hoon... pata nahin ghar mein kya hoo raha hain. I hope ki unhone news channel nahin dekhe hongey. Warna pareshan hoo jayengey!!" A glint of worry flashed in her eyes. Strange girl she was. It was her who was in the stake and she was worried for her family's worry. "Haan.. dar too mujhe bhi lag raha hain." ruksana said worriedly. They both smiled towards each other and ruku hugged her tightly. I was amazed to see that how fast she get close to ruksana. Ruku didn't gave her special hug to some random person as I know that girl really well. Antara smiled and hugged her back. As her eyes looked straight, it as usual fell on me. I stood silent there fixing my eyes to her, waiting to c the cold anger spreading in her face as usual. She gave me a really odd look. Rather than anger or hatred I could see a glint of pain in those eyes. When sunrays fell on those hazels I could clerly see something shiny on the corner of those eyes. Tears?! Before I could detect anything she squeezed her eyes shut forcefully leaving me confused again. She broke the hug and greeted ruku with a smile. slightly gmancing to mine with her cold look she slowly moved inside her house.

Precap: "Didu close your eyes and pray. Ur prince will surely come." Ishan's little innocent voice said excitedly from the other side of phone. I smiled although in tears. How could I make him understand that every color fairy tale had been wiped off from my burned life. it was colorless now. "Ishan!!" I said in little voice. "Just do it didu..." Ishan forced. I closed my eyes not to disappoint him although I knew nothing would happen. I remembered my momm and pappa's smiling face. "Ready didu... One, Two, Three!!..." Ishan counted from other side and s soon as his counting got finished I heard a heavy footstep hitting the rooftop ground. I opened my eyes with a jerk and turned around. "Kyun didu.. aa gaya naa prince charming." Ishan said from other side and I stood there frozen seeing who was standing in front of me with his irritating expression and shoving away the traces of cements and soil from his cloth.

PS: Now what to say guys... i know... i never updated such crap before. just wanna get over that pasts soon so merged up all in one chapter... now i am surely gonna get juta's from all over.

Edited by ifians - 10 years ago
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Unres... Riaaa hugs for bringing ma lovely Mach mach into the story... I badly missed him yaar...

Ek aur Baath... Tune pm kyun nahi Ki uhhh... Woh toh Maine aise hi dekha toh pata chala Ki tune already update kar Diya hai... 😡
Aur maine kal raath Teri update copy karke rakhi thi... Subah uthke padna shuru Kita... Sacchhi yaar.. It took me into a different world.. Aur kyun nahi.. Tu toh hamesha apni updates 3D main update karthi hai...

Part 1.
The moral of the update was "ruksana's heavyweight military print wala bag rockzzz" 😉
Teri update main ruksana Ki naam nahi Teri naam hona chahiye tha.. I felt that its u can only yaar... Tu bhi ussi Ki tharah hai.. Bilkul cute and fun loving.. Haan aur sense of humour toh bhar bhar ke hain tumme.. Abhi dekho last main likhe Ho Ki sab log tumpe chappal phekenge... BAs karo yaar.. Balki sab log phool phekenge... Tu na yeh Sa sochna bandh kar.. Teek hai..
And I just loved the binding between antara and ruksana... And haan ddlj part was tooo gud... 😆

Part 2.

Awww raghu's soft corner for antara.. U have shown that really well.. And haan how can I forget Mach mach's silly jokes .. That part was very funny... Love Yu MM 😳 and yeh par DM ka role Shilpa ji hi kar rahe hai na... I lyk her itself... I don't like that new DM...

Precap: Time to reveal antara's prince charming... Actually woh hum Sa ko pata hai.. Par antara ko bhi pata chalna hai na... Loved the precap...

Totally it was an amazing update... Riu u made my day...


Ooops I forget to write this... Em the first one to comment... Yipeee... [:D/]
Edited by .Muskhaan. - 10 years ago
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Wow..
Really nice..
chamkili kya update hai..
Sorry but muje pricap jyada acha laga..
antu ka dream boy..
Antu ne eyes band kar de.. An raghu dikha..
Wow..
Love u..
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part 1 mind blowing
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part 2 marvelous
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Wonderful update dear..beautiful banner..Antu aur rukshana ne shatty ke brothers ki band Baja di 😆 ab shatty antu ko nahi chorega 😲 bt koi nahi humara hero raghu apni antu ko bacha lega..raghu mm ko phone kar ke use entertain karne ko bolta hai..hehe..nice precap..thanks for updating..please continue soon..😊

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