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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pampz

first of all what a banner ...Haii Ria ...kya kya karti hai tu banner mein ...dekh ke hihosh udd jate hain ... it was lovely ...so much of intensity was there...ohhh πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Thx re... joo tujhe mere bekar se banner pasand aa jate hain itna...πŸ€ͺ
coming to ur update ...
seriously i was dumbstruck while reading it ... hv u just operated Antara's heart and invaded inside to know what exactly is going in that girl's mind and heart after losing her family in such a cruel devastating manner ...hatts of to you ...for this ...
HUH!!!πŸ€“... oye main doctor nahin hoon... operation karna nahin atta mujhe... the thing is that i always said kii sometimes we can relate with some characters so well... for you it is raghu as for me it is antara... Yes... this is true that raghu too mera bhi jaan hain...... but my fav charecter was in DDEJ was always Antara... not that antara whose charecter was ruined during crap marriage track...😑... but the girl whom we got glimpse at very forst episode... tune agar ddej ka first episode dekha hoo too tujhe yaad hogaa.. after her rock band when journalists were asking her question that how she was feeling after the success of her program after so many restrictions, warning from rivals... the way she said that she answered it was too bold... i still remembered those lines...
"Sad!!... maine bahut sari concerts dekhi hain joo humlogon se kaffi ache hain.. par unlogon koo itna publicity nahin milli jitna humein mil rahi hain...kyun kii kashmir kii larkiya kashmir mein perfprmance de rahi hain.. delhi kii larkiyan delhi mein nahin!!..."
just at that moment i fell for that girl... yes, i don't remember i ever heard that much strong and bold lines from some tv serial heroine... Antara differs for me at that very moment with some other rone dhone walis who just want to know shed tears in poroblem... She is the girl with her own morals, own value and someone who never compromised with others... she is what actually she is... bold, strong, independent... for her...
"Dar ke agey defeat hain... Dar ke piche sab sweet hain...Dhamki o pe mat jaooo.. apni akal lagaoo..."
What does this line convey.. a girl with such a strong mind and heart.. who was enough capable to fight every battle with her owwn spirit.. who doesn;t fear the warnings and dangers and knows how to get out of dangers using her own brain!!.
But... but ... but.. u can say... this is my one of the biggest complain to DDEJ creatives... they lost this shade of antara later... yeah, a girl becomes so much vulnerable after loosing someone like her father... but that doesn't mean she will lose her character, her nature.. But later she just became a girl who was mourning for her fathers death and breaking down day by day so easilly.. was it her charecter before?!! no way yaar... she was enough strong to hold back... CVs never explored this shades of her... when they revealed the truth about raghu planting the bomb.. they had an awsome chance to explore that strong determined side of her but what they did... they just killed her character at that very crucial moment... they explored a girls vulnerability but never explored her stronger side... you know that was the most biggest complain to those cvs from me... to spoil my fav character...
thats why i always try to convey antara's stronger side in my every story...
choddo yaar... bahut jyada hoo gaya...πŸ˜†... i know ki tuu bahut bore hoo gayi hogi... mere bakbak sun ke... sorry yaar... bhavna o mein bahegayi too andar se apne aap baat nikal ayii...🀣
the dream which was so shattering and loved and was speechless when u just added that mouth organ tune in her dream and hearing that fear arised in momand daughter's face and eyes ...after awaking she still hears that tune in reality which Raghu was playing ...OHH my GOD u hv just rightly penned down her mind ...i was stting quiet and thinking that yess .. so true ...Raghu's tune wd not be melodic to Antu ...it wd be a death tune for her ...
Yup that's true... i was thinking that how could be the impact of raghu;s mouth organ to antara.. as raghu is not just a random gunda-mawali to her whom she just think of good for nothing... Here Raghu is her whole famillys' killer.. (At least for her, as she didn't know the truth yet!!) She is not just irritated with him... she hates him, disgusts him with her every being...(i know it;s painful to think about antu's hatered to raghu..😭.. but it was required for story line naa...)..so even the mesmerizing MO tune of raghu wouldn't have any impact of her rather than opening her fresh would and making them bleed again and again... specially when she is listening to her mother's favorite tune from the very own person who is her destroyer.. what other impact a daughter could have??!
again a great applause from my side for penning down this emotion so excruciatingly ...
Oye yaar ab bas kar...πŸ˜†
loved it the how dangerously u described her inner state ...and i was all numb again whn i saw that Raghu knows her n understands her so well ...he surely made out that shw was in some deep trouble
As for raghu.,.. well he is trying hard to read antara... she is just like an unsolved puzzle, a mystery to him... a mystery which attract him, frustrate him as he couldn't solve it so easily like others.. he had confrontyed so many peoples in his life... how stronger they could be but they had to bend down in front of his power... but only that particular girl.. she didn't matched up with anyone.. she never fall under his domination.. rather than her persona make him dominant to some extent in front of her... also.. he could detect something wrong about her... a very deep pain which she was masking with her smile... but whenever she confronted him.. that mask feell down and he could see the glimpse of that pain, that burn which was she hiding inside... as u can see.. there was nothing like love in between them as it is impossible in this state... but there was something deep attraction he feel for her... it may be cause of her painful eyes, or may be her chripy smile sometimes which sometimes showed the little chripy happy go lucky girl who was buried deep inside her for now... or may be something else which he don't know... but he had something for her... that THING affect him with her each and every action, make his breath stop when she smiled... make his hand ache to wipe her tears while she cry silently, lonely...πŸ˜‰
and he was determined he wll talk to her no matter what ...if needed he can go to any extent to just make her talk to him and know the real matter and then revive the chirpy girl inside her. Raghu hv noticed that only with him Antu behaves so weirdly ...and he is not done with it ...he wll definitely try to correct it in his own so hatke manner ...
yaar abhi kee liye too tera woo hatke manner wala scene not possible hereπŸ˜†... cause this is not just a thriler like sajda... or intense romantic story like GAG... it has some different mode.. it is a grave serious emotional story with touch of mystery thriller and i am so much confused that how to handle this one now.. kahan fass gaya yaar...... aise concept mere dimag mein atein kyun hain??... but it is not that kii humesha bas yee serious wala rahega.. there will be also light hearted moment.. but for now... yee seriousness will be intact here...🀣
this chap was again a master piece ...i really don hv any words to praise you ...u r just outstanding babe...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i am waiting to see Raghu's madness to make her talk to him n making her go mad due to his weird techniques he wd be applying on her ...hahah...
just waiting madly and impatiently like a VAMPY for the next chap and u know to what extent am thirsty ...haha ...so dear please quench my thirst. 🀣
and yess Love u yedi ...u r just awesome ⭐️

dekh yaar pampy the vampy.. mera reple [arke behosh mat hoo jaioon...🀣🀣🀣 emotion mein aa ke bahut kuch likh diya.,...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
and lastly...
I love you yaar...❀️.. you are my best vampy in the world...πŸ₯³πŸ€£
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaNtara4vr

Chptr 12:

Riaaa...😳...tu kya hai yaar...πŸ˜•...tu yeh sab kaise likh leti hai...πŸ€“...mera toh padhkar hi...😲......i cant describe d feeling..πŸ€”...like totally numb n depressed...πŸ˜”...
sorry to make you depressed yedi behena... but... kya karein..... this is the reqirement for this story..πŸ˜’
d way u described Antu's state...πŸ‘...i mean getting into her feelings n experiencing it...πŸ₯Ί...totally outstanding n marvelously written...πŸ‘πŸΌ..
Thx re...πŸ˜†
i cud literally feel her agonizing pain...her each n every bruises......on her mind, heart n soul...πŸ˜”...πŸ˜’...
so true... and the bruises are getting deeper each and every day...more and more she was facing the murderer of her own family but couldn't do anything!! Also she doesn't even know the truth that the person whom she was disgusting with her life was actually innocent and he didn't know anything about the pain and agony he caused her.Just think about her state...😭
d extent of contempt..she has towards d one who shattered her peaceful-happy life...πŸ˜”...πŸ˜’...her everything...πŸ’”...
d disgustness... dat dey r not bothered of d crime dey have committed...her soul-shuddering heart-wrenching dream...d MO tune---which totally seemed mocking to her...dat d destroyer himself is playing her mom's fav. tune...πŸ₯Ί...
What an irony of fate naa...... he had to bear that each and every night!! you remember she actualy liked the tune when she heard that for first time as she didn't know that the tune was played by raghu... but as she came to know... she lost that... she couldn;t even admire the tune cause it remind her about the destruction she gone through earlier...😭
yaar...so much is going-on within her...hmmm πŸ€” can i say...like a thunder-storm of emotions...but still she has to stand strong...to punish d wrong-doers...its an impossible situation 4 her to e1 b compassionate to Raghu...πŸ˜”..4get d love angle...πŸ˜”...πŸ‘ŽπŸΌ...
so true... abhi too she can't even bear raghu around... love too bahut door ki baat hain..πŸ₯Ί
On d other side Raghu is totally oblivious of d facts...πŸ€”...he is trying to understand her...d situation...n d thought...dat y is she affecting him...in each n every way...πŸ˜•...y is she ignorant towards him...wat is bothering her...y isn't she cheerful n happy always...seems like shes wearing a mask...to show herself strong...while he can sense d vulnerability of her...😳...hiding a lot deeper-darker-painful within her...πŸ€”...
So true... he was trying hard... to understand.. to read her inner mind... the meaning of sadness that flickers through her eyes every now and then... but antara has created the unbreakable boundary wall around her heart and it not easy to break soon...
Oh my...seems like m writing reviews equivalent to ur updates...😲..in length...πŸ€ͺ...πŸ˜†...but i can't help it wen d narrative is so captivating...😊...πŸ˜ƒ...luv u yaar...❀️...πŸ€—...n do take a break...to relax from dis stressful-depressing scenario...coz i think i need it...πŸ˜†...n so do u...😊...take care...Yedi Behna...πŸ˜ƒ...😊...
koi baat nahin... mujhe app ke long long comments bahut pasand hain...πŸ˜†
(...i dint find it short...may b becoz der wer too many strong emos...i which i got drowned n deeply affected...πŸ˜†...)...πŸ˜ƒ...

Love you too andy jii... my review queen...β€οΈπŸ€—
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
and finally res for next update...πŸ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ,
coming to the update and precap!!
Both were very gripping..
You described Antu's POV in such a splendid way.
Our Raghu knows her very well , hope Antu realizes how good he actually is..!!!
This girl has completely lost the "chirpy girl" image !!! Hopefully she will be able to revive it.. I guess if that happens, usme bhi raghu ka haath hoga..
Aur coming to our Raghu,
God !! You made me fall in love with him again...
Thanks for dis update !!
-Prerna
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Hey ,

coming to the update and precap!!
Both were very gripping..
You described Antu's POV in such a splendid way.
Our Raghu knows her very well , hope Antu realizes how good he actually is..!!!
This girl has completely lost the "chirpy girl" image !!! Hopefully she will be able to revive it.. I guess if that happens, usme bhi raghu ka haath hoga..
Aur coming to our Raghu,
God !! You made me fall in love with him again...
Thanks for dis update !!
-Prerna

The bubky chripy antu will definately come back... but not so soon... long way to0 go for that... andd obviously/// raghu ka hath too hoga hii..πŸ˜‰
thanks preru... love yaa...πŸ€—β€οΈ
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow riu..sach mian tu kaise wright kar le te hai..
antra an raghu ke balcny scence was wow..an the pair of sendles was to cute scence..
updated soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
k..nw antu observin raghu..
she too drooling kya..
like us on raghu..
thanks fr d precap ria..
waiting fr d update ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ria maine saare chaps read kiye hain.πŸ˜†main ye kehna chahti hun ki first chap ka state wo tha jahan raghu already jaan chuka tha ki antu ke aane ka asli motive.😈.but the point when he comes to know about this..ek dum jaisa 440 volts ka jhatka laga ho..wo wali feeling ki baat kr rhi hun...🀣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

Ria maine saare chaps read kiye hain.πŸ˜†main ye kehna chahti hun ki first chap ka state wo tha jahan raghu already jaan chuka tha ki antu ke aane ka asli motive.😈.but the point when he comes to know about this..ek dum jaisa 440 volts ka jhatka laga ho..wo wali feeling ki baat kr rhi hun...🀣

arey ussi chapter mein too raghu koo first time pata chala kii antara kaa asli motive kya hain...πŸ˜†πŸ€£
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ifians

arey ussi chapter mein too raghu koo first time pata chala kii antara kaa asli motive kya hain...πŸ˜†πŸ€£

okay...🀣lagta hai sajda ka bhoot utra nhi...sorry🀣

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