**Tera Sukkon Ya Junnon Tera-Rantara FF**[Thread-1] - Page 22

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Emotional update ria...

And the story begins now...

Antara is totally broken...

And she thinks it's all happened because of RAGHU...

she want revenge now...

Interesting...very interesting

Tutta hua dill hai magar milte hai sab se hans kar

Yehi to fun hai jo aaya hai bohot kuch kho jane ke baad...

Aww ridz... what a sayari...

Originally posted by: Nichuss

darls...

where is it leading...

more than story...i am amazed on hw u writing the pov based one so

aptly...

one thing im confused...antu likes raghu or nt...

acrdng to her is she capitavie of raghu...im nt cleared thr

Originally posted by: pampz

Ria ...am just awestruck after reading this update ... how did u do this i really don know ...penning down a bombblust and its after effects is never so easy ...then the way u described Antara's situation ...her outburst her pain and her expressions ...it was so true and so pefect ...t while reading this i felt my eyes are becoming moist ...

Well thanks a lot my vampy darling.....you don;t know how hard it was for me too..blat and aftereffects okk... those are just descriptive things,,, but when you are going to describe someones pain, her condition, turmoils.. It actually felt too hard.. I really don;t know how i managed to write this

Ria not everybody in this earth can feel other's pain ...live that pain and write it down in an extraordinarily perfect manner ...hatts off to you Ria ... i don hv words to appreciate u in proper way ... for the story u need to make us feel n understand that how much hatered Antara had in her heart for Raghunath Naik ...u hv done that perfectly ...

aww thank you buddy... it is hard ad depressing to see antu's hatered for raghu and i know that.. but it was required for this storyline... Junnon is something which is so much related to hatered... But trust me i am not going to go in the way just like it showed in serial...it's going to be a very different story and concept😳... hope i can manage this keeping up it's mode and pace..

the moment Antara saw Raghu's pic with Dm ...it was epic ...she didnt forget him ...his face ...his each n every single feature and traits were imprinted on her heart ...and she hated him with all her being ... what a dangerous situation ...and still in such impossible situation Raghu wd bloom love in her heart ...without her consent ...without her approval...

Raghu is to win her trust back with his love ...love ...the most beautiful and most unpredictable feelings of this earth ...pure genuine deep and devne love ...

Pampi... pampi... pampi/... i love you yaar🤗...for this lines which you used for ragu😃.. u donlt know how much it helps me to pen down raghu;s charecter😉... i always told you that antara's charecter comes naturally in my story.. but it was really hard for me to portray raghu;s charecter... but you know your single word about raghu makes me clear about his each and every act, behavior and portrayal...and you did this today also... thanks a lot buddy...

waiting for more to read this story ...waiting for u to reveal and unwrap the story more to us in ur extraordinary wonderful way

luv u ria 😃

~:Chapter Six:~

"Junnon Hoo Pyar Ki Ya Fir Nafrat Ki

Jalna To Parta hain Bas Nazuk Se Iss Dil Ko Hi"

Raghu's pov,

"Aap to jaan ti hain na Daya Mai, aap ke khilap koi kuch kahein woo iss sahar mein too kya.. pure desh mein koi nahin hain.. par humein routine checkup ke liye anna para... akhir complain jo darz huya hain.." inspec mathur, who was seating at the couch in front of daya mai, said with generous voice. "Thik hain inspec sahab. Hum bakhoobi samajhte hain yee baat. Akhir humara bhi farz banta hain desh ke kannon ka izzat karna.." Daya mai said in her as usual cold voice. I didn't know how she always managed to keep the cool. No one could understand what's going inside her mind. Not even me, her most obedient follower who was living at her side for almost 10 years. She continued, "humein humare dost Mr Mansikhani ke zinda raheni ki khabar sun ke jitni khusi huyi, utna hi dukh huya uss kashmiri pariwar ke barein mein sun ke jo bemaut mare gaye uss blast mein... par aap kissi se bhi pooch sakte hain.. hum uss din Kashmir mein nahin the... hum Mumbai mein thee... aur bhala hum apne dost mansukhani ka murder plan kaise kar sakte hain... yee koi kaise soch sakta hain?!" Daya Mai said with amused voice. "Hum jaan te hain mai, par kya karein upar se order ayya hain... aur baat yee hain ki aap Kashmir mein uss waqt nahin the.. par uss waqt uss house boat ke aas pass Raghunath ko kisi ne dekha tha..." Inspec Mathur said looking towards me. I was standing quietly at Daya Mai's side as usual. I didn't said anything at first. "Raghunath!!..." Daya mai said in amused tone and looked at mathur's face. "Raghu.. kya tum wahan the.. uss din?!" mathur looked towards me directly and asked. for the first time in my life I hesitated to answer him. "woo apun..." I couldn't finish my words and mai interrupted. "mathur sahab... aap humse baat kijiye.." her dominant voice made mathur to look towards her, "raghunath wahan nahin tha.. iss baat ki guarantee main leti hoon... wooo yahin pe tha.. mere sath Mumbai mein... Aap chahein to kisi se bhi pooch sakte hain.. iss ghar ke naukar, chakar yaa basti walo se bhi... sab ek hi jawab dengey ki uss din raghunath basti mein tha..." mai said firmly. "hmmm!!... koi baat nahin mai.. aap ne kahe diya.. yahin humare liye bahut hain... humein aur kisi ke gawahi ya fir kisi aur sabut ki zarurat nahin hain." mathur said and woke up. "jii sukriya..." mai woke up from her jhula and joined her hands. "chalta hoon mai.. maaf kijiye gaa aap ko pareshani uthani pari." Mathur said. He bid adieu with his constables and moved towards the door. I looked towards there moving feature. I didn't know why I was feeling heavy inside me, like something went wrong.

The news was spread all around the country about the country about the blast occurred in houseboat on 3^rd june, the very day while I was present in Kashmir and delivering mai's gift to that houseboat. I was lucky that I escaped the blast and also Mr Mansukhani. He cancelled his b'day parties arrangement on the houseboat at last moment. So we didn't get the news. Mr Mansukhani would never got our gift and even I didn't came to know what mai had gifted him cause that gift might had been smashed. Though me and mansukhani were lucky but not the kashmiri family who were the victim of blast in place of mansukhani. While I saw the news on tv after coming back to Mumbai I didn't know why my throat became dry. That girl named antara's face flashed in front of my eyesight. The first thing I thought that, if she was alright or not. Though I saw her near neheru park at last moment which was quite far from the house boat still I was worried about her. I did not understand what was so special about that girl. I met her just once and still I was restless to know about her wellbeing. I always tried to search for opportunity to go at Srinagar and search for her. But after that day, mai never send me to Srinagar for her any work purpose. So I didn't know how to search about antara.

"Raghunath!!..." Mai's voice broke my trance and I looked backed to her. She was looking towards me ewith questioning look. As if she was trying to detect what's going inside me. For the first time I hid something from her. I didn't know why I couldn't tell her about her. I wanted to but something stopped inside me. As if, she and her small memories were so precious to me and if I shared it with anyone I would lose them. I didn't know why I was feeling like that but those odd changes were happening in me for those days. "haan mai!!..." I said keeping my voice normal. "tu kya soch raha hain?... kuch din se dekh raha hoon ajib sa bartab kar raha hain tu..." Mai said. "kuch naii mai!!... woo..." I was thinking what to say. Cause I never offended her any words. "Haan bol..." mai asked. "woo mai... woo june ki teen tareekh ko...apun too tha udhar Kashmir mein..." I said in stumbled voice. "Raghunath!!.." she said in tender voice, "too kya huya.. tune woo blast thori hi na kiya hain.. mujhe pata hain maine jhoot kahan.. par..." she came near me and caressed my face lovingly, "kisi ache kaam ke liye jhoot bolna hoo too woo sachai se bari hoti hain raghunath.. aur main tujhe kisi bhi tarah ke mussibat mein nahin dekh sakti.." she said with concern. I was overwhelmed by her gesture. I didn't know how she could care about someone who was not even his own son. "thik hain raghunath... abhi mujhe jana hoga... daan dene ka samay aa gaya hain.. aur gokulastami ki sari taiyari tu thik se dekh lena..." she ordered. "Haan mai..." I nodded. "Tujhe pata hain na.. janmastami ke din sahib wapss aa raha hain...aur ussey dahi handi ka khel kitna pasand hain!" She said. Arghhh... not that satyanash again!!!... however I remained silent. Mai smiled and moved towards the door. She had to go as she was distributing rupess and clothes to poor peoples through some NGOs... she did that regularly. While mai was moving out of the door facing her back to me I suddenly saw her impression on the mirror at side. She was smiling and somehow her smile seemed cunning. It made me confused a bit but at that moment my phone rang. "haan machmach bol..." I asked. "bhai idhar bandra mein apne fctory mein shetty locha kar raha hain.." MM informed. "ruk atta hoon..." I said and moved.

Antara's POV,

"Didu... Why are you leaving? Please take me with you.. I am sure I will easily get admission at mumbai's any school." Ishan said poorly looking at me. "ishan!!.." I cupped his face, "I know with your grades and results are excellent but that's ot the only problem. The problem is financial crisis. You know na ishan..." I just said helplessly. "I know didu..." he hugged me, "that's ahy you have to go to Mumbai for job." Ishan said. I hugged her back and stopped my tears. How could I say that my job persuasion in mumbai's office was just an excuse to go there! I couldn't say about the impossible thing I was determined to do. "okk, ishan... get ready... we are leaving for your hostel in just an hour.." I said looking at his face and caressed his hairs lovingly. I came out from the room as I heard the sound of calling bell. I opened the door "ohh mayank.." I said with a dry smile. Mayank moved inside and his firm gaze indicated something bad. I know he would doubt when he would get to know about my new job in Mumbai. Aliya, Amir all were happy as they thought I forgot the past and moving ahead in my life. but they didn't know that I couldn't move on, till I didn't see all of those devils behind the bars. "come have a seat.." I said. "no antara I am not here to seat or chat. I needed the ans of my questions." His words literally send shiver in my spine. Mayank was most close to me among my friend group. That guy knew me by nerves and he knew that there must be some reason for my abrupt job persuasion in Mumbai. "what do you want to know?!" I asked. "well can you explain me why did you decided to pursue job without continuing your study?!" he asked. "I told you all mayank!! Financial crisis!! I had to take care of ishan and I can't leave him alone like selfish and went to London for my masters." I explained. "but why Mumbai antara?! you can also get good job at shrinagar. And the nearest place was delhi where you could also get job fascilities... why mumbai?!!" he asked again. "cause that company's offer was most preferable and high. So I decided to join there." I said. "and can you tell me where are you living in mumbai?" his question was not finished yet. "well obviously in my mamma ji's house." I informed. "and where does your mama ji live in Mumbai?!" he asked. I didn't ans and lowered my gaze. Mayank moved towads the table where a diary was kept, the diary where my momma used to write important contacts and addresses. Mayank flipped the pages and I couldn't stop him. "Naik basti hnn..." He let out a crooked smile and looked towards my face. "So antaraa kaul this is your plan! I knew it. I knew you didn't forget anything yet." He said in determined voice. "so what can I do else mayank?!" I said in firm voice looking towards him, "TWO MONTHS MAYANK!!! TWO MONTHS..." I burst out at last. I couldn't hold that anymore. "antara!!" mayank said worriedly. My eyes were moistened and I bit my lips to hold back my tears. I wouldn't cry anymore. I couldn't let myself break down at that moment. "Two months had been passed after that blast! Still no actions!! Each and every clue was suppressed and all power of police and politicians were with Daya Naik!!! They should defend her but instead of that they were protecting criminals like her. so what could I do else mayank?! After all those things you want me to ran away and pursue my MSC.. no mayank I can't!! cause you know.. my momma pappa always taught me toi stand against wrong." I said with determined voice. Mayank became frustrated and moved near me, "antara you know I a, afraid of you now. What's going on your head. Just tell me what is you up to?" he asked with worried face. "Police, CBI... everyone tried but no one could get a single proof against Daya Naik!! And also the proofs they got all were suppressed due to political influence! Everyone told me that she is so much powerful. No one could beat her. now I want to see myself that how much power and possession she holds. I want to face that lady and examine her strength. Not only has her but mine too! I want to see if still there is god somewhere who stands with truth against evil." I said with single breath. Mayank might had detected my intension till then. "antara, you know you are going to trespass inside snakes den? God where did these things came into your mind?! Mr pradhan couldn't do anything, not even my pappa!! Don't you understand how much powerful daya naik is!" he said. "mayank the snakes might be so much poisonous but only a single drop of carbolic acid is enough to end it. and I wanted to search for that drop of acid. If I have to search clue against daya mai, then I have to be near her. then what could be the finest place rather than naik basti, her owb residence. Surprisingly, mamma ji shifted to that basti some years ago. Don't you think it's some indication?!" I said with a light smile. "Antara!!" mayank said with concerned voice. "Please don't do this, this is insane!! If they come to know about your intentions they will kill you." he said worriedly. "sorry mayank but I can't step back now. Don't worry! They wouldn't recognize me. Thanks to your pappa that me and ishan had never to face media people. so they didn't even know that two members of kaul family were still alive! But even if they know I don't care. I won't let them harm myself till I send all of them behind the bars." I said confidently. "you won't listen right?!" mayank pouted. "you know me well mayank!" I smiled. "okk antara madam.. but please take care of yourself. And whenever you will be in danger never think 2^nd time to call me... okk!!" he said. "okk okk my 2nd momma!!..." I giggled. "antara not fare!!" he said in miffed voice.

Raghu's pov,

My sleep was broken when I something fell on my shoulder. I opened my eyes and found myself lying on the cot situated at my very own balcony. I jumped up and looked at my shoulder. Yuck!! Bird's poo!! I looked above with irritated face and saw the crow seating on the wall. "kya bee... subha subha apun hi mila tha tujhe m**t ne ke liye..." I said in disgusting voice. The crow just expressed its irritation by harsh tone. I jumped up from the bed and moved under the shower.

After some moment I came down and found my ajji doing arati in her room. "kyun re subha subha mooh kyun utra hain tera?!" she asked. she was just a great lady. Full of life, chirpiness and loved me a lot.
"arey ajji mat puch... subha subha ek kauwe ne apni shirt pe m**t diya.." I said with irritation. "Achaa?!!" ajji's eyes gleamed like a child. "haan... par isme tu itna uchal kyun raha hain?!" I asked. "abey yede!!" ajji patted my head lovingly, "subh hota hain yee... iska matlab aaj bahut acha kuch hone wala hain!!" she said. "kya acha hoga ajji aur woo bhi aaj ke din... jab woo satyanash wapas ane wala hain!!" I said in miffed voice. "arey uske aa jaane se kya farak parne wala hain... bhool mat chintu.. joo jagah tune iss ghar mein banaya hain ussey koi nahin chin sakta.. woo tujhse jalta hain!! par iska matlab yee too nahin tub hi uss sey jalein" ajji said lovingly. "ajji mere koo jalan nahin hain.. par jaanti hoo naa..." I said in low voice. "arey yere tu chor.. aaj bahut subh din hain.. giri govardhandhari ka janamdin hain aaj.. gokulashtami... dekh na mera man kaheta hain... aaj ke din krsihna bhagwan khud iss basti mein ayengey... sare buraio ka nash karne.." ajji said with determined voice. "ajji ane too wala hain woo satya... Aur woo too sau taka Krishna bhagwan nahin ho skta.." I said in irritation. "krishna bahgwan kis roop mein ate hain woo naa tu jaan sakta hain naa hum... subha se mera bhi dahina ankh farak raha hain... aur tere sath bhi ye sab huya... aaj kuch too hone wala hain.. aur woo bhi bahut acha..." ajji said with wide grin and moved back to prayer. I nodded my head in disappointment and moved from the place. How could it be possible that something is going to happen good when a rakhsas like satya naik was coming?

Ps: This chapter was just a filler part. actually it was becoming so long so decided to part in two chapters. next chapter coming soon. till then, enjoy!

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

..Lots of planning...antara is in full mood to put culprits behind the bars

n two entries in naik basti.😉..

ek wo jisse raghu chidta hai..🤢aur dusri wo jispe raghu marta hai...😳

DM is very baddy baddy lady!😡

update soon!😊