Gun and Guitar-a RANTARA ff(2nd thread)updated @Pg147 - Page 37

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

RIA...

I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH for giving such a romantic update.☺️🤗

Today words can't express my feelings...

My heart used to beat with a sound of LUB & DUB...but now only and only GAG is heard ❤️

It was a sensational update Ria...!!!!👏

Now a days you make me drool over Raghu's romantic lines... I can't control myself and post it in review too 😆

"haan woo... abhi apun bahar ja raha hain, par raat ko wapas ayega... apun ki wait karegi naa? So to naii jayegi?"

I almost died after reading these lines...🤢🤢🤢

Hayee...kash kabhi Raghu mujhko bhi wait karne ko kehta 🤣

Arre...kaha se lati ho itni mast aur romantic lines???😆

And then woh kiss...Omg...it was so all of a sudden...but it was mesmerising in every way.😳😳😳

WOW!...what a passionate moment it was...Such a bliss!😳😳

haha...I couldn't stop laughing when Kejriwal got what he deserved 😆

red saree and a catwalk...🤣🤣🤣...my tummy is paining so much now but still I can't supress my laughter 🤣🤣🤣

please do send me KEJRIWAL MMS 1 with a background music of "baby doll main soni di" song 🤣🤪

OMG...its so funny...😆

Well finally she accepted that she's in love with Raghu and now she can't stay away from him for even a minute 😳😳😳

"haan. Badal gayi hoon main!! Pyar ho gaya hain mujhe uss sey."

Loved the way she cherised the moment..the feeling ...of being in love...😳

And then Raghu arrived with a gift for her...WOW...😃

it was amusing when diesel fell on his head and left shoulder...and he got irritated because of that..😆

Awww...you made me blush today ☺️...when Raghu was under shower with bare upper body...and Antara was drooling over him...kya mast scene tha woh 😉

Ria...the linking scene was beautifully written..just to get her over there and near him...👏

Raghu loved Antara's concern towards him...her worried eyes...her touch 😊😊😊

and later everything went limitless...it was so passionate...phenomenal and exceptional 👏

loved their passionate moments under the running shower...it was fully intense...passionate...and full of desires 😳

when a drop of water fell from raghu's lips to Antara's lips...OMG...it was marvellous...it was amazing moment...Best scene of the update for me ⭐️

"RAGHU KI ANTARA"...WOW!...it was awesome babe.😉😉😉

It was incredible Ria and stunning too.😃

seriously hats off to you...Take a bow girl..👏

spectacular update ⭐️⭐️⭐️

btw why no precap???😲...kya marne ka irada hai????🤢

do update soon ...

nahi toh dandha jarur milega 😆😆😆

love ya...mwah 🤗

Originally posted by: pampz

Read the last two parts inone go ...UFff ...Ria ...

searching for words to express what am going thru ...

sorrry ...cant express cos couldnt find the appropriate words ...

i can only say that Mere INTENSE romance Queen ...take a bow 👏👏👏

u hv made my life romantic with rantara story ...never ever i got this feeling before 😳😳😳

thank you

i can only say that i love you ...and what to say am wordless totally ...😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

so romantic update ria!!☺️

omg!! girl u can write action,drama,romance,comedy...so flawlessly

ur just outstanding writer...👏

haathi ki to hawa nikal di😆...mr.kejriwaal...ko "catwalk"krne padi.😆.kya dhoay hai raghu ne use..

.too good😆

raghu so naughty n crazy lover 😳

tfpm i loved the whole update❤️

Originally posted by: ankusanu

ria hum sb ko marne ka irada h kya 😉
omggg itna pyara aur romantic update.. 😳 😳
hayeee marr diya sabko... dat ws jst fab yaar..
raghu is sooo naughty...pehle to antu ko dara diya..
n phr usko jane nh diya... what ws he upto.. 😆
dat shower part ws breathtaking...yaad aa gy
ddej wale shower scene ki... 😛 ...
n dat ring as gift...wowww...kya gift hai..
seriously day r married n antu has got d best n apt
gift fr dat...jldi se asli n puri wali shaadi kab hogi..
day dreaminggg...bt no precap yyy sooo????
anyways as usual i loved d update...
thanks n hugsss ria ... 👏 clapsss

Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow RI fantastic update yaar

this was abs osam

the romance hayee

RI i love you yaar

this was so cool

pls cont asap

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Wooohhh...hot shower romance...

Waah kya kiss hai...isse kehte hai perfect couple...lovely written update dear...ye bichiya wala idea achha tha...antara confess her self she in love with raghu...awww so sweet...

Arz kia hai...

Ye sharm o haya khoob jachti hai tum pe,

Teri har ada pe hume pyaar aata hai...

Originally posted by: ifians

sab aap ke prasad ka asar hain baba😆

Originally posted by: honeybees22

janti hu bacha👏

now expecting more and more romance 😳