Rantara TS||Broken Hearted Girl~Part 2 Pg. 4

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

You sure about that?😆

Yup! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

Yup! 😊

Did you not read Drop of Blood?? That was a crazy story! And so is Laal Ishq!

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alishamerchant_

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Did you not read Drop of Blood?? That was a crazy story! And so is Laal Ishq!

I like diff stories...out of the box concepts! Thats what makes you stand out!

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Kaay

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Originally posted by: Rantaraolic

I like diff stories...out of the box concepts! Thats what makes you stand out!

Aww thank you!

I do my best 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Broken Hearted Girl Part 2

"Raghu, look here," Antara says. I sigh and turn to look at what she wanted to show me. It was some picture of a bunny in a wildlife magazine. I smiled at her and said, "It's so adorable." "I know right? And look at this too, this is so cute as well!" she says, showing me another picture. I smile again. It was so nice seeing her smile and laugh. Finally things were starting to get better. Antara was looking more human now. She had stopped cutting herself; she wasn't that pale anymore, her face was now filled with joy. It felt good to see her this way. There was still stuff that she had to get over but at least she was better now. She was filled with life once again.

"Raghu, lets go on a walk," she says, jumping off of the bed. "Antara, I have some work to do, we'll go in 10 minutes, ok?" I say. "Ok," she says and goes back to reading her magazine.

"Mr. Naik, the cut was very deep this time. There has been too much blood loss. I don't think she will make it," the doctor says, coming out of the room. My eyes shift back to her. I wish that I hadn't been this careless. I should have paid more attention to her. If I never did, then she might have been alive. She would have been smiling. More importantly, she wouldn't have done this.

"Raghu, call me when you land," I hear Antara say as I check my voicemail. I had just landed in London for an important meeting. Antara and I had been together for four years now and I had just gotten a job for one of the biggest multinational companies in this world. I was required to go attend a conference in London, so I had had to leave Antara, even though I hadn't wanted to. I called her back but it went to voicemail. She was probably asleep. I left her a message saying that I had reached London safely and would call her later.

When I reach the airport in India, I find my friend Rukhsana waiting for me rather than Antara. That was weird. She told me that she would be here. If she wasn't here, then where was she? "Where's Antara?" I ask. "Raghu, she started it again," she says. "What do you mean?" I ask. "Raghu, she cut herself again, its not that bad but she's in the hospital. I took her there," she says. I rush out with Rukhsana following me. I get into Rukhsana's car and she hands me the keys. I drive as fast as I can to get to the hospital."Hey," I say as she opens her eyes. Her face was pale again. I had only been gone for two days and she had cut committed suicide again. What had happened that she had to resort to this again? "Raghu, I," she says. "Shh, you need to rest right now, we'll talk later," I say. She nods, stifling a sob. I give her a kiss on her forehead and she closes her eyes. I look at her wrist and wonder what caused her all this pain. Why was she doing this to herself?"Hey," I say softly as I sit next to her. Her eyes were closed, her face pale. This time it was my fault. I wish, just wish that I had paid even a little bit more attention to her. I had let loose after she recovered from the last time. I was sure that nothing bad would happen. I look at her face, remembering the time when she told me why she had started all of this."Raghu, we need to talk," she said. "Yeah tell me," I said, sitting next to her. "You've been patient with me for so long, I think it's time that I should tell you what happened," she said. I nod, indicating that she should go on. She starts off with how she was dating a guy a couple of years ago. They were very happy together until one day had gone to pick her dad up. In the car were she, her boyfriend and her mom. They had had a horrible accident and her mom had passed away. Her dad already didn't like her because she was adopted, but when he found out about the accident, he had started to become violent with her, constantly abusing her, physically and verbally.He had called her so many names and told her that she didn't deserve to live. Even her boyfriend left her, she had no one to support her, no one to hold her hand and take her through this. She had always wanted love from her dad and had thought that if she died, it would make him happy and she would be free from her torture. So she started cutting herself, attempting suicide in every way possible, but always failing. She finally got away and came here, away and safe from her dad, the threats and abuse never stopped.I had never realized that so much had happened to her. I gave her a hug and let her cry. I asked her about what had happened the other day, why she had cut herself. She told me that she had gotten a call from her dad. He was drunk and had started off with all the insults again. "I tried Raghu. I tried not to give in but... but I'm not that strong Raghu," she said. "You're not alone anymore Antara. I'm here with you. I'll always be here. No mater what. Promise me you won't ever do this again," I said. "I promise," she said. I pulled her in for another hug and rested my chin on her head, thinking about what I could do to make everything better.The next time Antara got a call from her dad, I was with her. I made sure that she was ok. She never cut herself but she would cry. Eventually, she stopped reacting to what he said, moving on with her life with me.It had been a good two years since she told me. Everything was fine now, Antara was completely normal now. No breakdowns, no suicidal thoughts anymore. I was starting to loosen up on her a lot, spending a more time with Rukhsana and my other friends. She was handling it perfectly fine and I was glad to see that. At least, that's what she showed me. I didn't know that all of this would lead to her attempting suicide again.Rukhsana and I were working in the same company and I was the manager for our department. I often got in the news on the success of our company. Rukhsana worked under me but I chose her most of the time because i knew she was trustworthy. One day, Rukhsana and I had gone out of town for an important meeting. We had had to spend the night there as it was far. Some idiot reporter had published something stupid in the newspaper about me and Rukhsana though. It wasn't the first time this had happened but I just didn't want Antara to hear about it again! Before it was just a small fight but this time I just hoped that she would stay strong, even if I wasn't there with here. Little did I know that I was wrong.I had gotten a phone call from the hospital earlier this morning saying hat Antara was admitted. When in asked why, I was told that she had attempted suicide. No Antara, not again. I looked at her, wondering what she had been thinking. Did she really think that I could ever cheat on her? I loved her and only her. I could see the most obvious result of her thinking in front of me but Antara had never opened up too much to me. I just wished that she had. If she had told me what she was thinking, there was something I could have done. I had considered recommending her to a psychologist but seeing her so happy, I hadn't seen the need to. Now, I was regretting my decision.I just wish that there was something I could have done to make sure that Antara didn't doubt my love for her. But she was, and this was the result. It was my carelessness that had led to this. "Antara, please wake up. For me. You can't leave me. See, I'm back, I'm right here. I promise Antara, this time for sure, I will never ever let go of your hand, not even for a second. Just stay here with me, please. I'll never let anything like this happen again, I promise.""Mr. Naik, I'm really sorry but Ms. Kaul is no more." Those words echo in my head as I leave the room. I turn around to see her face one last time before the white sheet covers it. A tear rolls down my cheek. She was a broken hearted girl and there was nothing I could do to change that, no matter how hard I tried.

A/N: So that's the last part! If you made it to the end, congrats! It was sad I know but these days, I'm only getting depressing ideas 😕 Hope you all liked it though!

Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago

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priyanka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

ohh nooo it had a sad ending...
y sooo...anyways it ws really nice ts...
thanks dear fr updation..
tkcr...

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WaliKiDulhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Heart wrenching update 😕

Aww...poor Antara!! She had gone through so much 😭

I wish she would have trusted Raghu...and she wouldn't have tried committing suicide

she died in the end 😭

I feel soo bad for Raghu... 😕

But it was a really different yet interesting story..

I love your creative ideas kiret 😉

Thanks for the pm

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Nikkisha Roy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Kiret Im so so sorry for late comment
But you know nah what I went through
Well its was really interesting
Raghu lovedher so much
He didn't want to see her hurt any more
Thats why confessed his love
Aww that was too cute
Its really sad to hear anout Antu's family
Finally they were together
But still had some problems
Its really sad to read the end I was really sad yar 😕
But you done a good job 👏
Thankxxx for pm