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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Roy.nikki143

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†Suchi Suchi Suchi Suchi

Kya hai yar tu, tujhe to filmon mein hona chaheye tha ya kisi comedy show mein ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
aww thanks fr compliment.๐Ÿ˜ณ.bt ye itni bhi kuch khas nhi hai yr..๐Ÿ˜†
Again JAI HO DHOTI WALE BABA KI, kon hai yeh baba ๐Ÿคฃ
Acha hai ek baar to Buntiya ko chai se shower kara hi doon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
WHAT WHAT WHAT ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
To yeh mystery hai Buntiya or uski Chai ki story ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Family members bhagwan ko pyare hogaye, baqi behosh or khud Coma mein ๐Ÿคฃ
Phir bhi Buntiya ne Daya se shaadi kar, isse kehty hai apne pao pe kolhari marna ๐Ÿ˜†
very true..buntiya ki yehi kahani hai..๐Ÿ˜†
Issi khush mein Ek chai hojaye ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
thanks dear..i love tea...๐Ÿ˜ณ
Raghu bhi nah chor se pooch raha hai kon hai bhai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Meooowww ๐Ÿคฃ
Hahahahhahaha Abey Billi ho Behre ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
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Haww inne thandi mein Raghu pe thanda pani phek diya ๐Ÿ˜•
My poor Yeda Raghu ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Paani dalne se tsunami OMG, Raghu yeda nahi double triple Yeda hai ๐Ÿคฃ
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Not again yar, thanda pani kafi nahi tha key tickling ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Raghu ki tarha tickling mera bhi weak point hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Arey wah Daya Mai to bari sherni nikli han ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Arey yar khana aise time pe bhi dono
Ailaaa Raghu ko danda lag gaya ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Yeh Antu bhi nah dekh key marna chaheye nah
"Kahin pe nighaein kahi pe nishana" ๐Ÿคฃ
ab antara jahan pange wahan๐Ÿ˜†
OMG yeh sattu ney aadhi raat ko bhi isse chain nahi ๐Ÿ˜† Bathroom ๐Ÿคฃ
Omg phir se mere Raghu ko mara ๐Ÿ˜•
Suchi yeh bohat galat hai chor to hath mein aa nahi raha muft mein Raghu pit raha hai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
haan bt kahani mein sab chalta hai..๐Ÿ˜†

God this update, aisa lag raha tha mein koi film dekh rehe hoon
Or kuch movies key bhi scenes yaad agaye.

Awesome Awesome
Continue soon
Or tu precap kyun nahi deyty
I just wante to say one Filmy Dialogue
MOGAMBO KHUSH HOWA ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Suggestion: Suchi yar teri update itne filmy hai or tune kuch funny scenes from movies add bhi kiye hai. Wahi se mujhe idea aaya. Raghu or chor ki larai mein tu Please woh Dialogue add kar.

From movie Hera Pher, Pehle one slap and then "Yeh babarao ka Style hai" ab tujhe is mein Raghu ko add kar ya kisi ko bhi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

thanks a lot fr loving it n ur suggestion dear...will do it๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Oh God Suchi! I just loved it!


The laughter that I needed after a week of stress! Thank you! ๐Ÿค—

thanks kiri...๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Capucine

Suchita,

great update laughed all the long of my reading
It was really funny
Chai and coma / meeeooow and billis speak now ๐Ÿคฃ / tsunami / Sakku emergency / poor raghu and pan
๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ โค๏ธ
Continue and update soon

thanks alot fr loving it audrey...๐Ÿ˜ณ

will do it dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaliRantara

Hi Suchi๐Ÿค—
I like this funny story of Rantara and family very much๐Ÿ˜Š
U r an amazing person and i like ur fun posts๐Ÿ˜›
โค๏ธUpdate soon dearโค๏ธ

hi anji..๐Ÿค—

thanks a lot dear..๐Ÿ˜ƒ

it means a lot to me..u r so sweet..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›

will do it pakka๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 11 years ago
filler post..updating in next page ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello my sweet friends๐Ÿ˜ƒ..i am very sorry that i updated it after a long time...n once thought to discontinue it...but ur love n support made me to continue this.๐Ÿ˜ƒ...a big thanks to all of u guys..for loving this story๐Ÿค—...without ur love n support its nothing! ๐Ÿ˜ŠNiki dear u were waiting for its updated so impatiently..here it comes.๐Ÿ˜†

love u all..โค๏ธ

okay i'll stop my bakbak...here is its next part...which is hell boring.๐Ÿคข


"When life gives u Hundred reasons to cry,show life that u have thousand reasons to SMILE"๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Part 5

Recap- One of two men was caught by DM s team n other one was troubling Rantara.. Sakku were arguing in satya's emergency...shayad tum sab bhool gaye hoge.. :P :P

In the hall

One !..two!..three!...DM was on full mood to beat that man but she was enjoying this a lot.

DM-ye le aur le...hamare ghar mein gusna ki himmat kaise hui..!!!!

Man1- jaisi ki teri mujhe marne ki ho rhi hai hippo!

Rasika-eyyy!!..kya hippos hippos laga rakha hai..meri mummy kisi baby elephants se kam nhi hai...khabardars jo unhe hippos bulaya to!!

Man 1- arey hippo ho ya elephant... hai to bhut bhari...uii maa!!

DM-tu chup kr rasika!!!..let me concreat...(she means concentrate)

Rasika-sorryss mamma u carry on..main jab tak facepack lagake aati hun...

DM- iss ladki ka kuch nhi hosakta..aadhi raat ko face ko pack krne ki padi hai!

At the same moment buntiya noticed something which made him to open his eyes in shock..

Buntiya- s..w...ee..t.yy ji...iske ek pair mein balti hai...matlab iska ek pair balti wala hai...ye koi aam chor nhi lagta mujhe.

DM-Kya???ki gal kr rahe tussi..iske pair mein balti..aur aapko kaise pata ki ye "aam "chor hai.."papita" chor nhi?

She asked him..

Oye! Patte de ullu...tera ek pair balti mein hai?..tu kya bathroom saath lekr chalta hai kit u sabke ghar se baltiyan churata hai?.ya tune nahaya nhi hai?..aur hamare ghar mein nahane aa gaya!!..waise itni thand hain tu agr nhi bhi nahayega to bhi kaam chal jayega?...chal bta tera pocket bathroom kahan hai?

Buntiya-arey sweety ji..ye bathroom wathroom chodo..kahin ye bhoot whoot to nhi hai jiska ek pair balti ka hai...

This made DM to think once again though she was strong lady but when it comes about ghost n evil spirits she gets scare...n now she started sweating...

DM-tussi bhi kuch bhi khende rehende ho...aaaiisaaa..thodi na hota hai..main to itni der se baithi hun iske upr...ye bhoot kaise ho sakta hai?

Till then raghu n antara were chasing behind the other one n Mr n Mrs kaul were eagerly waiting for their turn... Mr kaul was cheering his S-I-L

Ashok- come on beta raghu!...come on.!.abhi bhut shubh kaal chal rha hai...pakad lo use pakad lo..chodna mat!

Geeta-hayee meri bachhi...antara tu theek to haina beta..itne andhere mein tujhe koi daba na de..bilkul choti si hai..!!

Raghu was running behind him n last he caught him but it was difficult to hold him for long time.

Rgahu-aah!!..pakad liya..bhut Pt.Usha banne ka bhoot chada hua hai na...ye mera ghar hai koi field nhi..samjha...

Man 2-..chodo mujhe meri baat to suno..mujhe kuch kehna hai..!!

Raghu-pr mujhe kuch nhi sunna..chup chap khada reh nhi to dunga ek...phir kuch kehne layak nhi reh jayega..

Antara was with raghu ..eagerly waiting to make chutney of that fellow but raghu was not letting her to do anything n they both were arguing with eachother...raghu twisted his both hands on backside n he puts hankey in his mouth.

Raghu-antu yr...tu samjhti kyun nhi...ye kitna khatarnaak ho sakta hai!

Antara-tum bhut bure ho..sara credit hamesha khud hi le jate ho...mujhe to kuch krne hi nhi dete...yaad hai tumhe..kal raat kya hua tha?

Raghu-..kya hua tha?..mujhe to kuch yaad nhi.

Antara-achcha...itni jaldi bhool gaye..maine tumhe bachaya tha bataoun sabko abhi ki kal rat tum pure room mein daud laga rahe the...

Raghu-main..main.. kahan daud laga rha tha...wo to bas aise hi warm up kr rah tha.

That fellow was still trying to free himself from his strong grip...he was wiggling,..jumping but it was all in vain..while rantara were busy in their argument.

Antara-ooohh!!!..to lagta hai janab ko kuch yaad hi nhi hai?..yaad hai tum kaise bhaag rhe the jab wo choti si cat tumhare paas aa rhi thi...hayee meri chinoo.

Raghu-oh wo..antu yr tujhe to pata hai mujhe cats se allergy hai..aur tum pata nhi kahaan se choti sa chinoo le aayin mujhe bina bataye...aur wo chinoo ko mujhe dekhte saath hi kya laga seedhe mujhpr attack kr diya..jaise ki main uska target hun...bas isiliye..isilye thoda sa mini heart aatack aagaya tha..aur main bhagne lag gya...aur main sheru ko bhi isliye lekar aaya tha..ki wo cat - shat se nipat lega..pr wo to apni hi setting mein laga rehta hai apni morni ke saath..aur abhi tak aaya hi nhi!!

Antara-haan date pr gaya hoga?...to kya?..main to tumhe bachaya tha na..aur tumne bola tha ki jo main bolungi wo tum karoge..bolo kaha tha ki nhi?

Raghu-haan kaha tha..par raat gayi baat gayi antu darling abhi jao..mujhe mat pakaao..matlab pareshaan mat ho main ..handle kr longa.

Antara-nhi!!!..jab tak main iski pitayi nhi kr leti main yahan se nhi jaungi..n she started hitting him in his legs..

Raghu(loudily)-o god!..tum nhi manogi..papaji!!!!...n meri mother India...dekho aapki beti ko kya ho gaya hai?

This all was going on where our Sakku(satya n rukku) still fighting on that what is more urgent for them

Satya-samjho jaan...main bas do minute main aaya.

Rukku-nhi nhi nhi nhiii!!!.. suna tumne?? kabhi to kuch kaam kr liya karo sahib.

Satya who was hitting pillar continuiously with his left hand as his right hand was in strong grip of rukku..he was crying like a kid..when no one listens to any of his demands.

Satya-tum samjhto kyun nhi ho?...agr main abhi ander nhi gaya to koi aur bahar aa jayega!!

Tab tumhe aur bura lagega...mujhe jane do..pleasee...bhagwaan ke naam pr jane do baba!

Rukku- tumhe kahin jane nhi milega aur do min mein asia kya hojayega..maggie noodle banana hai kya?..to main tumhe pehle hi bata dun...ghar mein maggie nhi hai...humne kal hi khatam kr li hai..aur hain wo do minute mein banti bhi nhi hai..samjhe..!

All were busy in their own n forget about their mission ..that two strangers were in their mansion...till then Rasika's loud voice echoed...with a crashing sound of window glass.

In Room

Rasika-bhaiii!!..bachaaosss...aapne main door nhi khola to koi meri khidki tod ke ander aa gaya..wo bhi bina knock kiye.

Two strangers made an entry..in Naik Mansion they were thieves...baakoo n haakoo..covered with black caps... but both were scared because it was there first mission ever in this field...but with full determination that they will do it without fail!...they entered in Rasika's room..where,,.Rasika was applying loads of facepack on her face,hands etc... wherever she feels to apply...more or less.

Rasika-hey!!..tum kaun ho?.aur ye kya tarika hai ander aane ka!!..mere rome ki khidkis tod din..abhi dhool,mitti,dhoop kitna kuch aayega is broken window se!!..

She was continuously blabbering about her window n all but both were looking at her dangerous face covered with dark blue facepack with a bright flash light of torch.

Baaku-ey haaku...ye kya cheez hai bey..nili nili...

Haaku-pta nhi yr..lagta hai jaise piliya(jaundice) hota haina.. waise lagta hai niliya ho gaya hai ise.

Whole family stood silently n trying to catchup what just happened.

In the hall

DM - ye rasika bhi na..kuch bhi krti rehti hai..jaroor usne na apna face mirror mein dekh liya hoga aur bas chilana shuru kr diya!

Buntiya-hmm..bilkul ap pr jo gayi hai.

DM-hmm..sahi keh rahen hain aap..ek minute..what do you do do mean?

Buntiye-kuuccc.hh nhi..kuch -bhi-to-nahi-...aap jaiye jab tak main ispr baith jata hun...

DM-hmm..theek hai apne haath do..

Buntiye(blushing)-mera haath to aapke haath mein pehle se hi hai(don't kill me guys..maine buntiya ko bhi blush krwa diya ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ).

DM-how romanchik...ab haath do!

Buntiya made her to stand n then he himself sits on his back...

Man 1-arey uncle..aap kuch khate pite nhi ho kya..itne halke fluke ho.

Buntiya-main khata kam hun..peeta jayada hon..mere haathki chai..tum peyoge?...main banauon kya?

Man 1-kya item hai yaar?he banged his head on floor


Rasika shouted again..bhaiii!!!!!...comes idher na!!!


Raghu-rasika!! kya hua...

Antara-ab ise kya hua?..

All were shocked :O

Raghu-lagta hai inki puri gang ne humpr hamla kr diya hai.

Geeta(in her dramatic voice)-nhiii!!..ye nhi hosakta..ab kya hoga..hum ghar ke ander fas gaye hain...ab hum kya Karen?

Raghu-papaji n saasuji ...hold this fellow main check krke aata hun..aur haan antara ko haath bhi nhi lagane dena.

Man 2- um.hmmm..vmm..

he again started wiggling ..like a mad horse...Geeta Kaul covered him with a sheet.

Raghu-eyy!..chup chap khada reh..jyada uchhal mat!..baat krne de!

Ashok- nhi beta not now...5 minute baad...abhi right time nhi hua hai..

Geeta-how smart doc.sahib.

Ashok(proudily)-shukriya..

Raghu-ab ye kya nayaa hai ?..5 minute baad!..no way..let me call my big bro.."baade bhaiii!!!"

Sakku heard his call..

Rukku-chalo sahib raghu needs u...we should help him RIGHT NOW!!!

Satya(to himself)-o nhi...mar gaya!..mere bhaai tujhe abhi meri yaad kyun aayi?...ab mujhse aur control nhi ho rha hai..kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hai...o god!!..agr sabkuch abhi hogaya to power to waise bhi nhi hai...phir mujhe floor saaf krna padega.

Rukku-kya anapshanap...khud se baatein kr rahe ho..chalo abhi...

n she drags him towards the main hall..

Satya- haan chalo...pagal to kr dogi mujhe...magar meri baat na manogi tum...achcha suno thoda dheere chalna..nhi to pura program yahin ho jayega.

Rukku-kya bol rahe ho?..lagta hai tumhara mental balance bigad raha hai...ab chalo jaldi.

Rukku was dragging him n he was walking very slowly.

Raghu-bhai come fast...dekho na rasika ko kya hua hai!

Satya-arey raghu..wo aise hi chilla rhi hogi..uski to aadat haina.

Rukku-nhi!!..wahan zaroor kuch hua hai..chalo hum dono dekhte hain...come on sahib.

Raghu-all the best bhabhi.

Satya-raghu yr..all the best ki zarorat use nhi... mujhe hai...koi samjhta hi nhi hai mujhe yahan.

Rukku-sahib don't waste time n hold on.

Satya-kab se to hold krke rakha hun...hold krte krte main khud fold hone lag gaya hun.

Rukku(glares very angrily)...sahib..

Satya-arey baba..chal to rha hun...pr tum thoda dheere chalo nhi to wo ho jayega jo bachpan mein kahin bhi hojaya krta tha.

Rukku-sahib!.ab bas bhi karo..agr tumne kuch bola na to...

Satya-sshhh!!..chilla mat yr..tu kuch samjhti hi nhi hai..main to wasie bhi bolne layak hi nhi reh gaya hun...tu aur chileygi to pressure aur badh jayega.

Rukku-pressure to almost badh gaya hai ghar mein itne chor hain aur tum ho ki bhag jane ki baat kr rahe ho..!

Satya-jab pata hai ki pressure bohut hai to jane kyun nhi deti..?

Rukku-uff!..iska main kya karun?

They both started moving towards her room very slowly...

In room

Baaku -ooo ..aunty ..y..e...e kya poth rakha hai aapne..?

Haaku - haan...kya tu kidher kichad mein gir gayin thi?

Both started laughing

Rasika was fuming by hearing "aunty".

Rasika-how himmats u?...main aur aunty btw meri umr sirf 26 yrs hai...main kis angle se tumhe aunty lagati hun?

Both-har angle se...26 years ki AUNTY!..n they started laughing again.

Rasika-bas bahot hua!..ab tum dono nhi bachoge!!!she took her sandal n was about to hit them bt they caught her hand n twisted.

Baaku(in full confidance)-eyy aunty...ab ghanti mat bano..aur chup chap hamare saath chalo..jyada bola na to ye dekha hai...pura ander daal dunga..samjhi na!

he showed him a big sharp knife(which we use to cut vegatables :P :P) ... she got scared

Satya(whispers)-uff..ek to pressure high aur upr se ye sab.

Rukku was grabbing her hokku n trying to unfold the matter which happened...she heard some laughter from her room

Rukku - ye rasika ki awaaz ko kya hogaya..ye itna has kyun rhi hai?

but before she can do anything..both thieves came out holding rasika's hand with a knife on the other.

Although,it was darkness in the hall..but very dim light of lamp was entering through small window which made them to observe that scene...Sakku freeze at that spot.


Precap- wo kya hota hai?

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Phewww!! finally..updated ๐Ÿ˜†...now shoot ur comments n do tell me whether u like it or not.๐Ÿ˜ƒ..update is good,bad or worst!๐Ÿ˜†...sorry for those who fainted after reading this...i am going to hide somewhere...i think i am dragging this will try to finish in next part.

thank u so much...๐Ÿค—

with loveโค๏ธ

Suchi๐Ÿ˜ณ

Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was too funny behna. Raghu & Antara were arguing instead of looking for theives. Aur Satya ka dialogue - mein andar nahi gaya tho koi aur bahar aajayega.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Rasika aunty๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by Nethravathi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
very very nice update...
loved it totally ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ...
chahe it ws rantara cute fight
or dm n buntiya... all r fab..
rasika is alsoo too gd..
i dnt knw hw u write n get all dese
funny ideas ๐Ÿ˜‰
bt it ws jst fabbb..
loved it โค๏ธ
COMEDY QUEEN keep it up ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ...
Lots n lots of love...hugsss
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a HATKE update tsuchi... N haan it was expected to be hatke only, coz itz written by you...

Really entertaining update yaar.. loved it...:)
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Very nice suchi! I loved it. It was funny! It's 4:30 am in Canada and your update made me laugh. Way to go girl! Love you comedy queen!

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