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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Smaggy

suchi ...abhi ek bar pada hai,...😉

but abhi to or paduge tab ja ke kuch souchne or likhne ke halat main auge.😆 😆

RES...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
oye !!!! yedi ye kya bol reli hai..🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
abhi asse condition main kuch nh likh sakte main..😆 😆
u r fabulous yr..or words nh mil rehe hai abhi.😉
bad main ache se likhuge,abhi mind gyab ho gya is update ko pad per.😆 😆
apun sab samajh gaya😉..tu bindas apna time leke mast review dedena..waise apun sab samajh chuka hai.🤣 🤣

thanks fr replying megha..😃
luv u a lot..🤗..
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u so much amfi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Suchi,

Yeh Sab Kya tha ??🤣🤣
Tujhe Punjabi aati hai kya ? Actually my mother tongue is punjabi but I can't speak. I can only understand it..

prerna!!
pta nhi kya tha???🤣
not much bt i try to..🤣
oh woww! thats great...bt u should yr..😃.its fine samjhna jyada important hai🤣
thank u so much fr replying dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago


CHEERS...ALL HAIL QUEEN SUCHI...
SUCHI ZINDABBAD...
SUCHI ZINDABAAD...

Hey Guys...Don't You Think...Suchi Should Compete against Kapil sharma...All Kapil is going to get is BABA JI KA THULLU!!!🤣

omg!! ifs..mere naam ke naare laga rahi ho!!!🤣 🤣 🤣
not again yr...prerna told me to compete with him n now u🤣 ...he is comedy king n am nothing..😆
thanks fr replying n fr the suggestion..😃🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nbw16

I know I am very early in replying...

Suchi.. Is this your first TS..?? Murder Me.. 😆
You were so poised and well organised..
Humor at its best... OMG.. Too good...
Even in serious situation Raghu-ANatra were so hilarious..

AND THE DIALOGUES.. 👏 Imagination is so great of urs...
Perfect... I was rofling and enjoying every moment..
I can read this many times in a loop...Gives a warm feeling u know...
Makes me feel happy...
Thank you suchi...


its okay..😆
yeah! bt y???😲😆
no yr..i am not🤣
i tried to make it🤣
they will be cute n hiarious😳
thank u so much..😃
i am glad that it makes u feel good n happy😛
ur welcome dear.thanks fr replying🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: niki28

Sorry 4 commenting sooo late
Read ur 2nd update jst now
N it's superhilarious
The best part according 2 me is Saas bahu talk
That was jst superrr se bhi uperrr
Wow khushkhabi aur woh bhi doh doh!!!
loved it! Loved it! Loved it!
Now plzzz update the nxt part as soon as possible


its okay yr...😆
glad that u liked their convo🤣
will try to do it!😆
thank u so much niki fr ur lovely reply🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleSunset

SUCHIII😆

KYA LIKHTI HO TUM YAAR👏
MAR GAYI MAIN HAS-HAS KE🤢🤣 🤣🤣
purple!!! pta nhi kya likhti hun main yr...🤣
nhi yr marna mat nhi to tumhare"junoon"ka kya hoga🤣
AREE...KISI KO LAUGHING GAS KI BHI ZARURAT NAHI PADHEGI AGAR TUMHARA UPDATE PADH LIYA TOH🤣🤣
story mein chemistry aa gayi🤣 🤣 🤣
Pagal ho gayi hu main, aisa update diya hai tumne🤪🥳
nhiii!! pagal mat hona pls...🤣 control krlo thoda🤣
I'm totally speechless suchi...hats off to you 👏👏
pls do update soon,as I can't wait more...😆😆
love ya...mwah 🤗

thank u so much purple..😃
ur comments means a lot to me...😛
will update soon.😆
luv u too🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Capucine

Suchita,



Thanks for this update, i laughed a lot ... what funny family
I like Antara in commando chief role wid Raghu
DM and Antu mom are too much
Rukku and Satya ahahahah!

Continue and update soon please
Thanks for the PM


audrey😛

thanks fr liking update dear..😃
yeah ! she is😆
both moms are really awesome🤣
will do it😆
no problem ..thanks fr replying dear..it means a lot to me😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello guys..i am back with my pakao update😆 though it was TS bt i think it will have 2 3 parts more..so u have to bear some more torture from my side......so are u ready fr geetin bore here it goes😆

"Sometimes your joy is the source of your smile, but sometimes your smile can be the source of your joy." 😊

Part-3

Rantara were ready to go outside the room.
Okay now conversations will go on in very low tone
Antara(holding raghu's shoulder..)-take this danda in ur hand
Raghu-he grabs it with both hands...okay..bt where is urs???
Antara- I don't need that I can defence myself..tumhe jyada jarort hai iski.
Raghu-hmm..wait!!..kya kaha tumne???.leaning more on her zara fir se to farmana????
Antara(chuckles)-nothing...lets moovveee!!
She drags him and they both move outside very slowly...

In the kitchen
Man 1-oye!! kuch mila ki nhi?
Man2-haan...ye kuch biscuit jaise hai.
Man1-arey pagal..biscuits hi hain..chal plate me nikal
Both arranged tea n snaks seated comfortably on kitchen counter...by putting candle in the middle.
By the time rantara,sakku came out from their rooms...and stand one after the other..at the front raghu behind him antu after her...rukku and atlast satya(who was extremely terrified)..all four started whispering among themselves.
Raghu-bhai..hamare ghar mein chor hain
Satya(makes puppy face)-haan raghu...yr aaj kyun aaye baad mein bhi to aa sakte the na..mei puri neend kharab hogayi.
Rukku hits him from her elbow..shutup sahib!..come on move guys what r u waiting fr Christmas!
All four walked downstairs very slowly without making any noise..n stood resting their head from on the wall as they observed that broked vase..
Antara spoke up"I told u raghu..i heard some noise from the hall..bt u said chuhe n uski family khane dhundne aayi hogi!!!
Raghu-yes...u r right antu..koi to hai hamare ghar mein!

As no one was present in the hall they thought that they might somewhere else...moving forward all stood beside wall's edge so that they could watchout where r those theives.
meanwhile DM n buntiya too came out when dm remembered to wake up rasika.

Naik's room
Dm(while moving towards her door)-oye.!! Ye rasika kithay gayi..usne nhi uthna..kar mein na jane kinne chor ghuse hain aur ek wo hai..makeup se fursat hi nhi hai..aaj to uski khair nhi..chaliye bunti ji
Buntiye-pr sweety ji chai...
Dm-uff!! Teamaker chalo abhi..chai baad mein ban lena!

Kaul's room
Geeta n Ashok both were still in room geeta wants to help antu she was psing here n there bt ashok was not permitting her to go out...as he was waiting for shubh kaal.
Geeta-doc. Sahib aap samjhne ki koshish kariye! aap...mujhe jane dijiye meri beti ne mujhe yaad kiya hai!
Ashok-bobby ji...hum jaroor challenge pr abhi sahi samay nhi hai.agr hum abhi jayenge to chor hamari pitayi kr denge..bs 15 mins aur ...
Geeta-hyee meri bachhi kis haal mein hogi.

Dm knocks at rasika's room..
Rasika-hmm..itni nights ko kaun aagaya.she opens the door n before dm shout rasika closes her mouth with her hand n drags her in room
Dm-hayee rabba!!! rasika putrr ey ki kitta tune..ye kya hai tere face pe???
Rasika(excitedly)-mumma ye facepack hai..isko nights mein lagane se mornings mein face bilkul moon jaisa lagta hai..
Dm-eyn!! Ye kya night,morning,moon..kr rahi hai..tu sun meri gal..apne kar vich chor ghus aayein hain tu chal unki ptayi krne.
Rasika-nhi mumma...mera facepack n nail paint kharab ho jayega main nhi aasakti..aap bhai ko bolo.
Dm-to tu so nhi rahi thi, inni raat nu nailpaint lagaraisi...ye to too much hai!!!
Rasika-no no..maine to two ghantes pehle lagaya tha...bt abhi agr aaungi to wo dirty dirty hojayega na..aur agr chor ne mujhe aise dekh liya to kya bolenge?..n my facepack...
Dm-no if no but..jaldi bahar aaja...nhi te tera new lotions,perfumes jo tujhe milena wale hain wo tu bhul ja..
Rasika-no no no..mumma main a rahi hun bs aap cosmos(she means cosmetics😆) mat forgets krna..
Dm-hmm...chaliye teamaker.. chai bnate hain..mera matlb hai chor ko pakdte hain...(pats her forehead)..uff mere to bheja fry hogaya hai.
Buntiya-sweety ji.kaun si flavour ki chai banaun?😕
Dm-tussi chalo to batati hun..😡

In the kitchen
Both were enjoying tea n biscuits..in candlelight.
Man1 was staring at man2 becoz of that he was feeling uncomfortable.
Man2-tu mujhe aisa kya dekh raha hai..itni der se.
Man1-kyun na dekhun tujhe main?
Man2(gulping his saliva)-dekh main won nhi hun jo tu samajh raha hai..aur aise mat dekh mujhe kuch kuch ho raha hai.
Man1(continuously staring at him)-tu wohi hai jo main samajh raha hun..main tujhe kya samjhta tha aur tu kya nikla!
Man2(opens his eyes widely)-matlab kya hai tumhara?.dekho hum candlelight tea time kr rahe hai...pr iska matlab ye nhi ki tu mujhe wo samjh le😲
Man1-abey sale!!chup kr..jab se dekh raha hun..tu bhaut badal gaya hai...kab se jet ki speed se biscuits khaye jar raha hai..bhukhad..😡 mujhe to kuch mila hi nhi!!!
Man2(getting relax)-ohh.. to ye baat hai 😆tujhe to pta hai na..mujhe biscuits kitne pasand hain aur specially ye "cream biscuits"😛 to mere favourite hain..isliye saare kha gya...(having huge grin on face😃)
Man1-haan yehi baat hai..pr tujhe kya laga?achcha ab samjha to tune mujhe wo samjha...ruk tu beta abhi..btata hun tujhe.😡

Raghu,antu,rukku n satya were standing sticking to wall..raghu was witnessing everything that they r in kitchen bt not able to understand what they were doing exactly?as there was darkness all over...

Antara-raghu...kya hua?..kya ho rha hai wahan?
Raghu-antu shayad chor candlenight dinner kr rahe hain.
Rukku(grabbing tightly her stick)-himmat kaise hui unki?hamare ghar bhi unhe hotel lagta hai kya?...aadhi raat ko yahan dinner kr rahe hain..abhi batati hun jake..n she starts moving towards kitchen..
All three screams slowly..nahiii!!n antu holds her waist n bring her back.
Rukku tried to get release bt antu holds her tightly.
Raghu-bhabhi kya kr rahi ho..abhi nhi ja sakte pehle ye dekhna hoga ki chakker kya hai?.
Antara(while releasing her)-haan..pls cool down..let other members come then we will go.
Satya-main to kab se keh raha hun ki chalo chalte hain..pr..
Ruku-sahib!!!tum to chup hi raho!!
Satya(folding his hands on chest)-main naraz hun yr.. main tumhara hubby hun.. aur tu mujhe puppy samjh ke daant rhi ho!
Rukku-arey haan..puppy se yaad aaya..sheru kahan hai?neither he barked nor makeout any kind of noise at all...hamare ghar main chor ghus gaye pr usne kuch kiya hi nhi?😕
Raghu-arey bhabhi..sheru aajkl night duty nhi krta hai..aur wo apni item se milne gaya hoga..bagal wali society ki..kya to naam hai uska..haan wo"morni"
Antara(excitedly)-raghu...hamare sheru ki girlfriend ..i mean dogfriend bhi hai.
Raghu-haan antu..aur wo roz use milne jata hai...jaise ki main roz aata tha tumse milne jab tumhari internship thi mere hotel mein aur tum hamari society ke apartment mein rehti thi. main chup chap aaya krta tha tumse milne...😎
Antara(blushes)-aww raghu ☺️..I still remember that golden days..aur tum pipe se chadker aate the mere room mein..ek baar tum ditch mein bhi gir gaye the...aur tumhare pure kapde kharab hogaye the😆..n now our sheru is as smart as u...my rasgulle(resting her head on his shoulder😳).
Raghu-yeah!! He is..thanks my sweet jalebi(holding her waist😉)
Rukku(who was very much desperate to beat theives with her hockku)- arey ye sweet shop band karo!! aur chor pe focus karo!!!
Rantara stood properly n said together ..oh yes.yes!!

After few minutes...Dm,buntiya,rasika..all joined them one by one
Dm(to all 4))-kuch pta chala putrr..kahan se aye hain wo log?
Buntiya-jahan se bhi aayen hain bhut thak gaye honge,.main jakr chai banata hun..(he starts moving towards kitchen)
Raghu-papaji..nhi (n brings him back by holding his waist)abhi nhi chor to already kitchen main hi hain aur shayad chai bhi bna li hai..
Buntiya-nhi..pr mujhe bnani hai..aise kasie bna li..mere ghar aake mera haath ki chai to leni hi padgei!
Dm-haye rabba!! Main kee karan mere teamaker da..twanu kuch samjh nhi aandah..tussi ithay khade raho..hum sab sambal lenge.(she brings him back behind her)
Raghu-rasika tu yahan kya kr rahi hai?
Rasiak-bhai mujhe mumma ne bulaya.
Raghu-pagli tu jake so ja..nhi tujhe dark circles hojayenge.
Rasika-koi baat nhi bhai..kuch gains ke liye kuch loses bhi karna padta haina.
Rukku(interrupts them)-arey tum dono chup karo!!..raghu tum chor ko chodkr darkcircles pe focus karo..main uki chutney banane jar hi hun..n she starts moving towards kitchen again.

Suddenly...a voice came from back side..ruk jao mat jao wahn khatra ho sakta hai!!
She was geeta kaul along with doc.sahab
Geeta-mat ja ruksana..tu bhi to mujhe antu jitni hi pyaari hai..main tujhe khatre main nhi daal sakti.
Raghu(in his mind)-agayi...meri tragedy queen.🤢
Antara-mumma papa..aap aa gaye...chaliye ab sab aagaye hain..eksaath attack krte hain.
Geeta(comes infront of raghu while stretching one hand to stop them)-nhiii!! Abhi nhi..
Rukku-ab kya hua??😲
Geeta-agr wo bade gangster nikle to?..aur unhone hamein shoot kr diya to?...aur hamnein kidnap krke le gaye to??,,nhi nhi..hum nhi jayenge😲
By hearing this all 8 except rukku hold their breathes...eyes widely open n started sweating.😲
Rukku-thank u aunty ji ye sab btakr aapne hamare hosla badaya..ab hum chalen unhe pitne.
Satya-nhi jaan..ruk jao wahan khatra hai..
Rukku-sahib..tumhe to ab mai nhi chhodne wali and she holds his arm very tightly..u will come with me
Raghu-kuch nhi hoga maa...ap tension mat lo..lets move guys.

Bt then ashok speaks up-raghu beta hold on..abhi sahi time nhi hai..tum agr 5 min baad jaoge to tumhe koi chot nhi pahunchegi..aur jane ke pehle..teen baar ye line bolna"jai ho...dhoti wale baba ki"aur wo bhi ek paer (feet)pr kahde hoke..dhoti wali baba bhut shaktishali hain.tumhe kuch nhi hoga...aur haan apne left leg pehle badhana..theek hai.isse sab shubh hi shubh hoga.
Antara(smiles)-raghu papa sahi keh rahe hain..hum 5 mins baad hi jayenge...dekho papa tumhari kitne care krte hain.
Raghu(very slowly)-haan..wo to dekh raha hun..(in his mind)lo beta raghu ab shubh kaal ke liye wait kro..aur bolo dhoti wale baba ki jai!..
Geeta-antara beta to tension matle main hun tere saath...mein tujhpe aanch bhi nhi aane dungi.
Antara-aww mumma,papa u r the best.

Precap-hamka sochne ka padi😆...as bhatt will happen nexht?(
in manorama mami style..IPKKND)🤣

Okay guys this is the third nonsense part of story.🤢😆
As this is holi time so bear this update as"bura na mano holi hai"😆

Wish u all a very "HAPPY HOLI" to all my forum friends..enjoy this colorful festival!!!!love u all..🤗
Edited by Tsuchi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first please...
RES 😆

Unres..

Suchi! Suchi! Suchi! Finally you updated this.. I was desperately waiting to read it 😆

Pehle tu its Not pakao.. 😡
Dosra its not a torture... 😡 rather its a bliss to read 😉 😃

Coming to the update;
-ye hamare chor "man1 and man2 " chori krne aaye Hain ya khaana khaane ?? 😆 🤣
-satya ko bass apni neend ki pari ha.. Lol 🤣 🤣
-Buntiya! Phr se chai?!! 🤣 pichle janam me chai iski biwi thi kya ?! 🤣
-rasika Lol.. Uski English 🤣 🤣
"facepacks nights ko lagate hain ta ke mornings me face moon jesa hojaye" 😆 🤣
-cosmos ?!!! Hahaha what a name yaar 🤣 👍🏼
-and DM Aur uski Punjabi!! I loved it especially that word "putttar" 🤣
-Aww Bechara satya 😆 rukku se kitna darta ha 🤣
-"main tmhara hubby hon aur Tum muje puppy samjh ke dant rhi ho" Hahaha 🤣 🤣
this is hilarious man 😆
-sheru ke pas bhi item hai? !! 😲 😲 🤣
"morni" nice name 🤣
Sheru ki morni 😆
-aww mere Rantara 😳 😳
Rasgulla and jalebi..hayeee they're adorable
-Buntiya Phr se chai ke peeche par gya choron ko bhi chai pilani hai?? 😕 🤣
Iski chai ki dukan band krwao koi 🤣 🤣

Precap: no Precap 😲 😭
(but I love the manorama style of yours 😃 )

P.s : where's Machmach ? Uske bina bara khali khali lag rha hai 🤣
P.s.s : happy holi to those who celebrate 😉

Thankyou for the pm..
And continue soon 😉

And itni achii update ke lye jhappi 🤗 ❤️
Edited by hareem27 - 11 years ago

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