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Posted: 11 years ago
Its not at all depressing ... Ur story is getting a strong grip... Its a huge turn which will change Raghu-Antara's lives forver...!!
Amazing super duper update...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fawless Upps.
Your story is getting very beautifull.
I like it a lot. It's very intresting.
I want to read more n more.
Thanks for sharing it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 57

"machmach, pata naii mereko bahut ajib lag raha hain... chintu se baat bhi nahi ho payi kaal raat ko aur aaj subah achanak daya ne faisala liya mereko gaon bhej ne ki... baat kuch hajam nai ho rahi hain.." ajji said looking outside of the window. Machmach was driving the car and they were heading towards the village. Ajji was feeling odd since morning. She was feeling like something wrong was going to happen, specially regarding to her chintu. "arey ajji tu tension na le. Abhi to bhai se contact nahi ho sakta. Apun ke mobile mein to s**a ek bhi dandi (tower's sign) dikhayi naii de rahi hain. gaon mein ja ke agar aa jaye to baat karwa doonga." Machmach assured. "machmach, pata naii kyun par mera dil bahut ghabra raha hain. tujhe kuch locha nahi lagta? Achanak se aaj subah daya aa ke mujhse boli ki sahar ki hawa mein mera tabiyat bigar raha hain to main gaon cchali jaon. Maine kaha ki kuch din ruk ne ke baad jab chintu wapas ayega tab uss sey milne ke baad jaungi. Par daya nahi mani. Usey achanak ho kya gaya?" ajji said in thoughtful voice. "arey ajji tu mai ki ayi hain, to wo teri sehat ke liye chinta to kerngi hi na?" machmach said. "naii machmach.." ajji said, "main daya ko jitna jaan ti hoon, uss sey main itna to kahe sakti hoon ki daya koi bhi kaam bina bajay nahi karti. Kuch to khichri pak rahi hain uss ke dimag mein." Ajji said. "dekh ajji ye sab batein mere dimag mein nahi ghusta yaar..." Machmach said. "mere kko pata hain re. tu bas gaon j ate hi agar kisi bhi tarah se phone chalu ho jaye to sab se pahele chintu ko khabar karna." Ajji said. "ha ajji tu tension na le. Apun phone chalu hote hi bhai se puchega." Machmach said. Their car left the highway and entered inside the short narrow way leading towards ajji's village.

Antara was still standing at the bus stand, looking towards the way where the bus went. Her eyes were blank and tears were streaming down from them. she never thought that would be so hard to be away from raghu just for a moment. He just went a few seconds ago and she was feeling so low. God knows how she was going to survive that two long days. She slowly brushed away her tears and was about to go back when her phone rang suddenly. Antara picked the phone it was from the military head quarter. "hello!" she said trying to keep her voice formal. "miss antara kaul?" general asked. "Yes general, tell me what's the matter?" she asked. "Sorry to bother you, but can you come at army headquarter now?! It's urgent." He said. "okk I am coming." Antara cut the phone and headed towards army headquarter.

"That's great!! They broke their silence at last." Antara saidwith excited voice as general informed her about the new progress. "yes, one of them which we caught last night, opened his mouth. We were still interrogating him. Seems like that boy joined their group recently so didn't know very much about them. but from his words it is clear that sahabuddin siddiqui and his son aman is connected to the group. When we will get any genuine proof we will proceed to arrest siddiqui and aman." General informed. "that's quite unexpected. I never thought that they would open their mouth." Antara said. "Yup it was a jackpot you can say. We informed IB department about our two operations of last night. Your vishal uncle was quite mad because you took such a big risk. He wanted to talk to you but your phone was switched off last night." General laughed a bit. "I know, uncle was always worried about my safety. But pardon me sir, two operations?! Did I miss something?" antara asked. "Yes of course miss. As you know we were continuously interrogating that boy then we come to know about a place, Highland private hotel. Shrinagar's police force was keeping their eyes on that hotel for quite long as they detected something fishy about the place. He said that they had a secret place to hide their arms and ammunitions on the hotel. As we didn't got arms or ammunitions on that garment shop you mentioned, we took another chance. We attacked on highland hotel last night. We didn't got any ammunitions there but we discovered something which was unexpected!" he said. "and what's that?!" she asked. "seemed like they sensed danger long ago and again removed all their arms again like last time. Their network is quite stronger than we thought. But they couldn't get time to remove that hundred of teenage girls which who were kept in prison on that hotel." He informed. "What are you talking about?!" antara froze. "Unfortunately it's true miss. They were not only involved in terrorist activities but also in girl trafficking and other illegal cases. That hotel was a secret den from where they operated the work. We didn't have slightest idea that for how long they were doing the work and how many little girls had been victim of the case. We just could rescue only hundred of them who were also deled to send at different state on india and also may be outside of country." He informed. "ohh god!!.." she took a deep breath. "don't be surprised miss. This illegal works supplies the money needed for the terrorist group. However, we were trying to detect the address of those girls and to send them to their relatives. Ohh I forgot to tell you. That's why I call you here. There is a 15 years old girl in that group. She seems so scared and can't tell properly about herself. We only came to know from her that she is from Mumbai. I just thought that you were also in Mumbai for quite sometimes. Would you like to c that poor girl?! Perhaps you could give us some clue about her?" general asked. "off course!!" antara said. "okkk, officer bring that girl here." General commanded a junior officer in duty. He saluted and went outside. After some moment he came inside with a 15 years old girl. She was qquite fare skinned and wearing a simple flower printed frock. Her long hairs were bounded in two spires which were hanging down her shoulders to her tummy. Her wide fearful black eyes were fixed on general and antara. Antara's eyes narrowed. It seemed like she saw that girl somewhere before. She didn't have to think for long. Like a lightening flash, she remembered. It was just after some days after they shifted to Mumbai. Mumy gave her a lunch box and requested her to brought that back on the house at the opposite to the road. She came to know that the owner of the house was beera and his family. That's the first time she came to know about beera. However, when she went to beera's house her wife invited her inside. Then she saw a photo of girl at the wall. Beera's wife said that she was their only daughter Muniya. Daya mai admitted her in a school at delhi last month and she was living there in hostel. Then how could she come here? "tum Muniya ho na?!! beera ki beti?!" antara asked. that girl's eyes widened in amusement and she looked at antara. "aap ko kaise pata?!" she asked. "first of all tell me kit um yahan in logon mein kaise ayein?! Tumhe to delhi mein kisi school mein bhej diya gaya tha naa?" she asked in confusion. "nahi, koi school nahi tha... daya mai ne mujhe bech diya tha inn logon ke hathon.." muniya broke out and started to sob. "kya?!!" she gasped. "haan! Yahan uss hotel mein aur bhi 7 larkiyan thi Mumbai aur pune ki. Sab ko daya mai ne becha tha.. yahin to unka kaam hain... sirf hum na balik larkiyon ko hi nahi... drugs, banduk sab kuch smuggle karti hain hain woo.. unki nazar thi hampar. Jab papa ne kahan ki mujhe agey parna chahte hain to daya mai ne khud mujhe delhi jane ka intezam kar diya lekin delhi jate hi mujhe in logon ke hathon chor diya.." muniya said everything in single breath. her face was full of disgust towards daya mai. "muniya tell me one thing. Kya daya mai inn terrorists ko arms supply karte the?! Tum jaan te ho wo sare hathiyar kaha hain?" general asked. "uncle mujhe ye to nahi oata ki woo hathiyar kahan hain. kuch din pahele hi uss hotel pe laya gaya tha sare arms par parsu raat ko hi sab hatha ddiya gaya. Aur haan daya mai inn terrorists se bahut dino se jure huye hain." muniya said. "fantastic! Ye larkiyan to sab se bari gawah ban sakti hain inn logon ke khilap. Beti kyat um ye baat court mein kahe sakti ho?!" general asked. "kyun nahi uncle sirf main hi nahi, hum sari larkiyan jo wahan kaid the, sab ke sab gawahi dengey... sirf daya mai hi nahi, jitney bhi sare dealers in terrorists ko help kar rahe hain sab ki jaan kari den eke liye hum taiyar hain." muniya said in a determined voice. both general and antara smiled at their victory. "muniya tumhe pata hain ki tumhare papa shrinagar mein hain?!" antara asked. "nahi toh?!! Kahan hain papa?! Mujhe unse milna hain.." muniya asked in excited voice.

"beera tune mujhe kahan kyun nahin ki raghunath shrinagar mein hain?!" dm's cold voice floated from the other side of phone. "mai mujhe laga ki aap ko pata hain. aur waisey bhi mujhe bas yahan kaam karne ayein hain. aap ka raghu kab kahan jar aha hain ye aap dono ka mamla hain aur humein isme kuch nahi kehena." Beera said in indifferent voice. "aaj kaal tu kuch jyada hi juban nahin chalane laga hain tu?!" her voice was cold and full of warning. Beera's jaw hardened. "teri beeti ke barein mein bhool gaya?!" she asked. "nahin mai.." beera said in low voice. "hmm.. aur sun main aaj hi pauch jaunga shrinagar. Tu uss antara ki kundali nikal. Uska pata, uske barein meein sab kuch mujhe jaan na hain." dm said. "thik hain mai, par aap to jaan te hain ki raghu ke rehete uss larki kea as pass jana bhi nuskil hain." beera said. "tu raghunath ki fikar mat kar. uska intezam maine kar diya hain. tu bas jitna kaha gaya hain utna kar." dm said. They cut the connection. Beera threw the phone on bed in disgusted face. his hands were tied, so she had to obey that disgusting lady each and every time. Someone knocked his hotel room. "andar aa jao." Beera said in dry voice. a hotel boy came inside. "sahab aap se koi milne ayi hain." he said. "kaun?!!" beera's eyebrows frowned. Suddenly a girl came inside the room and beera became stunned. "antara tum yahan?! Tumhe yaan ka pata kisne bataya?" beera got startled. The boy left the room. "Army grneral ne apne admion se aap ka pata lagaya. App ko kisi se milwane layi hoon." Antara said in a firm voice and lead the girl inside the room. Beera's feet grounded looking at the girl. "papa!!.." muniya screamed and rushed to beera. "muniya!!" beera uttered in startled voice. muniya hugged beera tightly, Beera huged her back. "pappa!!" muniya broke out in crying. Beera started to console her. antara was smiling looking at father and daughter. She was feeling so happy. "par muniya, tu yahan kaise? Tu toh delhi mein thi na?" beera asked. "nahi papa..." muniya said. "daya mai ne issey bech diya tha, inn logon ke kabze mein thi wo itne dino se." antara said from door. Breera got another shock of his life. After then muniya and antara explained him everything. Beera became dumb after listening everything. He couldn't even imagine that daya mai would play such dirty trick with him. his whole feature filled up with disgust and revenge. "antara!!" he uttered slowly, "sirf muniya hi nahi, main bhi daya mai ke khilap khara hone ke liye taiyar hoon. Sirf daya mai nahi, siddiqui ke sath unke jitney bhi deals huye hain sab ki list mere pass hain. agar wo ekbaar samne aa jayein to daya mai ko koi nahin bacha sakta aur na hi siddiqui ko!" beera paused for a while. "par antara, tum aur raghu shrinagar me mat raho, daya mai ne kuch der pahele phone kiya tha. Woo aaj hi shrinagar aa rahi hain. unhe pata chal chukka hain ki tumlog yahan ho. Maar ne aa rahe hain wo tumhe." Beera said. Antara's feature froze for a while. So her idea was right. It was all dm's plan and that's why she send raghu away from shrinagar. Antara thought for a while and then her face hardened. "I doubted that much before. Tum meri fikar choro beera aur jitni jaldi ho sake shrinahar se nikal jao muniya ko le ke. General ne kahan hain tum logo ko delhi ja ke IB ke office mein report kar ne ke liye." Antara said. "thik hain antara par wo to hum kar lengey lekin main sach kahe rahi hoon antara. tumhar jaan ko khatra hain." beera said. "tum uski fikar mat karo beera. Ab jitni jaldi ho sake yahan se nikal jao." She said, after some moment beera checked out from hotel. They were on the road when a ohine call came into antara's cell. It was zoya. "hello zoya di!" antara said. "antara can you come here now? I know you told me that you can't come today but zara is behaving really odd and crying badly since morning." Zoya said in chocked voice. "what?!" antara became startled. "yes, even abbujaan and aman bhaijaan is not home. God knows where are they? Please can you.,.." zoya asked. "okk I am coming zoya di." Antara said and cut the phone. "maaf karna ab mujhe jana hain. muniya bye!!" antara said, "arey par antara!!" beera said. But antara was already rushing to the other side of road.

Precap: "raghu abtoh tumhe yakeen huya meri baton ka. Main sach kahe raha hoon. Abhi bhhi waqt hain, wapas chalo shrinagar. Nahin toh antara ko bachana muskil ho jayega." Beera said. Raghu was looking to him all startled. He never felt so much shock in his whole life. The woman, whom she placed at her mother's place, was nothing but a witch in disguise. His whole corpse burned into disgust. He looked at a side blankly. "pappa!!" muniya gasped in fear looking at a side. both raghu and beera looked towards that side and saw a man walking from the other side of road. "arey ye toh bhujang hain. par ye jammu mein kya kar raha hain?" beera said. At last raghu's brain started to work. "beera, chal picha karte hain iska." He said. They kept muniya at a safe place and followed bhujang. They saw bhujang entering inside the hotel and going towards a table. Bith raghu and beera was shocked looking at the woman seeting on the table. "mai bahut bara locha ho ge la hain. iss bus ke sare ticket full hain. abhi shrinagar jane ke liye gari dekhna parega." Bhujang said. "iss weather ko bhi abhi kharap hona tha.. jammu aa ke plane fass gaya." Dm said in disgust.

sorry guyzz i know it was mega jumbo bakwas chapter.🤢... i am ready to face ur chappals

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Posted: 11 years ago
hey ria...it was just amazing
I am ur fan now 😛
I mean, how can someone write such an unpredictable story
HATS OFF 👏👏👏
Now i m super sure Raghu Antara ko kuch nhi hone dega
and dis dm is gonna lose
cant wait for next part
plzz update soon
and do pm me 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
tera mega jumbo bakwas chapter mera dil le gaya ...👏👏👏
super duper fantastic fabulas ...THUDDD ...am just shaking reading the story ...sooo much gripping ...i loved every bit of it
hatts off to you RIAAA...mind blowing u r supertalented ...😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg yeh dm nai yeh dayan mai hai 😡
Apne hi logo ki betiyo ko bech rehe hai 😡 😡
Thank God muniya mil gaye or beera bhi ab antara key sath 😃
Hope jaldi se mai ka raaz khole
But m still worried for antara, raghu bus time pe poch jaye
Precap was outstanding ab raghu ki ankhe kholeygi n vh daya dayaan ko pehchan paryga 😆
Ria darling 🤗
Thank you yar I hope Rantara ko kuch nai hoga 😳
Continue soon
Thankxxx for pm 😉
Edited by Roy.nikki143 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
No No NO NO NO !! Rantara 😭 It was such an emotional update. I could feel their pain/
One request to you .. Please make Rantara meet SOON !! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update ria 👏
kya baat hai..what TnT...
loved it ..pta chala k dm kitni buri ho skti h 😡
shes really evil yar...kitni buri hai ...
n beera n her daughter also suffered so much
bt finally beera got to knw bout dm n what she did to his
daughter 😡
shes really mean n bad...
hope k sb theek ho jaye..
precap seems interesting..
thanks n update soon ria..
Edited by ankusanu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ria..ur update was just mindblowing.👏..that created so much anger and frustration in me because of that b****** dm...sorry bt mujhe bhut saari galiyaan dene ka man ho raha😡 hai...@*@*+@#_+@#_+@#+%*++_#@#@$$..Beep!.Beep!.Beep!😡
.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!😡
.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!.Beep!😡😡😡😡😡
she not only separate rantara for a while..😡..involved in terriorists activiies..but girls trafficking!!!!!! urrrghhh!!!kitni cheap hai yr.😡.even cheap bhi bhut chota word hai.😡.
.well.beera got his daughter back...i am happy fr her😃...and precap is nice 😊raghu might understood the actual face of his so called mai..😡.use to bhut bada jhatka lagne wala hai..
tfpm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh i hate dm
hw could she do dis human trafficking
disgusting she is
precap shows raghu knws evrything
do update soon

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