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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
osam yaar nightmare was omg
aww antara toke care of him
hayee romance
lovely update loved it soo much
more romance coming yipee
pls cont asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Hello everyone! Lo may aagayee ek baar fir updates ke saath!
Thank you for your lovely comments which keeps me going. .
Pls enjoy next part..I'm sure you will!

Part 11

In the next room antara is devastated after breaking his heart. .she's crying her heart out..he loves me..
he confessed his love for me..but what did I do..I broke his heart with my bitter words! But I'm so sorry
raghu. .I cant trust anyone. .I'm just too scared. .I didn't mean to hurt you but I just did..pls mujhe maaf
kardena..she sobbed..may tumse pyaar nahi karsakti..I just cant after all that happened to my di..
She was hugging her herself ..rocking back and forth..with fresh tears streaming down her cheeks. .
I dont have strength left in me to trust and believe any man..raghu.I like you..I have feelings for you. .I'm
attracted to you. .I'm drawn towards you as if some kind of a force is pulling me. .she sobbed..but I will
kill those feelings and emotions for you..those desires to be with you..to touch you..to feel you will have
to vanish from my life. .forever..she kept shedding those precious tears until she fell asleep. ..

Next morning raghu woke up early. .he couldn't sleep last night. .he still couldn't believe his ears..
her bitter words are still ringing in his ears..her each word has pierced his soul mercilessly. .has
stabbed him a million times. .his world seemed shattered! His dreams being shattered by his love. .his
miss kaul. .His eyes welled up. .as the roaring lion was waking up in him..his palm balled into a fist..
his eyes like a fiery furnace! Frowned face. .fierce and dangerous raghu was back! Ye meri love story hai
he screams!!!!and smashes the mirror on the wall!
He comes down stairs for breakfast. .everyone was there except her..are chintu what happend to your hand?
Aji was worried seeing handkerchief on his hands..I'm fine ajii..his eyes were red..are bhai teri tabiyat to theek
hai..it seems like you didn't sleep well last night. .woh teri ankhen lal lal..mm to apna
muchmuch kar!..MM sensed his frustration and kept quite. .every now and then he glanced towards her
room..aji knew something was cooking in between rantara. .breakfast shuru karte hai aji said. .
Raghu:aji woh miss kaul. .ruksana go see why she's taking so long..
Aji:what happened chintu. .did you two fight? Kiya huwa bolo..we need to know before we take next step
in our mission. .right mm? MM nods in yes..
Raghu:aji I confessed my love for her last night and she...raghu narrates everything that happened last
night. .everyone looked at each other in bewilderment! Ruksana froze with an 0 face! We have to do
somethings to bring them closer. .it was unbearable for her to see tears in her best friends eyes..raghu..
dont worry everything will be ok..we just need to give some time to her..i'm sure she will realize soon..
Raghu:ruksana we all need to find out somehow the reason behind her hatred for men..and we'l need
your help the most..samjhi na? She nods her head in yes. .ab ja and bring her down. .ruksana leaves
for her room..no-one was eating. .aji looked tensed. .raghu still looked like a roaring lion..eyes red and
dangerous. .mm in deep thought cracking fingers.
Ruksana knocks on her door. .Antara it's me pls open the door. .Antara comes and opens the door..
ruksana freezes at the sight! My God antara! What happened to you. .you look terrible! Antara's face was
pale..she had dark circles around her eyes. .fallen face. .she looked sad!
Antara:pls ruksana I dont wanna talk about it..pls leave me alone..
Ruksana:antara. .we all know what happened between you and raghu. .so relax..antara gave her questioning
look..yes antara raghu told us everything. we knew when he fell in love with you..the very first time he saw you
he was in love!he was so excited. .he changed himself just for you. .he never knew how to laugh but your
love taught him to laugh like never before. .how could you break his heart antara? Cant you see the difference
in him? But today he's broken and shattered. .his smile is lost..only thing we can see in his eyes right now is
anger and frustration. .ruksana voice cracked. .
Antara:ruksana I'm really sorry but I have problems of my own..I'm helpless. .I cant do anything. .I cant accept
his love..I just cant..but why? Whats the reason? The reason I cant tell you or anyone. .her eyes were getting
red as tears welled up again. .ruksana couldn't fuss with her..she was concerned for both of them. .koi baat
nahi..we 'll sort this out later abhi chalo eveveryone's waiting. .but I'm not hungry. .ok then fir raghu ayega
tumeh lene..hearing his name she jumps out of bed..ruksana smirked. .
Downstairs raghu was losing his patience. .his eyes spitting fire..aji and mm finished eating..raghu was still
waiting for her..he was dying to get just one glimpse of her..what is taking so long? Is she ok..still there was
no sign of her..thats it! He banged his hand onthe table sending spoons and forks flying to the floor! He stood
up to go..when he heard footsteps he turned around to see..there she was..his life..infront of his eyes
coming towards him. .her eyes lowered. .but sad..raghu was in pain seeing her in pain. .baith ja chintu
aji said. .raghu sits down. .antara comes and sits beside him..she was scared. .she knew everyone's
gaze were upon her..she trembled. .raghu was constantly watching her moves..actions..reactions and
expressions..she sat there numb. .aji broke the silence. .are antara beta are you ok..teri tabiyat to theek hai
na? Aur ye kiya halat bana rakhi hai..she didn't say anything. .chalo breakfast karlo..only you two are left..
ajii mujhe bhook nahi hai..may nahi kha sakti..this ignited the fire in raghu. .he pushed his plate and stood
up..mujhe bhi nahi! He turned to go when antara grabs his hand..he looked at her face..their eyes met..
I..I will eat..karungi may nashta..she protested with her eyes to stay. .she lets his hand go and he sits down
to eat..his anger disappeared. .cause she was with him..ajii seeing them like this leaves them alone..Ruksana
clears her throat and mm leaves with her..leaving two lovebirds alone. ..raghu puts a paratha on her plate..
he serves her other dishes..and then serves himself. .she wasnt moving so he said. .khaaogi ya may khilaao?
she quickly takes a bite ..she wasn't hungry but she was eating just for him..they ate without talking. .
her hair was falling on her face ..she pushed it away but it kept coming on the face..raghu was watching this
he brushed her hairs with his fingers and tucked it behind her ears..his touch on her face stirred mixed feelings
in side of her and she pushed his hand away! Raghu just stared at her..even he felt current go down his veins
Miss kaul. .he said but she didn't reply. .MM came in..agar tum dono ka hogaya hoto hum farm ke liye nikle?
Antara gets up to grab her stuffs..I have got everything here ruksana said standing by the door. .thanks ruksana
and follows her out side to the jeep..aji helps ramesh pack their lunch. .raghu drives..mm sits with him in the
front. .and ladies at the back..they drive through the village going to various farms..
They even got to interview some farmers as well..raghu drove them wherever they wanted
to go..raghu would steal glances of his miss kaul every now and then. .their gaze would meet and antara
would quickly shift hers..something was missing..her happiness. .she wasn't happy like before..she was not
enjoying anything. .even raghu was sad too..after sometime they stopped in the village which had a town..
Ruksana wanted to do some shopping..so they went while raghu n mm looked around as well..girls entered
a sari shop..antara saw a white sari with gold border and she loved it!
Ruksana:wow antara you will look amazing in it..it is very pretty. .buy it..but first go try it..she left for the
fitting room..raghu was watching them..ruksana got busy with MM showing him her dresses. .something
was brewing in between them too..raghu was searching for antara. ..she was taking so long thats why he's
a bit worried. .he goes towards the fitting room...he heard her calling for ruksana. .ruksana were are you..andar
aao na and help me with this..antara was standing there with only In her jeans and her bra..the blouse that
she was trying ..its dori got stuck with her bra hooks at the back..the blouse was hanging at the back..and she was having trouble reaching it ..ruksana kaha ho tum? But ruksana wasn't there! Even raghu looked for them but
they disappeared. .kaha fas gaya may..
Raghu:miss kaul ruksana is not here..I looked everywhere but she is no where to be found even mm is not here
Antara:oh my God! but I need help..I..I cant come out like this..she was panicking. .raghu can you call the
sales girl pls..miss kaul there is no girl here only sales man..antara was freaking out! Oh God ab kiya hoga!
Raghu:may kuch help karu kiya?raghu tum pls ruksana ko phone karo ..mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hai. .
Raghu:miss kaul tu ghabra mat na may hu yaha par..kuch karta hu mai..and he phone's ruksana. .she
picks up..ruksana kaha ho tum dono? Kab se dhoond raha hu may..miss kaul ko help chahiye tum
aajao..no no raghu we cant come. .we met a friend and he 's taking us with him..sorry we forgot to
tell you..you take antara home we'l be late..we'l take auto or something. .
Raghu:what? But miss kaul needs help here..oh come on raghu you can help her..ruksana may kayse
tumhe to pata hai..do something raghu my battery is dying may rakti hu chal bye..raghu stood there
unable to move. .
Outside the shop..ruksana and MM were doing hi5! Plan successful they say it together! Lets catch
a cab and go somewhere. .rantara needs some time alone. .they need to sort out things sooner..
Inside antara was suffocating. .raghu baat huwii ruksana se..miss kaul they have gone with some of
their old friends they just met..what? May kayse yaha..kabtak ayse rahungi..miss kaul may help
karta hu..darwaza khol..nahi raghu tum nahi karsakte tumse nahi hoga..may koshish karta hu..hurry
up miss kaul..store is about to close..agar idhar hi kholi basane ka iradha hai na to bata de may chalta
hu..nahi..woh..woh may..antara was stuck with him again and she doesn't know what to tell him
Oh God pls help..she prayed. ..miss kaul open up..kiya may woh tum nahi..kiya bol rahi ho..to may
jaaoo..acha may jaraha hu..nahi wait..she said it loudly and the sales man came running to them..kiya huwa
everything ok. .andar kaun hai? Miss kaul ..mera matlab hai antara. .meri patni antara ..raghu said..ok go help
her then we'l be closing soon salesman said and left..antara couldn't believe what he just said. .patni..he called me
his patni..antara skips a beat..she was half naked. .and really really nervous and scared..she slowly moves
and opens the door. .quickly runs and stands facing the wall. .and tightly closed her eyes and hugged Herself
raghu came in..he froze at the scene..miss kaul. .kiya Miss kaul. .unstuck the dori..she was feeling very shy
and embarrassed. .face all red by now as if she is standing naked infront of him..she cant face him now. .
raghu moved towards her suppressing his intense burning desire for her. .he was mesmerized by her Beauty
he slowly touches her dori and examines it..it was badly stuck! But he has to remove it somehow. ..he
saw her trembling as he touched her mid back. .his hands were all over her back givin her goosebumps. .
miss kaul haath se nahi hoga..I have to use my mouth I mean my teeth..antara was feeling very weak..she can
fall and pass out any time. .how will I control my self..I don't want to melt and give in..pls God. .
tears were forming in her eyes out of fear..raghu slowly bend over and started working with his teeth..in the
process his lips touched her milky skin..his rough stubble bruising and leaving red marks..antara was lost
in her world of feelings and sensations. .he pulled the knot with his teeth..the hooks on the bra came off..he slide
his tough hand around her waist. .touching her mid section and pulled her on him..her back slammed on his
rock hard chest..blouse was released and fell on the floor but her bra was open! Raghu lost it this time..he
was aroused seeing her like this..he massaged and rubbed her belly. .raghu..he wasn't listening. .he showered
her back with his hot wet kisses..his hands were moving up to her bosom..he pulled her hands from there..
the straps fell loosely on her biceps..she struggled with his hands to cover her softness..but he was raghu
he can have her anywhere anytime. .his hands were teasing her everywhere..and his lips giving her shock
waves in her system. .raghu pls..he swings her around to face him..her hands hugging her softness. .he scans
her body as sexual desire takes over him and he loses control..he cups her face and captures her lips..he kissed
her hard. .her hands automatically went around his neck. .and her bra fell on the floor..they both were kissing
and licking each other like there is no tomorrow. .raghu's hands cups her bosom..she mouns. .he squeezes and
rubs them...his lips trails down her cleavage. .he kissed her there and leaves his bites all over. .antara was not
in this would. .she was lost in raghu's arms. .her eyes were closed but his was open. .I love u miss kaul he whispered
in her ears. .she hugged him tightly. .his hands were teasing her everywhere. .he wanted to take her softness
in his mouth when salesman came and knocks on the door. .they come back to reality breathing heavily. .
antara covers herself with her hands. .and hids in raghu's chest..raghu hugs her tightly. .she felt safe there..
but right now she Is hell embarrassed! We are coming he said to the salesman. .miss kaul tu kapre pahen le
I'm waiting outside the fitting room. .he whispered in her ears. .he picks up the sari and blouse and heads towards the
counter while antara gets dressed. ..she was shaking. . and were very weak in the knees. .she fixes herself
and comes out. .how will I face him. .raghu was waiting for her by the door..she couldn't meet his gaze..
Raghu thought ..miss kaul I have promised myself that I will make you fall in love with me before we go
back to Mumbai. .you will come running to me and confess it..you will tell me everything you have hidden in your
heart. .and I promise once you come to me I will never ever let you go...never!

Holy shoot! I dont know what I wrote! Do you guys still like it?
Pls comment..love to all..pls tell me if you want more heated romance between rantara
Next update soon..feel free to give me ideas..mwaah to all..bye!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Omg yar that was an awesomd update
Loved it so so so much
Their romance 😳 😳 hayeee mar dala
Changing room mei romance 😆 liked it
Cant wait for Antara's confession
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Loved the update!
Beginning was so emotional...raghu's broken heart bt in that room..what to say..he never leaves a chance!..she is falling fr him but living still in her past.thanks fr romantic update and
Update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Loved the update
Please contine soon
BabyHimavari thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
wow it's such a romantic and passionate update...
changing room scene was too hot
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Really thats a holy shoot...
I loved it...
The start was sad...
Both crying their heart out..
But the romance was dhamakedar...
Amazing...
Loved it..
Ohh antara will confess dekhna...
Hatss off..
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
ufff dat ws really romantic dear ..
what an uodate ...i loved it..
changing room m bh omggg..
gd h lge raho..
update sooon n thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
ufff yaar so romantic I went red like a tomato still am right now
I just cant twll u how much I loved it this
changing room romance hayeee uff toba
cant wait to see more intense romance
please show romance when rantara are alone in the house or somewhere else
pls cont asap cant wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hayakhan5

when are u updating...

u read my mind haya
when r u updating??

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